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Excelsior Technical Manual - Revived!

I appreciate you making yourself this much work, and so far this is good writing, as well as a good compellation of images.

However I absolutely hate FASA's idea to put transwarp into the Excelsior class, which is for me just plain stupidity and ignorance of canon. Which is why FASA is non-canon, anyway :P :D

Will you ever be planning to do a canon Excelsior Tech Manual?
 
Wait. what? What transwarp? Did you read what Praetor wrote? He extrapolated what was seen in the movies but ultimately made transwarp a failure as it was portrayed in the later shows. That's about as "canon" as it can get I think.
 
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It's worth noting that in the mid-eighties, transwarp was a success as far as anyone else knew. According to the Enterprise-A bridge graphics in Star Trek IV (Mike Okuda's first Trek contribution, I believe), the ship was packing transwarp drive too. FASA was knocking about around that time, was it not? I never heard of it until recently.

TNG made things a bit clearer, and "transwarp" was always a super-advanced tech associated with the Borg. With the exception of the newt episode... I think Praetor's done a great job of retconning everything to make sense.
 
I appreciate you making yourself this much work, and so far this is good writing, as well as a good compellation of images.

However I absolutely hate FASA's idea to put transwarp into the Excelsior class, which is for me just plain stupidity and ignorance of canon. Which is why FASA is non-canon, anyway :P :D

Will you ever be planning to do a canon Excelsior Tech Manual?

Thank you for the compliments. :)

As for the transwarp and 'canon' issue...

Wait. what? What transwarp? Did you read what Praetor wrote? He extrapolated what was seen in the movies but ultimately made transwarp a failure as it was portrayed in the later shows. That's about as "canon" as it can get I think.

Bingo, and that was my goal - to stay as true to 'canon' as possible.

Since the (mostly) official materials such as the TM and STE say transwarp was a failure, as far as I'm concerned it was a failure - although as I mentioned it was a pseudo-success as the source for the innovations that led to the recalibrated warp scale and the TNG-style warp drive.

It's worth noting that in the mid-eighties, transwarp was a success as far as anyone else knew. According to the Enterprise-A bridge graphics in Star Trek IV (Mike Okuda's first Trek contribution, I believe), the ship was packing transwarp drive too. FASA was knocking about around that time, was it not? I never heard of it until recently.

TNG made things a bit clearer, and "transwarp" was always a super-advanced tech associated with the Borg. With the exception of the newt episode... I think Praetor's done a great job of retconning everything to make sense.

Well, I even tried to fit in infinite velocity whatnottery from the 'newt' episode without the actual mention of the whole 'newt' thing - even if it did require some creative retconning on my part. :)

Okay, let's wade our toes in some tech stuff (while I try to force myself to scan my deckplan hand drawings.)
U.S.S. Excelsior, NCC-2000
Technical Familiarization Resource


The following was written in 2290 following the Excelsior's operational refit after the failure of the Transwarp Development Project to familiarize new crew and Starfleet brass alike with the new ship. It describes the ship in its original condition as of launch in that year, and compares the ship's initial fittings in 2284 to the equipment later installed for her service career. Appendices follow outlining the evolution of the design in the subsequent years, 'cousins' developed from the class, and a list of noteworthy ships. In her exhibition as part of the Fleet Museum's collection, Excelsior has been cosmetically restored to her 2290 status. This summary is one of several historic documents prepared for display at the Excelsior Exhibit.



Structural Overview

The Excelsior’s design drew upon the now traditional primary-secondary hull configuration first introduced in the Daedalus class of the late twenty-second century. The Excelsior’s space-frame consisted of five integrated main assemblies: the primary hull (saucer section), interconnecting dorsal “neck,” secondary hull, warp nacelle pylon assembly, and twin warp nacelles (together comprising the engineering section). Each unit was constructed separately as an independent module at San Francisco Fleet Yards on Earth and then gamma-welded together with the others in drydock in synchronus Earth orbit. Overall vessel dimensions are as follows: Length, 467.05 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 74.93 meters.

The primary hull, or more popularly the “saucer section,” is considered to be the main hull component. It houses the main command facilities, including the main and auxiliary bridges and the main computer core, as well as main crew accommodations and crew support facilities including food preparation and laundry systems. It also contains the main dorsal and ventral sensor platforms, and the ten primary phaser banks. A spar extending aft along the longitudinal axis of the saucer section also houses the impulse reaction system and upper intermix chamber, which extends downward to the deflector alcove in the secondary hull. Overall saucer dimensions are as follows: Length, 198.51 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 30.71 meters.

The interconnecting dorsal is one of the components of the “engineering section.” Originally fitted with transwarp field monitoring and refinement equipment (its very chevron-shaped horizontal cross-sections defined by warp field dynamics), it is now primary void space, save the intermix chamber which spans it vertically and related equipment. Auxiliary crew quarters and freight space can be found here, along with inertial damper systems.

The secondary hull itself is the main component of the engineering section. It is roughly cigar-shaped in design, with a flattened dorsal and perfectly curved ventral. It houses main engineering and primary warp power systems, including the antimatter storage systems, as well as the main deflector dish. Primarily a hollow unit, the secondary hull houses Shuttlebay One and the Main Cargo Storage Facility, Shuttlebay Two mounted at the fantail atop the dorsal, and the twin fore and aft torpedo launchers. Overall secondary hull dimensions are as follows: Length, 271.79 meters; Beam, 58.76 meters; Height, 43.93 meters.

The warp nacelle pylon assembly is composed of an elliptical hemisphere mounting the twin warp nacelle struts. The “dome” unit houses the main plasma manifold and EPS system, as well as various engineering support systems. It is streamlined for greater warp performance. The massive twin warp nacelles are mounted securely atop the twin support pylons. They are roughly shaped like truncated squares in cross-section, and taper to their aft ends. Overall warp nacelle unit dimensions are as follows: Length, 247.08 meters, Beam, 17.70 meters; Height, 20.33 meters.


Deck One (A-Deck)

Deck one is a fairly large space extending across the very top of the primary hull spar aft towards the impulse engines. However, the only habitable volume of the deck consists of the main bridge/briefing room area at the front, which is sunken nearly two meters into a protective ring structure. The bridge unit is an interchangeable module designed for swapout at regular refit intervals to facilitate easier control system upgrades. In keeping with Starfleet tradition, the bridge is a circular room lined with various instrument stations necessary for the operation of a modern starship.

The uninhabitable space of Deck One contains numerous systems. The protective ring around the bridge module contains auxiliary battery power and life support systems for emergency use. A bar extending aft from this unit contains the main high-gain subspace antenna, and is flanked on either side by the uppermost portions of the dorsal sensor platform within raised hull flats. Excelsior is equipped with an extensive suite of all modern sensor modules.

Aft of this at the deck’s rear are the upper housing for the twin deflection crystals that top the intermix chamber and the upper impulse systems, including the radiative cooling unit baffles and fins. When she was originally launched, Excelsior mounted a single, large deflection crystal atop her intermix chamber. The deflection crystal allows warp power to be directly channeled to supplement the impulse system. However, flight tests proved that the large crystal tended to easily overload, so the ship’s 2287 refit and intermix chamber replacement saw the installation of a pair of smaller, more conventional deflection crystals capable of the same workload. These units have proven far more reliable and stable than the previous configuration, although some future Excelsior class ships are expected to retain the single-unit design if current research makes it more workable as is theorized.


Main Bridge

The bridge module originally equipped to the Excelsior at her commissioning in 2284 was quite different from the one installed in 2289 for her operational career, but the two still retain similar Starfleet characteristics. The 2284 bridge module was designed around the operation of the transwarp drive. It did not contain an observation lounge as on the new module, but was still an efficient control space. The room was a perfect circle, with a single turbolift directly aft and a large viewscreen forward, comprising nearly one-third of the room’s wall space, with small secondary exit doors to either side (leading to a surrounding corridor). The remaining wall space was dedicated to control consoles. A “pedestal” in the center of the room mounted (for the first time) separate helm and navigation consoles, with Helm at starboard and navigation at port. The Captain’s chair was directly aft of these consoles.

The Captain’s chair, and indeed all the bridge chairs, was quite unusual and characteristic of Excelsior’s early career. They all mounted large inertial restraint arms that some crew nicknamed “bear arms,” so described because in transwarp flight these mssive arms were programmed to automatically grab and securely hold the seat’s occupant. Also for the first time, Starfleet adopted the use of touch-screen “Okudagram” control surfaces, so named after their inventor, Dr. Michael Okuda. These controls were far more sophisticated and versatile than their push-button predecessors, and could be reconfigured for specific needs far more easily. Okudagram interfaces evolved in sophistication quickly and soon became the fleet-wide standard. “Bear arm” chairs, however, heralded the end of physical seating restraints in favor of interwoven gravity cushions and better intertial damper systems.

The Excelsior’s 2287 refit and transwarp drive removal prompted the replacement of the 2284 bridge module, and Starfleet took the opportunity to equip her with something even more modern and cutting-edge. The 2289 module retained the circular dome-shape for the bridge with Okudagram touch-screens, but is distinctly different from its predecessor. Two turbolift stations serve this bridge, one each at port and starboard. The viewscreen remains virtually unchanged, but is slightly smaller, and gone are the forward corridor access doors.

Stations lining the bridge walls include: engineering support, propulsion, communications, and tactical monitoring at port; three dedicated science statsions and a small master control monitoring station at starboard. The upgraded Captain’s chair, and helm and nav consoles retain nearly the same locations on a platform level with the circumferential stations. A small table has been provided in front of the Captain’s chair for his convenience. An alcove at the aft of the bridge houses the new master situation display, a graphic of the ship that allows the Captain to view the ship’s status at a glance over his shoulder. Doors flank the MSD, which allow access to the new briefing room/observation lounge, and an adjacent head for the bridge crew’s use.


Briefing Room/Observation Lounge

The new observation lounge provides an unparalleled view of the aft portion of the ship and the warp nacelles, and was designed to allow the senior staff a more convenient location for mission briefings. It features a long, slightly curved table fitted with computer access systems and chairs for each member of the senior staff. Each end wall is fitted with a fairly sizable viewscreen and data interface for briefing sessions. The inner wall is decorated with art and other personal decorations provided by the Captain. The Captain may also use the room as a ready room if so desired to relax when key situations require his proximity to the bridge.
After looking at the TNG TM again recently, I've been contemplating putting in author's footnotes explaining certain 'behind the scenes' info as Sternbach and Okuda did, and much as I did here with the italicized introductory paragraph - only, of course 'out of universe.' Any opinions on this idea?
 
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Oh, definately have footnotes, they are usually worth reading. I had a professor at university who wouldn't touch an article unless it was at least 50% footnotes.

Nice to see "Okudagram" become an official term, but what's an "observation lunge", as per the first paragraph of the main bridge section? ;)
 
U.S.S. Excelsior, NCC-2000
Technical Familiarization Resource
Why not Excelsior Class Technical Familiarization Resource?

Each unit was constructed separately as an independent module at San Francisco Fleet Yards on Earth and then gamma-welded together with the others in drydock in synchronus Earth orbit.
I think it would be difficult to lift the primary and secondary hulls into orbit if not under their own power.

The primary hull, or more popularly the “saucer section,”
or more popularly -> more commonly known as / also known as

is considered to be the main hull component.
primary == main, so these words don't really add anything

main crew accommodations
implying there are accommodations for a non-main crew? ;)

food preparation and laundry systems
How about galleys and mess halls instead of food preparation systems? How about the ship's library, gymnasium, and recreational facilities, like the the bowling alley? ;)

A spar extending aft along the longitudinal axis of the saucer section
What's a spar? I can't find a fitting definition.

upper intermix chamber, which extends downward to the deflector alcove in the secondary hull
to -> towards, maybe, since the lower chamber would actually be above or behind that alcove.

The interconnecting dorsal [...] its very chevron-shaped horizontal cross-sections
Chevron == V-shaped. The cross-sections are more like half of an ellipse.

perfectly curved ventral
Perfectly curved? Perhaps semi-circular?

It houses main engineering and primary warp power systems,
primary -> the primary

Primarily a hollow unit
unit -> volume / structure

the secondary hull houses Shuttlebay One and the Main Cargo Storage Facility, Shuttlebay Two mounted at the fantail atop the dorsal, and the twin fore and aft torpedo launchers.
the secondary hull houses Shuttlebay One, the Main Cargo Storage Facility, Shuttlebay Two (at the fantail on the dorsal plane), and three torpedo tubes (two fore, one aft).

The warp nacelle pylon assembly is composed of an elliptical hemisphere
elliptical hemisphere is an oxymoron. Semi-ellipsoid would be more technically correct, but it's awkward. I suggest elliptical dome instead.

mounting the twin warp nacelle struts.
from which the twin nacelle struts extend.

It is streamlined for greater warp performance.
Do you mean the physical shape is streamlined, or the inner workings are optimized?

the main high-gain subspace antenna
main -> primary

The bridge module originally equipped to the Excelsior
equipped to -> installed on / mated to

I like to think the Star Trek III bridge was an ejectable test bridge with its own propulsion system, like the one mentioned in the TNG-TM. Although it would be unfair for the bridge to eject in the event of a transwarp test failure, while those stuck in Engineering had nowhere to go...

They all mounted large inertial restraint arms that some crew nicknamed “bear arms,” so described because in transwarp flight these mssive arms
mssive -> massive

“Bear arm” chairs, however, heralded the end of physical seating restraints
Since when has Starfleet ever used seat restraints? Besides that one epsiode of TNG where the shuttle did a complete roll? :D

Well, maybe in Enterprise on a few occasions...

The upgraded Captain’s chair, and helm and nav consoles
Remove the comma

retain nearly the same locations
retain -> retained

A small table has been provided in front of the Captain’s chair for his convenience.
The only Starfleet ship bridge with a flat surface to set beverages down! :D
 
So, was the second bridge installed in 2289 as the first paragraph in that section states, or at the same time as the 2287 refit? This seems confusing the way you flip-flop on the date. Or are you saying that after only 3 years in operation she had a 2 year of refit?
 
So, was the second bridge installed in 2289 as the first paragraph in that section states, or at the same time as the 2287 refit? This seems confusing the way you flip-flop on the date. Or are you saying that after only 3 years in operation she had a 2 year of refit?

It's not uncommon for new vessels to go through minor refits at the beginning of there service lives as new technologies become available and are released fron there testing stages. As for the Excelsior, after being fitted with "conventional" warp drive engines, the control interfaces would need to be changed out to accomodate this, and in the case of Starfleet ships where "bridge modules" can be swapped out the little effort, this could be done several times during the service life of the vessel.
 
Speaking of the removable bridge module, it was interesting to read on Doug Drexler's blog that the NX-01 was designed so the entire warp core and engineering section could be slid out and replaced with an improved model. Maybe something like this could have happened with the Excelsior?

There are those plates on the top of the engineering hull which look like they could be removed to get at the innards, and the Enterprise refit had something similar around the torpedo bay - there were also what looked like hatches on the pylons, presumably for access to the conduits. An easily replaceable warp core could only increase the life of the ship.
 
I appreciate you making yourself this much work, and so far this is good writing, as well as a good compellation of images.

However I absolutely hate FASA's idea to put transwarp into the Excelsior class, which is for me just plain stupidity and ignorance of canon. Which is why FASA is non-canon, anyway :P :D

Will you ever be planning to do a canon Excelsior Tech Manual?
Huh?

Did you not see ST-III?

FASA didn't come up with the idea that the Excelsior was built with transwarp drive. The people who made "ST-III" did. It was a major bit in the film. Go back and rewatch it... (Styles' comments are priceless.)
 
So, was the second bridge installed in 2289 as the first paragraph in that section states, or at the same time as the 2287 refit? This seems confusing the way you flip-flop on the date. Or are you saying that after only 3 years in operation she had a 2 year of refit?

It's not uncommon for new vessels to go through minor refits at the beginning of there service lives as new technologies become available and are released fron there testing stages. As for the Excelsior, after being fitted with "conventional" warp drive engines, the control interfaces would need to be changed out to accomodate this, and in the case of Starfleet ships where "bridge modules" can be swapped out the little effort, this could be done several times during the service life of the vessel.

Yes, but the problem here is he mentions 2 different dates relating to the same refit thus implying that the refit took 2 years to complete.
I am familiar with the swapability of bridge modules. It's not the issue.
 
Why not Excelsior Class Technical Familiarization Resource?

My thinking here was that there would be certain quirks of the Excelsior - such as the original bridge module and transwarp engine stuff - that would not ring true for the other ships, while almost everything else theoretically would. I also wanted to allow anyone a happy degree of latitude in deciding that their Excelsior class ship was somewhat different.

However, the more I've thought about it, the more I agree with you. So edited. :p

Each unit was constructed separately as an independent module at San Francisco Fleet Yards on Earth and then gamma-welded together with the others in drydock in synchronus Earth orbit.
I think it would be difficult to lift the primary and secondary hulls into orbit if not under their own power.

Yeah, I've decided to reword to leave this vague enough that hopefully anyone can imagine this was done however they like. My original intent was that it should be vague, but clearly it was not vague enough. ;)

How about galleys and mess halls instead of food preparation systems? How about the ship's library, gymnasium, and recreational facilities, like the the bowling alley? ;)

Honestly, when I was writing this I was purposefully trying to imitate some of the language used in 'The Making of Star Trek' to describe the interior layout of the original 1701 - hence the food preparation systems and laundry references.

the secondary hull houses Shuttlebay One, the Main Cargo Storage Facility, Shuttlebay Two (at the fantail on the dorsal plane), and three torpedo tubes (two fore, one aft).

There! Are! FOUR! TUBES! :scream:

;)

Do you mean the physical shape is streamlined, or the inner workings are optimized?

The former. ;)

I like to think the Star Trek III bridge was an ejectable test bridge with its own propulsion system, like the one mentioned in the TNG-TM. Although it would be unfair for the bridge to eject in the event of a transwarp test failure, while those stuck in Engineering had nowhere to go...

Hopefully the rewording should help with this.

Since when has Starfleet ever used seat restraints? Besides that one epsiode of TNG where the shuttle did a complete roll? :D

Well, maybe in Enterprise on a few occasions...

I think you'll find a new line here pleasing in that regard.

A small table has been provided in front of the Captain’s chair for his convenience.
The only Starfleet ship bridge with a flat surface to set beverages down! :D

Ever higher, and all. ;)

So, was the second bridge installed in 2289 as the first paragraph in that section states, or at the same time as the 2287 refit? This seems confusing the way you flip-flop on the date. Or are you saying that after only 3 years in operation she had a 2 year of refit?

Okay, so after re-reading I've figured out that the reason for the flip-flop was that it was my original intent that the refit began in mid to late 2287 and was complete by 2289. Most of this was meant to encompass refits to the new warp drive. However, you are right referring to bridge installation from two dates was confusing, so I'll henceforth refer to this refit as the '2287 refit.'

Speaking of the removable bridge module, it was interesting to read on Doug Drexler's blog that the NX-01 was designed so the entire warp core and engineering section could be slid out and replaced with an improved model. Maybe something like this could have happened with the Excelsior?

There are those plates on the top of the engineering hull which look like they could be removed to get at the innards, and the Enterprise refit had something similar around the torpedo bay - there were also what looked like hatches on the pylons, presumably for access to the conduits. An easily replaceable warp core could only increase the life of the ship.

It's funny, but Doug's thinking actually has coincided and inspired my own, but not quite in the same way. Most of the panels that you refer to on the saucer top I've actually interpreted as covers for extensive sensor systems - but I do believe that the original transwarp core was extracted through the top (where the deflection crystal(s) are) and the PTC extracted through the flat back of the secondary hull in a similar fashion.

Actually, Doug's idea has provided a pretty good solution to the Shuttlebay One quandry I've been having. Since it's been rather difficult to tell how many times that section on the original model was changed and exactly how, I've decided that the hollow volume (while still a concession to lower the ship's mass) was also designed to allow a variety of multi-mission modules, from the Shuttlebay One which is a standard configuration, to other setups that might more closely resemble the versions of the innards on the Jein Excelsior model and also the CGI models that were used.

So that's that, I think.

Okay, let's try this bit again. And for reference, here's a link to the cutaway diagram again so you can hopefully follow where I'm going. I keep kicking myself in the butt to start scanning and redrawing my deck pencil drawings, since this is little good without pictures. :p



The following was written in 2290 following the Excelsior's operational refit after the failure of the Transwarp Development Project to familiarize new crew and Starfleet brass alike with the new ship. It describes the ship in its original condition as of launch in that year, and compares the ship's initial fittings in 2284 to the equipment later installed for her service career. Appendices follow outlining the evolution of the design in the subsequent years, 'cousins' developed from the class, and a list of noteworthy ships. In her exhibition as part of the Fleet Museum's collection, Excelsior has been cosmetically restored to her 2290 status. This summary is one of several historic documents prepared for display at the Excelsior Exhibit.

Excelsior Class Technical Familiarization Resource


Structural Overview

The Excelsior’s design drew upon the now traditional primary-secondary hull configuration first introduced in the Daedalus class of the late twenty-second century. The Excelsior’s space-frame consisted of five integrated main assemblies: the primary hull (saucer section), interconnecting dorsal “neck,” secondary hull, warp nacelle pylon assembly, and twin warp nacelles (together comprising the engineering section). Each unit was constructed separately and then assembled in drydock in synchronus Earth orbit. Overall vessel dimensions are as follows: Length, 467.05 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 74.93 meters.

The primary hull, or more commonly known as the “saucer section,” houses the main command facilities, including the main and auxiliary bridges and the main computer core, as well as crew accommodations and support facilities including food preparation and laundry systems. It also contains the main dorsal and ventral sensor platforms, and the ten primary phaser banks. A bar-like section extending aft along the longitudinal axis of the saucer section also houses the impulse reaction system and upper intermix chamber, which extends downward towards the deflector alcove in the secondary hull. Overall saucer dimensions are as follows: Length, 198.51 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 30.71 meters.

The interconnecting dorsal is one of the components of the “engineering section.” Originally fitted with transwarp field monitoring and refinement equipment (its very horseshoe-shaped horizontal cross-sections defined by warp field dynamics), it is now primary void space, save the intermix chamber which spans it vertically and related equipment. Auxiliary crew quarters and freight space can be found here, along with inertial damper systems.

The secondary hull itself is the main component of the engineering section. It is roughly cigar-shaped in design, with a flattened dorsal and semi-circular ventral. It houses main engineering and the primary warp power systems, including the antimatter storage systems, as well as the main deflector dish. Primarily a hollow structure, the secondary hull houses the Main Cargo Storage Facility, the modular Shuttlebay One, Shuttlebay Two (at the aft fantail of the dorsal plane), and the four torpedo tubes (two fore, two aft.) Overall secondary hull dimensions are as follows: Length, 271.79 meters; Beam, 58.76 meters; Height, 43.93 meters.

The warp nacelle pylon assembly is composed of an elliptical dome from which the twin nacelles struts extend. The dome houses the main plasma manifold and EPS system, as well as various engineering support systems. Its shape is streamlined for greater warp performance, and the entire unit may be separated from the remainder of the ship in an emergency. The massive twin warp nacelles are mounted securely atop the twin support pylons. They are roughly shaped like truncated squares in cross-section, and taper to their aft ends. Overall warp nacelle unit dimensions are as follows: Length, 247.08 meters, Beam, 17.70 meters; Height, 20.33 meters.


Deck One (A-Deck)

Deck one is a fairly large space extending across the very top of the primary hull spar aft towards the impulse engines. However, the only habitable volume of the deck consists of the main bridge/briefing room area at the front, which is sunken nearly two meters into a protective ring structure. The bridge unit is an interchangeable module designed for swapout at regular refit intervals to facilitate easier control system upgrades. In keeping with Starfleet tradition, the bridge is a circular room lined with various instrument stations necessary for the operation of a modern starship.

The uninhabitable space of Deck One contains numerous systems. The protective ring around the bridge module contains auxiliary battery power and life support systems for emergency use. A bar extending aft from this unit contains the primary high-gain subspace antenna, and is flanked on either side by the uppermost portions of the dorsal sensor platform within raised hull flats. Excelsior is equipped with an extensive suite of all modern sensor modules.

Aft of this at the deck’s rear are the upper housing for the twin deflection crystals that top the intermix chamber and the upper impulse systems, including the radiative cooling unit baffles and fins. When she was originally launched, Excelsior mounted a single, large deflection crystal atop her intermix chamber. The deflection crystal allows warp power to be directly channeled to supplement the impulse system. However, flight tests proved that the large crystal tended to easily overload, so the ship’s 2287 refit and intermix chamber replacement saw the installation of a pair of smaller, more conventional deflection crystals capable of the same workload. These units have proven far more reliable and stable than the previous configuration, although some future Excelsior class ships are expected to retain the single-unit design if current research makes it more workable as is theorized.


Main Bridge

Almost all modern Starfleet ships are equipped with ejectable bridge modules, designed to be easily swappable to extend the operational lifetime of a starship, and doubling as a last-ditch lifeboat for the command crew in the event of a shipwide catastrophic systems failure. According to Starfleet regulations, the bridge module is to only be ejected once all hands have been already ordered to lifeboats. Starfleet does not favor the antiquated notion of 'the captain going down with the ship.' The Excelsior is no exception.

The bridge module originally equipped to the Excelsior at her commissioning in 2284 was quite different from the one installed during the 2287 refit for her operational career, but the two still retain similar Starfleet characteristics. The 2284 bridge module was designed around the operation of the transwarp drive. It did not contain an observation lounge as on the new module, but was still an efficient control space. The room was a perfect circle, with a single turbolift directly aft and a large viewscreen forward, comprising nearly one-third of the room’s wall space, with small secondary exit doors to either side (leading to a surrounding corridor). The remaining wall space was dedicated to control consoles. A “pedestal” in the center of the room mounted (for the first time) separate helm and navigation consoles, with Helm at starboard and navigation at port. The Captain’s chair was directly aft of these consoles.

The Captain’s chair, and indeed all the bridge chairs, was quite unusual and characteristic of Excelsior’s early career. They all mounted large inertial restraint arms that some crew nicknamed “bear arms,” so described because in transwarp flight these massive arms were programmed to automatically grab and securely hold the seat’s occupant. Also for the first time, Starfleet adopted the use of touch-screen “Okudagram” control surfaces, so named after their inventor, Dr. Michael Okuda. These controls were far more sophisticated and versatile than their push-button predecessors, and could be reconfigured for specific needs far more easily. Okudagram interfaces evolved in sophistication quickly and soon became the fleet-wide standard. “Bear arm” chairs, however, heralded the end of physical seating restraints in favor of interwoven gravity cushions and better intertial damper systems. (Indeed, the practical usefulness of seat restraints aboard starships is now felt to be dubious at best.)

The Excelsior’s 2287 refit and transwarp drive removal prompted the replacement of the 2284 bridge module, and Starfleet took the opportunity to equip her with something even more modern and cutting-edge. The new module retained the circular dome-shape for the bridge with Okudagram touch-screens, but is distinctly different from its predecessor. Two turbolift stations serve this bridge, one each at port and starboard. The viewscreen remains virtually unchanged, but is slightly smaller, and gone are the forward corridor access doors.

Stations lining the bridge walls include: engineering support, propulsion, communications, and tactical monitoring at port; three dedicated science statsions and a small master control monitoring station at starboard. The upgraded Captain’s chair and helm and nav consoles retained nearly the same locations on a platform level with the circumferential stations. A small table has been provided in front of the Captain’s chair for his convenience. An alcove at the aft of the bridge houses the new master situation display, a graphic of the ship that allows the Captain to view the ship’s status at a glance over his shoulder. Doors flank the MSD, which allow access to the new briefing room/observation lounge, and an adjacent head for the bridge crew’s use.

Briefing Room/Observation Lounge

The new observation lounge provides an unparalleled view of the aft portion of the ship and the warp nacelles, and was designed to allow the senior staff a more convenient location for mission briefings. It features a long, slightly curved table fitted with computer access systems and chairs for each member of the senior staff. Each end wall is fitted with a fairly sizable viewscreen and data interface for briefing sessions. The inner wall is decorated with art and other personal decorations provided by the Captain. The Captain may also use the room as a ready room if so desired to relax when key situations require his proximity to the bridge.
 
The Excelsior’s space-frame consisted of five integrated main assemblies
shouldn't consisted be in the present tense?

the primary hull (saucer section), interconnecting dorsal “neck,” secondary hull, warp nacelle pylon assembly, and twin warp nacelles (together comprising the engineering section).
The wording implies either the nacelles comprise the engineering section, or all five parts do (including the saucer).

The primary hull, or more commonly known as
delete the or

A bar-like section extending aft
That structure doesn't seem very bar-like to me...

The interconnecting dorsal is one of the components of the “engineering section.”
Previously established above, although ambiguously.

(its very horseshoe-shaped horizontal cross-sections
Horseshoes have a concave edge. The cross-sections don't. :)

it is now primary void space, save the intermix chamber which spans it vertically and related equipment.
I think you need a comma after vertically

It is roughly cigar-shaped in design
in design is redundant

and semi-circular ventral
how about semi-circular vertical cross-section?

It houses [...] the main deflector dish
Remove dish to avoid redundancy (there's only one dish, so of course it's the main one, but there are presumably other deflectors that aren't dishes).

Primarily a hollow structure,
Primarily -> Mostly, unless you wish to convey that its purpose is specifically to be hollow.

the modular Shuttlebay One
What's modular about it?

which the twin nacelles struts extend.
struts is plural, so nacelles should be singular.

the entire unit may be separated from the remainder of the ship in an emergency.
separated -> jettisoned

The bridge unit is an interchangeable module
unit -> complex

Aft of this at the deck’s rear are the upper housing for the twin deflection crystals that top the intermix chamber
Wouldn't the intermix chamber be at the center of the stack, between the matter injector and antimatter injector? :confused:

When she was originally launched, Excelsior mounted a single, large deflection crystal atop her intermix chamber.
mounted -> was equipped with, since the ship wasn't performing the mounting...

if current research makes it more workable as is theorized.
current research -> further research and development?

They all mounted large inertial restraint arms
mounted -> sported

so named after their inventor, Dr. Michael Okuda.
Maybe he was a computer systems analyst at the ASDB?

Two turbolift stations serve this bridge
stations -> tubes?
serve -> service

Stations lining the bridge walls include: engineering support, propulsion, communications, and tactical monitoring at port; three dedicated science statsions and a small master control monitoring station at starboard.
This was probably just a typical or recommended arrangement, instead of a permanent one, given that the Okudagram interfaces could be reconfigured as the captain saw fit.

circumferential stations
circumferential -> perimeter? It sounds better even though the bridge isn't a polygon.
 
mounted -> was equipped with, since the ship wasn't performing the mounting...

While not necessarily preferable for an in-universe document, this is an acceptable usage in our own era, as in "the cruiser mounted eight-inch guns." It may be archaic hundreds of years from now, but who knows?
 
mounted -> was equipped with, since the ship wasn't performing the mounting...

While not necessarily preferable for an in-universe document, this is an acceptable usage in our own era, as in "the cruiser mounted eight-inch guns."
Ok. I wasn't aware of that.

Thanks as usual, kitsune. :)

JNG was right regarding my intention with using 'mounting.' There are a couple of things like this (such as 'turbolift stations') that I purposefully wanted to keep as anachronistic.

Ok, here we go again, plus a little more:
The following was written in 2290 following the Excelsior's operational refit after the failure of the Transwarp Development Project to familiarize new crew and Starfleet brass alike with the new ship. It describes the ship in its original condition as of launch in that year, and compares the ship's initial fittings in 2284 to the equipment later installed for her service career. Appendices follow outlining the evolution of the design in the subsequent years, 'cousins' developed from the class, and a list of noteworthy ships. In her exhibition as part of the Fleet Museum's collection, Excelsior has been cosmetically restored to her 2290 status. This summary is one of several historic documents prepared for display at the Excelsior Exhibit.

Excelsior Class Technical Familiarization Resource


Structural Overview

The Excelsior’s design drew upon the now traditional primary-secondary hull configuration first introduced in the Daedalus class of the late twenty-second century. The Excelsior’s space-frame consists of five integrated main assemblies: the primary hull (saucer section), and the engineering section which consists of the interconnecting dorsal “neck,” secondary hull, warp nacelle pylon assembly, and twin warp nacelles. Each sub-assembly was constructed separately and then assembled in drydock in synchronus Earth orbit. Overall vessel dimensions are as follows: Length, 467.05 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 74.93 meters.

The primary hull, more commonly known as the “saucer section,” houses the main command facilities, including the main and auxiliary bridges and the main computer core, as well as crew accommodations and support facilities including food preparation and laundry systems. It also contains the main dorsal and ventral sensor platforms, and the ten primary phaser banks. A block-like section extending aft along the longitudinal axis of the saucer section also houses the impulse reaction system and upper intermix chamber, which extends downward towards the deflector alcove in the secondary hull. Overall saucer dimensions are as follows: Length, 198.51 meters; Beam, 177.21 meters; Height, 30.71 meters.

The interconnecting dorsal is one of the components of the engineering section. Originally fitted with transwarp field monitoring and refinement equipment (its very horseshoe-shaped horizontal cross-sections defined by warp field dynamics), it is now primary void space, save the intermix chamber which spans it vertically, and related equipment. Auxiliary crew quarters and freight space can be found here, along with inertial damper systems.

The secondary hull itself is the main component of the engineering section. It is roughly cigar-shaped, with a flattened dorsal and semi-circular vertical cross-section. It houses main engineering and the primary warp power systems, including the antimatter storage systems, as well as the deflector dish. Mainly a hollow structure, the secondary hull houses the Main Cargo Storage Facility, the Shuttlebay One module, Shuttlebay Two (at the aft fantail of the dorsal plane), and the four torpedo tubes (two fore, two aft.) Overall secondary hull dimensions are as follows: Length, 271.79 meters; Beam, 58.76 meters; Height, 43.93 meters.

The warp nacelle pylon assembly is composed of an elliptical dome from which the twin nacelle struts extend. The dome houses the main plasma manifold and EPS system, as well as various engineering support systems. Its shape is streamlined for greater warp performance, and the entire unit may be jettisoned from the remainder of the ship in an emergency. The massive twin warp nacelles are mounted securely atop the twin support pylons. They are roughly shaped like truncated squares in cross-section, and taper to their aft ends. Overall warp nacelle unit dimensions are as follows: Length, 247.08 meters, Beam, 17.70 meters; Height, 20.33 meters.


Deck One (A-Deck)

Deck one is a fairly large space extending across the very top of the primary hull spar aft towards the impulse engines. However, the only habitable volume of the deck consists of the main bridge/briefing room area at the front, which is sunken nearly two meters into a protective ring structure. The bridge is an interchangeable module designed for swapout at regular refit intervals to facilitate easier control system upgrades. In keeping with Starfleet tradition, the bridge is a circular room lined with various instrument stations necessary for the operation of a modern starship.

The uninhabitable space of Deck One contains numerous systems. The protective ring around the bridge module contains auxiliary battery power and life support systems for emergency use. A bar extending aft from this unit contains the primary high-gain subspace antenna, and is flanked on either side by the uppermost portions of the dorsal sensor platform within raised hull flats. Excelsior is equipped with an extensive suite of all modern sensor modules.

Aft of this at the deck’s rear are the upper housing for the twin deflection crystals that top the intermix chamber and the upper impulse systems, including the radiative cooling unit baffles and fins. When she was originally launched, Excelsior mounted a single, large deflection crystal atop her intermix chamber. The deflection crystal allows warp power to be directly channeled to supplement the impulse system. However, flight tests proved that the large crystal tended to easily overload, so the ship’s 2287 refit and warp core replacement saw the installation of a pair of smaller, more conventional deflection crystals capable of the same workload. These units have proven far more reliable and stable than the previous configuration, although some future Excelsior class ships are expected to retain the single-unit design if further research makes it workable as is theorized.


Main Bridge

Almost all modern Starfleet ships are equipped with ejectable bridge modules, designed to be easily swappable to extend the operational lifetime of a starship, and doubling as a last-ditch lifeboat for the command crew in the event of a shipwide catastrophic systems failure. According to Starfleet regulations, the bridge module is to only be ejected once all hands have been already ordered to lifeboats. Starfleet does not favor the antiquated notion of 'the captain going down with the ship.' The Excelsior is no exception.

The bridge module originally equipped to the Excelsior at her commissioning in 2284 was quite different from the one installed during the 2287 refit for her operational career, but the two still retain similar Starfleet characteristics. The 2284 bridge module was designed around the operation of the transwarp drive. It did not contain an observation lounge as on the new module, but was still an efficient control space. The room was a perfect circle, with a single turbolift directly aft and a large viewscreen forward, comprising nearly one-third of the room’s wall space, with small secondary exit doors to either side (leading to a surrounding corridor). The remaining wall space was dedicated to control consoles. A “pedestal” in the center of the room mounted (for the first time) separate helm and navigation consoles, with Helm at starboard and navigation at port. The Captain’s chair was directly aft of these consoles.

The Captain’s chair, and indeed all the bridge chairs, was quite unusual and characteristic of Excelsior’s early career. They all sported large inertial restraint arms that some crew nicknamed “bear arms,” so described because in transwarp flight these massive arms were programmed to automatically grab and securely hold the seat’s occupant. Also for the first time, Starfleet adopted the use of touch-screen “Okudagram” control surfaces, so named after their inventor, Dr. Michael Okuda, a computer systems analyst at the ASDB. These controls were far more sophisticated and versatile than their push-button predecessors, and could be reconfigured for specific needs far more easily. Okudagram interfaces evolved in sophistication quickly and soon became the fleet-wide standard. “Bear arm” chairs, however, heralded the end of physical seating restraints in favor of interwoven gravity cushions and better intertial damper systems. (Indeed, the practical usefulness of seat restraints aboard starships is now felt to be dubious at best.)

The Excelsior’s 2287 refit and transwarp drive removal prompted the replacement of the 2284 bridge module, and Starfleet took the opportunity to equip her with something even more modern and cutting-edge. The new module retained the circular dome-shape for the bridge with Okudagram touch-screens, but is distinctly different from its predecessor. Two turbolift stations service this bridge, one each at port and starboard. The viewscreen remains virtually unchanged, but is slightly smaller, and gone are the forward corridor access doors.

Standard configuration for the stations lining the bridge walls include: engineering support, propulsion, communications, and tactical monitoring at port; three dedicated science statsions and a small master control monitoring station at starboard. The upgraded Captain’s chair and helm and nav consoles retained nearly the same locations on a platform level with the perimeter stations. A small table has been provided in front of the Captain’s chair for his convenience. An alcove at the aft of the bridge houses the new master situation display, a graphic of the ship that allows the Captain to view the ship’s status at a glance over his shoulder. Doors flank the MSD, which allow access to the new briefing room/observation lounge, and an adjacent head for the bridge crew’s use.


Briefing Room/Observation Lounge

The new observation lounge provides an unparalleled view of the aft portion of the ship and the warp nacelles, and was designed to allow the senior staff a more convenient location for mission briefings. It features a long, slightly curved table fitted with computer access systems and chairs for each member of the senior staff. Each end wall is fitted with a fairly sizable viewscreen and data interface for briefing sessions. The inner wall is decorated with art and other personal decorations provided by the Captain. The Captain may also use the room as a ready room if so desired to relax when key situations require his proximity to the bridge.


Deck Two (B Deck)

Deck two is an almost fully habitable deck that forms the uppermost part of the primary hull dorsal spar. It features the centrally located top of the main computer data transfer trunk, where it mates with the bottom of the bridge module. The trunk spans the space from the main processors on deck seven up to the bottom of the bridge module at the top of deck two, facilitating rapid data transfer to key command areas in the saucer. Additional data transfer conduits branch from the central trunk like branches of a tree, eventually stepping down to transfer conduits mere millimeters in diameter where they meet control interfaces. The ship’s fourteen science labs are located on this deck, adjoining the computer core trunk, where they are directly fed data by the dorsal sensor platform above. In addition, quarters for VIPs such as diplomats and admirals are found on this level. In a small uninhabitable section at the front of this deck are additional sensor modules for the dorsal sensor platform, with related systems.

Aft, the main stairwell top is found. The stairwell provides easy access to the ship’s main decks in the event of an emergency. Further aft is the lower deflection crystal housing, with a dedicated monitoring room. The crystals shed brilliant patterns of light across the room’s bulkheads as they surge with raw power, just atop the warp intermix chamber. Aft of this is the upper part of the multi-level impulse reaction system, including the upper parts of the fusion reactors and coolings systems, and the twin engine assemblies and exhaust units.


VIP Quarters

These quarters provide accommodation for visiting officers, ambassadors and their wives or husbands, and Federation government officials, among others. Each stateroom is composed of two areas that are separated by a retractable partition. The room's entrance opens into the sleeping area, which is generally outfitted with two twin beds. A translucent door leads into the bathroom area, which features both a sonic shower and a jacuzzi tub, as well as an adjacent clothes closet.

The other half of the stateroom is a work and living area. A library computer and work desk are provided for guest use, for which instructions are provided. A circular dining booth is provided for guests who prefer to eat alone or work privately during their meal. A viewscreen station stands against one wall. Here, guests may contact their home worlds by subspace radio, if necessary, or may simply choose from thousands of entertainment files from the ship's computers for viewing. A small storage closet is provided for those with luggage or small personal cargo which cannot be stored in the cargo decks. Personal items may be stored on a bookshelf above the beds, or in a set of roll-top cabinets in the living area wall. A food slot is also provided for guest convenience.


Impulse Reaction Systems

Impulse engines are the main form of propulsion at sublight speeds aboard a starship; they are used for travel within a solar system or areas of space where warp drive can not function. The engine is a basic fusion system with vectored exhaust, not unlike a solid propellant rocket of the past. The standard speed for impulse power is .25c, but engines can propel a ship into the .8c range at the cost of time dilation effects.

Impulse engines have changed little since their inception over 100 years ago. The impulse engines found on Excelsior are made up of three main parts, and are the largest ever constructed. First is the impulse reaction chamber, where deuterium slush is fed in and a fusion reaction takes place. Excelsior has ten fusion reactors, five per engine. Each of these units can be ejected in an emergency. The plasma created by the fusion process is then fed into the second stage of the impulse engine, the accelerator/generator. During space flight mode the plasma is accelerated by the second stage and passed onto the third stage. The A/G can also use part of the impulse engines power to supply ships systems by feeding the plasma into the ships EPS lines. The engines are able to drive the ship and provide power simultaneously if needed. Conversely, warp power from the intermix chamber can be channeled through the deflection crystals into the impulse engines to provide power for them. The final stage of the impulse engine is the vectored exhaust director. This stage directs the flow of the impulse engine exhaust to allow free movement of the ship on any axis.

Traveling at high impulse speed, greater then .25c, has a price. Since it is non-warp speed, general relativity still applies. As impulse speed increases past .75c, time slows down aboard the ship and passes faster in the rest of the universe. Starfleet regulations specify the avoidance of high impulse velocity except in extreme circumstances. Current research into mass-reduction impulse systems could one day provide a means of reducing these relativistic effects, but true breakthroughs in the area are likely fifty years or more away.
 
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OK, the last paragraph. If they traveled at high impulse, from the crew's point of view (due to time dilation) they would have less time to prepare. Also, the time required to intercept using impulse as opposed to the faster warpdrive would, from the rest of the universe's standpoint, be longer. Hence V'ger would be closer to earth. So how is it in anyway an advantage for them to intercept slower AND have less time to prepare?
 
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The Excelsior’s design drew upon the now traditional
insert a hyphen: now-traditional

Each sub-assembly was constructed separately and then assembled in drydock
assembled -> mated ? It sounds funny to have "assembl*" twice in the same sentence. Also, mated seems to be the more appropriate term here.

A block-like section extending aft


It is roughly cigar-shaped
Hmm. Maybe cylindrical would be better here. Smoking implements don't seem very common in the 23rd and 24th centuries, with the exception of Data's pipe...

Mainly a hollow structure,
Sorry. I retract Mainly and suggest A mostly-hollow structure,

the entire unit may be jettisoned from the remainder of the ship in an emergency.
Hopefully it can be jettisoned upward fast enough that it won't ram the saucer section. :)

Excelsior is equipped with an extensive suite of all modern sensor modules.
modules -> palettes?

flight tests proved that the large crystal tended to easily overload
flight tests indicated that a single large crystal was prone to develop[ing] potentially dangerous [micro-]fractures under high load

designed to be easily swappable
easily replaced


these massive arms were programmed to automatically grab and securely hold the seat’s occupant
In Star Trek III, didn't the occupants manually position the arms?

three dedicated science statsions
stations

A small table has been provided
was installed

This may have been due to Sulu's personal request, too. After all, he likes to sip tea on the bridge... I doubt it appeared on all the Excelsior bridges.

The Captain may also use the room as a ready room if so desired to relax when key situations require his proximity to the bridge.
I'd remove key

It features the centrally located
centrally-located

Aft, the main stairwell top is found.
The top of the main stairwell is located aft.

The stairwell provides easy access to the ship’s main decks in the event of an emergency.
The stairwell provides auxiliary access to all the ship's decks in the event of a turbolift system failure or emergency evacuation.

ambassadors and their wives or husbands
ambassadors and their spouses

The A/G can also use part of the impulse engines power
engines'

into the ships EPS lines.
ship's

Since it is non-warp speed
sub-warp

In one such instance in 2273, the Starship Enterprise used this to its advantage, allowing time in the regular universe to pass faster to enable it to intercept the V'Ger intruder quickly.
:confused:
 
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