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Change an element of an episode

If you didn't want the Captain chewing the scenery, why in heck would you hire Shatner?

Because at the time, Shatner was a damn fine SERIOUS actor. The next time its on TCM, watch "The Brothers Karamazov". In it, he more than holds his own against serious actors like Lee J Cobb and Yul Brynner. He is absolutely brilliant in 90% of the first season, and in a good deal of the second. In the latter part of the second, and all through the third, he starts having to deal with not only lesser scripts, but also shorter production times, lesser directors (no Pevney and Daniels), and increasing fatigue.
Enemy Within? It's one of his best! The negative Kirk is SUPPOSED to be totally out of control, almost animalistic. Shatner absolutely has a talent for that sort of thing, and exploits it for its worth. While at the same time, as the so-called 'positive' Kirk, you can see him all through the show, with his words and actions, a man searching within himself for something thats not quite there, all while trying to deal with a crisis. He also manages to have subtle moments as Kirk(-) - the scene in sickbay when Kirk (+) takes his hand and manages to strengthen both of them. Kirk(-) gives a grateful smile, but you can also see the scheming thoughts he's having. The best one is the one near the end where, after knocking out Kirk(+), and going to the bridge, he encounters Rand, apologizes to her, telling (real) story, then making a dinner date with her. He goes to the effect of 'meet you at 8' enters the lift, and just as the doors close, makes a SUBTLE, evil leer. Chilling! (The original script, btw, had him pounding the lift walls in triumph - they wisely cut that out.)
 
It has often been said that to get the best performance out of Shatner (that he was fully capable of and has demonstrated often enough) is to have a firm hand directing him.
 
"The Alternative Factor" -- restore the romance originally intended for Lazarus & Lieutenant Masters. Eliminate the spinning 'newspaper-headlines' special effects shots. Rewrite the script a dozen more times until it's right.
 
"The Alternative Factor" -- restore the romance originally intended for Lazarus & Lieutenant Masters. Eliminate the spinning 'newspaper-headlines' special effects shots. Rewrite the script a dozen more times until it's right.
I'd say thats more than change an element.
 
In the Voyager episode Friendship One instead of having B'Elanna stupidly insisting on going on the away team to a radioactive planet while pregnant have her lamenting the fact that she is stuck on the ship. Erase the silly conversation between Tom and Carey about being overprotective. Just have them discuss fatherhood in general or something.
Uh, this is the TOS forum.
 
Having watched Balance of Terror yesterday, it looks like Uhura was in charge of the bridge as everyone else was in conference and if there had been a more senior officer of the watch, Kirk would have called them.

For me, I would just feature more women more often. I think Shore Leave was the only time we had two women chosen for a landing party (they otherwise just get kidnapped in pairs). Rand's contribution to Corbomite Manoeuvre and Balance of Terror were lamentable. Give the poor woman something worthwhile to do! In Enemy Within, I would have Rand be the one to find good Kirk unconscious in sick bay so she doesn't look so dumb. I would have liked to see Harlan Ellison's more adventurous version of Rand. Plus Rand in CotEoF, Space Seed, a Taste of Armageddon, The Galileo 7, Operation Annihilate, Return of the Archons, this Side of Paradise, I, Mudd, the Trouble with Tribbles, the Tholian Web, a Piece of the Action, Spectre of the Gun, and Turnabout Intruder.

More John Colicos for sure. He had a lot of charm and personality. I'm not sure I'd want him to replace all the other Klingons since that would have robbed us of the three amigos in DS9 but find a way to get him in somehow. Same for Miranda Jones. More Orion pirates too.

More Uhura working on cryptography instead of Spock. More Chapel taking the lead on medical research with McCoy assisting her. Helen Noel in Whom Gods Destroy. Riley in Catspaw and Piece of the Action plus a better wig for Chekov in his early episodes. Carolyn Palamis in the Apple and Friday's Child.

A line about atmospherics in the Enemy within. Photon torpedoes in the Balance of Terror plus limited warp engines for the Romulans. Say Uhura's synaptic connections have been scrambled rather than a mind wipe. It's just silly to say she could be re-educated to be a bridge officer after that.

More Janice Rand in season one agreed! They should have kept her in the show till the last episode of season one but then we wouldn't have had the lovely Marianna Hill as Dr.Helen Noel would we! But more lovely sixties ladies in the series would have been glorious as Kor said in Errand of Mercy! :drool:
JB
 
Say Uhura's synaptic connections have been scrambled rather than a mind wipe. It's just silly to say she could be re-educated to be a bridge officer after that.

That's sorta how I'd explain it- like when you think something has been erased from your computer, when it's really the connections that have been severed. Re-learning triggers new nerve connections which come back together again.
 
They eventually did that plot on VOYAGER, with B'Elanna getting split into her human and Klingon halves.

It would more jarring with Spock, I think. Think that moment in "Amok Time" where "tortured" Spock Nimoy is actually leaning casually against the wall to wait for his cue, or his gangster talk in "A Piece of The Action", only more so.
 
The subterranean women had average intelligence, and weren't played as "simple."

And The Children Shall Lead, have the friendly angel be a kindly old grandmother type, instead of a fat pedophile type.

...and replace Fred Freiberger's friend, Melvin Belli, with someone who could really act.
 
Because at the time, Shatner was a damn fine SERIOUS actor.

Sounds like we have a lot of agreement. Shatner was a good serious actor... who could also chew the scenery when the show demanded it, as in The Enemy Within, or The Turnabout Intruder. I'm partway through the 2nd season in my first rewatch in about 20 years and I'm appreciating Shatner's acting in season 1 especially more than I remembered.
 
*"Spock's Brain" would have been better/more believable if his brain's contents were downloaded and stolen like a computer program, not the physical gray matter itself.

I think there was a (70's TV series) Wonder Woman episode about aliens that stole the knowledge of humans, wasn't there?
 
What if Kirk had died piloting the Constellation down the throat of the Planet Killler and Decker had instead lived?
 
What if Kirk had died piloting the Constellation down the throat of the Planet Killler and Decker had instead lived?
How does that work? Kirk wouldn't have tried flying the Constellation down the throat of the Planet Killer until Decker gave him the idea with the shuttlecraft.

However, assuming Decker lived somehow, I assume McCoy would have reread regulations about his powers and responsibilities as Chief Medical Officer, ordered Decker to report for psychiatric exam, discovered in a matter of seconds that he was suffering severe PTSD, and Spock would have become acting captain again. Decker would be confined to quarters under guard until he could be delivered to a starbase for long-term therapy.
 
Have Gill institute a communist government rather than a Nazi one on Ekos the Nazis were inefficient torn by infighting, if you're looking for a strong central authority and want to set up a police state to get everyone pulling in the same direction, why pick a murderously racist model when others exist?
 
Have Gill institute a communist government rather than a Nazi one on Ekos the Nazis were inefficient torn by infighting, if you're looking for a strong central authority and want to set up a police state to get everyone pulling in the same direction, why pick a murderously racist model when others exist?

That was a terrible episode. I don't think that there is any one thing that could have saved it.
 
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