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Star Trek: Outpost 12

Cloud William

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This is an idea for a new Star Trek TV show that I've had for a long time. I might write a whole episode with dialog and much more detail in the future.

As I live in the TOS world, I used a character from a TOS episode for this idea. I don't know the new guys.

We need a guy like Commodore Matt Decker. He's got the look I'm after. Tough. Confident. Capable.

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...but since Decker met an unfortunate end, we'll go with Captain Ron Tracy instead as the star of this show. He doesn't have quite the badass look of Decker but he's close enough. He’s really a better choice if you think about it – he proved he has no problem killing people and is also a decent hand-to-hand combatant.

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This a combination of ideas from the old TV shows Branded; Have Gun, Will Travel; and Gunsmoke, but set in the 23rd century. It starts just a couple months after the Enterprise took Tracy to the nearest Starbase for trial.

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Star Trek: Outpost 12 – the pilot episode: “Exile”

After Captain Ron Tracy is given a dishonorable discharge from Starfleet for violating the Prime Directive, he wins a one-man scout vessel (the kind used by Cyrano Jones) in a fizzbin game and heads for the outer edges of Federation space. He's carrying a grudge, a phaser, and plenty of phaser power packs. He has a throwing knife in his boot and needs a shave. He could stand a clean shirt, too.

Tracy lands on a sparsely populated planet called Outpost 12 to refuel and stock up on supplies. It is a major spaceport, similar to Mos Eisely in Star Wars - "a wretched hive of scum and villainy" - and is frequented by a variety of vessels from all over the quadrant and beyond. In addition to regular visitors, there exists the kind of people that you find in any frontier town: gamblers, fugitives, Starfleet officers and crew, some Klingons and other species, bounty hunters, miners, storekeepers, hookers, etc.

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Tracy stops into the local cantina for a cold beverage, where he is hassled by several local tough guys. Dispatching them with the fighting style he demonstrated on Omega IV, he quickly earns a reputation as a man to be respected and feared.

Meanwhile, a stolen freighter has entered orbit around Outpost 12 and beamed down some of its pirate crew in an attempt to steal some dylithium crystals from the local spaceship supply store. The town security chief is killed trying to fight off the pirates. The chairman of the Outpost 12 Merchants Association saw Tracy in the bar fight and asks a friend, a retired Starfleet chief petty officer who now runs a gambling house on Outpost 12, about him.

“Tracy? He used to be a starship Captain but I hear he just got busted out of the service. I served with him for a few months, several years ago. He’s as smart as they come but he’s a crafty devil too. Don’t underestimate him.”

The chairman consults a couple other members of the Merchants Association and they offer Tracy the job of Chief Of Security.

Tracy is noncommittal about formally accepting the position but agrees to this particular mission – to remove the pirates from the outpost by any means necessary…for a hefty price.

Will Tracy be able to rid Outpost 12 of the pirates? Will he take the job of Chief Of Security or simply become a “phaser for hire” in this frontier town?

Tune in next week!
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There are so many planets in the ST universe. Why not center a show on one of them rather than always in a ship? A show like this would work like Gunsmoke did – the town Marshal and his sidekick stay in town/on the planet (mostly, but not always) and each week someone new comes to town and there’s a problem to be solved.

Or, Tracy could be more like Paladin in Have Gun, Will Travel. People would hear of his reputation and come to him for help. This latter option might provide for more space travel as he's have to go to Planet X to rid it of the evil Tree People or whatever.

It could work. Or I might be crazy.

Either way, I had fun writing this.
 
...but since Decker met an unfortunate end, we'll go with Captain Ron Tracy instead as the star of this show. He doesn't have quite the badass look of Decker but he's close enough. He’s really a better choice if you think about it – he proved he has no problem killing people and is also a decent hand-to-hand combatant.

I think Tracey would be locked up in the Federation penal system for a long time. He executed hundreds of "Yangs" and a Starfleet officer during his sabbatical on Omega IV. Violating the Prime Directive seemed to be the least of his worries at the end of The Omega Glory. :guffaw:
 
...but since Decker met an unfortunate end, we'll go with Captain Ron Tracy instead as the star of this show. He doesn't have quite the badass look of Decker but he's close enough. He’s really a better choice if you think about it – he proved he has no problem killing people and is also a decent hand-to-hand combatant.

I think Tracey would be locked up in the Federation penal system for a long time. He executed hundreds of "Yangs" and a Starfleet officer during his sabbatical on Omega IV. Violating the Prime Directive seemed to be the least of his worries at the end of The Omega Glory. :guffaw:
Yeah, this was my take on this as well.

Tracey's actions were not only highly criminal, but he'd clearly snapped mentally due to the loss of his crew. He'd likely be confined to a mental health facility until such time as he was considered able to aid-and-assist his defense in a court-martial. Then it would be a decades long sentence to the Starfleet Stockade.
 
Tracey's actions were not only highly criminal, but he'd clearly snapped mentally due to the loss of his crew. He'd likely be confined to a mental health facility......

As a matter of fact, I think he eventually gets sent to the Tantalus Penal Colony...;)
 
While I like the concept... I don't like the concept for Star Trek. This is something that you should try to develop independently of the Star Trek universe. That way smart-asses like me don't come in and knock your choice of lead character. ;)

But if you're committed to it being a Star Trek spinoff, you could always go the "ElseWorlds" route. Set it after "The Cage" and have Christopher Pike relinquish command and head for "Outpost 12".
 
Thanks guys - I really appreciate your knowledgeable criticism.

I could include this in the pilot episode:

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While Kirk new what Tracy had done was wrong, he did want to see his old friend have proper legal counsel, so he recommended Samuel T. Cogley.

Cogley was able to show the court that Tracy was suffering from temporary insanity caused by the sudden death of his crew and being stranded on a planet with thousands of hostile enemies:

"Gentlemen of the court, my client did what any man would do in that situation. He defended himself. I ask you to look into your own hearts and decide what you would do in his shoes. I not only ask you to do this...I demand it!" :techman:

The court found Tracy guilty of violating the Prime Directive by exposing them to advanced technology (phasers) but the killing of the Yangs was ruled excusable due to temporary insanity. That's why he was allowed to leave the Starbase with a dishonorable discharge.

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However, this just isn't believeable and it leaves out the murder of one of Kirk's crewmen (which I had forgotten about, frankly). No way Starfleet (or Kirk) would give Tracy a pass for that.

I need to do some thinking and find a different main character.

Thanks again for your input. I'm so glad I found this forum where I can let my geek flag fly!
 
Thanks guys - I really appreciate your knowledgeable criticism.

I could include this in the pilot episode:

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While Kirk new what Tracy had done was wrong, he did want to see his old friend have proper legal counsel, so he recommended Samuel T. Cogley.

Cogley was able to show the court that Tracy was suffering from temporary insanity caused by the sudden death of his crew and being stranded on a planet with thousands of hostile enemies:

"Gentlemen of the court, my client did what any man would do in that situation. He defended himself. I ask you to look into your own hearts and decide what you would do in his shoes. I not only ask you to do this...I demand it!" :techman:

The court found Tracy guilty of violating the Prime Directive by exposing them to advanced technology (phasers) but the killing of the Yangs was ruled excusable due to temporary insanity. That's why he was allowed to leave the Starbase with a dishonorable discharge.

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However, this just isn't believeable and it leaves out the murder of one of Kirk's crewmen (which I had forgotten about, frankly). No way Starfleet (or Kirk) would give Tracy a pass for that.

I need to do some thinking and find a different main character.

Thanks again for your input. I'm so glad I found this forum where I can let my geek flag fly!

Commodore Wesley from The Ultimate Computer might be an option. He's built in the same vein as William Windom and Morgan Woodward. Have him resign after the M5 incident. Believes that humanity has become too dependent on machines and seeks a simpler life.

You could also place Outpost 12 on the fringe of the Romulan Neutral Zone. Could help create tension.
 
As a matter of fact, I think he eventually gets sent to the Tantalus Penal Colony...;)

^ When I read this the first time, I thought it was clever.

Now that I remember who played Dr. Simon Van Gelder, I think it's genius. :guffaw:

While I've been a ST fan all my life, I'm new to this forum and don't have the quick minds that come from years of exposure to this sort of thinking that you guys obviously do. I hope to catch up soon!
 
Commodore Wesley from The Ultimate Computer might be an option. He's built in the same vein as William Windom and Morgan Woodward. Have him resign after the M5 incident. Believes that humanity has become too dependent on machines and seeks a simpler life.

Great idea. Commodore Stone might work too. Definitely not Commodore Stocker! Wesley seemed to have some "fire" in his soul that's necessary for a story like this.

You could also place Outpost 12 on the fringe of the Romulan Neutral Zone. Could help create tension.

Undoubtedly. It would have to be somewhere like the American frontier of the old west with the white man's civilization to the east and Indians/Native Americans to the west.

Outpost 12 would be a place where a space-weary and disgruntled former starship captain would go...if he had nowhere else to go because he was disgraced. He was busted out of the service and now he's a gun for hire.

Or, in the case of Commodore Wesley, Retired, who becomes an adventurer who had enough of babysitting a crew and wanted to strike out on his own before he got too old to enjoy life...sort of like Zefram Cochrane but younger. ZC went to space alone to die. Wesley goes to space alone to live.

Still, Wesley isn't the perfect guy for this. I need to think about this some more.
 
You could also place Outpost 12 on the fringe of the Romulan Neutral Zone. Could help create tension.
Or how about this, place it inside the Neutral Zone. A area that (hypothetically) neither the Federation nor the Romulans can enter, which would add to the "wild west" atmosphere. If the Federation or Romulans are present it would be unofficial, giving the planet a Casablanca/Eastern Europe cold war feel.

Smugglers operating in the boarder regions know that if the they're discovered and pursued, they can run into the NZ and their pursuers (both Feds and Roms) would have to break off.

Like in the movie Casablanca, people seeking to escape the Empire would find themselves stalled in the NZ, trying to buy passage (and document) to enter the Federation.

Spies and informants would also be found here.

The Neutral Zone is a thin ribbon between the two major powers, it's neutral, free and very dangerous.

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Like in the movie Casablanca, people seeking to escape the Empire would find themselves stalled in the NZ, trying to buy passage (and document) to enter the Federation.

Spies and informants would also be found here.

The Neutral Zone is a thin ribbon between the two major powers, it's neutral, free and very dangerous.

^ this is beautiful. Thank you. I'm stealing it!

In other news, I have found the star of my new Star Trek series!

I had sort of forgotten about this topic for a few hours and then suddenly it...well, he...popped into my feeble brain tonight while washing dishes after dinner.

He's perfect. In fact, he's so perfect that I suspect some of you will think this was all a setup, but I assure you it wasn't. You've followed along with my thought process in real time, and steered it considerably, for which I again offer thanks.

This man is ideal for the role I described. To the best of my memory, he isn't due for a long prison sentence like Captain Ronald Tracey. (yes, I now realize I spelled his last name wrong earlier). While he might have had to serve some time, it wouldn't have been "big time", as Sgt. Joe Friday would say.

This is exactly the kind of man who would head for the frontier and end up at Outpost 12:

Ben Finney.

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One option is that you could just make up the lead character. He/she doesn't have to be a canon TOS character. You seem to have a good grasp of the kind of person you want in the role but for various reasons none of the offered choices seem to be to your liking. I recommend looking into just creating a lead. That will give you more freedom to work with him/her anyway, plus less possible arguments/disputes about what direction you're taking them in.
 
If you're happy with the Tracey idea then find a way to make it work.

Instead of him being discharged (which is unlikely given the circumstances) perhaps have him aboard a prison ship being transported to a penal colony that is attacked by a squadron of mercenaries working for the Orion Syndicate who have come to break out their 'don'.

Maybe Tracey uses the chaos of the attack and boarding to escape, or perhaps saves the Orion 'don' by shooting the guard who is about to shoot him. To return the favour the Orion lets Tracey tag along but leaves the other prisoners to die aboard the prison ship?

This way, the constant threat of being recaptured by Starfleet would also be looming over him and hopefully adding an extra element of tension.

It would make an explosive prologue to your story and you could start chapter one with Tracey 'strolling into town'.

As T Girl has suggested, make the outpost a world inside the Neutral Zone where Romulan or Federation military are forbidden from entering. Perhaps a few chapters/stories in a small, clandestine team of Starfleet agents arrives to try and recapture Tracey after being tipped off by one of his enemies? They are there illegally and in small numbers so he is able to get the better of them.


Just an idea! :)
 
Following on from what I've said, you could go down the avenue of the classic Western movie where this small outpost is being attacked by a fearsome enemy preying on the helpless - perhaps a group of Romulans not allied with the Empire or another race are raiding the outpost on a regular basis.

The outpost's small population as no one to turn to since neither the Romulans nor Federation can send military forces into the Neutral Zone, or are simply loath to intervene for fear of jeopardising the fragile peace. Tracey, with his extensive tactical knowledge and experience, is able to (reluctantly) turn this small group of ragtag civilians, mercenaries, thieves and whatever else into enough of a fighting force to deal the invaders a decisive blow.

A cliche?

Perhaps, but a fun one nonetheless... :lol:
 
Following on from what I've said, you could go down the avenue of the classic Western movie where this small outpost is being attacked by a fearsome enemy preying on the helpless - perhaps a group of Romulans not allied with the Empire or another race are raiding the outpost on a regular basis.

The outpost's small population as no one to turn to since neither the Romulans nor Federation can send military forces into the Neutral Zone, or are simply loath to intervene for fear of jeopardising the fragile peace. Tracey, with his extensive tactical knowledge and experience, is able to (reluctantly) turn this small group of ragtag civilians, mercenaries, thieves and whatever else into enough of a fighting force to deal the invaders a decisive blow.

A cliche?

Perhaps, but a fun one nonetheless... :lol:

You could even jump on the Seven Samurai bandwagon...
 
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