Also, please remember that most "aliens" in TOS looked identical to humans. I didn't mean to suggest we're doing TNG-style makeup on the new race we've created. That wouldn't ring true for 1969.
Bummer.
Be that as it may even something like a variation on a Troyian (such as Ambassador Petri in "Elaan Of Troyius") would be something.
And TOS did a
lot of aliens that weren't strictly normal human looking
Talosian
First Federation
Romulans
Insanity Parasites (re: "Operation--Annihilate")
Gorn
Horta
Andorian
Tellarite
Troyian
Melkot
Excalbian
Cloud Creature (re: "Obsession")
Energy beings (re: "Errand Of Mercy," "Arena," "The Squire Of Gothos," "The Lights Of Zetar," "Day Of The Dove")
Korb abd Sylvia (in the true forms)
Giant Amoeba
Vians
Tholians
Mugato
Companion
Tribbles
The vignette served a number of purposes for us.
It was heavy on dialog for Brian Gross--to showcase our new Kirk actor.
It had originally been conceived of a sa epilogue follow-up vignette to "Blood and Fire"--with a memorial service for the late Lieutenant Alex Freeman. In the end, we decided to make reference not only to a number of Phase II characters who had perished in recent episodes, but it also allowed us to acknowlege, by name, a number of important New Voyages/Phase II production crew members who had recently passed away. (It was a way for us to recognize our own fallen family members, and was cathartic for us.)
It was also a way of relaunching not only our re-fit Enterprise, but of relaunching our series, too. It wasa shot-for-shot, note-for-note copy of the Enterprise launch scene from The Wrath of Khan--just for the un of it.
My script notes included a number of observations. Here are a couple of them:
The Longfellow's poem that is the centerpiece of the speech is misquoted.
It all seems a little flowery--more like something Picard would rattle off. My sense is Kirk didn't become such an eloquent orator until the movie era.
If I were attending a memorial service for a fallen comrade, I might be upset/disappointed that the service changed from commemorating the fallen to a "let's go get 'em and explore, boys and girls," "Saint Crispin's Day" speech. I'd want attention to stay on the fallen--who quickly get lost in the speech.
When Kirk gets a boring patrol ssignment, he seems to be arguing "But you can't do that! Didn't you hear that I just gave a big flowery speech?"
Writer Dave Galanter (author of a dozen or so professional Trek novels) gets the credit (or the blame) for the "Boldly Going" script.
Lastly, I note that the U.S.S. Drake was mentioned in the TNG episode "Arsenal of Freedom." Warranted or not, Drake seems to have been a name that endures even into the 24th century. (Maybe a diferent Drake--not Sir Francis?)
Oh, well...