Interesting. It looks a lot like Doug Drexler's but with everything shifted around a bit. I don't like the TNG style deuterium tank. I think large pods would look better.
Personally I would get the FJ plans, say the pipe cathedral was the warp core (no unseen core shafts below), stick it on deck 19 at the base of the pylons (shrinking the hanger a little) and fit the engine room opposite the hangar deck. I'd maybe put some antimatter pods on deck 23, replace the photon torpedoes on deck 3 with phasers (as seen in TAS and SToGaM) and frown really hard at the prospect of fitting a photon launcher or two on the microscopic lowest level of the saucer (sharing space that doesn't exist with the main phasers!). Actually, since nothing fits anyway, I might as well keep photons on the upper level too. And stick aft phasers and photons above the hanger a la "In a Mirror, Darkly".
Screw it, I'd just stick with the FJ plans.
...and people have trouble seeing why JJ's people made the ship bigger. So it all fits!
Personally I would get the FJ plans, say the pipe cathedral was the warp core (no unseen core shafts below), stick it on deck 19 at the base of the pylons (shrinking the hanger a little) and fit the engine room opposite the hangar deck. I'd maybe put some antimatter pods on deck 23, replace the photon torpedoes on deck 3 with phasers (as seen in TAS and SToGaM) and frown really hard at the prospect of fitting a photon launcher or two on the microscopic lowest level of the saucer (sharing space that doesn't exist with the main phasers!). Actually, since nothing fits anyway, I might as well keep photons on the upper level too. And stick aft phasers and photons above the hanger a la "In a Mirror, Darkly".
Screw it, I'd just stick with the FJ plans.
...and people have trouble seeing why JJ's people made the ship bigger. So it all fits!