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Burning Ring of Fire

Since a few of you have wondered about the Ocampa in my little novella, I thought I would write a little extra thread to link them into the main tapestry...


1000 years ago, the Nacene came to the Milky Way exploring our galaxy as they once explored their own, but their subspace technology damaged many worlds. Among them was Ocampa, home to a race of short-lived powerful telepaths. Two Nacene, members of the Scientifica, were chosen to stay behind and care for this child race. A third defied his people and took a group of citizen-defenders to a far-off world across the Milky Way where he assisted their breeding into fearsome warriors.

The Ocampan Ascendancy flourished in this area of space, controlling entire sectors within a mere two hundred years. Then came the Cha'lav, a fearsome empire-species intent on controlling the entire galaxy. A war was fought between these nations and the Cha'lav slowly but surely exterminated all but a few Ocampan Ascendants. The last of them fled in a battered old ship but one lone Cha'lav cruiser followed them, setting into motion a sequence of events that would take five hundred years to come to fruition...



I'll be writing The Final Flight of the Exosia soon.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

CHAPTER FIVE

USS Dauntless
Kursican Badlands
Stardate 57366.9

Captain Astar knew that the recovered hull fragment was important in some way, but she wasn’t sure how. Even if she took the nonsense about the twenty-second century’s temporal cold war at face value, there was no way she was going to believe that the Cha’lav had been pulling the strings. It was just as likely that wherever their homeworld was, in whatever galaxy it was in, had this alloy in abundant supply or was manufactured by their space industry. Though the Astar symbiont had lived several lifetimes, and had the collective memories of those lifetimes, Leza knew that there was much she didn’t know. This compelled her to learn, and right now her entire complement of science personnel was working on one of two problems. The first was the hull fragment, but the second was the most important to her. The Onizuka’s sensors had picked up something but the resulting visuals were too distorted. It was these visuals that the science team and the engineers were working on, and had been for some time. The Dauntless was holding position at the edge of what had been the debris field until Astar was certain that whatever the shuttle’s sensors picked up was not harmful to them in any way.

‘Captain, you may cease hovering,’ Mahtani said with an almost Vulcan tone. ‘We’ve cleared up the distortions as best we can. Watch this.’

Astar’s eyes widened as she saw the images on the screen. ‘Is that what I think it is?’

‘Yes sir, it is,’ Mahtani replied, sitting at the science console on the bridge, forward of the Ops console. ‘It is the same creature we believe destroyed the Cha’lav fleet. Our “subspace shark.”’

‘What of the data? Have you been able to reconstruct it?’

The science officer nodded. ‘The creature which the Onizuka picked up is smaller than the one we detected, about a third of the size, but still almost a kilometre long.’

‘A baby?’

‘Probably, but we can’t be a hundred percent sure without further analysis.’

‘Does the creature pose a danger to the ship?’

‘I don’t believe so, but I recommend not exceeding warp four while in the Badlands. Any faster than that and the creature will be drawn to our subspace wake.’

‘Very well,’ she said and turned toward the helm. ‘Larson, set a course for the far side of the Badlands, warp three point seven.’

‘Aye sir, three point seven; course laid in.’

‘Engage.’

‘Captain, I believe there is a growing problem within the Badlands,’ Gonzales said.

‘Go on,’ Astar replied.

‘I’ve been getting updated readings of the subspace topography from Commander Wright in astrometrics and I believe I have found a reason why the Cha’lav chose this sector as their staging ground.’

‘Well?’

‘The Cha’lav vessels seem to be more at home in subspace and this allows them to travel between galaxies much faster than they could in normal space, due to the subspace eddies. The Kursican Badlands have a very weak barrier between normal space and subspace and this allowed the Cha’lav to break through easily. Because of the complicated topography, it also means that the Badlands’ subspace regions are coiled like a DNA protein string, curving in and around itself, so that where tears or ripples occur, we’re likely to get plasma storms.’

‘Oh,’ Mahtani added in response.

‘Is that a problem?’ Astar asked, not being of scientific bent.

‘Yes sir, it means that if the barrier weakens enough, we’ll get a giant subspatial rift, something typical of a subspace weapon much like what caused the Tomed Incident, but on a much larger scale. This entire sector could be ripped asunder.’

‘Is there any way to repair the barrier?’

‘We could, but we’d be sacrificing the shark’s species to death. It might live in subspace, but it needs to emerge in normal space every now and then, like a shark or dolphin.’

‘Alright, putting aside the fact that we might be sentencing a species to extinction, can you find a way of repairing the barrier in the Badlands? Once you’ve worked that out, perhaps you can work out a way to save the sharks as well.’

‘It is possible that the plasma storms could do our jobs for us.’

‘In what way?’

‘We could deliberately open the weakest points and then, because the plasma needles are drawn to them, they would kind of suture the tear closed. It would stabilise the region and still leave enough weak points for the sharks to emerge. One possible reason for the major weak points could be the Cha’lav presence opening their rifts, both inside and outside of the Badlands.’

‘I like it, set up a way of doing so and bring me a solution by the end of the day. The sooner we reach Eeroth the better for all of us.’

‘Aye sir,’ Mahtani and Gonzales said.

‘We’ll need to coordinate with astrometrics to find the weakest points,’ Mahtani added.

‘Get on it,’ Astar ordered. As her tactical and science officers entered the turbolift, Astar had a sudden thought and asked them to wait. ‘How can we detect these weak points?’

‘Tetryon particles only exist in subspace. They become erratic and unstable when in normal space. Since the Enterprise-D and Voyager had run-ins with several subspace phenomena, both shields and sensors were enhanced to detect and protect against them,’ Gonzales answered. ‘If we detect a large concentration of tetryon particles, we know we’ve found a weak spot.’

‘Helm, find us some tetryons,’ Astar ordered as the turbolift doors closed on her officers.

She stared at the viewscreen and wondered whether anything they did here would make a difference. Although they had been dealing the Cha’lav serious blows, it didn’t seem to make any difference. They just kept coming. She was beginning to think that the only way to prevent this war from occurring was to either destroy every Cha’lav ship that appeared in the galaxy (which was not going to be easy if they appeared outside allied space) or to take the battle to them and enter their own territory—perhaps even convincing them that this galaxy didn’t pose a threat, but she couldn’t see that happening, not anymore.
 
Ah, the pieces are coming together for me. Perhaps it was said before and I missed it, but the revelation that the Cha'lav are the mysterious benefactors of the Suliban is a great twist!

Looking forward to more.
 
Ah, the pieces are coming together for me. Perhaps it was said before and I missed it, but the revelation that the Cha'lav are the mysterious benefactors of the Suliban is a great twist!

Looking forward to more.
I haven't quite said that, Dnoth, but I have noted similarity in the technology from the Future Tense ship and the Cha'lav. The Future Tense ship belonged to what I can only assume was a "good" faction in the TCW. To be honest, I wasn't intending to have the Cha'lav involved in the TCW but it is an interesting possibility, though not one I'll be exploring.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

Observation Deck
Starbase 535
Stardate 57369.3

Nicholas Locarno sat in one of the comfortable chairs placed in groups of two to four dotted across this section of the observation deck that ringed the top of the starbase. With her hands on the windows, Linnis stared out at the vista spread before and neither noticed Commander Logan until he sat down beside the freighter captain. Locarno tore his gaze away from his new charge and glanced at the starbase’s commander.

‘They said no?’

‘Actually, they said yes, with one proviso.’

‘Which is?’

‘That you let Admiral Janeway speak with her on Earth when you get back.’

‘Why would she want to speak with her?’

‘Janeway had an Ocampa on board Voyager for a few years.’

‘I thought I was the last of my kind,’ Linnis said and climbed into Locarno’s lap.

‘Hundreds of your people live across the other side of the galaxy,’ Logan told her, ‘but we don’t know how to get you there.’

The young girl looked thoughtful for a moment and then shrugged. ‘I don’t need to go there. Nick will look after me.’

Locarno smiled. ‘Am I required back on Earth immediately?’

Logan shook his head. ‘There was no timeframe specified. I would like you here as my eyes and ears on the frontier. With the Dauntless off on a humanitarian mission and the Weisskopf watching the Ynelavii civil war, I have only the Independence watching for Cha’lav encroachment, along with the Romulans and Klingons. I need someone to tell me what the colonies are thinking, and since you’ll be heading out that way tomorrow, I think you can do that job for me.’

‘What is happening with the Cha’lav?’

‘They seem to be using this sector as a staging ground for a war against our galaxy. I don’t know why this particular region of space, but I do know that we can’t allow them to gain a foothold in the quadrant like the Dominion did. The Cha’lav are far worse and from the information we’ve been able to decrypt from their database, they have done this in several other galaxies and been entirely successful. I’d like to see them lose for once.’

Locarno nodded, making a mental of everything for his employer. ‘If word got out to their other...holdings...other subject worlds might fight back. A concerted effort on so many fronts would weaken them to the point impotency.’

‘A good plan, I’ll suggest it to Admiral Owens. By the way, did you see Sito Jaxa before she left?’

‘I did,’ Locarno said, frowning. ‘She’s been through a lot. I was hoping to have more time to talk to her but I think that she’s still a little weary of men she’s not sure of, and the last time I saw her was not in the best of circumstances.’

Logan nodded, knowing of the situation. ‘I was just thinking, have you seen Hajar and Crusher?’

Locarno nodded. ‘Jean seems to have forgiven me, but Wesley was a little distant.’

‘Didn’t he just come back from travelling the galaxy?’

‘In a manner of speaking,’ Locarno replied absently.

He looked down and saw that Linnis had fallen asleep.

‘Maybe you should get her to bed,’ Logan suggested.

Locarno lifted the slight young girl from his lap. ‘I think that’s a good idea. Once she’s in bed I’ll oversee the loading of the Kolvoord.’

‘She might wonder where you are if she wakes up. If her telepathic abilities are as strong as you say, we might not want her broadcasting too loudly.’

‘She seems to have a large measure of control.’

‘You should know that she is not like other Ocampa. Admiral Janeway has had the opportunity to study her blood work with Voyager’s EMH.’

‘What did they find?’

‘Standard Ocampa lifespans are eight to nine years, but according to hers, her expected lifespan is almost triple that.’

Linnis stirred slightly but settled against Locarno’s shoulder. ‘Is there any reason for that?’

‘None that they could detect in her genetic structure. Her people haven’t been genetically engineered, but their mental abilities might go some way to explaining that.’

‘What am I taking to the colonies?’ Locarno asked, changing the subject to something more palatable.

‘Weapons,’ the commander replied and Logan sighed. ‘If the Cha’lav land ground troops, I want the colonies ready to defend themselves. Every freighter that docks here will be loaded with weapons and emergency supplies.’

‘So we’re preparing for a war? I thought all that was behind us?’

‘So did I, Mister Locarno, so did I.’

‘I just hope that Captain Astar can do what she set out to do, whatever that is.’

Logan glanced around but realised they were still mostly alone in this corner of the deck. ‘Astar is returning an alien to his people and hoping that she can do so before the Cha’lav have a chance to destroy his homeworld as they did to the Resoto.’

‘If she fails?’

‘Then the Cha’lav have a foothold. She can’t fail.’

‘Where did she go?’

‘Through the Kursican Badlands.’

‘I’ve heard bad stories about that place.’

‘So have I, but it is the only route to reach the alien’s homeworld.’

‘Let us hope that she is able to complete her mission and get back here before the Cha’lav decide to attack us.’

‘I would think that that possibility is some time off. They don’t have any allies in this part of space and the few ships that they have sent have been destroyed or crippled.’

‘Score one for us. All they would have to do is open a large enough rift and sent a big fleet through, unless there’s a limit to the size.’

‘I’ll have my science team take a look at the database and see if they can figure that out.’

‘Good idea, I’ll get back to my job,’ Locarno replied and headed towards his quarters.

He had plenty of information for his employer and he hoped that reporting the girl’s existence would keep them off his back for a time, while he decided what to do about undermining them and shutting them down. Over the years he had worked for them, he’d come to understand that their basic ideals, to protect the Federation, were noble, but their methods were nothing short of insidious and barbaric.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

Operation Cobalt Headquarters
Utopia Planitia
Stardate 57371.2

Admiral Michael Owens felt restrained as he waited for his shuttle to reach Berth 1864. He needed to pace to release the pent up energy that being an admiral caused. He sometimes thought that accepting the promotion was a mistake, but the losses to the Admiralty from the Breen attack were still keenly felt and he was a good tactician. He was asked to take over a particularly sensitive mission that Starfleet Command had named “Cobalt” for some obscure reason and he had read all the classified files on the Cha’lav.

It wasn’t much.

From a time-travelling lieutenant to an invasion from beyond the galaxy, it all sounded like a bad holonovel but the reports that kept flooding in from the Kursican sector assured him that this was not so. The Cha’lav were a dangerous enemy, to be sure, but if Command granted his wish then he was sure that Starfleet would be assured victory, unlike their future counterparts who were most likely all dead or knew nothing because of the changes in the timeline. He had a rudimentary knowledge of time travel and what he didn’t know he had learned from those that did. Even the smallest changes in the past could lead to catastrophic results in the future but in this case, that was a good thing. The Federation of the future had all but collapsed because of a prolonged centuries-long war with the Cha’lav and in a last-ditch effort to stave off disaster, they had sent a woman back through time to prevent the enemy from gaining their foothold. Unfortunately, the Cha’lav had also sent someone back and while it was known that the other time-traveller was an Andorian, there was nothing else known about that individual. Owens hoped that if Captain Astar could deal the Cha’lav a bad enough blow, it would give Lieutenant Parker time to concentrate her efforts on finding the Andorian and stopping them before the present became as bleak as the future.

The shuttle finally landed in the small bay at the rear of the rectangular berth and Owens quickly strode toward the hangar at its centre. Sixteen hours ago, he had been on a starship heading for the Kursican sector when he was called back by Admiral Janeway, the woman nominally in charge of this little endeavour. They both knew that keeping her away from the front lines of the Admiralty was an effort to placate President Satie after the former’s performance on Illuminating the City of Light had caused a slight rift between the Presidency and the fleet. Owens entered the hangar and smiled at what he saw. About twenty Corps of Engineers personnel were busy poring over the alien vessel, hoping to learn everything they could about it before Starfleet decided what to do with it.

‘It’s a sight, isn’t it?’

‘It certainly is,’ Owens replied. ‘I take it you didn’t call me here to show me the ship I know so well?’

Janeway shook her head. ‘I called you back because the engineers have the Gateway working.’

‘I thought it was destroyed?’

‘It was, but using the knowledge from the Gateways crisis and the Enterprise’s mission some years previous, they were able to reconstruct the chamber. The engines work and the consoles are being swapped out for Starfleet tech across the ship. It should be ready in about six months.’

‘Why so long?’

‘The Corps want to test everything before they let it go. There is still so much about them that we have no idea about. And getting the Starfleet and Cha’lav databases to work together is probably going to take the longest. They’re having trouble getting main power to stay online for more than an hour at a time with both databases working.’

‘Does that mean that Command have given us the go ahead?’

‘Not yet, they’re still debating the finer points with the security council and the President is weighing in as well.’

‘You don’t like her much do you?’

‘No, I think her stances on almost everything are too black and white. Fel Pagro is well suited to her.’

‘Oh yes, the special emissary. Who would you rather held the post?’

‘To be honest, I don’t know. I wasn’t that keen on any of the candidates at the time, but hopefully we’ll get someone new shortly. I don’t think Satie is well liked enough to get re-elected.’

‘When will we know whether we have the green light?’

‘That’s a good question. I’m hoping we get the nod before she’s ready to go so she can be tested by the people that are going to command her.’

‘I wanted to talk to you about that.’

‘Oh?’

‘I think that Astar’s command crew should take the ship into Cha’lav territory.’

‘Why?’

‘Because they know the Cha’lav better than anyone.’

‘Doesn’t that make them too close? As long as Parker is along with whoever goes, I don’t think it’s an issue.’

‘Sisko and his crew knew the Dominion better than anyone and they were successful in their mission behind enemy lines.’

Janeway considered that for a moment and nodded. ‘I think you should suggest that. I’m not exactly welcome at the Palais these days.’

Owens privately agreed with her stance but as a newly-minted rear admiral was not about to make waves, at least not yet. ‘I’ll talk to Command, but I’ll need back up. Who, in your opinion, is likely to agree to it?’

‘Go directly to the C-in-C. He’ll be your best fighter since he wants this dealt with swiftly. He also has Satie’s ear and therefore more likely to convince her than anyone else. The security council should make up their own minds but because so much of this operation is classified they’ll go along with whatever Satie decides.’

‘And she’ll go along with the C-in-C?’

‘Exactly.’

Owens smiled.

His aim of taking the battle to the Cha’lav on their own turf was brave and had its share of risks, but if any of their subject races knew what was happening they might rise up as well and join in the fight. No empire can fight a war on several fronts and come out victorious, especially not one as vast as the Cha’lav empire.
 
It certainly is a bold plan to go against the Cha'lav, hope it doesn't bite the galaxy in the butt.
 
Wow, still a lot of strings to follow here. And now you are also introdcuing an additional dimension to the Ocampa. Very interesting.

Obviously there is a lot to like here but I am a big fan of political scheming so I really enjoyed Owens and Janeways interactions and plans for the Cha'lev. Satie's abating popularity makes sense to me.

The Cha'lev are obviously a massive threat. But at the moment it feels that besides a few individuals, three or so ships and a couple of admirals nobody is giving this the attention in deserves. Have they learned nothing form the Borg and Dominion?
 
I like how this story is developing. I can see how the Cha'lav wouldn't be considered a major threat at this time--their actions so far have been limited to one out of the way sector and we're dealing with a Federation that is tired of war and doesn't want to hear about any new threats--to an extent, I think many within the Federation might well be suffering from "ostrich syndrome" here.

I too enjoyed Owen's portrayal. He might be an idealist, but he's not a fool. He knows a threat when he sees one.

It was good seeing Locarno here and I like what you're doing the the Ocampa. I have a feeling they're going to play an important role in the coming events.

Astar also impresses me. I liked her solution to the subspace rift problem--closing it off to the Cha'lav while at the same time keeping enough of an opening for the 'subspace sharks'. Prudence mixed in with audacity--I have a feeling her and Shelby would get along just fine. ;)

Very well done!
 
Thanks guys, I'm glad your enjoying it.

I'll write Final Flight of the Exosia once I've finished Burning Ring...

Keep reading

As for Satie's abating popularity, how possible is it within our shared universe to have Governor Bacco of Cestus III (ie Articles of the Federation) to run for president against Fel Pagro (Satie's chief advisor) in the next election? I actually like Bacco's style and I think that she would be a more popular president for us all to use.
 
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I wondered about the use of Satie myself-isn't she nuts or something? Always curious about how you landed on her. That said-Good going, Xeris. I really like Nick Locarno-you should persue this character further if he lives.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

USS Dauntless
Kursican Badlands
Stardate 57372.6

Ensign Daniel Larson kept one eye on the readouts as the information was fed to him by Commander Wright in astrometrics regarding course corrections due to the subspace topography. He made another correction and the Dauntless veered to port seconds before a rift opened and a plasma needle pushed through before being cut off as the rift closed.

‘That was close, Ensign,’ Astar said.

‘Yes sir, this particular region is the weakest we’ve encountered so far. It would be a prime target for our hypothesis.’

‘Slow to impulse,’ Astar ordered and Larson did so. ‘Mahtani, you ready?’

Yes sir,’ the science officer answered from astrometrics. ‘Engaging deflector dish now.’

Although they couldn’t see the beam itself, Gonzales had overlaid a tactical plot on the main viewscreen of what the beam was doing. Inset at various places were smaller screens with information scrolling down regarding the weaknesses of local space and the strength of the beam.

‘We have a rift forming,’ Gonzales said. ‘According to my scans the other side is in the plasma storms.’

‘How long before the rift is open enough?’ Wright asked in a bored tone as he returned to the bridge.

Ignoring the tone from her superior, Gonzales replied. ‘We have to open the rift all the way, like cutting a leg open to remove a thorn before the suturing can begin.’

‘How long?’ Wright asked again, sounding impatient but just skirting the edge of being unreasonable.

‘Another three minutes.’

‘Plasma needles are coming through,’ Larson said.

‘Hold position,’ Astar ordered. ‘Shields up.’

‘The beam is now penetrating the subspace interfold layer. We’re almost there,’ Mahtani added.

Plasma needles struck the Dauntless and the bridge shuddered, the lights flickering on and off as the structural integrity field tried to hold the ship in one piece.

‘Hull breach on deck six, no injuries. Forcefields are holding and emergency teams are en route.’

‘Mahtani?’ Astar asked, sounding impatient herself.

Disengaging tractor beam, recommend you pull us back to a safe distance.’

‘You don’t say,’ Wright muttered but only Astar heard him.

‘You heard him, Ensign, take us to one million kilometres.’

‘Aye sir, reversing course.’

Plasma needles were now emerging fast and were indeed hugging the edge of the rift, as if they were trying to pull it back into subspace. Astar sat down in her chair and made a mental note to have the ship’s psychiatrist speak with Wright. She didn’t want to have to relieve him of duty but he would soon give her no choice.

‘Captain, I’m picking up something,’ Gonzales said, entering commands at a feverish pace.

‘What is it?’

‘It looks like the creature again, with its young.’

‘On screen.’

The viewscreen magnified to a point at the centre of the rift where the child was trying to ride a plasma needle and the mother was attempting to prevent it from doing so.

‘What’s happening?’

‘It would appear that the child is reach normal space and its mother won’t allow it.’

‘Why?’

‘Perhaps the child cannot survive in normal space and the mother knows that the rift won’t stay open for long.’

‘How long before it collapses?’

‘Another ten minutes at its current rate.’

‘I’m picking up two more lifeforms,’ Gonzales said. ‘More young sharks.’

‘Can she manage all three?’ Larson asked.

‘Probably not through a rift this size,’ ch’Maras chimed.

Astar turned to him. ‘Care to explain, Lieutenant?’

The Andorian looked like he was about to bolt but calmed himself. ‘The rifts we have previously seen were less than a tenth this size, large enough for a mother and its young to enter for a breather, so to speak. This one is too large for her to adequately protect her children. She may need our help.’

‘It’s not our place to interfere,’ Wright said forcefully.

‘It will be our fault if any of them die,’ ch’Maras shot back, his antennae pointing forward in agitation.

‘I understand your argument, Lieutenant. But we’re doing to protect her species. If she loses one but the other two survive, I would have to accept those odds.’

‘I think we’re about to lose those odds, Captain,’ Gonzales interjected. ‘I’m picking up six vessels approaching from subspace. Their energy signatures match the Cha’lav scouts we’ve encountered before.’

‘Ready weapons.’

‘They’re not on course for us, Captain,’ the Betazoid looked up, horrified. ‘They are closing on the sharks.’

‘Take us in, as close as you dare.’

‘Aye sir,’ Larson replied.

As the Dauntless moved closer to the shrinking rift, one of the shark pups emerged fully from subspace and swam around the plasma needles. The other two tried to follow but the mother kept them at bay. Five of the Cha’lav scouts began herding the sharks back into the interfold layer between subspace and normal space while the other one headed for the wayward youngster.

‘Gonzales, watch that scout, the moment it does anything, fire.’

‘My pleasure,’ she replied with what Astar hoped was not malicious glee, though she couldn’t much fault her tactical officer for it.

The scout did not fire on the helpless youngster but tried to snare it with a net that reminded Astar of the Tholian webs she had seen back at the Academy.

‘Commander?’

‘Firing a photon torpedo, we’re too far out for phasers.’

‘Get us closer, Ensign.’

‘Yes sir.’

‘Direct hit, Cha’lav vessel is still intent on the shark.’

Plasma needles buffeted the ship, though they were not as severe as those earlier since the rift was nearing the size of its predecessors.

‘We’re in range.’

‘Fire phasers, continuous firing sequence. Aim for the weapons and engines.’

‘Aye sir, firing.’

The Cha’lav vessel finally broke off its attack and sent a few volleys of plasma toward the Dauntless before joining its companions.

Captain, the pup is too weak to rejoin its mother on its own and the rift will close in less than two minutes. It will not open again,’ Mahtani called from astrometrics. ‘I’ve been taking continuous scans of the area.’

Astar made a split-second decision. ‘Larson, take us in. Gonzales, snare the pup as gently as you can with a tractor beam. Ensign, have you ever flown in the interfold layer or subspace?’

‘No sir, not even in simulations.’

‘Now’s your chance. Ready, Commander?’

‘Yes sir, tractor beam standing by.’

‘Let’s go.’

Larson pushed the ship to up to three quarters impulse from a dead stop and Gonzales caught the pup in a low-intensity tractor beam in one fluid movement. The Dauntless slipped through the rift just as it closed and they were caught in the interfold layer as one last plasma needle burrowed its way into subspace itself. Larson followed the needle even as the ship was hit from the ferocious subspace energies. The screen blanked out and the bridge was plunged into darkness as they hit something solid.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

Neat. Maybe a little clearer idea of what the interfold layer is? Just 'cause I'm a little slow.:drool:
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Five

Neat. Maybe a little clearer idea of what the interfold layer is? Just 'cause I'm a little slow.:drool:
The interfold layer is like a buffer zone between subspace and normal space. It was explained in VOY, can't remember which episode.
 
I'm enjoying these intial forays against the Cha'lav (spelled it right, this time! ;)). David's point is valid - the Federation is definitely war weary and in no mood for another protracted war.

The backdrop of political intrigue you provide gives your story greater depth and realism. As to Satie, well - I doubt she would win many votes from the 'Fleet in the next election. Just my guess. :vulcan:

Well done!
 
Oh yeah...I remember that VOY episode, now. But why would the Cha'lav be herding subspace sharks? ...Inquiring minds want to know. :vulcan:
 
Well I suppose sharks would make some quality, inexpensive weapons, wouldn't they?

But now it looks as if Dauntless will have to play wildlife preserver. Interesting suff!
 
I think I've figured out the purpose of the Cha'lav herding the 'sharks', but I'll keep my silence for now to avoid ruining the surprise... ;)

I do enjoy the multiple layers in this story--political, character, an unknown threat--you do a good job juggling all those footballs.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

CHAPTER SIX

USS Dauntless
Somewhere in subspace
Stardate 57372.8

Shanitalen ch’Maras was the first to regain his feet and reinitialised the viewscreen. He looked at his console and saw that main power was still online, but operating at minimal levels. He cycled it back up to full power and the lights returned to their former level of illumination. Astar and Wright reached their chairs at the same time but Larson was sprawled beside his, clearly unconscious. He saw Gonzales’ hand grab her console as she hauled herself up to a standing position.

‘What the hell did we hit?’ Astar asked.

Ready for her question, ch’Maras responded. ‘We didn’t hit anything, Captain. We were hit by a subspace shockwave caused by the sealing of the rift.’

‘If the rift is sealed, how do we return to normal space?’ Wright asked, also the Andorian detected something else in his tone, something more along the lines of “where else can this technology take us.”

‘There are other weak points in this vicinity, Commander. All we have to do is locate the weakest of them and punch through with the tetryon beam.’

‘Then let’s find one,’ he replied and headed for the turbolift.

‘Not so fast, Commander,’ Astar reined him in. ‘Where are the Cha’lav and the sharks?’

‘The shark we snared was released and has rejoined its mother and siblings,’ ch’Maras answered as Gonzales brought her console back to life. ‘The Cha’lav have released their net and are currently circling them but making no hostile moves.’

‘All their moves are hostile,’ Astar muttered as she felt Larson’s pulse. ‘Ch’Maras, grab a medkit and see what you can do with him. Commander, get down to astrometrics and find us a way out. Gonzales, I want a way to communicate with the Cha’lav and find out what they’re doing to the sharks.’

Selachimorpha Cosmozoa,’ ch’Maras said, ‘space-dwelling sharks.’

‘We should have no trouble communicating with the Cha’lav since we both use subspace communication.’

Astar smiled. ‘Excellent, open a channel.’

‘Channel open.’

‘This is Captain Astar of the Federation starship Dauntless to the Cha’lav vessels. Leave those creatures alone and we will allow you to depart, unharmed.’

The face of a Cha’lav-Marsupial appeared on the viewscreen with crystal clarity. ‘These creatures possess an enzyme which allows us to exist in normal space. Without it we would die of radiation sickness very quickly. I know your laws, you cannot interfere.’

Astar could not believe what she was hearing. ‘That’s where you’re wrong. If you do not return to your own territory immediately, we will destroy you for violating our space.’

The Cha’lav looked pensive, or so ch’Maras thought, for just a moment. ‘I do not believe you will. You would have to report your actions to your superiors and they would not look too kindly on you.’

‘That may be so but I cannot stand by while you slaughter these creatures, and neither do I believe that you cannot exist in normal space without them. My people have done extensive studies on yours and this information has not come up. What is your real reason for attacking these creatures?’

The Cha’lav commander glared at Astar and then smiled. ‘One of these young creatures can feed an entire fleet for a month and the mother gives birth to ten every year. There are dozens of females all across subspace.’

Astar narrowed her eyes. ‘You consume them?’

‘Yes, now leave before we destroy you!’

Astar turned to Gonzales as the viewscreen returned to the view of the Cha’lav cruisers and the sharks. ‘How will our weapons work in subspace?’

‘I can’t say for certain, Captain, but I would recommend against using our torpedoes. We have no way of knowing how our photon torpedoes would react to the energies present. Our quantum torpedoes utilise zero-point energy from artificial subspace regions, but they could be devastating if they erupted here.’

‘We’re too far away from them to use phasers, so torpedoes are our only option. You recommend the quantum torpedoes?’

Gravely, Gonzales nodded. ‘Load one and set it to detonate at minimal yield as far from the sharks as possible.’

‘Yes sir,’ Gonzales replied.

‘Ready?’

‘Yes sir.’

‘Fire.’

They watched as the torpedo impacted the shields of the Cha’lav vessel furthest from the creatures. A blinding flash rendered the viewscreen inoperable for a few seconds but when they could see again, they saw that all of the Cha’lav vessels had been ripped apart by the blast, but she sharks appeared unharmed. A by-product of the blast was beneficial to the crew as there were stars visible.

‘Captain, there is a breach in the interfold later!’ Larson yelled. ‘Permission to depart?’

‘Granted, get us out of here.’

‘There is another rift opening, Captain,’ Gonzales added. ‘It appears as though more Cha’lav are coming through.’

‘Ensign, full impulse.’

‘We’re already at full impulse, Captain.’

‘Sir, we’re in subspace, we could use a stable warp field to generate more speed,’ ch’Maras suggested.

Astar looked at him and then at Wright. ‘Will it work?’

‘Only one way to try,’ her exec replied.

‘Initialising warp field,’ Larson said. ‘Now travelling at one hundred and seventeen percent of normal impulse speeds.’

‘I’m not a scientist, Ensign. Care to explain what that means?’ Astar murmured, approaching the helm.

Without turning in her direction, he answered. ‘Maximum impulse speed is generally one third the speed of light, using a warp field in subspace has allowed us to increase our maximum impulse speed to forty percent of the speed of light.’

‘How long till we reach our rift?’

‘Three minutes.’

‘The Cha’lav will be in firing range before then,’ Gonzales called out.

‘I can’t push the impulse engines much more.’

‘What about a microsecond burst from the warp engines?’ Astar asked, thinking back to the Academy and an old tactical manoeuvre.

‘Larson to Xeris, I need a two point six microsecond burst from the warp engines at warp three,’ the helmsman replied.

Ready when you are,’ the chief engineer responded without hesitation.

Astar smiled at the experience of her crew. The inertial dampers whined for less than a second as the starship accelerated. As the ship dropped out of warp the rift was upon them and they were through.

‘Well timed.’

‘Not really,’ Larson replied. ‘I didn’t take into account subspace itself. I could have torn us apart.’

‘You didn’t and you saved us in the process. How close are the Cha’lav?’

‘One minute away.’

‘How far are we from the far edge of the Badlands?’

‘Another day perhaps, judging from our position, not much more.’

‘Set a course and engage at warp four.’

‘Aye sir.’

‘The Cha’lav are pursuing,’ Gonzales interjected.

‘Can they catch us?’

‘Possibly.’

‘Then we’ll have to be ready for them,’ Astar replied as the Dauntless jumped to warp.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter Six

Good sequence. How come one torpedo could wipe all of the ships-they made of less-stern stuff than a Fed vessel?
 
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