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Babylon 5

My bigger problem with that dialogue quirk is that the actors weren't directed or filmed as if they were in the middle of a conversation. It's as if they were just standing on their marks waiting to deliver those lines.

Yes! That's probably why it jumped out at me every time.
 
Yes, indeed. Verisimilitude is always preferable to realism, because art is a always a construct no matter how it is intended to come across to the audience. Even the most naturalistic approach to dialogue, complete with stuttering and overlapping sentences, in most cases, is carefully calculated and rehearsed. So verisimilitude is really the key.

I once got into a huge argument with a friend on this issue with regards to "American Beauty". He called me a judgmental hipster. :p
 
Yes! That's probably why it jumped out at me every time.
This was slightly defensible given the relatively low budget of the show. They just didn't have the money or the time to film so many camera angles to make the scene more dynamic, or block out what happens before or after the actual dialogue spoken. The flat and practical lighting they tended to use didn't help.

OTOH, jms had plenty of TV writing experience before B5 and should have been able to script the dialogue to seem more natural and not as though it just started when they began to speak. It's further exacerbated when you have people continue to talk when in more traditional drama there would have been a cut back to other characters - but in B5 people just KEPT TALKING without being prompted, as though they had been. I understand it's just jms' style, but when someone is the SOLE writer on a show for multiple seasons, it can go from jarring to grating at times. For me it just comes down to a case of great story, terrible dialogue.

Just watched through "Midnight on the Firing Line" and all that we've been talking about jms' writing style is there. I'll try to find a later season episode and see if/how it evolved, because in my mind it didn't really change much over the years.

Mark
 
Nothing wrong with stylized dialogue. Sorkin is a master of it. Yet his dialogue still sounds naturalistic, if stylized. It has rhythm and pitch like music.

At times JMS's dialogue feels as if it's trying too hard. Other times, it's beautiful — like when G'Kar speaks. Sometimes it's crushed under the weight of exposition.

For me, it's hit or miss. Sometimes I feel he nails it. Other times it's plain corny.

A huge part of that is that Katsulas was one of the few actors on the show who was legitimately talented enough to make some really, really hokey shit play well. Most of the cast -- Boxleitner, Doyle, Thompson, Conaway, occasionally Furst and Furlan, especially Christian -- just didn't have the chops to do that, because they all basically had one or two modes of delivering dialogue and weren't particularly adept at nuance or subtlety.

It's not entirely different from the movie Gettysburg, in which much of the dialogue feels more like a tone poem, with characters giving long-winded speeches at one another. It's one thing when Martin Sheen or Jeff Daniels or Sam Elliott is doing it, but it's another thing entirely when it's Tom Berenger or C. Thomas Howell.
 
After re-watching the series recently, I realized that I loved Marcus more than any other character not named G'Kar or Londo. Marcus consistently brought the warmth and humor I felt a lot of the characters lacked. Other actors had a hard time making the humor that JMS wrote work, but Marcus did it with ease.
 
Captain: GIVE IT ALL YOU'VE GOT!
Lennier: If I had any more to give I would tell you.
Funny stuff. Loved it
Every time I see Marcus I can't help thinking he escaped from The Lord of the Rings.
 
Marcus invoking the ancient Vorlon god Boojee; Marcus shouting "Oh, bugger!" because he has to wait for someone to regain consciousness so he can continue the bar fight, marucs admitting the unadmittable to Ivanova... Come on, ya gotta love the guy.
 
Captain: GIVE IT ALL YOU'VE GOT!
Lennier: If I had any more to give I would tell you.
Funny stuff. Loved it
Every time I see Marcus I can't help thinking he escaped from The Lord of the Rings.
Just curious, what episode are you on.
 
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