I watched my Laserdisc of The Man Trap last night, for a zillionth time. Great episode, one of my favorites. Not what most fans consider an ideal premiere episode, but honestly, I always dug it. The creature still looks amazing, both terrifying and pathetic, as it was meant to. Funny observations from two friends of mine who have young kids:
Steve: "I watched this will Alex a while ago (7 years old), That damned monster totally freaked him out. He still talks about it."
Rebecca: "Renita (3) loved the salt creature and felt so bad for it because it was lonely. She wanted to give it a hug!"
Both kids got it. The Man Trap, even 49 years later with a "dated" monster costume still scares kids and still engenders sympathy. There's always been more to this episode than a monster story and it's a great early episode. It gives Bones the spotlight right off the bat, shows off the ship and crew (sans Scotty) and demonstrates Kirk's protective attitude toward his ship. The only thing it doesn't do is make Kirk overly likable. Mostly because his crew is threatened and he's tense throughout, but he does come off as hard edged. Whether that's good or bad is up to the viewer, but it doesn't paint a clear picture of his personality and his overall good nature. That would come across shortly, though.
Solid direction, really great creepy Alexander Courage score (even though Roddenberry hated it - as do a few fans), but sloppy editing, no doubt do to the rush to get this done in time for Sneak-a-Peek at NBC Week. I've seen this one too many times, so the clips and reaction shots taken from later episodes stand out now. But nobody would have noticed it then.