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Star Trek Edison Episode One:A Muddled Reawakening

Kudos to the klingon diplomats for being actually more diplomatic than a Star Fleet officer. Commander Zoa-sh was right on the edge of insubordination. Got a Gorn attack coming out of nowhere... I'm sure Star Fleet will be pursuing some context for that. Nice to see the updated K-7. Thanks!! rbs
Had to make the Klarr the voice of reason with the angered Zoa-sh, she's a tellarite. Zoa-sh did callout the nepotism right into the Adm. face. Hope I did Worf and K'Ehleyr characters justice in this chapter.

I'm glad you liked K-7. I made a homage towards the original K-7. Nilz Baris would be happy about Sherman Planet thriving. There's some easter eggs in chapter too.
 
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I would like to praise the writing. Your character building is excellent. In just one post, you captured the essence of each character perfectly.

Great scene. Background, diplomacy, military strategy, personal interactions, and an intense enemy attack. Score one for Tribble Station.

-Will
 
I would like to praise the writing. Your character building is excellent. In just one post, you captured the essence of each character perfectly.

Great scene. Background, diplomacy, military strategy, personal interactions, and an intense enemy attack. Score one for Tribble Station.

-Will
Did I get the canon personality of Worf and K'Ehleyr right?
 
All ratcheting up nicely. Always reassuring if our hero captain has the respect of the Kiingons. :klingon:

And after the inevitable Miranda-class death :weep:, nice to see one that can hold its own! Nice easter egg-ish ship name as well.
Klingon's are fun to write. It also fun to show that some Klingons can be calm and wise.
The Gabriel Bell did have backup from the Klingons.
 
Klingon wisdom
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Vs Barbarian wisdom.
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-Will
 
I'm caught up! My reactions in order of appearance: Love the Space Cthulhu and interdimensional elder gods, lol. Grace's "And it will pay" almost gave me Picard "I will make them pay" vibes. And, Worf! His connection to K-7 goes deeper than covering for ridgeless Klingons. :klingon:
 
Stardate 38702.72 (September 14, 2361)

USS Edison-Bridge-On Route to the Delphi System


The hum of the USS Edison's engines vibrated through the deck plates, a deep, resonant thrum that spoke of incredible velocity. Despite the double red alert, the bridge lights were deliberately subdued, casting long, ominous shadows across the consoles and the faces of the crew. The crimson glow was a controlled burn, a simmering tension rather than a blatant alarm. The ship plunged through the void at maximum warp, a sleek spear aimed directly for the Delphi system, a place now synonymous with catastrophic annihilation. The klaxons, usually a piercing shriek, were dialed down to a low, guttural moan – a constant, throbbing reminder of the danger, felt more than heard.

From the command chair, Captain Grace McCallister stared out at the streak of stars, her face etched with a weariness that went beyond the mission. Days had blurred since the news of the Samson’s destruction, and with it, the loss of her friend, Lara Kanisky. The grief was a dull ache beneath her ribs, a constant reminder of the fragile line between life and oblivion. She gripped the arms of her chair, knuckles white, trying to rein in the sorrow that threatened to overwhelm her.

Behind her, at the science station, Ensign Claire McCallister leaned close to the console in concentration. Her fingers danced across the translucent control surface, manipulating subtle energy fields to fine-tune the sensor arrays while assisting Lieutenant Commander Tai’Anna with the latest updates on the Delphi system. Claire, a prodigy fresh out of the Academy, possessed a mind that saw patterns and correlations others often missed. Yet, she presented her findings with a quiet, almost hesitant humility, as if always questioning her own brilliance.

“The energy signature remains anomalous, Lieutenant Commander,” Claire reported, her voice soft but clear. “The spectral analysis is… inconsistent with any known phenomenon.”

Tai’Anna, a Vulcan of impeccable stoicism, offered only a curt nod. Her usual reserved demeanor had taken on a new, unsettling deadpan quality since the Edison had neared the affected zone, a subtle shift that sent a prickle of unease up Grace’s spine. The influence of the mystery object, Grace knew, was already seeping into the crew, twisting emotions, amplifying fears. Tai’Anna had been keeping Chief Science Officer Fester Drak updated in sickbay, ever since the Bolian had been moved from quarantine after his bout with that rare variant of influenza. Tai’Anna, for all her Vulcan logic, had, surprisingly, gone along with Claire’s Lovecraftian theory for now – a concept Claire had first proposed in sickbay to the fascination of Commander Drak, a notion that had since spread like wildfire through the ship, feeding the growing nervousness.

“Cross-referencing with subspace anomalies recorded near Zeta Reticuli IV prior to its destruction,” Tai’Anna stated, her voice devoid of inflection. “No comparable data entries.”

A few stations over, at Operations, Commander Kathryn Janeway monitored sensor readings, her gaze sharp and intelligent. She had been aboard the Edison for only a short time, still finding her footing as Chief of Operations, but she moved with an innate authority that Claire found undeniably captivating.

Beside her, Ensign Chell Zh’Nann, a young Ktarian, fidgeted, her ears twitching nervously. Kathryn’s hand rested briefly on Chell’s shoulder, a reassuring gesture, as she offered quiet instruction.

Kathryn's and Claire's eyes met across the bridge, the blue of Kathryn's piercing, holding Claire's gaze for a beat longer than necessary. A spark seemed to jump between them, unspoken but undeniably present. Claire offered a small, knowing smile, her lips curving slightly, echoing the warmth she felt radiating from Kathryn. It was a private moment, shared only between them, and it hinted at a connection far deeper than friendship. Grace, her hand resting lightly on her command chair armrest, was aware of the shared glances, a small, private comfort amidst the mounting anxieties.

Commander Icid Gaihia, the Edison’s First Officer, a Bajoran woman with a commanding presence, stood to Grace’s right. Her expression was grave. “Captain, Commander Hamil has new intel regarding the Samson.”

“On screen, Wes,” Grace ordered, her voice tight.

Commander Wes Hamil, the Senior Intel Officer, nodded sharply from his station. “Captain, updated intelligence reports confirm the USS Samson, NCC-77002, Miranda-Class, was originally en route to the Antares Nebula for a routine survey after the 82nd Marine Expeditionary Force and the 82nd Vindicator Squadron broke away and set course for the Setlik system near the Cardassian border. However, Starfleet Command diverted her to a Priority One investigation into the destruction of Zeta Reticuli IV. Contact was lost shortly thereafter.”

Icid stepped forward, her gaze firm on Wes. “Commander, you neglected to mention that the Samson was well within the established dead zone of Zeta Reticuli IV when contact ceased. Her last telemetry reports placed her less than a light-hour from the system’s primary star.”

Wes’s eyes widened slightly, a flicker of his usual witty impulsiveness doused by the gravity of Icid’s correction. “Right, Commander. Valid point. The… the data pointed to an instantaneous, catastrophic event.” He swallowed hard, the seriousness of the situation overriding his typical bravado.

“Captain, incoming priority one transmission,” Lieutenant Commander Thess V’Nonntek announced from Tactical, his Andorian antennae inclining slightly. “Distress call, very weak, from the Balkos system. Federation starship identification codes.”

Grace’s head snapped up. She recognized the name. Sabe Murleen. Commander Hamill knew her too well – a past encounter involving a punched eye. Grace felt a surge of relief so profound it nearly buckled her knees. Admiral Nechayev herself had ordered them temporarily reassigned to the Edison if they were found. “On screen, Mr. Thess. Hail them.”

The main viewscreen flickered, resolving into a heavily distorted image. Static hissed, but through it, a human face emerged, grim and streaked with what appeared to be grime. It was Commander Sabe Murleen, the flight leader of the 82nd Vindicator Fighter Attack Squadron. Relief washed over Grace, so potent it made her knees weak. They were alive. It had been reported that all hands from the squadron and the marines were lost.

“Edison, this is Commander Sabe Murleen, 82nd Vindicator Squadron,” Sabe’s voice crackled, hoarse with strain. “We’ve been adrift for almost a week. Our main systems are offline, impulse engines barely holding. We need immediate assistance.”

“Commander Murleen, this is Captain Grace McCallister,” Grace responded, her voice thick with emotion. “We’re en route at maximum warp. What is your status? We received reports of the Samson’s destruction. Can you confirm?”

Sabe’s eyes tightened, a flicker of pain crossing her face. “Captain, we were far from the Samson when it happened. Our squadron was escorting the 82nd Marines to the Setlik system, per Admiral Nechayev’s orders. We felt it, though. A massive subspace shockwave. Knocked us out of warp near Balkos. Everything went dead. Systems fried. We didn’t see the Samson directly. But we know. We felt it.” Her voice dropped, a raw edge entering it. “And then… the object. It found us.”

A chill permeated the bridge, colder than the vacuum outside. Claire’s eyes met Grace’s, a look of shared, unspoken understanding passing between them. Grace remembered the quiet, tearful conversation in the turbolift days ago, when she had broken down, recounting her history with Lara Kanisky, from their early days serving together on the Enterprise-C under Captain Rachel Garrett. The memory twisted in Grace’s gut.

“The object?” Grace prompted, her voice barely a whisper.

“It… it pulsed,” Sabe continued, her gaze distant, as if reliving the horror. “A psychic shockwave, Captain. It amplifies your worst fears. It makes you relive them. Our pilots, the marines… it was absolute chaos. Miraculously, our flight systems recovered enough to limp away, but we’re badly damaged. Lieutenant Commander Zh’kirron, the Marine CMDCM, and I managed to keep the survivors together. We have one hundred marines and ten operational fighters left.”

Grace closed her eyes, a single tear tracing a path down her cheek. Lara. Not just gone, but likely subjected to some unimaginable torment in her final moments. The thought sent a fresh wave of agony through her. She suppressed a sob, forcing herself to maintain her composure.

“Understood, Commander,” Grace managed, her voice cracking slightly. “Admiral Nechayev has already issued orders. You and your surviving forces are hereby temporarily reassigned to the Edison. We’ve cleared unused cargo bays for barracks for your marines, and a shuttle bay for your squadron.”

“Thank you, Captain,” Sabe replied, a hint of genuine relief in her voice. “We’ll await your arrival.” The screen flickered, then went dark.

A heavy silence descended on the bridge, broken only by the ship’s thrum. The implications of Sabe’s words hung in the air: the object didn’t just destroy; it terrorized. And it was heading their way.

“Tai’Anna, your thoughts on Commander Murleen’s report?” Grace asked, turning her chair slightly.

Tai’Anna’s expression remained unreadable, but a subtle tension in her posture betrayed her. “The amplification of fear suggests a directed psychic or psionic field, Captain. Consistent with Ensign McCallister’s Lovecraftian hypothesis, though lacking empirical data beyond anecdotal evidence.”

Claire, sensing an opening, offered, “Captain, if the object operates on a psionic level, it could explain the complete system failures. A focused psychic pulse could disrupt subatomic particles, creating localized entropy fields, scrambling conventional energy grids. It’s a terrifyingly elegant weapon, if it were designed, or a natural, terrifying side effect if it were… alive.”

Tai’Anna’s head snapped towards Claire. Her eyes, usually calm and deep, held a sudden, burning intensity. “Ensign, your penchant for speculative leaps is… unhelpful. While your hypothesis may currently align with the limited data, suggesting ‘life’ for an entity capable of such destruction is illogical and emotionally driven conjecture. Stick to the quantifiable.” Her voice, normally a smooth monotone, carried a sharp, almost angry edge.

The outburst was so sudden, so out of character for the Vulcan, that the bridge crew froze. Grace’s eyes widened, recognizing the object’s subtle, insidious influence. Across the bridge, Dr. Andrea Dehner, the ship’s counselor, stiffened, her gaze sweeping over Tai’Anna with professional concern.

“Lieutenant Commander,” Grace interjected, her voice firm but not harsh. “Your assessment is noted. However, Ensign McCallister’s extrapolations, while speculative, have proven to be… directionally sound in our preliminary discussions.” She paused, her gaze resting pointedly on Tai’Anna. “And your tone is unprofessional, Lieutenant Commander. Perhaps you could take a moment to… recompose yourself.”

Tai’Anna’s rigid posture softened fractionally, her eyes regaining a semblance of their usual calm. “My apologies, Captain. My… frustration stemmed from the lack of concrete data.” Her Vulcan control reasserted itself, but the brief crack in her facade was a stark warning.

Dr. Dehner stepped forward, her calm voice cutting through the remaining tension. “Captain, with Commander Murleen’s report, we have further evidence of the object’s insidious nature. It appears to feed on and amplify negative emotions, particularly fear. We should consider implementing a ship-wide stress-management protocol immediately.”

Grace nodded grimly. “Agreed, Doctor. Begin preparations for ship-wide counseling sessions. And Commander Janeway, I want a full diagnostic on all psychological filters in our comms systems. If this object can project fear, we need to know if it can bypass our regular protocols.”

Kathryn Janeway’s expression was grave. “Aye, Captain. I’ll get on it immediately.” She turned to Chell. “Ensign, begin logging diagnostics on comms relays, specifically looking for psionic interference patterns.”

Chell nodded, still a little wide-eyed from Tai’Anna’s outburst. “Y-yes, Commander.”

“Lieutenant Blodgett,” Grace’s voice rang out, steadying now, though a tremor lingered beneath the surface, “plot a course for the Balkos System. Immediately. Maximum warp.

“Aye, Captain,” Denise Blodgett responded from flight control, her tone crisp and professional, even as a faint shadow of apprehension crossed her rational face.

"Commander Icid, prepare shuttlecraft for immediate deployment upon arrival. Have Doc Greer to put Medical teams on standby for mass casualty assessment.”

“Aye, Captain,” Commander Icid responded.

As the Edison adjusted its course, its mission in the Delphi System and it’s investigation of the destruction of Zeta Reticuli IV was now temporarily on hold.

Grace took a shaky breath, her jaw tightening as her hand instinctively reached to pat her beagle Archer’s head, then paused. This wasn’t just a rescue; it was an understanding, a battle for their very sanity. Sabe’s warning echoed in her ears: the object's creeping influence was already palpable on the bridge, in Tai’Anna’s behavior, in Chell’s increased stutter, even in the subtle undercurrent of anxiety that permeated the air, preying on their deepest anxieties. Leaning back in her chair, Grace felt the sorrow for Lara and the fear for her crew intertwine – they were heading towards a monster that didn’t just destroy ships, but devoured minds, and it was already among them, a slow poison corrupting even the most disciplined.



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Stardate 38708.11 (September 16, 2361)


USS Edison-Bridge-Arriving at the Balkos System



The USS Edison screamed through the vacuum of space, her hull plates groaning under the stress of a speed that tested every bolt and circuit. On the bridge, the usual hum of efficiency had been replaced by a jagged, discordant vibration. It wasn’t just the engines. It was the air itself—thick, cold, and tasting faintly of ozone and old, forgotten earth.


Captain Grace McCallister sat rigid in her command chair, her knuckles white as she gripped the armrests. Beside her, Admiral Alynna Nechayev stood like a statue of ice, her gaze fixed on the main viewscreen.


"Dropping to impulse," Lieutenant Denise Blodgett announced, her voice strained. Her hands danced over the flight console with a frantic energy that bordered on the erratic.


The starfield snapped from the blur of warp into the chaotic reality of the Balkos system. It was a graveyard. Debris from Federation Vindicator fighters and shattered marine transports drifted in the void, illuminated by the sickly, pulsing violet light of the Object—a massive, jagged shard of obsidian-like matter that seemed to drink the light around it.


"Shields up! Full tactical spread!" Icid Gaihia’s voice was a whip-crack, but as she stood from her seat, she stumbled. Her hand went to her head, her Bajoran nose-ridges twitching.


"Commander?" Grace asked, looking at her XO.


Icid didn’t answer. For a second, her dark eyes weren't seeing the bridge. She was back in 2330. She could smell the acrid smoke of the Cardassian torches. She saw her sister, Sito Ihea, pulling her through the mud of the Kendra Province while the sky screamed with orbital fire. She felt the ghost-weight of her brother-in-law, Keral, his blood warm on her hands as they dragged him toward the last transport.


"Icid!" Grace’s voice broke the vision.


Icid blinked, sweating. "I’m... fine, Captain. Sensors are fluctuating. The Object is emitting a low-frequency subspace pulse. It’s... it’s heavy."


"We have survivors," Kathryn Janeway reported from the Ops station. Her brow was furrowed, her focus razor-sharp despite the oppressive atmosphere. "A single Vindicator. I’m locking onto their patterns now."


"Bring them straight to the bridge if they can walk," Nechayev commanded. "I want a firsthand report on why our fleet is in pieces."


The transporter beam hummed, depositing a lone figure onto the bridge. Flight Leader Sabe Murleen collapsed to one knee, her flight suit scorched.


"It wasn't a fight," Sabe rasped, her voice trembling. "Our systems didn't just fail—they betrayed us. The computers started screaming. Not code. Voices. Reliving... things we’d buried."


Wes Hamil, the Senior Intel Officer, walked toward them, but his usual cocky gait was gone. He looked at Sabe, his gaze lingering on her face with a strange, venomous intensity. He reached up, rubbing a phantom bruise on his eye—a souvenir from a punch Sabe had landed a year ago.


"Maybe you just couldn't handle the stick, Murleen," Wes said, his voice dripping with an uncharacteristic, oily malice. "Always were a bit too high-strung for the cockpit, weren't you? Failed under pressure. Let your squadron die."


Sabe looked up, her eyes wide. "Wes? What are you—"


"Quiet," Wes snapped, stepping closer, his face inches from hers. "You’re a failure. A beautiful, reckless failure."


"Wes, that’s enough!" Janeway snapped from Ops, her eyes flashing with a protective fire.


But the darkness was spreading. It was a slow-acting poison, leaching into their memories. A scream tore through the room.


It came from Trena Saperstein. The Yeoman was huddled near the Captain’s chair, her hands clawing at her own arms. "Get them off! Captain, make them stop!"


"Trena, what is it?" Grace moved to help her, but Trena recoiled, rocking back and forth.


"The rats! The spiders! They’re under the floorboards, crawling up the bulkheads!" Trena shrieked, her eyes fixed on the pristine carpet of the bridge. "They’re biting! They’re biting!"


On the viewscreen, the marine transport carrying Sera Zh’kirron and the remnants of the ground forces attempted to bank toward the Edison.


"Sera, get in here!" Thess shouted, his hands flying across the tactical board. "I’m lowering the shields on Bay 2!"


Suddenly, the obsidian object pulsed. A bolt of violet-black lightning arched across the vacuum. It didn't just strike the transport; it unmade it. One moment the ship was there, and the next, it was a fireball of expanding gas and screaming metal.


"NO!" Thess screamed. The Andorian fell back against his console, watching the sensor ghost of his friend vanish. "SERA!"


Thess lunged at the tactical console, his antennae flat against his head. "I’ll kill it! I’ll burn that thing to ash!"


"Thess, maintain discipline!" Icid shouted, but her own voice was cracking. She was seeing the colony in 2352 now. The birth of her niece, Sito Jaxa. The smell of the hospital, the fear that the child wouldn't breathe... It was all bleeding together.


The bridge was descending into madness.


"Captain," Ensign Claire McCallister whispered, her voice the only one that remained somewhat steady, though she was pale. She was hovering over the science station. "It’s not just a weapon. It’s an influence. It’s... it’s Lovecraftian, Mom. It’s reaching into the brain, peeling back the layers of the psyche."


Suddenly, Tai’Anna, the Vulcan Assistant Science Officer, stood up. Her movements were jerky, unnatural. She turned to Claire, her face a mask of fractured logic.


"Your hypothesis is illogical," Tai’Anna hissed. "You are a child. A nepotistic stain on this vessel. You do not belong at this station."


"Tai’Anna, you’re suffering from the same influence as the others," Claire said, trying to keep her voice soft. "We need to focus on the—"


CRACK.


Tai’Anna’s hand whipped across Claire’s face, a sharp, stinging slap that echoed through the bridge.


Claire stumbled back, her hand to her cheek. In a heartbeat, Janeway was there, shoving herself between the Vulcan and Claire, her phaser drawn and set to stun.


"Touch her again and I will put you on the floor, Commander," Janeway growled, her voice a low, dangerous vibration.


"Enough!" Grace shouted, the command voice of a Captain finally cutting through the fog. "Mekada! Escort Tai’Anna to the brig. Now!"


The demonic-looking Lieutenant Mekada Sheme stepped forward, her yellow eyes glowing with a feral light. She didn’t just escort Tai’Anna; she grabbed the Vulcan by the arm with enough force to bruise, dragging her toward the turbolift with a visible, terrifying hunger for violence.


"Claire, take the Science station," Grace ordered, her voice trembling. She turned back to the viewscreen, but the image was flickering.


Grace felt the world tilting. The bridge of the Edison faded, replaced by the dark wood of her father’s office. Admiral Marcus Wyatt was standing there, his face a mask of pity.


“Grace, I’m sorry,” her father’s voice echoed in her head. “The Zaxxon... she’s gone. Two Cardassian raiders caught them near Amizor. There’s no debris. Dracus... he’s gone.”


"He’s not gone," Grace whispered to the empty air of the bridge. "He’s out there. The Cardassians... they took him. They took everything." Her eyes filled with a sudden, blinding hatred. "I’ll kill every last one of them. I’ll burn the Union to the ground."


"Captain?" Andrea Dhener, the ship’s counselor, walked toward her, her hands outstretched. Andrea’s face was wet with tears. "Grace, look at me. It’s the Object. It’s showing us our ghosts."


But Andrea’s own shield was failing. As she touched Grace’s arm, Andrea’s eyes rolled back. She saw the purple atmosphere of Delta Vega. She saw her ancestor, Elizabeth Dehner, her eyes glowing silver, her body breaking under the power of the Galactic Barrier.


"No!" Andrea screamed, falling to her knees. "I don't want to be a god! Please, let me die human!"


The Edison rocked violently.


"Damage report!" Grace yelled, shaking off the vision of her lost husband.


"Engineering is reporting a massive surge!" Blix’s voice came over the comms. "Captain, the warp core is singing! It’s not the engines, it’s the Object! It’s... it’s rewriting the laws of physics in the nacelles!"


Commander Fester Drak’s voice broke through from Sickbay. "Captain... McCallister... listen to me. It’s not just affecting us. It’s collecting us. Our fear, our history, our hatred... it’s using our neural pathways as a blueprint. It’s learning how we think. It’s learning how we hurt."


The bridge fell into a momentary, terrifying silence.


Claire looked up from her console, her face illuminated by the sickly violet light. Janeway moved to her side, placing a hand on the small of her back. For a second, the two of them shared a look—a quiet, desperate resolve. Janeway leaned in, her lips brushing Claire’s cheek in a brief, defiant moment of humanity against the dark.


"Whatever happens," Janeway whispered.


"I know," Claire replied.


"Captain," Claire’s voice was suddenly loud and clear. "The Object... it’s shifting. The gravitational wake is changing. It’s... it’s moving."


Grace stood up, smoothing her uniform, forcing the image of Dracus back into the dark corners of her mind. "Course?"


"It’s accelerating," Claire said, her hands flying over the controls. "It’s ignoring the gravity wells of the inner planets. It’s heading for the sector border."


Nechayev stepped forward, her eyes narrowing. "Where is it going, Ensign?"


Claire looked at the display, her face going pale. "Captain..." Claire said, her voice barely a whisper. "It’s heading for Risa."


Grace felt the deck drop away beneath her feet. Risa. The playground of the Federation. A world with no defenses. If that thing reached the pleasure planet, it wouldn't just be a massacre. It would be a psychological extinction.


"It’s going to turn paradise into a nightmare," Grace whispered.


The Edison turned, a lone spark of white light chasing a shadow into the deep dark of the frontier.
 
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