"Broken Bow" : Line-By-Line!

[ChristopherPike]

The exhaust from a departing ship, passing over head, knocks T'Pol off her feet and clear across the deck. She's now between the Suliban's position and the pod.

Archer: (to Hoshi & Tucker) "Get to the ship - - now!"

Under fire, he heads out to T'Pol's fallen form, retaliating to near misses with his EM-33. Picking up her weapon, he's now shooting from both hands.

(to the Vulcan) "Go!"

 

[LeadHead]

Archer: (to Hoshi & Tucker) "Get to the ship - - now!"

Actually that's "Get Hoshi to the Ship!"

T'Pol: Enterprise needs its Captain, give me the weapon!

 

[ChristopherPike]

^ Oh yeah. I can't believe I forgot that.

Archer: "I said go!"

T'Pol obeys. Followed a moment later by the Captain, who gets shot in the leg. Trip and Malcolm jump out... guns blazing in order to retrieve him. They pull Archer into the shuttlepod and close the hatch, just as a Suliban beam hits it.

 

[LeadHead]

Mayweather: The starboard thruster's down.

 

[ChristopherPike]

T'Pol: "Ignore it. Take us up."

 

[LeadHead]

Silik: We need instructions.

 

[ChristopherPike]

T'Pol: "Open a channel.

Sub-Commander T'Pol to Enterprise."

 

[LeadHead]

Winner of the "Who gets to be incharge when everyone else is off the ship" contest: Go ahead.

 

[ChristopherPike]

^ Acting Ensign F. "Ace" Ferradio.

T'Pol: "We'll be docking in 4 minutes. Have Doctor Phlox meet us in decon."

 

[LeadHead]

Guy who won the coin toss to sit in Captains Chair: Acknowledged. Is someone wounded?

 

[ChristopherPike]

T'Pol: "The Captain.

I'm taking command of Enterprise."

A look from Trip.

Cut to unconscious Archer, then flashback to a sepia memory of him on the beach with his Dad... trying to get that model starship they were building earlier, to straighten up and fly right.

 

[LeadHead]

Jonathan: I can't do it!

 

[ChristopherPike]

Re: "Broken Bow" Line-By-Line!

Henry Archer: "Yes, you can.

Take her up... straight and steady."

The ship struggles for a moment in the air, before nosediving into a sand dune.

 

[LeadHead]

Re: "Broken Bow" Line-By-Line!

Jonathan: Damn.

 

[ChristopherPike]

Henry: "You can't be afraid of the wind... learn to trust it."

The boy looks up to see T'Pol standing along the shoreline.

We're back in the Shuttlepod with a wounded Archer, then fade out.

 

[LeadHead]

^ Henry adds: And stop swearing kid!

(Back on Enterprise, T'Pol and Tucker are in Decon talking to Phlox)

Phlox: It shouldn't take more than a few moments.

 

[ChristopherPike]

^ Henry adds: And stop swearing kid!

Heh. "Watch your damn mouth kid."


Trip: "Is this really necessary?"


^ Something fans will complain about from this point on...

...inbetween studying this whole scene, frame-by-frame!

 

[LeadHead]

Sorry, I thought I was waiting on you! Whoops!

Phlox: The others scanned negative. You two, unfortunately, were exposed to a Protoscystian Spore. I've loaded the appropriate Decon Gel into Compartment B.

 

[ChristopherPike]

^ That's okay. Just two of us left on this. Don't worry. It's sort of a struggle to finish anyway, especially with me not online that much.


T'Pol: "Tell Mr. Mayweather to prepare to leave orbit."

 

[LeadHead]

^meh we can do it!

Tucker: How's the Captain?