Artistically, it's wonderful but, I will NEVER understand the obsession of using a hydraulic jack under the lift/turntable.
I'm not aware of any naval vessel that ever used something like that to move aircraft from below deck to the flight deck. No cruiser or carrier, battleship etc...ever did.
Most such elevators are moved by hydraulic pressure today (and have for decades) though some have been moved via mechanical systems.
In a star ship I would expect some kind of side-lifting system with linear motors (be they purely electric or something more exotic doesn't even matter). This would completely remove the pierced lower deck and wasted space beneath and the turntable could be integrated into the platform itself.
I know that Franz Joseph's plans showed a central jack (and some of Matt's drawings seem to indicate that as well) but anywho...
This is NOT criticism of your work, just a comment on a repetitive thing that won't go away.