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Spoilers Do you think the original main arc was scrapped once Berg/Harberts left?

Do you think the main arc was scrapped once Berg/Harberts left?

  • Yes

    Votes: 34 55.7%
  • No

    Votes: 27 44.3%

  • Total voters
    61
I just can't believe that the Red Angel, as presented in the first half of the season, was a normal human in a suit of armor built by humans. It just doesn't fit with the general themes of encountering things outside our normal reality (e.g. the bizarre behavior of the dark matter asteroid, the colonists of New Eden being transported thousands of light years beyond anywhere human technology had been able to reach).
It would've been a mistake for the series to present it as an actual angel. Just doesn't fit the series. And, then you're always waiting for the angels to come in and save the day. I don't know, just having an angel come and help out really isn't satisfying. There's not much you can do with that. No storyline really.
 
It would've been a mistake for the series to present it as an actual angel. Just doesn't fit the series. And, then you're always waiting for the angels to come in and save the day. I don't know, just having an angel come and help out really isn't satisfying. There's not much you can do with that. No storyline really.

Not sure anyone was expecting it to be an actual "angel", I know I wasn't. But, at the same time, I wanted to be more than a human mucking about in the timeline... yet again.

And why shouldn't we be waiting for the time travel angel to come in and save the day?
 
As far as the Red Angel is concerned, I think I would rather have a spectacular failure instead of a safe success.
 
I didn't want an actual Angel, the weird alien-ness to it's wings and red light implied a winged humanoid from another plane of existance. It would have been interesting if it concidentally looked like one when backlit then turned out to be much more alien when seen correctly.

But it just being her mum was fucking lame.
 
Not sure anyone was expecting it to be an actual "angel", I know I wasn't. But, at the same time, I wanted to be more than a human mucking about in the timeline... yet again.

Right. I was expecting the Preservers, mysterious and powerful, but biological aliens nevertheless.

I've been thinking some more about those two examples in my first post, and it's not the case that they break our reality, but that they break the rules of Star Trek's reality. Deliberately I think. First was the asteroid that couldn't be teleported by the Magic Save The Day device – you know, the transporter – a development presented as so shocking that it was used as the act break. Of course it didn't turn out to be magic, just a new scientific development that had to be understood, but it was something the Star Trek reality hadn't seen before. It took work to understand.

Then there was New Eden, where the inhabitants became more, not less, religious as a result of encountering advanced extraterrestrial intelligence. Trek has generally held to the idea that as humans expand into the Galaxy, we'll become more secular, and has implied that secularism is required for peace (see: Who Watches the Watchers, where the Minitakans are willing to commit human sacrifice as soon as they get religion). But in New Eden, the colonists are peaceful because they've blended their faiths.

Both of those challenge certain conventions that Trek relies on, and I don't think it was unintentional. IMO, it was a statement about where the season was headed, and I think it's probably poorer for choosing Space CIA vs. Skynet instead.
 
Right. I was expecting the Preservers, mysterious and powerful, but biological aliens nevertheless.

I've been thinking some more about those two examples in my first post, and it's not the case that they break our reality, but that they break the rules of Star Trek's reality. Deliberately I think. First was the asteroid that couldn't be teleported by the Magic Save The Day device – you know, the transporter – a development presented as so shocking that it was used as the act break. Of course it didn't turn out to be magic, just a new scientific development that had to be understood, but it was something the Star Trek reality hadn't seen before. It took work to understand.

Then there was New Eden, where the inhabitants became more, not less, religious as a result of encountering advanced extraterrestrial intelligence. Trek has generally held to the idea that as humans expand into the Galaxy, we'll become more secular, and has implied that secularism is required for peace (see: Who Watches the Watchers, where the Minitakans are willing to commit human sacrifice as soon as they get religion). But in New Eden, the colonists are peaceful because they've blended their faiths.

Both of those challenge certain conventions that Trek relies on, and I don't think it was unintentional. IMO, it was a statement about where the season was headed, and I think it's probably poorer for choosing Space CIA vs. Skynet instead.

1. Human Sacrifice doesn't come out of nowhere, as history tells us.
2. Blending faiths isn't the recipe for peace as faith isn't the root cause of strife and faith never stays blended for long, as again history tell us.
 
I didn't want an actual Angel, the weird alien-ness to it's wings and red light implied a winged humanoid from another plane of existance. It would have been interesting if it concidentally looked like one when backlit then turned out to be much more alien when seen correctly.

But it just being her mum was fucking lame.

I didn't see it as lame as all. Hoping for some 'otherworldly force' divine or otherwise to pull our fat out of the fire is again... faith based problem solving, IE, the aliens will sort this out. Burnham's mum being the Red Angel reminds us that the solutions to the big problems have to come from us because the problems come from us.

Its all rather grown-up really.
 
Only, not all problems arise from Humans. Many alien species behave on their own and pose threats that need intervention from other sources. The "Angel" being nothing more than a being that was more advanced maybe, but helping in a limited fashion to a threat that expanded to other planes no species from this galaxy could manage alone is a long way off calling for divine intervention.
 
1. Human Sacrifice doesn't come out of nowhere, as history tells us.
2. Blending faiths isn't the recipe for peace as faith isn't the root cause of strife and faith never stays blended for long, as again history tell us.

Irrelevant. I'm not arguing that the show would have come down on that side of the question, just that it was noticing that Trek has often acted as though those things are true.

I wouldn't particularly want a Star Trek series to come down on the side of "religious faith = good," but I would like it to dig down into the issue further than taking it as self-evident that secularism is the best.

Maybe the show would have disappointed me on that front, we'll never know. But I do think that's the conflict the season was trying to present, whatever the outcome would have been.
 
At this point, it looks like Frakes was writing his episodes on that basis, hoping that's how the story would play out. All his subtle storypoints have largely been wasted now.

Do we know how much the writers even coordinate on the overall plot? what reveals they're aware of?
 
Faith does not necessarily mean religious faith - the term is also commonly a poetic and secular one similar to the ancient Greek word 'pistos', denoting concept in which you have comforting trust (in, say, a philosophical idea like the redeeming quality of love, or a civic idea) - it may be used in an irreligious context.

But when has pop TV ever risen to the level of making that distinction? (Actually probably only in Picard's nuanced speeches in TNG, or in something like Babylon 5 with it's Carl Sagan/Lord Tennyson-quoting). TV's overt depiction of philosophy has largely regressed since those days. The faith vs. science thing thus sent alarm bells ringing for me. What passes for discussion of metaphysics on TV is usually just scientifically illiterate mysticism and 'woo woo isn't it spooky' self-deception worthy of a 'ghosts-caught-on-camera' show. Quantum mechanics for example, commonly abused in pop culture as 'quantum mysticism', is a theory which actually says nothing any more spiritual than old mechanistic Newtonian physics - it's implications are neutral on value judgements - but is used to justify wild pseudo-religious assumptions, simply because it is complex enough to bamboozle. The first 1.2 seasons of this show felt like that; the spore drive honestly came off as quantum mysticism, but thankfully the show seems to be getting more grounded in reality lately; I thought this might be the influence of Michelle Paradise, but have no idea.

I agree with Longinus completely, that the concept of "science vs. faith" would have likely been an utter disaster. Star Trek may not be above metaphysical speculation, but is a staunchly secular franchise, that finds it's answers inside nature; tender observations about human nature, and the natural world. There is no contest between science and faith - if your faith requires a rejection of objective fact, it is unhealthy. If it helps you with unanswerable nuanced questions like "how can I make peace with an uncertain future", fair enough, I'm all for that kind of belief. Our highest loyalty is to the truth; how can one ever be content with a belief that they know deep down contradicts impartial research on a natural phenomenon, or builds an edifice out of too many shaky assumptions? We all want to know where the universe came from, and where it is going; religious and none religious alike - but we certainly don't need to return to a time when dogma required us to actively misinterpret events or censor our conscious; how could we and also live with ourselves? You can't bury the truth; and who would want to put the wonder of science back in the box now?

On another note, I understand why people were not too entertained by the Red Angel's reveal. It's disappointing that in sci-fi, totally incredible concepts like "it's a 10,000,000 year old survivor from a previous civilization, it's silent cities orbiting a dead star, come out of compassion to prevent the downfall of a younger one" have given way to "it's the character's mom/dad/sibling/self". In an attempt to humanise the genre, modern sci-fi often just wastes the inherent potential of a vast cosmos, full of deep time, and countless eons of possibility. But, at the same time, I still think the show has improved over this season - it could have been handled worse - the last few have felt a lot more rational.
 
Faith does not necessarily mean religious faith - the term is also commonly a poetic and secular one similar to the ancient Greek word 'pistos', denoting concept in which you have comforting trust (in, say, a philosophical idea like the redeeming quality of love, or a civic idea) - it may be used in an irreligious context.

But when has pop TV ever risen to the level of making that distinction? (Actually probably only in Picard's nuanced speeches in TNG, or in something like Babylon 5 with it's Carl Sagan/Lord Tennyson-quoting). TV's overt depiction of philosophy has largely regressed since those days. The faith vs. science thing thus sent alarm bells ringing for me. What passes for discussion of metaphysics on TV is usually just scientifically illiterate mysticism and 'woo woo isn't it spooky' self-deception worthy of a 'ghosts-caught-on-camera' show. Quantum mechanics for example, commonly abused in pop culture as 'quantum mysticism', is a theory which actually says nothing any more spiritual than old mechanistic Newtonian physics - it's implications are neutral on value judgements - but is used to justify wild pseudo-religious assumptions, simply because it is complex enough to bamboozle. The first 1.2 seasons of this show felt like that; the spore drive honestly came off as quantum mysticism, but thankfully the show seems to be getting more grounded in reality lately; I thought this might be the influence of Michelle Paradise, but have no idea.

I agree with Longinus completely, that the concept of "science vs. faith" would have likely been an utter disaster. Star Trek may not be above metaphysical speculation, but is a staunchly secular franchise, that finds it's answers inside nature; tender observations about human nature, and the natural world. There is no contest between science and faith - if your faith requires a rejection of objective fact, it is unhealthy. If it helps you with unanswerable nuanced questions like "how can I make peace with an uncertain future", fair enough, I'm all for that kind of belief. Our highest loyalty is to the truth; how can one ever be content with a belief that they know deep down contradicts impartial research on a natural phenomenon, or builds an edifice out of too many shaky assumptions? We all want to know where the universe came from, and where it is going; religious and none religious alike - but we certainly don't need to return to a time when dogma required us to actively misinterpret events or censor our conscious; how could we and also live with ourselves? You can't bury the truth; and who would want to put the wonder of science back in the box now?

On another note, I understand why people were not too entertained by the Red Angel's reveal. It's disappointing that in sci-fi, totally incredible concepts like "it's a 10,000,000 year old survivor from a previous civilization, it's silent cities orbiting a dead star, come out of compassion to prevent the downfall of a younger one" have given way to "it's the character's mom/dad/sibling/self". In an attempt to humanise the genre, modern sci-fi often just wastes the inherent potential of a vast cosmos, full of deep time, and countless eons of possibility. But, at the same time, I still think the show has improved over this season - it could have been handled worse - the last few have felt a lot more rational.

Throwing some flowery Tennyson and Shakespeare does not the addition of nuanced philosophy make for television. In the past it was used mostly crudely to elevate archtypal storytelling. I also fail to see how the mycenial network has been used for mystic purposes in any way more than any other 'new life' and 'new civilizations' or even 'new technology' has had on previous Star Treks. You will really need to offer more than just a judgment call to justify that assessment.

There's plenty of amazing narrative philosophy in work in modern television, and really its a long list compared to the old days of the 3 networks. I think this series and this season has handled philosophy well enough, even if it hasn't resorted to the old masters to help prop it up.
 
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We know that Berg and Harberts were fired when Season 2 was in active production - reportedly after the fifth episode was almost complete. The official reason for their firing was due to verbal abuse of the writing staff, along with production cost overruns in the first episode of the season. They also announced a "planned production hiatus" at the time, and some reports suggested that they were reshooting individual episodes.

Regardless, I should say that while I'm enjoying Season 2 from front to back much better than the first season, it seems in some ways markedly more disjointed - almost two series at once. In the initial interviews, they seemed to indicate that "science vs. faith" was going to be an important element this season. There were certainly hints of that early on, with the "mystery" surrounding the Red Angel, the belief of the New Eden residents the angel was divine, Pike's little comments about religion, etc. This began changing immediately with the sixth episode, where the Red Angel was shown to be someone wearing a "future suit." The following episode, Georgiou drops the fact that Leland was "responsible" for the death of Michael's parents - which seemed random at the time, but actually tied into the series arc. Now the arc is about some sort of war through time being fought between an AI bent on destroying all life and Michael's mom - which is very, very different from where we started.

Indeed, thinking about it now, there is not a single "breadcumb" which was dropped in the first five episodes which in any way hints at where we ended up. This stands in contrast to the first season, where Voq=Ash and MU Lorca hints began dropping right from the start. I'm left with the impression that Berg/Harberts had very, very different plans for the seasonal arc - plans that were mostly scrapped for something that Kurtzman thought better suited Star Trek. Even though I know it would be very unusual in modern TV for an entire arc to be tweaked in that matter on the fly.

Anyway, your thoughts?

I think BillJ is probably exactly on point:

Scrapped? No. Heavily modified? Yes.


Skipping over the last three pages of discussion, yes I do.

I just can't believe that the Red Angel, as presented in the first half of the season, was a normal human in a suit of armor built by humans. It just doesn't fit with the general themes of encountering things outside our normal reality (e.g. the bizarre behavior of the dark matter asteroid, the colonists of New Eden being transported thousands of light years beyond anywhere human technology had been able to reach). And I 100% believe the rumors that Pike was being reimagined as a devout Christian who prayed before making command decisions. His characterization in New Eden screamed setup for a later reveal of his religious faith.

All that shit has been dropped like a dirty plate. The transition of the Red Angel from figure of mystery and intrigue to time travel technowank was so abrupt and had so little impact, emotionally, on the characters that I don't believe it was the original plan.

They throw in a little lip service here and there from Spock about faith, but none of the conflicts or characterization touches on faith or science at all any more. The writers backpedalled, hard.

I'm enjoying well enough where things have ended up, but I'd have loved to see where things were originally headed. I suspect it would have been less well paced, but much more interesting.

I think the major plot points are still the same - they are just put in wildly different contexts and probably in different order than originally envisioned.

Like, if I had to present a personal theory, I would guess that Burnham being the red Angel was probably the plan from the beginning. And I think the time-travel aspect as well: Burnham from the future. I just think the original plan would have shown us that wildly different - with lots of talk about faith, religion, but mostly a whole lot of destiny, and the red angel as truly a "godly" figure. Only to have that "time-travel" aspect as the big twist - like, oh, it wasn't "destiny", it was just "time-travel".

I do believe however that "Control" being the evil A.I., and Section 31 as the inventors of the time-travel suit were complete asspulls. Like, there were some ideas floating around (probably even some alien-like beings giving Burnham the suit, and here travelling through the timeline in one swoop, righting history at all points), and since they scrapped that, they now have to make the backstory up along the while.

But yeah, you don't hire the writers of shitty envangelical Christian movies for your series if you're not going to heavily lean into that. And the first two episodes had commenst about faith and religion dropped left and right, even at moments where it came completely out of the blue - and now, that we actually HAVE pre-destiny paradoxons, NO ONE is actually talking about "destiny" or other philosophical questions anymore.
 
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Good god. You know, I will defend "Spock's brain" and "Threshold" unto my grave. Yes, both are stupidly silly, break continuity, logic sense and the last bit of suspension of disbelief. But let's be honest: They were also totally amazingly bonkers and creative, and Star Trek as a whole would be so much poorer without them.

These episodes here though? Yeah. They're absolute garbage.
 
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