I love it! Since you're asking of opinions, I think the original episode the Enterprise in the opening shot has slightly more blue and there is an extra key light on the main sensor dish. Also, I think in the original shot the Enterprise isn't flying exactly straight (probably due to the camera setup back then) so you should have the Enterprise yawed to her left a couple of degrees while moving forward. Seems weird but I've just assumed that the ship was coasting on momentum and pointing at things of interest with the nose of the ship all this time.