"Carbon Creek" Line-by-Line

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  1. Athena28

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    JACK: Where to?
     
  2. retroenzo

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    T'MIR: Home. Up north
     
  3. Athena28

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    JACK: I'm going to miss you. You're about the most interesting people I've met in this town.
     
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    T'MIR: I'm sure you'll meet a lot of interesting people at college.
     
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    Jack: I'm not going.
     
  6. retroenzo

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    T'MIR: What? Why not?
     
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    JACK: We couldn't come up with the rest of the money. The deadline for the tuition's Friday, so...
     
  8. Athena28

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    T'MIR: What will you do?
     
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    JACK: Keep saving, I guess. Find a job. Mom doesn't want me anywhere near the mine but that's where the work is around here.
     
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    T'MIR: Can you try again next year for the scholarship?​
     
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    JACK: I'll reapply, but there's no guarantee.
     
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    T'MIR: I'm sure they will offer it to you again.
     
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    JACK: And if not, there's always the library. Still a lot of books I haven't read. Good luck up north. Carbon Creek's not exactly a vacation spot, but I hope you'll come visit us.
     
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    T'MIR: Perhaps.
     
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    (Maggie has been listening at the door.)
    MAGGIE: He took those college boards, got the highest score of anybody in the county. it's not fair.
     
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    [Bad Creek Manufacturing and Sales Company]

    BUSINESSMAN: So, you're the lady with the invention that's going to change the world.
     
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    (She hands him a pouch fastened by Velcro. He tries it a few times, and beams. She leaves with a sheaf of bank notes.)

    [Pine Tree bar]

    MAGGIE: Morning.
    (Then she sees all the bank notes in Jack's college fund jar.)
    MAGGIE: Jack! Jack!
     
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    [Vulcan's apartment]

    (T'Mir is washing up, Mestral is sweeping the floor and Stron is working on something.)
    T'MIR: Didn't you terminate your employment?
     
  19. retroenzo

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    STRON: Yes, but I promised Mrs. Garrett I'd repair this suction device.
     
  20. mattman8907

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    MESTRAL: It's unfortunate that you'll be leaving these people without experiencing one thing they have to offer.