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Burning Ring of Fire

Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

Why do I get the feeling that Locarno is about to lead the Trojan Horse into the walls of Starbase 535? Something about Linnis is setting off about a half dozen alarm bells in my head...
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

Linnis...ringing bells. Or I have a hang-over. Either way, I like the mystery but I'm sorry-you shifted tense in the middle of a paragraph and it threw me. "Locarno goes looking..."

Good story, progressing well.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

Mistral said:
I'm sorry-you shifted tense in the middle of a paragraph and it threw me. "Locarno goes looking..."
It's been fixed, it was actually about three paragraphs, but anyway.

And because I'm such a nice guy, I'll give you a little hint, you are way off base with the Trojan Horse theory. I'll leave you guessing as to what is really happening :devil:
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

I, for one, am baffled. I have no idea where you're taking us. I'm not saying that's a bad thing. :)
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

When little Linnis came out of hiding, the first words that floated through my skull were:

"They're heeere!"

(For reference, rent the movie, Poltergeist)

;)
 
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Little girls all by themselves on abandonded starships are scarry. I don't really know why but they just are. So naturally I have a bad feeling about this.

You continue to introduce new angels and players to this story, keeping us all guessing. I won't even start hypothesizing yet. But there aren't many things much better than a good mystery.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

USS Dauntless
Kursican Badlands
Stardate 57348.9

Once again seated to the left of the captain, Lieutenant Commander Sheena Gonzales thought Commander Wright looked somewhat crestfallen. There was a fire in his eyes but he had stayed quiet the last day or so. She had no idea what had been said during their conversation in the ready room almost two days ago but Wright had barely interacted with the bridge crew since then. She, on the other hand, had been interacting with a great many of the crew. As the ship’s second officer, she had been coordinating the different departments during their investigation of the Cha’lav wreckage. They had taken all the scans they could but the captain had forbidden them from beaming anything aboard. It was time for the next stage in the investigation but they had to prevent their latest findings first, and that meant bothering the captain.

‘Are you ready?’ Gonzales asked Mahtani who felt equally as apprehensive.

‘She won’t bite you,’ Wright muttered as they passed. ‘Her golden crew,’ he added.

They ignored him and chimed the ready room.

‘Enter.’

‘Captain,’ both said as they entered the ready room and stood before the desk.

‘Do you have anything further since your last report?’ Astar asked, looking up from her screen.

Their last report had been reporting no progress and she had dismissed them quickly.

‘Yes sir,’ Mahtani answered. ‘Some of the energy signatures on the hull fragments have now been identified.’

‘Well?’

Gonzales took over; it was her area of expertise. ‘Initially, we believed the scorching to be the result of weapons fire, but closer analysis of the burn patterns indicates something more akin to a bite.’

The captain suddenly focused on them with clear eyes. She looked from one to the other. ‘Are you telling me that some creature bit the ships to pieces?’

Mahtani shook his head. ‘No sir, we think that the creature exhibits similar behaviour to that of a Terran shark. It tests what it does not understand with its teeth since it has no nose to speak of. The Cha’lav probably fought back and the shark attacked them ferociously.’

‘Surely someone would have seen something.’

‘Not if it came out of subspace,’ Mahtani replied.

‘Would you mind explaining that?’

‘Many people see space like an ocean and subspace like the hidden depths. This creature, let’s call it a subspace shark, emerges from subspace to feed and saw the Cha’lav as food. The Cha’lav fight back, as live prey is wont to do, and the creature tries to devour it.’

Astar sighed. ‘Do you have any evidence to back up this theory?’

‘Only anecdotal, sir,’ Gonzales answered.

‘Explain.’

‘Cadet Jenak mentioned the Manxome, and Rashal also mentioned a creature like this. It appears to be a common myth among the local space-faring races.’

Astar nodded, not entirely convinced. ‘What do you want to do now?’

‘We’d like to take the Onizuka to the debris field and beam a section of scorched hull on board,’ Gonzales said. ‘You did say you didn’t want it aboard the Dauntless.’

Astar leaned back and folded her arms. ‘Alright, you can take the Flyer. But I don’t want you taking any unnecessary risks. Have Larson pilot the ship. Before you leave, however, I want to convene the senior staff and listen to our guests’ anecdotes about this creature.’

‘Aye sir.’

‘Dismissed.’

Less than ten minutes later they were all convened in the situation lounge to the rear of the bridge. Rashal and Cadet Jenak stood behind the captain’s chair and seemed content to wait for their turn, and although Rashal looked calm, Gonzales knew that he was not.

‘Now that you have all heard the best theory the science team has come up with, I want you to hear the…mythological side of the argument and decide for yourselves whether they match up to the facts or not. Rashal, Jenak, please tell us what you know.’

At Rashal’s urging, Jenak spoke first. ‘My people have a story to scare trader children about a giant creature that emerges from under-space and eats them if they’re naughty. A similar myth evolved from the traders themselves when they returned from the Badlands, citing incidents of a creature attacking their hulls, causing electromagnetic disturbances and then leaving them alone.’

‘Did any of those traders return to the Badlands?’ Mahtani asked, making notes.

‘Not that I am aware of. I believe they felt it to be too dangerous.’

‘The electromagnetic disturbances do tally, Captain,’ Mahtani replied.

‘Rashal?’

‘I do not believe there is much that I can add, Captain. The Eeroth believe the creature to be ship-killer, destroying any vessel that enters it’s territory. But we are a far more aggressive people than the Ynelavii and would assign proportionately more violent motives to the creature.’

‘I would still like to take the Onizuka, Captain,’ Gonzales said. ‘Close scans may reveal a weakness in the hull alloys that we could exploit. It could give us a decided tactical advantage in our next confrontation.’

‘Lieutenant Parker, what do you think?’ Astar asked the security chief much to Gonzales’ surprise.

‘We need every advantage we can get and this could be an…unprecedented opportunity—and one which we might not get again—to examine their technology close-up.’

‘What about the ship we captured?’ Gonzales asked.

‘There is no telling what might happen to that vessel now that Starfleet Intelligence, or Tactical, or whoever, have it. But we can learn something that could help us survive longer in a battle with them. They seem to adapt quickly to our manoeuvres and our shields don’t hold up as long as they could.’

‘I have a theory about that,’ Xeris said and Astar turned to look at him.

‘Well?’

‘In the twenty-second century, as I’ve mentioned before, Earth Starfleet had no shielding and relied upon polarising their hull plating. I believe that we could strengthen the hull by polarising our own hull plating and having this work in conjunction with the shields. If the shields fail and the creature attempts to bite us, we can reverse the polarity on the plating and shock the creature.’

Astar nodded. ‘Prep the Flyer for launch and make any necessary modifications you need for the polarisation; Dismissed.’
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

Coming along good. Space shark. I like that. What a bite to mess up the Cha'lav ship!
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

To be honest, I'm surprised 'canon' Trek hasn't come up with that 'subspace shark' idea. It's interesting.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

Dnoth said:
To be honest, I'm surprised 'canon' Trek hasn't come up with that 'subspace shark' idea. It's interesting.
Thank you and I'm glad you're still enjoying my series.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 3

(Image seen from the bottom of Dauntless cruising through space rapidly growing closer as the music gets louder)

dun dun dun dun Dun Dun Dun Dun dundundundunDUNDUNDUNDUN!!!!

Space Jaws! :)

I love it! Something nastier in the food chain than the Cha'lav...

Nice twist.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

CHAPTER FOUR

Flyer Onizuka
Kursican Badlands
Stardate 57350.3

Lieutenant Commander Xeris had bullied and cajoled every last joule of energy from his engineering team to get the modifications made to the Flyer and had pronounced it ready twelve hours after the captain gave the order to do it. Larson had nominated Ensign Margaret Benson to take the helm of the modified shuttle since she came from a world which had somehow managed to survive the continual subspace battering from the nearby Hekaras system and had grown up piloting shuttles on subspace eddies. She was the best woman for the job. Lieutenant Mahtani and Lieutenant Commander Gonzales rounded out the team since it had been their idea. As the shuttle launched, Xeris beamed aboard against the captain’s orders.

‘What the hell are you doing?’ Gonzales asked, shooting her off-and-on lover a scolding glare.

‘If something goes wrong with the modifications you’re going to need someone who can fix it on the fly and there is no one better qualified for that than me,’ the chief engineer replied as he took the remaining seat in the cockpit, at the rear where he could observe all aspects of the shuttle’s status.

‘Fine, but don’t get in the way,’ Mahtani said from the starboard station as he entered a sequence of commands into the main computer.

Gonzales shushed his outburst with another of her glares and he turned away from her. ‘We’re approaching the densest part of the subspace topography.’

‘I can feel it,’ Benson replied as the Onizuka shuddered. ‘This is nothing compared to back home. I don’t know how the Cha’lav are able to navigate through this, I thought their hulls were weaker than ours.’

‘Maybe these ships have a new alloy,’ Mahtani suggested as they neared the closest wreck. ‘I’m detecting the standard alloys you would expect from their technology, but there is something else. I’m really going to need a sample of this.’

‘What have you got?’ Gonzales asked.

‘Some kind of liquid metal alloy that flows between two solid hull layers. I’ve only seen something like this once before.’

‘Please, don’t tell me you actually believe that story?’ Gonzales muttered.

‘It has been backed up through scientific analysis, Commander,’ Xeris replied. ‘Two hundred years ago, Commander Tucker—the chief engineer of the NX-class Enterprise—encountered a vessel with a similar hull alloy configuration, but it had come from the thirty-first century. Even Earth Starfleet Command disbelieved him until the Vulcans confirmed the analysis. No one has seen anything like this since. Perhaps we’re looking at another Temporal War brewing.’

‘That’s enough,’ Gonzales said. ‘Mahtani, beam a fragment of that stuff into the aft compartment behind a level ten forcefield. I don’t want any surprises.’

‘Aye sir, locking on to a fragment one point three metres squared.’

‘Energise,’ she ordered.

As soon as the fragment was aboard, both Mahtani and Xeris headed for the aft compartment leaving the two women in the cockpit.

‘How do you put up with him, sir?’

Gonzales sighed. ‘Is nothing a secret on that ship?’

‘It is quite obvious, sir.’

‘I see. I put with him by virtue of telling him to shut up when he gets too involved in a subject.’

Commander, you’d better see this,’ Mahtani said over the com.

‘I’m on my way,’ she replied and gasped when she reached the aft compartment. ‘Is that what I think it is?’

‘No, sir.’

‘Explain?’

‘What you’re looking at is a non-sentient liquid metal lifeform that resembles a Changeling.’

‘You’re saying it isn’t self-aware?’

‘It’s trying to escape, purely a defence mechanism.’

‘And the Cha’lav harnessed this lifeform?’

‘Domesticated it, like a horse,’ Xeris added.

‘Can it survive in space?’

‘It goes into a dormant state,’ Mahtani answered. ‘But it doesn’t help us figure anything out.’

Commander, there’s a subspace rift opening,’ Benson screeched.

‘Coming,’ Gonzales replied.

The three bridge officers quickly reached their seats in the cockpit and began running scans.

‘I can’t hold the ship on course,’ Benson said as the Flyer bucked wildly.

The red alert klaxons sounded their tone and the lighting changed to reflect the ship’s danger level. Visible ahead of them, a massive eruption started, spewing energy like a geyser from subspace. Whatever the Cha’lav had been doing, whatever they had been fighting, had weakened the space-subspace barrier to the point of nonexistence.

‘Get us out of here, Ensign,’ Gonzales ordered.

‘I’m trying, but the impulse engines are sluggish.’

‘Xeris?’

‘Working on it.’

‘Work faster.’

‘What the hell—?’

A plasma streamer, of the same type that existed at the edge of the Badlands, suddenly appeared and spiralled toward the Flyer. ‘It’s heading right for us.’

‘No, it’s heading for the liquid metal. Beam it off the ship,’ Xeris ordered.

‘Too late,’ Mahtani said as the plasma streamer hit them.

The Flyer careened out of control, spinning uncontrollably as the streamer faded and the rift closed. Benson, clutching her console like a lifeline, had been staring out of the front window and saw what looked like a giant snake rise out of subspace and then vanish again.

‘Everybody alright?’ Gonzales asked.

‘Fine,’ Xeris replied, ‘but Mahtani is out cold,’ the engineer added as he crouched by the scientist.

‘Benson, what’s our status?’

When the pilot didn’t answer, Gonzales stumbled to the forward console and grabbed on.

‘I’ve never seen anything like it.’

Gonzales was about to ask when she saw the playback from the external visual sensors. ‘Is that the Manxome?’

‘It would appear that way, Commander.’

‘How are we doing, Ensign?’

‘Not good, sir. The warp and impulse engines are offline, shields are down and we have no weapons. Life support is on emergency power and I’m not sure if the distress beacon is working.’

‘Don’t worry about that, if Astar doesn’t hear from us in the next ten minutes she’ll bring the ship in closer to pick us up. Can you use the manoeuvring thrusters to get us clear of the debris field?’

‘What debris field?’ Benson replied. ‘Whatever that subspace rift was, it totally obliterated the Cha’lav hulks.’

‘Xeris, do we still have the hull fragment on board?’

‘We do, why?’

‘It’s the only piece we have to work with. How’s Jamal?’

‘Slight concussion but he’ll be fine.’

‘Astar will be by to pick us up shortly, we’re in no condition to do anything but sit around.’

‘Care to help me with further analysis?’

‘Gladly.'
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

Intriguing...could be a predator pursuing its prey--or a mother trying to recover it's lost child...a nice mystery.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

I liked the character dynamic here. And what's that liquid metal all about ... Terminator? ... Okay, seriously I don't recall it. Was this something from Enterprise or your own invention?
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

CeJay said:
I liked the character dynamic here. And what's that liquid metal all about ... Terminator? ... Okay, seriously I don't recall it. Was this something from Enterprise or your own invention?
From the Enterprise episode "Future Tense" with the ship from the future that Archer initially believed to be Cochrane's new warp ship. The TARDIS-style ship. And artistic license of course.
 
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I like it! Very twisted. What is this stuff, anyway? Is it tied to what Tucker found? Holding breath to find out.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

USS Independence
New Resoto
Stardate 57357.5

Captain Sintina Aurelia ground her teeth as the foul-smelling canine aliens growled and barked at each other in the conference lounge aboard her ship. Since the genocide on their homeworld, the remaining Resoto had returned to ancient tradition and reformed their hunting packs. While Commander Logan, on the orders of some newly-minted admiral, had tasked her with making sure that the rest of the Resoto weren’t wiped out by the Cha’lav, she thought that this mission would be best served by getting them to work together. It wasn’t as easy as it had seemed at first and Lieutenant Kimula was smirking in the corner. Bin Nadal was doing his duty as exec on the bridge—and complaining about sitting around—while she was trying to herd the packs into a mutually-beneficial treaty.

‘Enough!’ she bellowed and even Kimula’s smirk vanished. ‘What is wrong with all of you? Do you really think that the Cha’lav care if you hunt in packs or individually? Do you think they will save the stronger packs? They don’t and they won’t. Their only goal is to finish the job they started. If you don’t work together they will kill you all and there will be no Resoto to continue your traditions. In a few centuries no one will even remember your race.’

‘You would say that, Starfleet. You are no match for the Cha’lav in this puny vessel and you will be the first to be destroyed.’

Sintina smiled and Kimula recognised it as trouble. She pushed off from the corner to aid the Resoto leader but Sintina held up her hand, motioning for the counsellor to stay where she was. ‘I may be destroyed, but I will have died protecting you and fulfilling my mission in the eyes of my superiors. Whether you want to protect yourselves against such a threat is quite frankly immaterial to me, I will do my duty. I had hoped that you would recognise the fact that your very existence is in danger of being destroyed, but since you don’t care you can all get off my ship and return to your packs.’

Two security guards entered and stood by the doors to escort the Resoto pack leaders back to the transporter room when the red alert klaxons sounded. ‘Captain Aurelia to the bridge,’ bin Nadal called with urgency in his voice.

Aurelia left the security guards to do their jobs and almost sprinted for the bridge. She skidded to a stop when the doors parted and she saw the image on the viewscreen. ‘Raise the shields as soon as the Resoto are off the ship. Send a message to Starbase 535 and advise them that a spatial rift has opened at New Resoto.’

‘Signal sent,’ the beta shift tactical officer replied. ‘Phasers and torpedoes are standing by.’

‘Why the hell didn’t we detect it with the sensor modifications?’

‘Spatial rifts are notorious for playing havoc with sensors,’ bin Nadal answered. ‘All the Resoto are off the ship. They’re moving away into a defensive position around the planet.’

‘Leaving us as the first line of defence,’ Aurelia muttered.

Bin Nadal glanced at the dedication plaque. ‘We are the ones we’ve been waiting for,’ he murmured.

Aurelia turned to face the plaque. ‘I wish we could have kept our own dedication.’

‘This will have to do,’ bin Nadal and turned to face the viewscreen. His narrowed to slits and he turned to his commanding officer.

Aurelia nodded.

‘Open a channel to the Cha’lav fleet.’

‘Channel open.’

‘This is Commander bin Nadal of the Federation starship Independence. This is sovereign territory of the Resoto. Leave now and you will be spared. There will be no further warning.’

Aurelia smiled. ‘What happened to diplomacy?’

‘This is gunboat diplomacy.’

‘No response from the Cha’lav.’

‘We’re not going to be the first to open fire. We’ll act in self defence only.’

‘Incoming!’ the tactical officer yelled as the ship bucked. ‘Shields are at ninety-six percent.’

Bin Nadal turned to Aurelia. ‘Captain?’

‘They were warned. Return fire, all weapons. Aim for their engines. Ensign Weston, get us in range to do significant damage.’

‘Aye sir; engaging evasive manoeuvre Weston-six.’

‘He comes highly recommended,’ Aurelia told her exec when he looked up in surprise.

The Independence headed straight for the lead Cha’lav cruiser, spiralling wildly as it got close and then the phasers and torpedoes were loosed, impacting the enemy shields at a consistent barrage.’

‘Their shields are weakening, and we’re too close for their weapons to do any damage.’

‘Receiving an incoming message, from the Resoto,’ bin Nadal said in surprise.

‘Let’s hear it.’

‘Captain, I thank you on behalf of the Resoto Council. We will protect our new homeworld.’

‘With all due respect, Councillor, it is my mission to protect you lest the Cha’lav succeed in killing the rest of you.’

The Resoto leader laughed. ‘I thank you for your concern but as you can see, we have some help.’

‘Captain, I’m reading six Ynelav vessels approaching at high warp.’

‘Well I’ll be,’ Aurelia muttered as the Ynelav ships dropped out of warp. ‘I guess the military aren’t dealing with the coup directly. Back us off, but not too far. We should remain on station in case we’re needed.’

‘The Ynelav seem to have things in hand,’ bin Nadal said as two Cha’lav vessels—one of which they had severely dented the shields on—exploded. ‘The Cha’lav have no idea what hit them.’

‘The Cha’lav are learning about cooperation. I just hope that some are left alive to take the results back home.’

‘It looks like you might be getting your wish, Captain,’ Weston replied at the helm. ‘The rift is closing and the remaining ships are retreating.’

‘You got through to them,’ Kimula said.

Aurelia looked at the counsellor. ‘Maybe, but I think they realised that they had to band together to defeat a common enemy. When the Cha’lav have been defeated they may well go back to their old ways.’

‘Perhaps, but for now two warring races have united against a common foe,’ Kimula replied.

‘Score one for Starfleet,’ Weston said.
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

Yeah, I'd say that would be the extent of Aurelia's diplomatic skills. :) ...but it worked.

So did Weston come up with the maneuver, or his father or something?
 
Re: Burning Ring of Fire - Chapter 4

Dnoth said:
Yeah, I'd say that would be the extent of Aurelia's diplomatic skills. :) ...but it worked.
Technically, that was bin Nadal's diplomatic skills, possibly learned from his CO. :)

So did Weston come up with the maneuver, or his father or something?
He did, but I'm not sure about whether to explain how or why. I'm using Weston as the Independence's helmsman in 2380, since you didn't have one, but what about a tactical officer. I kind of got away with not naming him/her in this segment, but I was planning on using the Indy until Dauntless 1x06 (that should push into 2381ish) so I would like to have a tactical officer.
 
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