I don't know what you mean by "pull it off". Just have him be a good guy, with some foreshadowing. That's easy.
I don't know what you mean by "pull it off". Just have him be a good guy, with some foreshadowing. That's easy.
You're basically telegraphing what's going to happen. It's like doing a spy story where a seemingly loyal agent is named Betrayo.
You're basically telegraphing what's going to happen. It's like doing a spy story where a seemingly loyal agent is named Betrayo.
"Damnit, Betrayo! I trusted you!"
Greg Cox; "Damnit said:"Yes, you did, foolish hero!"
"And then you betra...oh, yeah, I see it now. Well, nevermind, then, this one's on me."
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Considering, also, that he wasn't really evil so much as obsessed with order, especially early on, this particular nitpick is pretty stupid.
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