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Burning Ring of Fire

Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

Good sequence. How come one torpedo could wipe all of the ships-they made of less-stern stuff than a Fed vessel?
Quantum torpedoes utilise zero-point energy (according to DS9 tech manual) which (nicking from Stargate) is gained from an artificial subspace bubble. So, since they were in subspace anyway, there was more zero-point energy and so much more of a BANG.

That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
 
You'll have to forgive me, I haven't read your first story...so the answer could be there. But Astar seems to be very aggressive against the Cha'lav. Is just due to their threat, something more personal, or that's just her?
 
Nicely done. I liked Astar's use of the quantum torpedo here. Quick thinking and an aggressive captain--a good combination and it's looking like Astar's going to need all her capabilities coming up soon.
 
You'll have to forgive me, I haven't read your first story...so the answer could be there. But Astar seems to be very aggressive against the Cha'lav. Is just due to their threat, something more personal, or that's just her?
Astar is very aggressive, and it is only partly due to the Cha'lav threat. She doesn't like bullies of any stripe and they are bullies.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

USS Weisskopf
In orbit of Ynelav VIII
Stardate 57374.5

Ensign T’Larr stood in front of Captain Dhrex’s desk in his ready room as he perused her latest report. Her team had returned to the ship five days prior, after the discovery of the Romulan warbird’s remains, and since then T’Larr had been working tirelessly to try to fathom the identity of the warbird. She was not getting anywhere and had now exhausted all but three methods of obtaining the information, all of which were in the report that the captain was taking his time to read. He looked up at her impassive face and gestured for her to take a seat, which she did.

‘To recap, Ensign, you believe that between two hundred and two hundred fifty years ago, a Romulan warbird crashed on Ynelav IV and the people reverse-engineered the technology for their own use. You have further stipulated that the Romulan survivors posed as false gods to the Ynelavii people and this caused a schism in their religious background which still exists today, and is in fact the basis for the civil war that is currently progressing on the surface?’

T’Larr nodded, ‘Yes sir.’

‘Do you have anything to back up this report?’

‘Yes sir, I do,’ the Vulcan replied. ‘This region is far from Romulan space and yet there is a Romulan warbird within the sector which arrived prior to Starfleet’s cover being blown. It is logical to assume that Subcommander Sokal is searching for something and a Romulan warbird which disappeared two centuries ago, and may contain the remains of a relative, would be ample motive, especially during a time when numerous factions are vying for control of a fractured society.’

‘Is that all?’

‘No sir, Nelan is an old Romulan name that is no longer used. It does not appear in any other culture, except this one, and the Ynelavii have constructed a religion around it. From my studies in the reliquary, I discovered runic markings that bear no resemblance to the native writings, but significant resemblance to an old rural Romulan dialect. I believe that Subcommander Sokal is searching for a relative. I also postulate that the Seer in native lore is in fact a descendant of one of the survivors, perhaps Nelan himself.’

Dhrex sighed. ‘Do you have any idea what you are suggesting?’

‘Yes sir, I do. I am also aware that according to regulations, you must report this to your direct superior.’

‘Who happens to be in close proximity to the Subcommander quite frequently. I am aware of regulations. Dismissed, Ensign.’

T’Larr raised an eyebrow. ‘Sir?’

‘I have a private call to make, dismissed.’

With a nod, T’Larr turned on her heel and strode from the ready room. Since she had been working on this outside of her usual shift hours, and had presented her report just after her latest shift, she decided to return to her quarters for meditation but that thought was immediately quashed when Dhrex emerged onto the bridge.

‘Wait a moment, Ensign. Are you sure about your report?’

‘Yes sir,’ she replied.

‘Could you show the Ynelavii the evidence?’

‘Captain, doing so would likely destroy their faith, as well as being in breach of the prime directive.’

Dhrex looked around at the officers, including his exec who raised an eyebrow as well as any Vulcan. ‘Alright everyone, conference room. We’ll discuss this. You too, Ensign. I want you to present your findings to them.’

‘Yes sir,’ T’Larr replied. Though she didn’t let it show on her face, she was surprised that he would discuss what amounted to a breach of the most sacrosanct law in the Federation.

Moments later, once the bridge were seated around the conference table, T’Larr gave her report. Once she had concluded, there was silence until lieutenant commander Renn, the tactical officer, spoke up.

‘I can accept that telling them the truth would violate the letter of the prime directive, but it does not violate it’s spirit. We’re not interfering in the natural course of their spirituality, we’re helping to return it to its natural course.’

Commander Banks shook his head. ‘I disagree, I think that by revealing to them that the last two centuries of their religious beliefs have been a lie, we would be causing a deeper schism than the one that already exists. It would be reckless and irresponsible to put this culture, hell any culture, through that.’

Dhrex glanced at his XO and sighed. ‘You may be right, Commander, but I cannot leave without revealing it to them.’

‘There is another way,’ T’Larr said.

‘We send the information to both parties through an intermediary and let them decide what to do with it.’

‘Who would that third party be?’

‘The Resoto,’ Banks answered.

Dhrex scratched his chin. ‘That is an interesting proposition. Alright, let’s contact the nearest Resoto vessel and have them deliver our message.’

‘There is something else,’ T’Larr said and Dhrex turned to her.

‘Well?’

‘They may ask us to return, so we shouldn’t be in the system. They could get suspicious.’

‘Their ships have returned from their mission, wherever that was, so it will be difficult to leave without being detected.’

‘That’s easy,’ lieutenant Johnson, the chief engineer, replied. ‘We mask our signature to match the background radiation and just leave at one quarter impulse. They’ll never find us.’

‘I take it you’ve used that trick before?’

‘On the Cardassians, and they were paranoid.’

‘We have a plan, let’s get to it, dismissed. T’Larr, wait a moment please.’

The others filed out to get on with their new tasks and Dhrex handed the Vulcan a small wooden box. ‘I know you don’t like a fuss, so I thought I would just present it to you simply. Your department head had already been informed.’

T’Larr opened the box and saw inside a small cotton cushion, upon which rested a hollow gold pip. ‘Captain?’

‘It has been a long time coming, Lieutenant. Live long and prosper.’

‘Peace and long life,’ T’Larr replied, cradling the box.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

I liked it-it moved the plot along-but so short!:( Want more!(insert tantrum here)
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

I'm curious as to what Dhrex's higher ups have to say about his solution to the Ynelavii religious dilemma...I have a feeling there are some who won't feel the same way he does...

Of course, he first has to get away with it...
 
A serious ethical dilemma! Here's where a wrong call could end not just the Captain's career but possibly put him in the New Zealand Penal Colony! His senior staff is vulnerable too - I hope he's weighed the possible consequences.

Good segment!
 
Oh, he's weighed them all right. But let me ask you this. Would you do the same in his position? If not, what would you do? And if he does get away with it, what happens to him? does it depend on the outcome?

Next segment I hope to have ready by the end of today (sunday) or failing that, monday evening.
 
Agreed, quite the dilemma. I must say I was a tad disappointed however that Dhrex reached a solution that quickly. I would think this is a decision that would require quite some deliberation.

I certainly am not sure what the right choice would be given this situation and Dhrex is most definitely treading on thin ice now.

In any case I'm more than a bit curious of the consequences of this decision.
 
I must say I was a tad disappointed however that Dhrex reached a solution that quickly. I would think this is a decision that would require quite some deliberation.
It is often easier to seek forgiveness than ask permission. Remember, there's a civil war going on with people dying. My personal view is that you make the decisions you feel are right, and then deal with the consequences once the dust has settled.
 
I must say I was a tad disappointed however that Dhrex reached a solution that quickly. I would think this is a decision that would require quite some deliberation.
It is often easier to seek forgiveness than ask permission. Remember, there's a civil war going on with people dying. My personal view is that you make the decisions you feel are right, and then deal with the consequences once the dust has settled.

Like that old saying: It's better to be tried by twelve than carried by six. Dhrex made a command decision and he'll have to live with the fallout of it one way or the other--that's why there's such a big leap between three and four pips. In any event, there's another cliche that might well apply here as well: Success has many authors while failure has but one.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

Rebel Headquarters
Ynelav IV
Stardate 57376.1

General Furan, after reading the information provided by a passing Resoto trader, had immediately called his cell leaders to a meeting to disseminate it. While most agreed to his course of action, some were not at all happy but agreed to go along, for the time being. Furan then went to Regent Dolan who was being held in a secured location, and released him. The deposed leader, dressed in the same robes he had been in when first captured, smiled wanly at the rebel leader but said nothing until they reached a room with a guard.

‘You may bathe, eat and freshen yourself up. We have much to discuss.’

‘Am I getting my planet back?’

‘We’ll discuss that once you’ve cleaned up. I have been given important information which I have decided to share with you.’

Dolan decided against baiting the rebel leader and just nodded. ‘Thank you, what of my aide?’

Furan sighed. ‘He is staying where he is for now. Perhaps he’ll be released once our discussions have been concluded.’

Dolan nodded and entered the room. His eyes widened in surprise. Through a doorway on his left was a bathing room which was all but invisible to the naked eye through the steam, and to his right, clean robes and a feast fit for a platoon. He headed for the bathing room and discarded all his clothing before sinking into a tub filled with hot water. Not wanting to push Furan too far, the former leader washed himself quickly, dried and put on the clean robes before helping himself to the food on display. The spicy Felos strips were his favourite and he ate his fill, washing it down with the citrusy wine from the Navalo slopes.

After about an hour, Dolan had replenished his strength and was now presentable, befitting a planetary leader. He opened the door and saw that the guard was no longer standing there. The idea of making a run for freedom flitted through his head quickly but curiosity and common sense won through. If this information could be used to get him back into his Regency, then he would hear Furan out. It was obviously important to the rebel leader and could be important to him. He strode toward the end of the plain corridor which was clearly built underground since it had no windows, no illumination save for the lights on the walls, and had a peculiar earthy smell. A door opened and he stopped in a heartbeat.

‘Regent, please come in,’ Furan said, gesturing the for the former leader to enter.

‘Thank you, Minister,’ Dolan replied as he entered a conference room.

There were only two chairs and a computer console at each one. ‘Please sit and read the information. There is a rather copious amount and we’ll need to discuss it afterward. Both in regards to what it means for the people and for the leadership,’ Furan said and took a seat himself.

Dolan began reading the information and his eyes flicked to Furan’s impassive face several times though the rebel leader didn’t seem to notice. After some time, he came to the conclusion of the report and switched off the screen. ‘It is true, isn’t it?’ he asked.

‘I believe so, only the two of us know the specifics.’

‘This came from a Resoto trader, but it is a Starfleet document.’

‘They did the research before I kicked them out of orbit and they clearly thought that this information would end the civil war.’

‘Will it?’

‘I have already ordered a ceasefire and General Allak has accepted it. For now, both sides have stood down. What happens next is up to us.’

‘I think you and I both need to visit this reliquary and see the technology for ourselves. Only then can we really decide what to do. If this technology truly is from another world, and one or more of them did survive and integrate into our society then we should try to find these individuals.’

‘As you can see, the report does give a genetic profile of this species, Romulans, and even with our limited technology in that area, we should be able to test them.’

‘Since Starfleet has expertise in this area, we should call them in.’

Furan smiled. ‘So they can assist you in retaking the government by force? I don’t think so.’

‘You clearly have no understanding of the way they operate. They do not interfere in the internal politics of other cultures. Don’t you think they would have intervened before if they were going to?’

Furan scowled. ‘We cannot understand their motives. Why did they not bring us this information directly?’

‘Because you asked them to leave and if they returned against your wishes, as ruler of this world, their captain would have been in trouble with his superiors,’ Dolan replied. ‘I have studied their rules and their history. They have fought these Romulans before and know how to deal with them if they should return. They know more about this technology than we are ever likely to. It would be a mistake not to invite them to assist us.’

Furan said nothing for a long moment. ‘Let us visit this reliquary first, and then decide whether to invite them. Is that acceptable?’

Dolan nodded. ‘When do we leave?’

‘I have a skimmer standing by.’ There was a knock at the door. ‘Yes?’

‘General, there is a vessel approaching orbit. It does not answer any hails. General Allak said it just appeared in front of him.’

‘Has it made any overt moves of hostility?’ Dolan asked.

The messenger looked at Furan, who nodded. ‘No, Regent, but why else would it be here?’

‘Perhaps we should get to the Ministry where we can greet the visitors properly?’

Furan nodded and turned to the messenger. ‘Ready the skimmer.’

‘Yes, General.’

Dolan realised, once they emerged from the underground fortress, that they were actually in Navalo itself, and not too far from the vineyards or the reliquary. The skimmer would only take about twenty minutes to reach the Ministry of Science and hopefully the aliens would do nothing in that time. It actually took almost half that time and both Dolan and Furan reached the office at the same time, only to find that it wasn’t empty. A tall woman with a stern regal bearing sat in Dolan’s chair. She had greenish skin, pointed ears, and wore an unusual uniform. It consisted of black trousers and heavy black boots with a checkerboard jacket and belt-sash combo with various insignia.

‘Who are you?’ Furan asked.

‘I am Subcommander Sokal of the Imperial Rihannsu Warbird Talon. I am here for my warbird and any personnel that are still alive. You may keep the dead.’

‘We have only just discovered your technology, Subcommander,’ Dolan replied. ‘We are not yet aware of any of your personnel. Are any likely to still be alive? It has been more than two centuries.’

‘At least one, but there are probably descendents. We will take the half breeds with us.’

Dolan looked at Furan. ‘We should negotiate this.’

Furan took a firmer stand. ‘We will not negotiate. You can take your warbird but the people will remain here.’

Sokal withdrew a disruptor from her belt and fired. Furan’s dead body dropped to the floor. ‘Will you negotiate?’

‘Of course, that is what I offered to do. The warbird is of course yours, as to the people, she should locate them first.’

‘I can help with that. My vessel can detect people with Rihannsu blood.’

‘Then we should begin negotiations in earnest.’
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

Ah yes, good old fashioned Romulan negotiation tactics. Quick and to the point and leaving absolutely no misunderstadings.

On the bright side the civil war seems to be in its last throes (Now where have I heard that before?)

Good stuff!
 
We're in the home stretch now. Three more sections to go, and here's the next one...

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USS Dauntless
Kursican Badlands
Stardate 57376.9

‘We’re approaching the edge of the Badlands, Captain,’ Ensign Daniel Larson said with a touch of relief to his voice. ‘We should reach the plasma fields in the next two hours.’

‘Get some rest, Ensign. I need you at your best.’

‘Yes sir,’ the helmsman replied, rising from his station and heading for the turbolift.

‘Gonzales, how far behind us are the Cha’lav?’

‘About an hour, but they’ll close that gap quickly once we enter the plasma fields.’

‘Can you detect anything from them at this distance?’

‘There is a lot of subspace chatter going on between them, but their weapons are powered down and I’m not detecting any hostile manoeuvres.’

‘I don’t trust them. They could us disappeared back into subspace, why didn’t they?’

‘Ask Jamal, he’s been doing some research on their behaviour.’

‘Has he now?’ Astar asked. ‘Bridge to astrometrics. Mahtani, what have you learned about the Cha’lav with regards to their subspace technology?’

The Cha’lav’s subspace technology is not as good as they would have us believe, Captain. They cannot open rifts just anywhere, and in the Badlands they cannot open rifts to the galactic void. Their primary method of travel is what we might call hyperspace. It is like the quantum slipstream technology being developed by the Corps of Engineers but it works in subspace and is much faster. They can reach any of our satellite galaxies in approximately nine days. I would think that they would need some other method of travel if they were to reach other major galaxies quickly.’

‘So the notion of a universe-spanning empire is not likely?’

It is possible, but I cannot say how likely without more information.’

‘Which we don’t have right now.’

No, sir.’

‘How do the plasma fields look? Are we likely to have a rough ride?’

Not this time, sir. I think we might have thinned out the plasma fields when we sealed that major rift.’

‘How so?’

It looks like the plasma needles, the naturally-occurring rifts and the subspace topography exist in symbiosis with each other. When we forced the super-rift closed, we used up some of the needles. I think it is possible to completely obliterate the Badlands if we use up all the needles.’

‘And how do you propose we do that?’ Astar asked somewhat tetchily.

All the rifts open into the plasma fields, which means that there is some kind of subspace fault line. If we can set it off, then the plasma needles will seal it shut and in doing so the Badlands will lose much of the danger to passing vessels.’

‘What of the sharks?’

Mahtani was quiet for a few seconds. ‘The naturally occurring rifts shouldn’t be affected, Captain.’

‘Run simulations and get back to me in one hour. We’ll be entering the plasma fields in a little over ninety minutes.’

Yes sir, Mahtani out.’

‘Prepare the deflector for another shot,’ Astar said to her tactical officer. ‘We could make it a lot harder for the Cha’lav to attack this sector if we can limit the number of places they can open their rifts.’

Gonzales nodded. ‘Anything we can do to send those creatures back to the rock from which they came is a good thing. We defeated the Borg, the Dominion, and now we’ll show the Cha’lav the same treatment!’

Astar stifled a grin. ‘Get on it, Commander.’

‘Yes sir.’

‘Captain, could I have a word?’ Wright asked, having been almost silent on the bridge for the last several shifts.

‘Of course, my ready room. Gonzales, you have the bridge.’

Wright entered the ready room and Astar followed. ‘Permission to speak freely?’ her exec asked.

Finally, Astar thought. ‘Permission granted.’

Wright looked her square in the eye. ‘I don’t think you have any business being in that chair. Your decisions are reckless, you try to communicate with them when they are clearly not interested, and “crippling blows” you believe you are dealing to them will likely stop nothing. I’ve been in worse battles than your jacket credits you with and I believe that I am better suited to command this mission.’

Astar sighed and drew herself up to her full height, which wasn’t enough to match his, but her steel did the rest. ‘Starfleet’s mission is one of peace and exploration and it is better to turn an enemy into a friend than kill him. If you don’t wish to follow those ideals then you have no business being in that uniform. You’re on report, Commander, and the next time you decide to disobey an order or question me in front of the crew, I’ll have you relieved of duty and stripped of rank. Do you understand me?’

‘Yes, sir.’

‘Dismissed.’

Wright stalked out of the ready and Astar collapsed against her desk. It was time to have a closer look at his jacket. She sat in her chair and activated the monitor which rose from the desk. Calling up his record, she looked at his wartime accomplishments and noted an impressive array of tactics, with one glaring problem. These tactics were not standard at the Academy and spoke of someone to this type of war since an early age. Perusing his career, she noticed that the reports from his superiors changed about eight years prior, just days after his promotion to commander. He should have made captain but the numerous black marks in his file prevented it. At this stage, it was unlikely that he would ever be given command, which could explain why some of his previous commanding officers died in questionable accidents.

His first mission after his promotion was to one of the Tzenkethi border worlds. He was presumed lost until he turned up two days later having been severely beaten. He could offer no explanation and Starfleet investigated but ultimately dropped the matter. Wright had not been the same since that day and Astar believed that she now knew the reason, but would have to contact Starfleet to get confirmation. There was one particular person she wanted to speak with, but that would have to wait until this mission was over. She believed she had that long.

Captain Astar to the bridge,’ Wright called and she knew that something was up.

‘What do we have?’ she asked as she emerged from her ready room.

‘A rift has opened ahead of us and we’re detecting a large build up,’ Gonzales answered.

‘How many ships?’

‘At least thirty.’

‘What about the ships behind us?’

‘They have adjusted course to enter the rift. I do not believe that either group will attack.’

‘Why not?’

‘They’re not ready yet. This is a fleet build up, Captain. I believe they are preparing to attack the starbase.’

‘Let’s see what happens.’

Astar took her seat and watched as Gonzales’ prophecy was fulfilled. Over the next thirty minutes the ships behind them entered the rift, joining the thirty plus ships already gathered and the rift sealed itself.

‘God help us all if they attack soon. We’ve got nowhere near enough ships.’

‘Do we go back?’ Gonzales asked.

‘No, perhaps sealing the Badlands will push their timetable back a bit. That’s our best hope.’
 
Astar certainly doesn't need the added distraction of Wright, with the Cha'lav mustering their forces for a possible attack on the Starbase. Yet, she can't very well ignore him either. What happened to Wright along the Tzenkethi border worlds? Methinks the answer to his bizarre (homicidal?) behavior lies there.

Good stuff! :)
 
Romulan negotiating techniques--a firm word and a two by four (or a disruptor) beats a firm word everytime. Well, it looks like Dhrex's gambit paid off--especially as the Regent has seen first hand Romulan negotiation.

As for Astar, she handled the situation with Wright as well as one could. I'm also interested in what happened along the Tzenkethi border.
 
Won't Furan's death cause problems ending the fighting? Or are the Romulans going to "help" with the negotiations? Whatever Wright's problem is, I'd like to point out that space is dangerous. Accidents happen all of the time. Astar should keep that in mind. :)
 
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