I rewatched the 4K... amazing how seeing it in theater three times when it came out didn't have so many issues popping out, save for "Oh look, there's a TNG set! And another! And another one! And another one! Surely they didn't rebuild the Engineering room from scratch!" (Sheesh, ST5 had more of an Engineering set, showing almost everything - except a warp code. Bits of the original prop was reused for Voyager, so why not reuse STV's + TMP's?
Heck, even STV uses the same alarm klaxon as TMP had, in a long overdue and much appreciated moment of continuity as TMP in 1979 got the new red alert noise down perfectly. (then came the director's cut which wimpies it up...)
The Whodunnit is still great and Gorkon, Azetbur, and Chang still steal the show.
Chang himself is the last formidable opponent we'd see for a
very long time, if not the last.
Some lines definitely did not need to be in the film as they don't fit up with Starfleet at all. What some of the lower deck peons say is completely out of place and it'd make more sense to show how Starfleet ISN'T the propaganda the Klingons know about (see "Day of the Dove" for more.) Especially when TOS and the movies up to that point had plenty of non-humans, so it's completely unexpected, unwarranted, and, yeah, apocryphal. Arguably more so than STV. Especially as Saavi-- oops, Valaris is right there gawking as they spout their garbage and she doesn't use it to bolster the conflict. Are these two part of the treason? Couldn't she even dial up 1--9-7-6--C-h-a-n-g and let him know that things are even better as expected thanks to this moment she observes?! So, yeah,
@Vger23 is more than spot on regarding the rough draft nature of the story's narrative, which is big - and big enough to survive a lot of clunky moments - but still feels off-kilter.
Never mind the setup at the start with "50 earth years, depletion of ozone, blah blah blah".
Making Uhura the butt of a joke with "Duurrh, I'm the communications officer but can't read a book" is worse than 90% of STV's (unintentional character-assassination) jokes and on par with the others.
Good point about Saavik being too obvious. But, I still think it would have been more impactful for Saavik to be the sabatour, because her motivations would have had more weight with the audience. (Having seen her friend and possible love-interest David killed by Klingons in a previous movie.) It would have added something to see Kirk and his son's friend reacting so differently to his son's murder.
Great point on friend and possible love interest.
I can imagine a possible scene where Saavik reminds Kirk of this, to help strengthen a hateful mindset - or what happened between V and VI to more conclusively have Kirk spit out "Let them die!!"? The movie definitely rushes things a tad much... it manages to pull it off, but it could/should have been a lot smoother.