"Caretaker" Line-by-Line

[Orac]

Tuvok: The interval between each pulse has decreased by point four seven seconds since we arrived. I can offer no explanation.

 

[Alienesse]

JANEWAY: That's only one of the mysteries we're dealing with, Mister Tuvok. Take a look at this.
(A scan of the planet on her desk monitor.)
JANEWAY: It's virtually a desert. Not one ocean, not one river. It has all the basic characteristics of an M-class planet except there are no nucleogenic particles in the atmosphere.

 

[JanewayRulz!]

TUVOK: That would mean the planet is incapable of producing rain.

 

[Enterprise1981]

JANEWAY: I've studied thousands of M-class planets. I've never seen an atmosphere without nucleogenics. There must have been some kind of extraordinary environmental disaster. As soon as repairs are complete, we'll set a course for the fifth planet.

 

[LeadHead]

Tuvok: Captain, you require sleep.

 

[JanewayRulz!]

JANEWAY: Kim's mother called me just after he left her. Delightful woman. He's her only son. He'd left his clarinet behind. She wanted to know if she had time to send it. I had to tell her no. Did you know he played clarinet in the Julliard Youth Symphony?

 

[Enterprise1981]

TUVOK: I did not have the opportunity to meet Mister Kim.

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: I barely knew him. I never seem to have the chance to get to know any of them. I have to, I have to take more time to do that. It's a fine crew and I've got to get them home.

 

[Alienesse]

TUVOK: The crew will not benefit from the leadership of an exhausted captain.

 

[BlueStuff]

(Hey! )


JANEWAY: You're right as usual. I've missed your counsel, Tuvok.

 

[JanewayRulz!]

TUVOK: I am gratified that you came after me so I can offer it once again.

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: I spoke to your family before I left.

 

[Alienesse]

TUVOK: Are they well?

(Hey, Blue! Glad to see you again)

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: Well, but worried about you.

 

[Alienesse]

TUVOK: That would not be an accurate perception, Captain. Vulcans do not worry.

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: They miss you.

 

[Alienesse]

TUVOK: As I do them.

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: I'll get you back to them. That's a promise, Tuvok.



(What are the rules on Captain's Logs? Do we continue on with them if it's the same character as the previous line? If so: )





Captain's log, supplemental. The Maquis ship and Voyager have encountered a debris field where sensors have detected a small vessel. One humanoid life form is on board.

[Bridge]

JANEWAY: Hail them.
(The viewscreen is covered in metal debris. Someone with spots and a mohican hair cut clears it.)

 

[Alienesse]

(The viewscreen is covered in metal debris. Someone with spots and a mohican hair cut clears it.)
NEELIX [on viewscreen]: Whoever you are, I found this waste zone first.

(yeah, I think if the character speaking is the captain him/herself, then you include the Captain's Log part as well)

 

[BlueStuff]

JANEWAY: We're not interested in this debris, Mister..