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What if "Mudd's Women" or "The Omega Glory" has been filmed as the second pilot?

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We know that when NBC ordered a second pilot, GR offered up three scripts: "Mudd's Women," "The Omega Glory" and "Where No Man Has Gone Before." (Thank goodness they chose the latter.)

Without speculating if those other two scripts would have sold the series, what would the episodes themselves have looked like, had they actually been produced as the second pilot? And would they have turned out better or worse than the episodes we ultimately got? (I happen to like "Mudd's Women" a lot, mostly because of Harvey Hart's direction.)

I'm trying to imagine "Mudd" and "Omega" with the 1965 Enterprise sets, different doctor, different music, different feel ...
 
Personally, I hate Mudd's Women, not to mention that it makes no sense, these people may be zillionaires but they live like hoboes on a hellhole of a planet! Why would anyone want to live there? That's, of course, leaving aside the terrible sexism, I guess inherent to the period which is of course a pitiful excuse.
 
NBC wanted a show that was closer to the "Wagon Train to stars" conecept. I don't think those episodes would've worked at all. "Mudd's Women" is very slow and doesn't have much of the action they wanted. "The Omega Glory" might've been a better choice but the script was terrible. I can't imagine neither of them as the second pilot.
 
People misunderstand "Wagon Train to the stars" because all three pilot scripts fit that model: prominent guest stars who appear and interact with the regulars who are on an ongoing trek.

"The Omega Glory" pilot was bigger in scope in terms of sets and extras as action. Spock is weird in the early drafts, but Roddenberry was clearly listening to Peeples input (there was no metal plate in Spock's stomach as Peeples later claimed but it was almost that weird) and that wouldn't have made it to a filmed version.
 
Also, most of "Omega Glory" was set planetside, so we'd not see much of the Enterprise and Argentina at all...really just the bridges and transporter rooms.

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Peeples’ first draft of “Where No Man Has Gone Before” was set entirely on the ship and the characters were crude. The captain, who had no name, was generic. Spock was nothing special and was emotional, e.g., he lamented about being lonely and smiled. IMHO, I don’t think Peeples’ draft would have sold the series.
 
Personally, I hate Mudd's Women, not to mention that it makes no sense, these people may be zillionaires but they live like hoboes on a hellhole of a planet! Why would anyone want to live there? That's, of course, leaving aside the terrible sexism, I guess inherent to the period which is of course a pitiful excuse.
They were living there to make heaps of money.
It was like the gold rush days when people came to the hell-hole of Australia to make money.
OK then why didn't they leave once they made their money? They were greedy just like I'd be and stayed there probably thinking someday in the future they'd leave and spend their fortune on a paradise planet.

My main problem with the episode is not the sexism. Its that the Enterprise crew acts like a bunch of "randy" idiots. If that were my first impression of the crew i may not have wanted to watch the next episode. Even several episodes in its grating.
 
Personally, I hate Mudd's Women, not to mention that it makes no sense, these people may be zillionaires but they live like hoboes on a hellhole of a planet! Why would anyone want to live there?

They're rich because they live and work there, because that's where the dilithium is mined from. Think in terms of Old West gold prospectors, since the whole episode was a riff on Western scenarios like wiving settlers. It's their staked mining claims that are the source of their wealth, so they have to stay on the claimed land and work it in order to profit from it.


That's, of course, leaving aside the terrible sexism, I guess inherent to the period which is of course a pitiful excuse.

"Mudd's Women" is even more sexist than most of TOS. I mean, aside from Uhura's token presence, the episode is written as if the crew is all-male and hasn't seen a woman in ages, a la Forbidden Planet and the C57-D crew's reactions to Altaira. So "a product of its time" is no excuse. It's even worse than other products of the same time.


People misunderstand "Wagon Train to the stars" because all three pilot scripts fit that model: prominent guest stars who appear and interact with the regulars who are on an ongoing trek.

Exactly. People today think it meant "space Western" -- but '60s TV was loaded with Westerns. The reason Roddenberry compared his pitch to Wagon Train, as opposed to any of a dozen other Westerns, was because of its guest star-driven pseudo-anthology format, as well as the fact that it was a popular, critically acclaimed, long-running series.

As far as the finished episodes go, I'd say WNM and "Mudd" fit the guest star-centric format better than "Omega." Tracey and Cloud William are prominent guests, but the episode isn't about them to the same degree that WNM is about Mitchell and Dehner or "Mudd" is about Harry and Eve. Were the guests more prominent in the first draft of "Omega"?


Peeples’ first draft of “Where No Man Has Gone Before” was set entirely on the ship and the characters were crude. The captain, who had no name, was generic. Spock was nothing special and was emotional, e.g., he lamented about being lonely and smiled. IMHO, I don’t think Peeples’ draft would have sold the series.

Nobody expects a first draft to be good enough. To stick with the mining theme, it's just the raw ore, not yet refined.
 
I don't think "Mudd's Women" would have been much different. It was only the second episode in production order and had some of those early-first-season quirks ("Vulcanian," lithium instead of dilithium). If director Harvey Hart had helmed the episode as a second pilot, his elaborate camera setups and deep-focus compositions ("Who do you think you are, Orson Fucking Welles?") probably wouldn't have been as much of an issue.

They're rich because they live and work there, because that's where the dilithium is mined from. Think in terms of Old West gold prospectors, since the whole episode was a riff on Western scenarios like wiving settlers. It's their staked mining claims that are the source of their wealth, so they have to stay on the claimed land and work it in order to profit from it.
Exactly, plus the miners are hard-working blue-collar guys without families. (Cue eight dozen jokes about single men living alone.) Why would they need a mansion? They're probably socking away their money in savings or investing it in Vulcan fuel synthesizers.

"Mudd's Women" is even more sexist than most of TOS. I mean, aside from Uhura's token presence, the episode is written as if the crew is all-male and hasn't seen a woman in ages, a la Forbidden Planet and the C57-D crew's reactions to Altaira.
I think we're all aware (as are the male crewmembers) that there are women aboard the Enterprise. The men react to Mudd's women as they do because of the pheromone-like effects of the Venus drug.

And the miners don't want real, human women to share their lives with; they just want trophy wives with superficial beauty. That's a statement that hasn't dated at all.
 
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I thought the Venus drug effects were fake.
It was just the women thought they were prettier so they acted prettier. That it was a placebo.

Also if this had been the first episode would there have been no women on board in the rest of the series. That it would be a virtually all-male crew searching around the galaxy to save damsels in distress? I wouldn't have watched it.

The men thought they wanted trophy wives but I think they eventually realised that that gets old. Perhaps that was the message after all. Not that sexist after all. LOL.
 
I thought the Venus drug effects were fake.
It was just the women thought they were prettier so they acted prettier. That it was a placebo.
The Venus drug was real. Near the end of the episode, Eve McHuron was given a placebo instead of the actual drug -- and she magically became beautiful again, presumably because she didn't "believe in herself" without the aid of the drug. :wtf: That was a big "WTF" even back then.

(Also, she really wasn't that ugly when the drug wore off. The other two looked like old hags, while Eve looked ten years older and slightly disheveled.)

Also if this had been the first episode would there have been no women on board in the rest of the series. That it would be a virtually all-male crew searching around the galaxy to save damsels in distress? I wouldn't have watched it.
It was intended right from the start that the Enterprise would have a mixed-gender crew, with about one-third being female.
 
I think we're all aware (as are the male crewmembers) that there are women aboard the Enterprise.

As filmed, yes, obviously that's the case. That's exactly why the writing of the script is so incongruous. It's not just the men's reaction to Mudd's women. It's the lack of female speaking roles in the crew aside from a few token lines for Uhura, and the general tenor of the script in its treatment of the women. It feels like a script that was originally written with the assumption of an all-male crew and had female crew awkwardly grafted in later as an afterthought.


It was intended right from the start that the Enterprise would have a mixed-gender crew, with about one-third being female.

Yes, again, that is exactly why it seems so incongruous that the episode was written the way it was.
 
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Hart’s direction was far, far more than that script deserved.
 
They were living there to make heaps of money.
It was like the gold rush days when people came to the hell-hole of Australia to make money.
OK then why didn't they leave once they made their money? They were greedy just like I'd be and stayed there probably thinking someday in the future they'd leave and spend their fortune on a paradise planet.

My main problem with the episode is not the sexism. Its that the Enterprise crew acts like a bunch of "randy" idiots. If that were my first impression of the crew i may not have wanted to watch the next episode. Even several episodes in its grating.

Foreshadowing, probably not, but the legendary "summer of love" would take place a year later. Even better, some 70s sci-fi would make TOS look utterly placid, innocent and tame by comparison. "Logan's Run" is a great example of showing off the randiness arena, particularly during the opening act in establishing their world*. The 1960s and 70s were showing more about sexual revolution as a novel new shiny thing to go play with, while forgetting to mention the reality of VD clinics in the process but it's a movie and people aren't going to get off on that follow-up scene where they go to the clinic to find Dr. Hooper telling them what "the clap" is all about, or how it's much more difficult to treat today due to drug-resistant strains... Then came the 1980s and by the end of the decade, everyone being free with one another was deemed wrong, for whatever reasons, which annoyed (if nobody else) some James Bond fans... Somehow I doubt the innocent freeness of the 60s will return, though if Emperor Tiberius banned kissing in order to prevent herpes from spreading yet a couple thou' years later we got "free love", chances are in a couple more millennia people will be banging all sorts of drums again. Now that's a digression. :D

* A fun side note, the nuanced use of clothing hue and other visual cues are impressively done since Logan - and what he's trained to do - avoided red shirts (since he doesn't want to get it on with people about to go to carousel but some Sandmen might believe otherwise, the movie isn't going to show then all, though by accruing the time used by the teleportation effect and using it elsewhere they might have been able to pull it off... :) I don't remember if the original LR novel discussed the use of hue as making determining age ranges easier**, but it's nonetheless interesting that LR and TOS both use red accorded to those about to be killed off. Unless they're the main cast, but thankfully engineering, communications, and security all share the same hue to make it slightly more difficult. And more so since gold and blueshirts got kersplattered at times too...

** and not because Michael York was "age 38, looks 23.8" at the time... It's also maybe a more visible/less subtle reference for the audience, but if the viewer couldn't see what hue the crystal was and the outfits match that... and going out of the way to get a camera onto everyone's palms... that wasn't going to work out too well either...
 
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"Logan's Run" is a great example of showing off the randiness arena, particularly during the opening act in establishing their world*.

Yes, but as a negative. The movie, like the novel, was advocating conservative morality -- sexual promiscuity, hedonism, and homosexuality were presented as aspects of the immoral, anti-family dystopia, and then Logan and Jessica learned of the wonders of marriage and the nuclear family from Peter Ustinov and presumably passed those traditional values on to their people once the dystopia conveniently collapsed.

I think a fair number of movies in the late '60s and '70s took advantage of the greater freedom to depict sexuality while trying to have it both ways, painting it as an aspect of a dystopia or as an unhealthy indulgence, using rape as a plot device (e.g. A Clockwork Orange), or sexualizing women who are victims of serial killers. (This is an archetypal trope of '80s slasher films, but it goes back to the '70s or earlier, e.g. in Roger Vadim & Gene Roddenberry's dark sex comedy Pretty Maids All in a Row.)


I don't remember if the original LR novel discussed the use of hue as making determining age ranges easier**

Yes, but only in the lifeclock embedded in the palm. It was the movie that introduced the use of clothing that matched the lifeclock color.


but it's nonetheless interesting that LR and TOS both use red accorded to those about to be killed off.

Don't confuse jokes with reality. Of course it was never an intentional policy of TOS to equate red shirts with mortality; that's just a lame joke in fandom that people today have taken far too literally.
 
I think beaming over and investigating the Exeter would have looked good with the pilot sets/direction. The lighting is more moody/dark in WNMHGB so would have been visually effective as the landing party explores the dead ship.
 
Yes, but as a negative. The movie, like the novel, was advocating conservative morality -- sexual promiscuity, hedonism, and homosexuality were presented as aspects of the immoral, anti-family dystopia, and then Logan and Jessica learned of the wonders of marriage and the nuclear family from Peter Ustinov and presumably passed those traditional values on to their people once the dystopia conveniently collapsed.

Perhaps, but I somewhat disagree. Maybe it's because the 1960s70s/Stonewall/etc opened the doors to more inclusion on screen (which could lead to positive images and not just ones that could be seen negatively), or because I'm not a Kinsey 0 heterosexual, but I saw the movie's setup as being open and inclusive of non-heterosexual examples. Yes, Logan rejects the red-clothed guy but there are several prongs to this: 1. Red means the person is older and not everyone wants someone older or younger too much compared to themselves. 2. Individuals of any sexuality have individual tastes. Logan was wanting a woman at that time or not into scrawny guys that look younger than him despite wearing the clothes saying he's older, but everyone ages differently where someone 50 can look 40 and some who are young look older than their actual age too. 3. Logan probably came back from killing a runner and wants to mentally block out anyone older, so red is a game stopper as far as his joystick is concerned. Granted, the actual book might tell it all differently and maybe it is backhandedly promoting things the author hated. Movie adaptations are rarely made 100% true/identical to the book, which can be good or bad, and more to a point my ex fiancee definitely didn't perceive the film as being homophobic and he would get boisterously upset at anything he perceived even slightly homophobic. Maybe he missed out on those aspects as well. Or he was using me even more-- well, probably not, but either way it doesn't matter... what is certain is that he's definitely type-A enough to blow his stack over anything deemed anti-gay. Movies and perception of what they're telling can be amazingly varied. Then the creators come out and say what they were wanting to project in making-of documentaries. )

Not to mention, there is a belief that people who don't have sex with others outside a mutually and emotionally healthy relationship are less likely going to go out and potentially contract and spread VD/STDs - which was something of a general issue in the 1970s and even before HIV became fully known.

If it's being pro-"nuclear family" just by showing other types, via being a paradigm showed outside of a constructed civilization, just switch which side is in which society and it's the same thing. hen I saw it, I didn't perceive an ulterior motive, and that the movie was trying to be clinically objective. Plus, there are gay and bi people who want nuclear families too - whether they raise children or not. This can go into too much a lengthy tangent--

--so I would be more likely to opine that the movie seemed to be focusing most prevalent in an pro-old people stance, since everyone after x age (30 in the movie's case) is to be culled, with a ritual that states the people will be reborn later to live another life of more of the same. That's definitely dystopian with a layer of icing that says "reincarnation!" all over it. Which maybe it is, or maybe it isn't. The anti-old people part struck my chord far more. The book's age, which I looked up, and its use of "21" is far creepier. Apparently the book used the ritual in a different way, and gassing people to death was not going to be allowed. Not because it lacks spectacle next to the big wheel everyone floats off of whose shape is like the gem embedded in their palms.

This would not be a new topic either, TV shows such as "All in the Family" had Michael (the hippie young adult stereotype faction) going off against ageism and everything being youth-centric, in one of the few times he'd side with Archie on anything. Maybe the Logan's Run movie was trying to say "Ward Cleaver family good, all else bad" but it was seemingly saying other things louder., especially when many civilizations revere old people. Isn't it a bigger issue to ask why Logan's Run society is having its people killed off at 30 and is leaving it open-ended? Why might that be? What does the movie gain from that?

I'll admit: I need to do a rewatch as I may have missed out on something and I don't even recall how they procreated in that civilization, as the kiddies that sprout have to do so from somewhere and I don't recall the movie going too far into that. (The "cooped up in city versus wild life complete with waterfalls" trope was prominent, of course... but I digress.) Something was going on, but the city's participants were just living in their own tradition that started whenever for whatever reason. I don't recall it promoting anything, even backhandedly, about any specific sexual attraction type. But I perceived the Teleportinder scene as being more casual, at least for this one Sandman, the same way people look for different television shows. Not as if it were right or wrong in our current day but how that fantasy society did things in its own world, which is not ours. Our society allows both casual and relationships, families still exist, people wanting casual still exist.

I think a fair number of movies in the late '60s and '70s took advantage of the greater freedom to depict sexuality while trying to have it both ways, painting it as an aspect of a dystopia or as an unhealthy indulgence, using rape as a plot device (e.g. A Clockwork Orange), or sexualizing women who are victims of serial killers. (This is an archetypal trope of '80s slasher films, but it goes back to the '70s or earlier, e.g. in Roger Vadim & Gene Roddenberry's dark sex comedy Pretty Maids All in a Row.)

That is an excellent point.

And I forgot about Clockwork Orange - I saw the infamous clip but not yet the whole movie... Ditto for another one, Deliverance. Definitely freedom or envelope pushing to depict things for theatrical effect.

Yes, but only in the lifeclock embedded in the palm. It was the movie that introduced the use of clothing that matched the lifeclock color.

Thanks much. I hadn't read the book, which I intend to get to some day. Along with being a decent enough visual cue, it probably saved on the costuming budget to do everything via a set of specific styles. Depending on mindset, it's also bland to be so uniform, but the inhabitants didn't mind.

Don't confuse jokes with reality. Of course it was never an intentional policy of TOS to equate red shirts with mortality; that's just a lame joke in fandom that people today have taken far too literally.

I'm not, but on this I am aware of the myth, which has some entertainment value as well. I've even got a better set of percentages coming up as well.

Based on raw numbers attributed to profession, there is no myth.

Based on percentages, there is a myth.

Both sides are not incorrect. Even that 70s movie character would say "...from a certain point of view." :biggrin:

The chart below refers to only involves people on the Enterprise on away missions, which doesn't take into account what the people were doing when getting killed. When you consider how security guards are on almost or all 100% of those, certainly far, far more so than the other divisions are, the chart pretends that's not a factor. People in the security division die more than in other professions, which are generally less dangerous, and far less so if they didn't need security.

Count the number of episodes in which security people beam on down as opposed to geologists (who wear blue): 1 in 79 episodes features a geologist on screen beaming down and dying (D'Amato). That's 0.012% of all TOS episodes where a landing party member who's a geologist gets killed. It's a safe guess to say that more than one security person beamed down over the span of 79 episodes than just... one. Let's say for arbitrary sake that 50 episodes had security dudes beaming down and one gets killed each time. That's 63% right there IF (to reiterate) it's only 50 episodes, for which only 1 guard is killed and not any more...

...based on criteria, anyone can make percentages and still be not wrong. And since, on screen, either which way, we see more security guards on landing parties dying than geologists on landing parties dying, it takes little to get above that 0.012% hurdle that the blue shirt geologists set... so red still wins out and red is not the safest color. That said, geology rocks. They just didn't do enough of it on TOS because it wasn't as exciting compared to pew pew action fun from that security person's gun. But there's more to criteria than just the shirt hue worn. (Or to say from that example above that 100% of blue shirts die - that sounds like a joke.)



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Perhaps, but I somewhat disagree. Maybe it's because the 1960s70s/Stonewall/etc opened the doors to more inclusion on screen (which could lead to positive images and not just ones that could be seen negatively), or because I'm not a Kinsey 0 heterosexual, but I saw the movie's setup as being open and inclusive of non-heterosexual examples.

I'm not surprised that LGBTQ audiences were willing to take it that way, but I don't think it's what the filmmakers intended. The 1970s is way too early to find much in the way of positive, inclusive depictions of gay characters. Usually, it was only treated as a joke or a perversion. I think the only reason the Logan reference could be taken as positive was because it was subtle enough to be ambiguous. At that point in the movie, Logan took it fairly casually, and that feels comparatively inclusive out of context. But the broader context is that in the first act, Logan is not a good guy yet. He's not a role model. He's a ruthless killer, an enforcer for a dictatorship. We're not supposed to admire or identify with the values he holds at that point in the film. The story is about how he gradually learns to become a better person after he starts running. So the values the filmmakers are holding up as positive are the values Logan holds in the third act, not the first.


Yes, Logan rejects the red-clothed guy but there are several prongs to this: 1. Red means the person is older and not everyone wants someone older or younger too much compared to themselves.

In the film, red is 24-30. Logan is 26; the computer advances his Lifeclock 4 years to let him pass as a Runner nearing his expiration date. So the man was probably close to Logan's age and could have been up to 2 years younger.


Granted, the actual book might tell it all differently and maybe it is backhandedly promoting things the author hated.

The book is extremely different. The age of death is 21, so the characters having sex and drug orgies are mostly underage. It's not a domed city in a post-apocalyptic wasteland, but an entire planetary civilization that's falling apart because the youthful rebels killed off all the experienced, smart adults and so nobody left is any good at running things. (It's a right-wing satire of the youth movements of the era, the diametric opposite of the Hunger Games-style narratives that everyone today wants to compare it to. It's a world where the youthful rebels against tyranny won and ended up creating a far worse tyranny.) The book's Logan actually is on his Last Day, about to turn 21, and rather than being assigned by the computer to fake running, he decides on his own initiative to find and kill the Runners' leader and go out in a blaze of glory. He doesn't actually decide to join the rebels until the end of the book, after his picaresque tour of the decaying society convinces him how dysfunctional it is.


If it's being pro-"nuclear family" just by showing other types, via being a paradigm showed outside of a constructed civilization, just switch which side is in which society and it's the same thing. hen I saw it, I didn't perceive an ulterior motive, and that the movie was trying to be clinically objective.

Prejudice isn't always conscious. In fact, it usually isn't. It's not about what agenda you're consciously advancing -- it's about what unquestioned assumptions you've been raised with. It's about operating within limitations that you don't even know are there because it's never occurred to you to look beyond them. Being "objective" with one generation's values can look very bigoted to a later generation that's operating under different assumptions, or that's resolved questions that an earlier generation hadn't even thought to ask yet.


Plus, there are gay and bi people who want nuclear families too - whether they raise children or not. This can go into too much a lengthy tangent--

Yes, you and I know that, but that doesn't mean the filmmakers in the 1970s saw it that way. I grew up in the '70s, and in my experience, when homosexuality came up in the mass media at all, it was almost invariably stigmatized, caricatured, or demonized. Gay characters were either villains or clowns. There were some daring attempts at positive "message" stories about homosexuality in the '80s, but it didn't become common until the '90s and beyond. You certainly wouldn't have seen much public awareness in those decades of the idea that gay people might want to settle down and have families. The definition of family hadn't broadened enough yet to include that possibility.

Besides, what Peter Ustinov talks about in the movie is specifically mothers and fathers, procreation in the old-fashioned way that the city has abandoned in favor of artificial reproduction. So it's very much a heteronormative portrayal of what family is.


Isn't it a bigger issue to ask why Logan's Run society is having its people killed off at 30 and is leaving it open-ended? Why might that be? What does the movie gain from that?

I thought it was pretty clear that it was a population-control measure. The domed city is believed to be the only enclave of life left on Earth, and since it's a finite environment, its population has to be strictly balanced and forbidden to grow. So every birth has to be balanced with a death.

At least in the TV series, that's why they have numbers -- the reason he's called "Logan 5" is because he's presumed to be the reincarnation of the previous four Logans who were killed at 30 to allow the birth of their successors. That's what "Renewal" is explained to be in the show, though the movie is vaguer.
 
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