"Caretaker" Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Star Trek: Voyager' started by LeadHead, Mar 23, 2012.

  1. Athena28

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    KIM: Sneezy?
     
  2. LeadHead

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    Torres: Commander Zakarian. Remember? He must have been allergic to everything.
     
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    Torres: Actually made it into the second year before, we, uh, mutually agreed that it wasn't the best place for me.
     
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    KIM: You know, I never really liked Zakarian.
     
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    TORRES: Shh. Listen. They're getting faster.
     
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    (The pulses are almost constant.)

    [Ocampa settlement]

    (The group are going up an escalator when the pulses stop.)
    JANEWAY: Away team to Voyager.
     
  8. LeadHead

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    The sounds of the energy pulse get faster and faster and faster...

    We go to the Ocampan City, where Janeway, Chakotay, Tuvok, Paris and Neelix are riding something that resembles a late 20th Century escalator.

    The Pulses Cease.

    Janeway: Away Team to Voyager.
     
  9. BlueStuff

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    ROLLINS [OC]: Voyager here.
     
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    JANEWAY: What's going on with the array?
     
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    [Bridge]

    ROLLINS: It's no longer sending out pulses, Captain, and it appears to be realigning its position.
     
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    JANEWAY: Keep me informed. Janeway out.
     
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    ROLLINS: It's no longer sending out pulses, Captain, and it appears to be realigning its position.
     
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    Janeway [OC]: Keep me informed. Janeway out.
     
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    [Ocampa settlement]

    KES: They haven't been at the clinic for hours.
     
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    Daggin: We can search the city. Ask if anyone's seen them.
     
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    Janeway: If they were trying to get to the surface, how would they go?
     
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    KES: Probably the same way I did. Up one of the ancient tunnels.
     
  19. LeadHead

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    Janeway: Mister Paris, you and Neelix go with her and start checking them out.

    Paris, Neelix and Kes start off in another direction

    Janeway: We need to talk to every Doctor and Nurse in this hospital, see what they can tell us about Torres and Kim.

    The ground shakes.
     
  20. Orac

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    Rollins [OC]: Voyager to Janeway.