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ST: Independence - "Cui Bono"

Just catching up. I'm pretty much in agreement with just about everyone else on the board. This story continues to shape up nicely. I really liked what you're doing with the Vuke. You have great attention to detail, I like your physical descriptions for the Vuke. It reminds me a little of the Blood Carvers from the Star Wars EU for some reason. Also, you do a good job with describing their culture as well. And you're continuing to do the same for the Arkonians. Once again, great character work with Zo'Kama.

I also liked you building on the knotty relationship between Sintina and Riker and Picard, and how you are incorporating some of the ENT-D's out of phase experiences.

You've always had a good knack for developing alien cultures, from the Tamarians and Arkonians to your own creations, like the Vuke and Hacharans. Keep up the good work.
 
Thank you so much, everyone. It means a lot. I'm finding it difficult to find the time to sit down and write. I have lots of ideas in my head. Unfortunately, putting them to paper is the problem at this point. It's quite frustrating. Your comments are fueling me to make the time.

The Vuke sound like heartless beings towards their own. So what binds them together as a society?

Historically, the Vuke have been united mostly by a common enemy and the iron hand of the royalty. I suspect since they've killed off their other brother species, the oligarchy has gotten even more harsh. Fighting the illness is what the queen has used to unite them lately.

As far as Zo'Kama's species regarding young ones-have you ever read Turtledove's Colonization series?

No, I've never read it.
 
CHAPTER 5

Supplemental
USS Enterprise, Captain’s Ready Room
Sector 18945

Admiral Hendricks had a full head of grey hair. Most times, he had a friendly face. Now, however, Picard’s question had stricken the joy from it.

Captain Picard waited patently as the admiral avoided his glare.

“Jean-Luc,” he began almost apologetically, “The Treaty of Algeron isn’t what it once was.”

The captain responded with driven satire, “Oh? I’m not aware of it being nullified, Admiral.”

“We have certain assurances from within the Empire,” Hendricks added.

Picard puffed indignantly and sat back in his chair.

The admiral went on honestly, “The truth of the matter is the Defiant isn’t the only Starfleet ship with a cloak. It hasn’t been for years.”

The Enterprise captain shot up and smacked his hands on the desk, “Starfleet was based on the idea of peaceful exploration! Explorers don’t go sneaking about.” He fumed for a moment before continuing, “So we no longer ‘boldly go,’ do we admiral? Now we creep around like vermin!”

“That’s enough,” stated Hendricks with authority.

Picard muzzled himself, but he was obviously still enraged.

The admiral continued in a more congenial tone, “Look, I’m your friend Jean-Luc. And as your friend, I advise you to drop this. No one will benefit if it’s made public. It will only hurt Starfleet’s reputation. And I don’t need to tell you we have a PR problem as it is since the war.”

“Then, perhaps we should operate with a sense of morality and ethics.”

Hendricks sighed, “I could order you not to pursue this, but I doubt you’d listen.” He leaned in, “All I can say is: if you bring this to the council, you’ll be upsetting some very influential people.”

Picard began solemnly, “I do not like what we have become, James. Starfleet is slowly changing into something I can not respect.” He resolved himself with a deep breath, “I will not allow something that I have cared for – that I have fought for – my entire life to be hijacked by dishonorable men who hide in shadows.” He shot daggers at Hendrecks, “And I am ashamed that you don’t feel the same way.”

The admiral glanced down.

Picard closed the channel.

Supplemental
USS Independence, Conference Room
En Route to the H’Kan System

Science officer Tang and Windsow stood near a large screen set into the bulkhead. Captain Aurelia had just joined bin Nadal and Lieutenant Faltyne at one end of the elongated table. The stars streaked passed in the large windows.

“So what have you come up with?” began Sintina.

Windslow had an almost obsessive edge to his voice. Obviously, he was committed to solving this problem. “Ok, as far as I can tell, there is a way around this interphasic cloak.” He activated the display. “When phased matter passes through normal matter, a chroniton field is produced. Now, we can use a subspace differential pulse to identify the exact phase variance of that field if we scan it within five seconds of its creation.” He took a breath, “Then, we can create a static warp shell around the Independence with the exact same phase discrimination of the cloaked ship.” He halted his explanation. Apparently, the others didn’t understand the significance.

Zian jumped in, “The static warp shell would basically be our own interphasic cloak. Since we would share the same phase discrimination of the cloaked ship, we could see them.”

“Could we attack them,” came from Aurelia.

The chief engineer stepped up, “No. If we fired a phaser or launched a torpedo, it would revert to its normal state, once it left the static warp shell.”

The Andorian security chief asked, “Couldn’t we alter the state of a torpedo or two, independent of our shell?”

Windslow tilted his head a bit, “Possibly. Yes, with a warp capable torpedo.”

Aurelia issued the order without delay, “I want at least a dozen torpedoes altered as soon as you can have them.”

“We would still have to know the proper phase variance to set them to, Captain,” reminded Tang.

Bin Nadal chimed in, “And that is dependant on the cloaked ship passing through normal matter. There isn’t much of that in space.”

“True,” admitted Ethan, “but if they follow us into the star system, our chances increase.”

“Not by much,” observed Faltyne.

“Granted,” said Windslow. He examined the deck for a second, then looked to Sintina, “A lot has to go right for this to work, Captain. But it’s our best shot.”

Sintina rapped her fingers on the table. “I’ve never been one to rely on luck. You can’t trust luck.” She sighed, “But if it’s the best we can do, then it’s the best we can do.”

Supplemental
Vuke Carrier Three
In Orbit of H’Kan VB (Va’rak)

“Healer,” said a male Vuke as he approached her, “Alpha Getha has reached the final stage.”

Alpha Kudal, the lead healer of the fleet, slowly placed the scalpel on the metal autopsy table. A male corpse adorned it; his chest flung open. The internal organs had large, puss-filled boils all over them. She had seen it several times before. Each time Kudal performed a new autopsy, she hoped to find something new…. Something different… A hint… Anything. But this one was just like the countless others.

Now, she’d watch another die; this time, the Alpha of the fleet.


Alpha Getha’s room was filled with plants native to the homeworld. The commander herself, lay restless on her cot.

Kudal sat next to her. Some of Getha’s colorful feathers had fallen out and she made a muted gurgling noise. It was her last few attempts to breath. There was little the healer could do.

Alpha Kudal had been effectively useless for over a year now. The plague first struck a small village on Va’rak, the outermost colony. From there it spread to the rest of the planet. For several wasted months, the matriarch denied the very existence of the illness. Once the disease reached the homeworld, there was no way to avoid the reality of the situation. Not that it mattered at that point.

The Vuke had a firm understanding of genetics. It was even rumored that the royal family covertly used genetics to ensure no other Vuke would develop golden scales and white feathers. Even with this technology, the cure for the illness evaded them.

“Kudal,” Getha wheezed. “Once I end, you will assume command.” She coughed violently, nearly vomiting. “Can not…allow spreading disease. Take ship to outer system, away from colony. Once all dead….ship can be sanitized and used again.”

“I understand,” confirmed Kudal.

Another fierce round of coughing and gagging followed. This time, dark liquid and tissue ejected from Getha’s mouth. It was painful. Mercifully, the Alpha lost consciousness. She would die within minutes.
 
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Wow, Picard really got a head of steam going there with the admiral! I can’t say I blame him, but then Jean-Luc has always been the noble face of Starfleet. It’s a terrible blow for him to realize that in the post-war period much of that honorable luster has faded and that parts of the organization have become a façade for the devious schemes of other people and agencies with their own agendas.

Here’s hoping Aurelia’s plan with the torpedoes has some concrete results, or Independence will be at the mercy of the ship they suspect is shadowing them.

I continue to appreciate the world-building you’re doing with the Vuke, who continue to be a fascinating study in aggressive, expansionist evolution.

Great stuff!
 
It almost looks like we're heading for a moral civil war within Starfleet.

Time for Section 31 to go down, hard and permanent.
 
Wow...that disease is reminiscent in its description of a cross between the Black Plague and a hemorrhagic fever. Nasty, nasty stuff indeed. I forgot, what was the survival rate of this thing? Do ANY live at all? Even Ebola Zaire leaves a FEW survivors, and with HIV there are some people who stay asymptomatic for extremely long periods of time. If the kill rate is 100%, though, that would make me very suspicious of a bioweapon, because the goal of a virus in nature is not to rapidly kill all of its victims--it's to continue propagating, and for that, models more like HIV...or, on the other end of the spectrum, the common cold...are much more successful in the evolutionary sense. When something completely and totally defies that expectation...I would suspect bioweapon.

As for Picard--well, I am worried that in his naive idealism, in just blurting his suspicions to that admiral, that all he's doing is tipping off Section 31. Further proof (IMHO) that he has no clue how to deal with it when things defy his idealistic expectations.
 
Wow...that disease is reminiscent in its description of a cross between the Black Plague and a hemorrhagic fever. Nasty, nasty stuff indeed. I forgot, what was the survival rate of this thing? Do ANY live at all? Even Ebola Zaire leaves a FEW survivors, and with HIV there are some people who stay asymptomatic for extremely long periods of time. If the kill rate is 100%, though, that would make me very suspicious of a bioweapon, because the goal of a virus in nature is not to rapidly kill all of its victims--it's to continue propagating, and for that, models more like HIV...or, on the other end of the spectrum, the common cold...are much more successful in the evolutionary sense. When something completely and totally defies that expectation...I would suspect bioweapon.
Have you ever seen Babylon 5? There was a race in that universe who became extinct due to a natural virus that completely obliterated their population. They died out because they believed it was a plague brought down on them for being impure, and by the time they tried to do anything about it, it was too late.

As for Picard--well, I am worried that in his naive idealism, in just blurting his suspicions to that admiral, that all he's doing is tipping off Section 31. Further proof (IMHO) that he has no clue how to deal with it when things defy his idealistic expectations.
Yes he may have tipped off S31 but I wouldn't call his idealism naive. The way he is portrayed is slightly different to canon but he joined Starfleet as an explorer, and that is the Academy's very motto, "from the stars, knowledge." What he has become has shaped his idealism. He wants to return to a period of time when starships explored the galaxy instead of getting caught up in battles which rage across the quadrant or getting to the bottom of internecine squabbling between cultures. Section 31 need to be exposed so they can no longer operate in the shadows. Yes you will get witch hunts for Section 31 operatives but it's about time that the shadow organisation, the shadow star fleet, was removed.
 
The Vuke are in trouble-I did watch B5.
Loved Picard's scene. Very biting and in character!
 
Ditto what everyone else has said about Chapter 5. Also liked your solution for the interphase cloak problem.
 
Have you ever seen Babylon 5? There was a race in that universe who became extinct due to a natural virus that completely obliterated their population. They died out because they believed it was a plague brought down on them for being impure, and by the time they tried to do anything about it, it was too late.

Never watched that show.

Anyway, I could see the Vuke being wiped out if it thinned their population to the point where they were too spread-out/not genetically viable to continue as a species, if we're talking a non-bioweapon.

If it's a bioweapon, of course--all bets are off.

Yes he may have tipped off S31 but I wouldn't call his idealism naive. The way he is portrayed is slightly different to canon but he joined Starfleet as an explorer, and that is the Academy's very motto, "from the stars, knowledge." What he has become has shaped his idealism. He wants to return to a period of time when starships explored the galaxy instead of getting caught up in battles which rage across the quadrant or getting to the bottom of internecine squabbling between cultures. Section 31 need to be exposed so they can no longer operate in the shadows. Yes you will get witch hunts for Section 31 operatives but it's about time that the shadow organisation, the shadow star fleet, was removed.

I do think Section 31 ultimately needs to be exposed...but I just find myself thinking that naively tipping them off as to what's going on isn't going to help, and will only serve to give Section 31 and its sympathizers a heads-up as to exactly what the enemy (the normal Starfleet) knows and what they're trying to do about it. You don't win by giving your plans to your adversaries, or acting as though they're going to conform to any sort of normal, reasonable-person standard. We're dealing with the Starfleet equivalent of the Obsidian Order--to my mind, they have to be infiltrated and then absolutely burned from within and without, which is a kind of operation that is going to have to be achieved with a LOT of caution, information security, and stealth until enough is known to engage them in the equivalent of open warfare.
 
Well Picard appears to be getting into the thick of it. And in Picard fashion his morals are forging the way. Yes, maybe he is a little idealistic but in the aftermath of the Dominion War, with Section 31 now so confident in their powers that they amass a fleet of cloaked vessels and believe they can hunt down Starfleet crews in order to protect themselves - and not their charge of protecting the Federation - then I'm all for his idealism. Section 31 has been allowed to exist and grow powerful because even its opponents have remained tight-lipped and fearful of it. Picard is near to calling them out - it might have more impact than trying to covertly undermine them in the business they are so skilled in and in which they are so willing to go to any lengths to achieve their aims.
 
I'm not going to take sides as to whether or not Picard is hurting or helping the situation. I enjoy watching the debate unfold. :devil: ...it also means I must be doing something right.

I forgot, what was the survival rate of this thing?

I don't think I mentioned the mortality rate. I'd guess it's somewhere in the mid-90's.
 
Picard vs. Section 31. I'm not sure who to put my money on but put me down as one of those people who want to see Section 31 get a bloody nose or more. Picard's naive idealism was almost painful to read. But maybe him wising up will mark the beginning of the end for these guys.
 
CHAPTER 6

Supplemental
USS Independence, Guest Quarters
En Route to the H’Kan System

Despite Kimula’s best efforts to remain anti-confrontational and non-judgmental, in both tone and thought; Clayton was becoming almost frantic.

“They’re lying!” he persisted.

The Andorian remained seated and calm. “Are you suggesting that Section 31 created false documentation?”

“Yes!”

She examined a padd for a moment. “These documents seem authentic, Clayton.”

Thowing up is arms, he rejoined, “They wouldn’t be much good if they didn’t!” He paced like a caged beast.

Kimula didn’t know who or what to believe. If Easton was a plant, he was certainly putting on a good show. Then again, she couldn’t see how anyone could fake these documents from such diverse locations so quickly. She sighed. His agitation was filling the room like a flood. It was difficult not to get sucked into it. “Alright,” she offered finally, “Let’s say they are fake. Do you have anything to prove them wrong?”

He mockingly checked his pockets, “Gee, I’m sorry. I must have left it in my other pants.”

The counselor tilted her head. She didn’t appreciate the sarcasm. Though, she was often quick to dish it out herself. “Couldn’t we contact Starbase 39-sierra?”

His response was quick, “They won’t have any records of me there. Section 31 didn’t want any record of me there!”

At an impasse, Kimula sat back. It was time to take this a step further. “How do you feel about Klingons?”

Easton seemed genuinely confused, “Klingons? Why?”

“Just answer the question, please.”

He snapped, “That has nothing to do with anything!”

She took a slightly different track, “Some of the records we obtained indicate you had a wife and a daughter on Archanis IV.”

Clayton nearly yelled, “I told you, I’ve never been married!”

Kimula’s counseling technique had always centered on cutting to the quick. She pressed hard, “Their names were Clara and Mira…”

He turned away and violently pounded on the bulkhead, screaming, “I don’t know them! They never existed! Don’t you see that?” His face was beet red and he was on the verge of sobbing.

Supplemental
USS Enterprise, Conference Room
Sector 18945

The Enterprise senior staff was assembled.

Picard strode around the long table, “The admirals I talked to all but confirmed Captain Aurelia’s accusations.” He found his chair and rested his arms on the back of it, “Elements within Starfleet and the Federation are currently using cloaking technology, including Admiral Pressman’s interphasic cloaking device.” He added with distain, “One almost bragged about it.”

Counselor Troi was the first to protest, “How can they get away with that?”

“The answer to that, Counselor,” rejoined the captain, “is something that keeps me up at night.”

“It’s amazing how easily they admitted their knowledge of the Federation breaking galactic treaties,” noted the first officer.

“They truly see nothing wrong with it.” Picard added, “And they believe they are untouchable. At least, that’s the impression I got.”

Doctor Crusher hoped, “With any luck, their overconfidence will bring them down.”

“I doubt a few loose-lipped admirals are an accurate representation of what these people are capable of,” responded the captain.

Riker darkly mused, “If we were only so lucky.”

The conversation stalled. Each officer took a moment to digest the information.

Geordi leaned in, “I’ve talked with Commander Windslow. He has a plan to get around the cloak, but it’s a long shot.”

The deep voice of Worf injected, “If a vessel is tracking the Independence, we must assume their communications are being monitored as well.”

“Agreed,” said Picard. “Not even secured channels might not be good enough.” He sat with a sigh, “I was also given a warning to not investigate this any further.”

Concerned, Beverly assumed, “An admiral threatened you?”

He straightened up, “Not exactly. He suggested that bringing this to light via official channels would not only be ineffective, but put force this rogue group even deeper into hiding.”

“He’s probably right,” commented Riker.

Picard nodded, “Unfortunately so.” He looked around the table, “I need options.”

The room was quiet for several moments. Finally, Data piped up, “I may have a course of action, Captain.”

Stardate: 54619.0 (15 Aug 2377)
USS Independence, Conference Room
H’Kan System

Aurelia walked in and took a seat, “Report.”

Ensign Weston began, “We are holding position inside the system’s Kuiper belt to avoid detection.”

Then, Science Officer Tang added, “I’ve been scanning continuously for chroniton fields. Nothing so far, but it would have to be within 100,000 kilometers for the scanners to detect it.”

Kimula spoke to that point, “Captain, it’s entirely possible there never was any ship.”

“Is that your professional opinion?” queried Sintina.

Her antennae waved slightly with her head, “I don’t know. Clayton is obviously…disturbed. But I’m not sure if it’s over his lost family… or that no one believes him about that ship out there.”

Bin Nadal spoke out of turn, “I believe him.”

“We all know your views on Section 31, Karim,” remarked the captain. She continued, “But I don’t trust this man. I won’t be duped again.” She looked to Faltyne, “I want Easton in the brig. That might give him some clarity.”

The Andorian security chief nodded.

“I don’t think that’s necessary,” offered Kimula.

“Neither do I,” seconded bin Nadal.

Aurelia’s tone was bitterly mordant, “Well, I’m not asking your permission, now am I?”

The comment muted their protest.

“Now,” the captain went on, “how are we going to go about making contact with the Vuke?”

“Ideally,” said Kimula coldly, “We should approach some sort of scientist, first. Scientists usually have a more open mind about alien life.”

Jonin Faltyne informed them, “I ran a passive scan of the system. Most of the Vuke ships are clustered in orbit of their colonies.” He got up and activated the viewer, “With one odd exception. The command ship of their third fleet is by itself, moving away from the outermost colony.”

“How fast can their ships travel?” inquired Windslow.

“About one-tenth impulse.”

Zo’Kama observed, “It’s nice to know we could always outrun them.”

The comment prompted some glances.

She added, “Not that we’ll have to.”

“Anyway,” Jonin went on, “I’d say that’s our best option. The down side is: there is no place to hide within transporter range of that vessel.”

“Everyone in the system will be able to see us,” said bin Nadal.

The Andorian nodded, “That carrier could get reinforcements within three hours.”

The chief engineer suggested, “Maybe we don’t have to reveal ourselves right away, at least not directly.”

Aurelia cocked an eyebrow, “What did you have in mind?”
 
Aha...I'm beginning to see how Section 31 got to this Easton guy. I'm reminded from a line from Una McCormack's novel The Never-Ending Sacrifice, that said how the Obsidian Order zeroes in on gaps in peoples lives--and rushes in to fill them. Something tells me that's how they got to Easton...though whether the rest of his story checks out is still very much up in the air.

FINALLY Picard figures out communicating stuff like this on open channels isn't a good idea...

Looking forward to seeing what Data has in mind!
 
This thing with Easton is getting more and more mysterious. I don't know who to believe or if there is even a cloaked ship out there. Good use of the E-E crew.
 
This is looking good.

Easton is either going to be helpful, or Aurelia's going to string him up and play pinyata
 
“Well, I’m not asking your permission, now am I?”

That line made me chuckle. Aurelia is a hot-head but occasionally she really grows on me. And I can see the logic of restricting Easton to the brig. I can't figure out if he's friend or foe. But knowing Aurelia's luck, she's probably going to be wrong about him.

I'm looking forward to the Vuke encounter.
 
Aurelia cracked me up here, too. As always, she’s between a rock and a hard place, only in this case nobody’s quite sure where the rock is, or if it even exists outside the imagination of the enigmatic Easton. You’re really fleshing out this terrific tale, and I’m very much enjoying seeing the Enterprise crew working with Aurelia, for a change.
 
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