There's only one moment that bothers me in 'Balance of Terror', and it's bothered me ever since reading the grandaddy reference book The Making of Star Trek, back in the 1960s.
In the sections reprinting bits from the original Writers' Guide, a hypothetical scene is presented to illustrate the kind of realism the show was aiming for. In the example, with the ship crippled and another attack sure to destroy it, the Guide points out that Kirk would not hug a comely yeoman on the bridge as that final salvo heads for them.
But in 'Balance of Terror', when the Romulans fire the plasma torpedo right at Enterprise, just before it hits, Kirk grabs hold of Rand, holding her tight as they wait for the inevitable. I never understood how that moment made it into the script, when the Guide said that was exactly the kind of stuff they would not do.
But in 'Balance of Terror', when the Romulans fire the plasma torpedo right at Enterprise, just before it hits, Kirk grabs hold of Rand, holding her tight as they wait for the inevitable. I never understood how that moment made it into the script, when the Guide said that was exactly the kind of stuff they would not do.
The thing that bothered me was Kirk handing Spock a physical book during the briefing room scene.![]()
But in 'Balance of Terror', when the Romulans fire the plasma torpedo right at Enterprise, just before it hits, Kirk grabs hold of Rand, holding her tight as they wait for the inevitable. I never understood how that moment made it into the script, when the Guide said that was exactly the kind of stuff they would not do.
Easy. The draft of the writer-director guide you're thinking of was written after "Balance of Terror" was written, produced, and broadcast.
I've scanned all three versions of the guide; at some point I'll have to write an article going over the differences.
I much prefer the original silent f/x of the "phaser bursts" which gelled with the description given in The Making Of Star Trek.
Apparently those bursts were originally supposed to have a sound effect, but they either overlooked it or never got around to it in post-production. Nonetheless for decades we saw them as soundless phaser bursts until they "fixed" it much later for DVD with the inappropriate photon torpedo sound.
I wish they'd just left it alone.
The thing that bothered me was Kirk handing Spock a physical book during the briefing room scene.![]()
The book was entitled TABLE of COMETS and subtitled GALAXY something. I'd sure like to know the whole title.
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The HD frames at TrekCore don't catch this one moment that would have shown it clearly:
http://tos.trekcore.com/hd/albums/1x14hd/balanceofterrorhd300.jpg
Can anybody make it out? Or maybe you have the BluRay and can check it?
Kirk slowly eases back into his chair. A long moment, then he flips open a book that rests in front of him... the legend on its cover: TABLE OF COMETS. Galaxy Quadrant YX-12-114. He studies it a moment... closes it... thinks. Then he finally reaches out wearily, hits an intercom button. Spock is half puzzled... half curious.
It's less amusing that they have a physical book there than it is that they apparently didn't know a comet was ahead of them until Spock called up the info at the meeting. So why was this random book of comets sitting there? Were Spock or Kirk actually aware of it and wanted to introduce the concept as a dramatic way of presenting their strategy? Or did Nimoy deliver the line "incorrectly?" He made it sound like a discovery, but Kirk knew immediately what comet it was. So he was familiar with the comet activity in that area.
Also, Stiles' rant to Spock make little sense to me.
STILES: These are Romulans! You run away from them and you guarantee war. They'll be back. Not just one ship but with everything they've got. You know that, Mister Science Officer. You've the expert on these people, always left out that one point. Why? I'm very interested in why.
They never actually discussed it in the episode (which means they never discussed it). So what was Stiles expecting?
But in 'Balance of Terror', when the Romulans fire the plasma torpedo right at Enterprise, just before it hits, Kirk grabs hold of Rand, holding her tight as they wait for the inevitable. I never understood how that moment made it into the script, when the Guide said that was exactly the kind of stuff they would not do.
Easy. The draft of the writer-director guide you're thinking of was written after "Balance of Terror" was written, produced, and broadcast.
I've scanned all three versions of the guide; at some point I'll have to write an article going over the differences.
Truly cringe inducing is the book scene in TUC. That was very stupidly done. Another example in a long line of examples of characters poorly utilized. It was done as a cheap sight gag for a laugh.
Like most Star Trek, and TV/movies in general, you can shred it to pieces if you examine it closely enough. Like most Star Trek, it is the acting and directing that are just superb.
I'm confused because I really don't see what this has to do with my post.Truly cringe inducing is the book scene in TUC. That was very stupidly done. Another example in a long line of examples of characters poorly utilized. It was done as a cheap sight gag for a laugh.
As far as I know it was a budgetary thing. Originally, according to ILM's Bill George anyway, it was a suspense scene that relied on visual effects, with three shots of the ship slipping into a field of rocks to mask its passage through Klingon space. It is entirely possible that it was designed to emulate the 1990 Paramount film THE HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER's scene (absent from the novel) where the russian sub does all its fancy maneuvering to avoid deep sea rock outcroppings, though that is just speculation on my part.
When Paramount drew the line at 27 million on the budget, all sorts of stuff came out (a tiny bit of which came back in later once they saw the movie was going to turn out okay), including the whole 'rounding up the crew' sequence, which would've had potentially pricey views of San Francisco with the flying cable cars and the matte shot of BOUNTY after it had been retrieved from the bay.
That point in time is significant, since the counterproposal to keep the budget down was to drop ILM entirely and go with less expensive vendors -- which scared Paramount shitless, given the negative reception of fx in TFF (especially with the info HARVEY posted here recently indicating TFF's VFX cost more than the earlier ILM trek shows!)
But while going with other vendors would probably have meant not getting stuff like the creature morphs and the CG shockwave and the klingon blood (at least not in the fashion ILM delivered the blobs), it is entirely possible that Paramount could have established new relationships with VFX companies that would have been long-term beneficial.
I've always thought that DreamQuest would have kicked serious ass on any Trek film, as they were innovative as all get-out and rarely delivered sub-par anything. On an even lower-budget basis, the Skotak Bros might have really impressed.
I actually find ILM's spaceship work on GEN and FC to be among their best, but certainly the money would have stretched a lot further if Par had a reliable inexpensive option, especially on GEN with Bernie Williams seemingly sabotaging Carson's attempts to get something that looked like a movie up on screen. Somebody probably should have told him the Ralph Winter line, words to the effect that if you don't take the time to make the most of your locations, even if it costs bit more, then you might as well have stayed on the lot.
Man that is one helluva digression, sorry, just got to typing ..
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