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Repetitious phrases

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Not sure whether or not I use repetitious phrases, but I do have a few favorite words ("myriad" is one of them) that I use often enough to make *myself* step back and go "D'oh - again with the 'myriad'?" ;)
 
Or in the form of those "inspirations words" calendars.

e.g. SYGIAN, the picture would be a large black square.

Caption, anyone?

--Ted
stygian2.jpg


davidh
 
I'm doing copyedits for Over a Torrent Sea right now, and I'm struggling to resist the temptation to insert a few stygians here and there...

No, wait... not that hard to resist after all.
 
I'm so tempted to put Stygian in what I'm writing now, but so far there's nothing that dark in it. Maybe they should throw a contest up in the fan fic section to see who can use the word Stygian the most times in a story and make it all fit.
 
The landing party materialized in the cavern. "Is it dark in here, or is it just me?"

"Dark? Jim, it's positively Stygian in here!"

Spock sighed. "I find, Doctor, that you use that word overmuch."

"If it's light you're after, I have a flashlight," Scotty proffered. "'Tis enough; 'twould serve."

All hell broke loose.
 
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Getting back to the original topic... I find that my characters sigh an awful lot. I sometimes wonder if I'm overusing that.
 
At least it's better than Dean Wesley Smith's characters, who always "laughed".

Nothing wrong with laughing, I guess. Except when it's just that: "Jim laughed." "Dr. McCoy laughed." "The woman laughed." "The man laughed."

After the seventh time, I was just crying for something like "Scotty belched out a wave of deep, grumbling laughter that would have stood a good chance of toppling Klingon warriors, had they been as inebriated as the engineer" or "Kirk let slip a girlish little giggle" or "Spock burst into an uncontrollable fit of laughter that made his eyebrows jump up and down".

Or "Uhura laughed at his face in a way that could only be described as Stygian."

I mean, it's not as if writers are fined for every adjective they use, is it?

(Is it?)

Timo Saloniemi
 
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