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Why do you think Beltran was/has been so critical?

I didn't want Chakotay to be an asshole, but I think he was a strong character, competently portrayed, given little to do, and I think if he'd been a bit more pushy, as he was in Scorpion (his finest hour, as far as I'm concerned), it would have made him a better character and made it a better show. But if wishes were horses Voyager would be different in a bunch of ways, so why harp on about that, particularly? It is what it was.
 
I suspect I'm about to irritate some people, but it would have been nice to see a Janeway vs. Chakotay argument end just once with Janeway actually allowing for the slightest possibility that she wasn't entirely right and Chakotay wasn't entirely wrong. Maybe Scorpion Pt. II did this, but that would seem to be an exception rather than a rule.

I realize I'm exaggerating the situation somewhat and possibly forgetting situations where this actually occurred (haven't seen a VOY episode in years), but it strikes me that if the goal is to show how a combined Starfleet-Maquis crew can perform as one, what better example than to find an approach that represents a compromise between Janeway and Chakotay to utilize the best of both Starfleet and the Maquis?
 
Also, one of the most frustrating things an actor might face would probably be a constantly shifting and inconsistent character, which, as I understand it from Michelle Erica Green, Chakotay was. So was Janeway, she says, but since Mulgrew at least always held the captain's chair, I guess she had less reason to complain.
 
Also, one of the most frustrating things an actor might face would probably be a constantly shifting and inconsistent character, which, as I understand it from Michelle Erica Green, Chakotay was. So was Janeway, she says, but since Mulgrew at least always held the captain's chair, I guess she had less reason to complain.

Who's Michelle Erica Green?

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On the Bearclaw subject, I've got no idea who the guy is, but there's no way I could take a character named after a breakfast pastry seriously. Who's in command, Captain Cruller?

Hey, maybe Ensign Cupcake from ST09 is head of security!
 
Michelle Erica Green did online reviews of Star Trek episodes




And I agree that making Chakotay anything like Bearclaw would've been a poor idea. Bearclaw was a short-tempered jerk who committed unprovoked ASSAULTS on other officers and really had no business in Starfleet. Plus I liked the whole "conflicted warrior/man of peace thing that Chakotay had going for him in the earlier seasons.


I think the character of Chakotay had great POTENTIAL, but not making him part of an actual tribe, downplaying the Maquis stuff and any disagreements with Janeway after about season 3(with the exception of "Equinox," when she was just nuts), and making Voyager "the seven of nine" show from S4 all torpedoed that potential.
 
The topic has mutated from why Beltran was so critical, into whether and how Chakotay was a bad character or was just shafted by Janeway.

It bears repeating that the Maquis were a stupid idea from the beginning. No, the lunatic trash DS9 threw out only "works" on an occasional basis when undiscriminating viewers can delude themselves into thinking there was a natural character development taking place offscreen. Putting it onscreen would have showed it up.

The problem for the Chakotay character was that if the Maquis have to be deemphasized, then their leader gets deemphasized. But there was more to Chakotay than being the leader of the Maquis, no? Namely, his religion and his stud-muffinliness.

Except no, when the show dropped his electronic magic mushroom, then twenty fourth century spirituality went with it (and I'd bet money this was ordered by the suits at UPN, if there was some way to find out.) So Chakotay the spiritual leader was out. This is by the way an excellent example of how Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian. So he couldn't help input any further story ideas in that direction.

Then there's Beltran as sexy male lead. Seska castrated the character very quickly. "Nuff said.

The wish for a "stronger" Chakotay character seems to be some mixture of a Vortaesque rage at seeing Roddenberryan humanism and the presumed necessity that Janeway be the only Trek captain to be showed up as a flawed commander. It's strange nobody every wanted T'Pol to be right against Archer, even though Archer was explicitly written to be a pioneer who would necessarily get things wrong.
 
I'm not sure I entirely understood that last part, but if you were trying to convey that folks wanted a "stronger" Chakotay pitted against Janeway as part of some kind of discomfort with a strong female captain, I think that's the usual sort of B.S. that gets dragged out whenever Janeway gets criticized.

I think that Archer was a pretty lousy captain, probably worse than Janeway, and I don't think that Archer is a very popular captain Star Trek fanbase-wise. Archer typically is shown as resentful and hostile toward T'Pol just for her being a Vulcan, and a lot of times she IS proven right when the two disagree, especially when she's advocating caution against Archer's inane impetuousness.











Disregard all that if it was a misinterpretation of previous post.
 
It bears repeating that the Maquis were a stupid idea from the beginning. No, the lunatic trash DS9 threw out only "works" on an occasional basis when undiscriminating viewers can delude themselves into thinking there was a natural character development taking place offscreen. Putting it onscreen would have showed it up.

The Maquis were developed on DS9 & TNG for the sake of VOY, not vice versa. DS9 was also the series that killed them off.

The problem for the Chakotay character was that if the Maquis have to be deemphasized, then their leader gets deemphasized. But there was more to Chakotay than being the leader of the Maquis, no? Namely, his religion and his stud-muffinliness.

Except no, when the show dropped his electronic magic mushroom, then twenty fourth century spirituality went with it (and I'd bet money this was ordered by the suits at UPN, if there was some way to find out.) So Chakotay the spiritual leader was out. This is by the way an excellent example of how Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian. So he couldn't help input any further story ideas in that direction.

While actors may be allowed some creative input, character development falls squarely on the shoulders of the writing staff. If spirit walk and Maquis episodes are the only ways that the Chakotay character could be developed, the writers essentially built a house of cards that was quickly blown down in later seasons. That's not Beltran's fault.

It's strange nobody every wanted T'Pol to be right against Archer, even though Archer was explicitly written to be a pioneer who would necessarily get things wrong.

And no one ever will. T'Pol was a Vulcan and that species was consistently portrayed as being semi-villains on ENT. Janeway frequently ignored the logic based counsel that Tuvok provided if that counsel went against her own values. If any captain did otherwise then the humanist aspect of Trek would pretty much be out the window. Chakotay was human and even former Starfleet. He had plenty of experience fighting for and against Starfleet. Yet the insight that came with that experience rarely seems of value on the show (at least thru season 3 which I'm currently watching).
 
Except no, when the show dropped his electronic magic mushroom, then twenty fourth century spirituality went with it (and I'd bet money this was ordered by the suits at UPN, if there was some way to find out.) So Chakotay the spiritual leader was out. This is by the way an excellent example of how Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian. So he couldn't help input any further story ideas in that direction.

Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian?


Do you prefer Jeri Taylor's inane tribeless Indian?
 
This is by the way an excellent example of how Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian.

This is an interesting comment and one that bears further thought. What will the NA culture be like several centuries in the future? Will the tribes separate, each harkening back to the pre-Columbian days? Will they combine, creating a different look and ethic?

While the bland, pretend tribe that Chakotay represents is unsatisfactory, isn't it possible that his people, this far into the future, might be different from the tribes as we know them? Certainly, wouldn't they be different from the tribes from the 19th century?

After all, they left Earth decades earlier and have travelled all the way out into deep space to find a new home, perhaps with a mixture of tribes pooling their resources and experience. I'm not defending the way Chakotay was portrayed on the screen, but I'm not sure that it would have been valid to have picked a tribe and had him conform to its practices, either.

As for Beltran's unhappiness with Voyager, I think he had some valid complaints. I'm not sure his method of addressing them in public worked to his advantage, however.
 
Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian?

Do you prefer Jeri Taylor's inane tribeless Indian?

If the likes of Tecumseh could promote a pan-Indian society, I'm not going to argue with the principle. Which I think you are. I don't think it's the tribelessness which is the weakness. Chakotay's electronic gizmo that gives people visions at least implied 24th century American Indians were trying to preserve their culture in the only way ever possible, by adapting it their way to the influences around them. Without the gizmo, the rest of Chakotay's spirituality was tiresomely New Age. Or, should I say "inanely?"

The idiots in World's End were stereotypical primitives, closer to nature than the sophisticates. The logic behind this, that the primitives had more primitive minds so that their intuitive ties to nature were unhampered by a Waspy intellect, naturally was left unarticulated. It was merely felt. Tattoo insisted insanely that Chakotay's people weren't assimilated, not even to humanity. No, I don't think the inanity in the American Indians in Trek is because Taylor insanely imagined that in three centuries the tribes might forge a common identity different from the predominant culture. The reverse, that they would persist no matter what happened around them, inadvertently suggests they are not quite fully aware of their surroundings. (AKA stupid.)

Archer typically is shown as resentful and hostile toward T'Pol just for her being a Vulcan, and a lot of times she IS proven right when the two disagree, especially when she's advocating caution against Archer's inane impetuousness.

sonak, that is the strange thing, that Archer is despised when the show portrays him as wrong against T'Pol, but Janeway is despised when shown as right as against Chakotay. Other Trek series have heroic captains without complaint. Sisko even gets to become some sort of rinky dink god without setting off fan BS detectors!

That's not Beltran's fault....And no one ever will. T'Pol was a Vulcan and that species was consistently portrayed as being semi-villains on ENT.

Anthony Sabre, no, it's not Beltran's fault. But it still would have been to his benefit if he could have imagined a 24th century American Indian and input this to the writers. They were apparently quite amenable to constructive criticism. He personally had more to gain than the writers, who could always send Chakotay to mess around with Seska. I could respect Beltran better if he'd complained about that storyline. Chakotay plaintively asking whether anybody worked for him burst the macho persona like a needle to a balloon.

Since DS9 consistently portrayed the Maquis as semi-villains (badass outlaws, terrorists and other such drivel,) however does this explain why some people wanted Chakotay to put Janeway in her place? If one wants to rebut by noticing that the Vulcans and the Maquis were semivillainous in different ways, refer to the part about the Vortaesque rage at Roddenberryan humanism.
 
I dunno, putting him in the show was a bad idea. It seemed like they just dropped a Native American into the show for multiculturalism than really adding to the show.
 
I can fully understand why Beltran was frustrated - his character was woefully underwritten and was basically shoved into the background in the later seasons. I can also understand why he stayed - it's still a steady paycheck, and besides, quitting a show might have hurt his chances of getting cast in future projects: "worked 7 years on a high profile show" must look better in one's resume than "quit the show because of disagreements with the writers/producers and dissatisfaction with the development of his character". I bet it's not that easy for most actors to find work, especially steady and well paid work, so he wouldn't have the incentive to leave unless he got a better offer. But despite the money, stability and relative amount of fame, it must be incredibly frustrating when you don't get to feel fulfilled by your work. Many people don't just work for the money, there is an a urge to be creative, to show one's skills, that can be far more fulfilling than the money.

But I think he might have done better if he hadn't given up and grown so disinterested in the role. There were many times in the show, esp. in later seasons, when he just didn't seem to be trying, and when he was wooden and indifferent even on rare occasions when he did get something to do. That kind of attitude might have only hurt the chances of the writers even trying to give him something to work with.

The wish for a "stronger" Chakotay character seems to be some mixture of a Vortaesque rage at seeing Roddenberryan humanism and the presumed necessity that Janeway be the only Trek captain to be showed up as a flawed commander. It's strange nobody every wanted T'Pol to be right against Archer, even though Archer was explicitly written to be a pioneer who would necessarily get things wrong.
Eh, what? Every Star Trek captain has been shown as a flawed commander, most of all Archer. Especially during the first couple of seasons, when he's shown to be reckless, naive, prejudiced towards Vulcans... T'Pol was right most of the time in that period, when it was usually her advice that Archer either ignored and got everyone into a mess (early episodes like "Strange New World") or, later on, when he actually listened to her, helped him sort out the mess or not make it in the first place. If anything, Archer was made a bit too obviously flawed, judging by the reactions of many of the fans who just couldn't get over it and called him an incompetent idiot.

You seem to think that playing against a strong character makes one weaker, and that the best way to make a captain seem strong is to weaken the other characters? I completely disagree. If TPTB wanted Janeway to come off as a really strong captain, weakening everyone around her was a bad way to go. Did Spock's strength as a character weaken Kirk? And having a bunch of strong, well developed characters on DS9 didn't make Sisko into a weakling. Character interactions only help to define the characters, which may be one of the reasons why Janeway is, IMO, the least defined of all Trek captains, and why her character and principles seemed to change according to whatever an episode's plot demanded. If she had had someone with well defined character and principles to play against, maybe she would be written with more depth and consistency than "a female Starfleet captain who is, like, totally awesome and badass". ;)

And what the heck is "Vortaesque rage"? :cardie:

Archer typically is shown as resentful and hostile toward T'Pol just for her being a Vulcan, and a lot of times she IS proven right when the two disagree, especially when she's advocating caution against Archer's inane impetuousness.
sonak, that is the strange thing, that Archer is despised when the show portrays him as wrong against T'Pol, but Janeway is despised when shown as right as against Chakotay.
I can't remember when Janeway was shown to be right against Chakotay? I guess you could say Scorpion, but other than that - she was wrong in Equinox, as she admitted herself, and other times he was nothing but her yes-man. It's not an issue of whether she was right or wrong against him, the problem is that he hardly ever offered a different opinion.

Other Trek series have heroic captains without complaint. Sisko even gets to become some sort of rinky dink god without setting off fan BS detectors!
Funny, because I've spent many hours arguing just how bullshit the whole "Sisko's mom was a Prophet" thing was, in so many ways...

Regardless, Sisko was shown as morally ambiguous multiple times, what with his actions towards the Maquis, his obsession with Eddington, his actions in In the Pale Moonlight...

Since DS9 consistently portrayed the Maquis as semi-villains (badass outlaws, terrorists and other such drivel,) however does this explain why some people wanted Chakotay to put Janeway in her place?
Erm, the Maquis were terrorists and outlaws, as portrayed on every Trek show they appeared on. :rolleyes: I don't know how you could claim that they weren't portrayed accurately, since they, you know, don't exist in real life. ;)

I don't know anyone who wanted Chakotay "to put Janeway in her place" (?), but I know lots of people, me included, who wanted Chakotay to show some sort of personality, attitude and some opinions of his own, instead of doing nothing but smiling and chatting with Janeway on the bridge and being basically useless. He doesn't have engineering or piloting skills so his whole purpose was as a former Maquis leader who becomes Janeway's XO. But the writers ignored the Maquis part almost completely, which makes you wonder why they even bothered introducing it in the first place; the Maquis started wearing Starfleet uniforms and blended into Starfleet after the second episode, there were barely any tensions or anything to distinguish them from the rest of the crew, and Chakotay himself immediately started acting like a good Starfleet officer. There were just a couple of occasions when he offered any kind of different opinion to Janeway; one of the rare examples is Scorpion, indeed his finest hour; but the other one, Equinox, where he had an excellent reason to oppose Janeway (and was right, according to her own later admission) resulted in him caving in because, as he said, "it wouldn't have been right" for him to stage a mutiny. It wouldn't have been right? Spoken like a true rule-abiding Starfleet officer. :cardie: This guy used to be a Maquis leader, for heaven's sake!

Claiming that Chakotay couldn't be credible as an (almost) equal partner in decision making just because he was an ex-terrorist/outlaw is utter nonsense, especially as Voyager was in the Delta Quadrant where Starfleet was not in a superior position, with legal and governmental support. If anything, the fact that Chakotay had been portrayed as someone who had resigned for Starfleet and joined the Maquis, indicated that he was the kind of man who was willing to fight for what he believed in, and that he was governed by his own moral principles rather than Starfleet rules and regulations. Which is why his attitude in Equinox didn't make sense and was another reminder of just how utterly wasted the potential of his character was.

I wouldn't have wanted him to be a jerk, and he didn't need to be one to be interesting. He could have been written as stoic, but determined man of strong convictions, who gradually (not at once) becomes deeply respectful of Janeway, but, instead of being a useless yes man, is ready to present opposing views and another perspective that comes from an ethical code that is different from Janeway's Starfleet principles. Also, his spirituality and background needed to be written as something other than utter nonsense.

It shouldn't have been that difficult. After all... you know that Trek show that started a few years before VOY and was still on the air at the time? ;) That one proved that an ex-terrorist, non-Starfleet, opinionated, deeply spiritual XO on a Trek show can be a strong, complex, well developed character who carries many strong storylines and grows enormously during the course of the show.

If one wants to rebut by noticing that the Vulcans and the Maquis were semivillainous in different ways, refer to the part about the Vortaesque rage at Roddenberryan humanism.
I have no clue what you're trying to say, especially since I still have no idea what "Vortaesque rage" is supposed to mean.

All I get from this is that you seem to be stuck in the "heroes and villains", "Starfleet good, outlaws bad" mode of thinking. By mid-1990s, after the late seasons of TNG and DS9, Trek had, IMO, became a bit more nuanced and layered than that.
 
It bears repeating that the Maquis were a stupid idea from the beginning. No, the lunatic trash DS9 threw out only "works" on an occasional basis when undiscriminating viewers can delude themselves into thinking there was a natural character development taking place offscreen. Putting it onscreen would have showed it up.

The Maquis were developed on DS9 & TNG for the sake of VOY, not vice versa. DS9 was also the series that killed them off.

The problem for the Chakotay character was that if the Maquis have to be deemphasized, then their leader gets deemphasized. But there was more to Chakotay than being the leader of the Maquis, no? Namely, his religion and his stud-muffinliness.

Except no, when the show dropped his electronic magic mushroom, then twenty fourth century spirituality went with it (and I'd bet money this was ordered by the suits at UPN, if there was some way to find out.) So Chakotay the spiritual leader was out. This is by the way an excellent example of how Beltran couldn't imagine anything but a more or less contemporary 20th century American Indian. So he couldn't help input any further story ideas in that direction.

While actors may be allowed some creative input, character development falls squarely on the shoulders of the writing staff. If spirit walk and Maquis episodes are the only ways that the Chakotay character could be developed, the writers essentially built a house of cards that was quickly blown down in later seasons. That's not Beltran's fault.

It's strange nobody every wanted T'Pol to be right against Archer, even though Archer was explicitly written to be a pioneer who would necessarily get things wrong.

And no one ever will. T'Pol was a Vulcan and that species was consistently portrayed as being semi-villains on ENT. Janeway frequently ignored the logic based counsel that Tuvok provided if that counsel went against her own values. If any captain did otherwise then the humanist aspect of Trek would pretty much be out the window. Chakotay was human and even former Starfleet. He had plenty of experience fighting for and against Starfleet. Yet the insight that came with that experience rarely seems of value on the show (at least thru season 3 which I'm currently watching).
Well said.:bolian:
 
It shouldn't have been that difficult. After all... you know that Trek show that started a few years before VOY and was still on the air at the time? ;) That one proved that an ex-terrorist, non-Starfleet, opinionated, deeply spiritual XO on a Trek show can be a strong, complex, well developed character who carries many strong storylines and grows enormously during the course of the show.

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Well, said Ex-Terrorist was not a Starfleet enemy (no matter how low-key said conflict was), and most of the conflict between Sisko and Kira faded after the first season.

Chakotay however, was not really opposed to Starfleet in the first place. If he was he would've just defected to the Maquis and betrayed secrets, been a real traitor like Eddington. However he formally resigned, THEN joined, and didn't betray anyone on the process.

Frankly, his basic character needed a bit more work if he was to really be the big source of conflict you wanted him to be. If B'Ellana was the Maquis leader, then maybe it would've worked out more.
 
It shouldn't have been that difficult. After all... you know that Trek show that started a few years before VOY and was still on the air at the time? ;) That one proved that an ex-terrorist, non-Starfleet, opinionated, deeply spiritual XO on a Trek show can be a strong, complex, well developed character who carries many strong storylines and grows enormously during the course of the show.

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Well, said Ex-Terrorist was not a Starfleet enemy (no matter how low-key said conflict was), and most of the conflict between Sisko and Kira faded after the first season.

Chakotay however, was not really opposed to Starfleet in the first place. If he was he would've just defected to the Maquis and betrayed secrets, been a real traitor like Eddington. However he formally resigned, THEN joined, and didn't betray anyone on the process.
So what is the problem then? You said yourself that Kira and Sisko weren't enemies, either, and didn't have a lot of conflict after season 1. Chakotay didn't need to be Janeway's enemy, he just needed to be a stronger and more developed character, to express non-Starfleet views on more occasions, and generally have a more equal dynamic with her.
 
It shouldn't have been that difficult. After all... you know that Trek show that started a few years before VOY and was still on the air at the time? ;) That one proved that an ex-terrorist, non-Starfleet, opinionated, deeply spiritual XO on a Trek show can be a strong, complex, well developed character who carries many strong storylines and grows enormously during the course of the show.

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Well, said Ex-Terrorist was not a Starfleet enemy (no matter how low-key said conflict was), and most of the conflict between Sisko and Kira faded after the first season.

Chakotay however, was not really opposed to Starfleet in the first place. If he was he would've just defected to the Maquis and betrayed secrets, been a real traitor like Eddington. However he formally resigned, THEN joined, and didn't betray anyone on the process.
So what is the problem then? You said yourself that Kira and Sisko weren't enemies, either, and didn't have a lot of conflict after season 1. Chakotay didn't need to be Janeway's enemy, he just needed to be a stronger and more developed character, to express non-Starfleet views on more occasions, and generally have a more equal dynamic with her.

Oh yeah, I agree on that. Of course, a lot of Kira's development came from the external Cardassian and Bajoran characters, and Bajor itself. It's not as easy as you say it is to develop Chakotay in a similar way since he lacks all those external elements.

Hell, even Farscape and NuBSG needed lots of external elements to better develop their characters. VOY had none of that since nobody except Neelix and Kes were FROM the DQ or had any idea of what it was like there.
 
Well, said Ex-Terrorist was not a Starfleet enemy (no matter how low-key said conflict was), and most of the conflict between Sisko and Kira faded after the first season.

Chakotay however, was not really opposed to Starfleet in the first place. If he was he would've just defected to the Maquis and betrayed secrets, been a real traitor like Eddington. However he formally resigned, THEN joined, and didn't betray anyone on the process.
So what is the problem then? You said yourself that Kira and Sisko weren't enemies, either, and didn't have a lot of conflict after season 1. Chakotay didn't need to be Janeway's enemy, he just needed to be a stronger and more developed character, to express non-Starfleet views on more occasions, and generally have a more equal dynamic with her.

Oh yeah, I agree on that. Of course, a lot of Kira's development came from the external Cardassian and Bajoran characters, and Bajor itself. It's not as easy as you say it is to develop Chakotay in a similar way since he lacks all those external elements.

Hell, even Farscape and NuBSG needed lots of external elements to better develop their characters. VOY had none of that since nobody except Neelix and Kes were FROM the DQ or had any idea of what it was like there.
Chakotay seem to work best when he was paired up with someone other than Janeway. He had dynamtic when paired with Be'Lanna, Tuvok & Seska. They really should have kept some anomosity going between him & Tuvok. There was always tension between the two of them that should have been played up, played out and then resolved over the course of the show. They needed to be paired up more so that you could see trust develope between them. Chakotay & Be'Lanna made a great and more believable male/female buddy team that J/C didn't have. She called him "good friend" but it didn't feel as natural as the friendships she had w/ Tuvok, Neelix, Be'Lanna or Seven did.

However from my understanding, Chakotay was a weak character due to Jeri Taylor.
Her idea of making Janeway appear a stronger was to make Chakotay seem weaker in comparison to her.
It's why besides "Equinox", everything Chakotay brought to Janeways table was always rejected or dismissed. It made it seem like he was never right & a bad leader.
 
Yep, another example of Jeri Taylor not being good for VOY.

People are so quick to blame Berman and Braga (even though Braga was only a Producer for 2-3 seasons!) but no one blames Taylor.
 
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