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WTF, Kirk?

I mainly find the insistence on shoving in B plots rather annoying, considering that from TNG onward, the episodes only had 43 minutes of screen time to tell a story anyway, while TOS had 52 minutes in an episode and had enough in the average script that they didn't NEED a B plot.

If you don't have enough of a story to cover 43 minutes and have to cram in a second storyline, you've got problems.

TNG's thing wasn't that they couldn't write stories to encompass whole episodes, it was that it was they had to find ways of doing stories that involved the entire cast (which was far more then 3 people) in the time allotted.

3 characters, there's not much difficulty in writing a single story about them. 7 or so, then you're going to need B-Plots.
 
And then we have...the Chief engineer and the head of communications?!?
Do we know she's the head of that department?
Although sometimes she is present in the briefing room (even without any lines) and sometimes she is not; would not her being included in those meetings be defacto evidence that she must be a Department Head?
 
She could merely be the officer on duty at the time; most meetings don't involve top officers giving input, merely Kirk and Spock dishing out information and giving orders that the officers on duty need to receive.

Why the exhausted Uhura is dozing off at the briefing room table in "Balance of Terror", I don't know. She should call her replacement to duty, no matter if she or he is Uhura's superior or underling.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Who Uhura is isn't particularly relevant or interesting in that scene. What raises my eyebrows is the fact that Kirk keeps an exhausted officer awake even though he has 430 people to choose from. Why hasn't this officer been recycled back to bed, when it looks obvious that the crisis will be a prolonged one? Kirk himself may be a control freak unwilling to have a nap even when one is needed, but there's no upside to keeping his officers awake for longer than necessary.

Timo Saloniemi
 
I saw the Conscience of the King recently, and again the writers have Kirk behaving in an odd way:

Apparently Kirk during his teen years lived on planet Tarsus IV, and a drastic food shortage was resolved by its governor Kodos the executioner by eliminating half the colony's population. Kodos apparently died just as rescue finally arrived, leaving only 9 eyewitnesses who could visually identify Kodos, Kirk included.

You know the story, Kodos reimagined himself as Shakespearean actor Anton Karidian, and his daughter Lenore took it upon herself to eliminate the surviving eyewitnesses.

What I don't get is why Kodos didn't simply change his appearance with plastic surgery, especially since there was more than just 9 eyewitnesses still running around. There was even a clear photograph of his face available in Starfleet records (that Kirk consults as comparison with Karidian's), and a voice record (a printout of which Spock uses to confirm they are the same)...

What does Kirk do soon after being advised of Kodos' continued existence? Does he tell his brainy science officer to use 23rd century forensic science to confirm Karidian as Kodos?

Nope, he keeps it to himself, invites the former mass murderer aboard his ship, and almost gets himself and one of his crewmen killed...

In fact, Spock is STILL the one that finds the evidence that confirms Karidian as Kodos.

Oh, and another odd Kirk command decision: while checking records for the other Tarsus survivors' names, he discovers an Enterprise officer among them (Kevin Riley). Again Kirk could warn Riley of what might happen, but instead of protecting him, he reassigns Riley from Communications to Engineering (why? to hide him from Kodos/Lenore better in the engineering sub-levels? She still finds him in no time at all and poisons him...apparently Lenore is a whiz at infiltrating starship records computers and figuring out crewmen reassignments)...

Ahhh, Kirk...you so wacky!!
 
What I don't get is why Kodos didn't simply change his appearance with plastic surgery, especially since there was more than just 9 eyewitnesses still running around.
It appears that the identity of Kodos is not really in question: not only does Starfleet have complete records of his visual appearance and his voice, but there were 4,000 survivors of the massacre who would have that same information, and more.

However, that doesn't help any if Kodos goes missing. Where to look for him? In order to make an educated guess on that, one would need to know who Kodos was. Who was this mystery man who took the nom de guerre Kodos, "The Law", took over the colony, and invoked martial law there? And that's where the son of a starship officer and eight other youngsters (or at least Riley and Leighton were of Kirk's approximate age) could well come in: Kodos could have been a starfarer himself, and arrived with the eight, who would thus have invaluable knowledge of his previous identity (or more probably his previous alias).

The nine were called "actual eyewitnesses who can identify Kodos". Is that an intersection of two groups: eyewitnesses (to the actual crimes), and those who can identify Kodos? Clearly, the nine aren't merely surviving eyewitnesses, because few of them survive and the computer knows that; rather, it seems the nine were the only original eyewitnesses with the (additional?) ability to identify Kodos.

Enough of that, though: both of Kirk's command decisions are odd indeed. Unless we decide he's not particularly intent on uncovering the Kodos/Karidian connection (because that's a triviality - everybody now knows Karidian is Kodos, but nobody can prove it in front of a jury, and Kirk, the computer and Spock agree on that), but rather on laying a trap for him so that the ambiguities would be removed. In which case inviting him aboard is a good decision, because it only jeopardizes Kirk's own life, which Kirk doesn't value over the mission. It only goes sour when it turns out there's another potential bait aboard (now why didn't Kirk remember that outright?), and Kirk may well consider Riley's life expendable as well if it serves the mission.

As for Lenore's ability to track down Riley, well, she could charm the boots off the captain himself. Obtaining the whereabouts of Riley should be a breeze with "social skills" like that.

Timo Saloniemi
 
I wonder if Kirk transferred Riley to Engineering to lure the as-yet unknown killer out. Riley'd be pretty safe from assault in Communications, but in Engineering, he'd be more exposed, especially on the night shift, all on his lonesome.

In other words, Kirk used the poor lieutenant as bait.
 
In This Side Of Paradise Kirk was pretty dumb-assed move. Kirk had discoverd that the way to wear off the effects of the spores is anger. so his dumb-assed move is to beam the creepily almost LSD driven Spock abored and get him angery. Now Vulcans are way more strong than humans and kirk almost killed himself.

Way to go Kirk get the Vulcan mad that really will solve all of your problems.
 
Well, beaming up McCoy wouldn't have helped much. Kirk needed an innovative scientist and engineer to put together some means of freeing the rest of his crew. He knew he needed a wide-beam anger machine, not one of McCoy's potions.

I guess Kirk could have beamed up Uhura, since he had already decided the anger machine should work through the communications system...

Timo Saloniemi
 
That's not the point getting spock mad with him around is. I mean I can understand saving the ship but almost killing yourself in the process that's stupid. One solution is put him in the brige and gaurded by a sheild( If we all Remember Journey To Bable the brig's screen is see-through and non-sound proof). And gotten spock angery with out the risk of killing himself.
 
That's not the point getting spock mad with him around is. I mean I can understand saving the ship but almost killing yourself in the process that's stupid. One solution is put him in the brige and gaurded by a sheild( If we all Remember Journey To Bable the brig's screen is see-through and non-sound proof). And gotten spock angery with out the risk of killing himself.

How do you get him to the brig? Site-to-site transport was unheard of before the third season...

Kirk needed a clear-minded Spock and went the most direct route.
 
What I'm saying is trick him into the brig then get him angry. You know how he told Spock that he needed some machienery beamed down to the surface. Well tell him that there is some macheinery in the brig to be beamed down and Voila you tricked him!
 
I'm not trying to say that what I'm trying to say i......Oh To Hell With It!!!!!!!!!!!! I still believe in my damn therory!!!
 
What I'm saying is trick him into the brig then get him angry. You know how he told Spock that he needed some machienery beamed down to the surface. Well tell him that there is some macheinery in the brig to be beamed down and Voila you tricked him!

Spock was the XO of the Enterprise, no way he's stupid enough to buy something like that.
 
I'm not trying to say that what I'm trying to say i......Oh To Hell With It!!!!!!!!!!!! I still believe in my damn therory!!!

You are more than welcome to believe in it. But from where I'm sitting, Kirk felt he needed Spock to pull off recovering the crew and acknowledged the risk in beaming him up and pissing him off.

A high risk, high reward strategy. Not an exactly out-of-character move by Kirk.
 
Let me requote myself: I Still Believe In My Damn Therory!!! I see your point but....I still think that Killing yourself and having a second third and fourth in command ready to leave the ship, abandon it and to be the only sane person aboard and end up dying That's the stupid part!!!
 
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