Breaking Bad and
For All Mankind sure aren't based on any novels, and yet they manage(d) to be very tightknit. Star Trek should aim to be up to par with all of these shows that have been mentioned while also keeping its core values. If it can do both, then it'll hit the sweet spot.
As far as "Dagger of The Mind" -- sorry to actually talk about TOS! -- here's the
exact dialogue, courtesy of
Chakoteya (formatting mine):
McCoy: Spock, if there's the slightest possibility it might help.
Spock: I've never used it on a human, Doctor.
McCoy: If there's any way we can look into this man's mind to see if what he's seeing is real or delusion
Spock: It's a hidden, personal thing to the Vulcan people, part of our private lives.
McCoy: Now look, Spock, Jim Kirk could be in real trouble. Will it work or not?
Spock: It could be dangerous. Do you understand? It requires I make pressure changes in your nerves, your blood vessels.
Van Gelder: You must open my mind. Let me warn you and explain to you.
Spock: This will not affect you, Doctor McCoy, only the person I touch. It is not hypnosis.
McCoy: I understand. (Spock puts his hands on Van Gelder's face) Good, the reading's levelling.
Spock: You begin to feel a strange euphoria. Your body floats.
Van Gelder: Yes, I begin to feel it.
Spock: Open your mind. We move together. Our minds sharing the same thoughts.
As far as SNW? It's going to do whatever thing it's going to do. But the above is what Spock said in TOS.