Thanks for the feedback. Astronuts was "filmed" on a home-grade digital camcorder during the spring and summer of 2001. It was "filmed" in the apartment that I called home at that time. We definitely should have invested in a boom mic, but given what we worked with, the audio is as good as I've been able to make it after the fact.
I worked pretty hard on tightening the pace in the overall edit, but I see a lot of room for improvement, particularly after reading recent comments. I'll tighten things up more after I've completed postproduction of the third and final part.