^^^^^^^^^
IF it were done well, then Voyager could have been a better series. Or a show about two guys in a shuttlepod on a freight run from Earth to Mars.
I've often advocated this, though. The fact that the ship was always clean and shiny, with all the lights on, really bugged me. Yes, I know that it was so that they could re-use FX shots, but it still got on my nerves.
No exploding shuttles, either. If you say that you have two, then use two. If you must use more, than include some dialog about how hard they are to replace. Hell, have no shuttles for all I care.
Some edge would have been nice. Some anger at their situation, some irrational anger at first, maybe even a suicide or two to show how distraught these people must have been at being a lifetime away from home with slim odds of ever getting there at all. I'm not saying that I would have wanted them to go around committing genocide, but some tougher choices and some battered consciences could have gone a long, long way towards making it a better show.
Internal damage should have been greater as well. I always thought that it would have been cool if some of the characters had been forced to share space due to a lack of habitable quarters, or if there was a whole deck that you just didn't go on because it was too badly damaged and opened to space, etc.
To make a big change, a few of the characters would have had to go or been significantly altered.
1. Neelix - the guy was supposedly from the rough and tumble Delta Quadrant, but he was more Starfleet than Starfleet. A "Jayne Cobb" type mercenary with a POV that was radically different from that of Janeway and co. would have worked better here, not to mention added some spice to the cast.
2. Harry Kim - Grow. I don't even care how. Just do it. Stop being a pussy by season 7 already. Either that or kill him off.
3. Kes - A species that only lives seven years? What's the point, she'd be dead by the end of the series anyway . . . if she had made it that long.
4. Chakotay - Should have been a little more "Maquis" and opposed Janeway a bit more throughout the show, especially in the beginning.
5. The Doctor - I liked Robert Picardo in the role, but we've seen the whole artificial lifeform studying humanity thing before. It's old. Should have just made him an organic life form to begin with. Everything else could have been left alone and I wouldn't have minded.
6. Seven of Nine - We already had Tuvok, who was the emotionless outsider looking in at humanity (along with the Doctor) the last thing we needed was a third one of these characters, and a second emotionless one, to boot. I watch Star Trek for drama and intelligent discourse (and some explosions every now and then) not ta-tas. Jeri Ryan wasn't a bad actor, but she just wasn't given much to do aside from the same old storyline over and over again. A character who held a great deal of animosity against the Borg, or was angry and bitter and looking for a fight as a result would have worked better, at least initially. The odd life lesson episode wouldn't have been that bad at all, but it was endless with her, and she dominated the entire show as soon as she came on board. You have eight or nine castmembers for a reason. Use them.
Whew. Man, I feel better.