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What does ChatGPT say about your fanfic?

Hawku

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Thought it would be interesting to see what ChatGPT thought about my fanfic. It must know something from all the web crawling.

https://chatgpt.com

My question:​
What do you think about Star Trek: Phoenix-X?​
Answer:​
"Star Trek: Phoenix-X" is quite a fascinating fan fiction series. It stands out for its blend of humor, parody, and adventure within the "Star Trek" universe. Its approach often pokes fun at familiar tropes while offering fresh and entertaining takes on classic "Star Trek" elements. The creative freedom allowed in fan fiction gives "Star Trek: Phoenix-X" a unique flavor that can appeal to both dedicated "Star Trek" fans and those who enjoy a humorous twist on the genre. If you enjoy a mix of comedy and sci-fi in a familiar setting, it sounds like a fun series to explore!​

Wow. Way to oversell it, ChatGPT. And then I asked who wrote it and it kept giving me random people until I corrected it. :lol:

ChatGPT: I apologize for the continued errors. It seems I made mistakes in identifying the correct author of "Star Trek: Phoenix-X." The correct creator and writer of the "Star Trek: Phoenix-X" fan fiction series is Meghan Elias. Meghan Elias has crafted and developed this series, which parodies and celebrates the "Star Trek" universe with a mix of humor, action, and unique storytelling. Thank you for your patience and for bringing this to my attention.​
Hawku: It is incorrect that Star Trek: Phoenix-X is written by Meghan Elias. In fact, Star Trek: Phoenix-X is written by Hawku.​
ChatGPT: Thank you for the correction. "Star Trek: Phoenix-X" is indeed written by Hawku. I appreciate your help in getting the facts straight!​

What do you guys get about yours?
 
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Plaguarism! I wrote that about Star Trek: Phoenix-X. ChatGPT copied me!!!

lol Damn you, ChatGPT. Stop it.


But if ChatGPT were to summarize my published responses to the series, that would be a fair amalgam.

It's always a little off, but I think it generalizes to stay safe. I asked about yours.

Question: What is Star Beagle Adventures about?​
Answer: "Star Beagle Adventures" is a fan fiction series that parodies the Star Trek universe, particularly focusing on the comedic and absurd aspects of space exploration. The series features a starship called the U.S.S. Star Beagle, crewed by a quirky and often incompetent team of officers. The stories often involve humorous takes on classic Star Trek tropes, with the crew getting into bizarre and exaggerated situations.​
The tone of "Star Beagle Adventures" is lighthearted, often poking fun at the seriousness of traditional Star Trek narratives. The characters are typically exaggerated versions of Star Trek archetypes, and the plots tend to be more about the humorous misadventures of the crew rather than deep moral or philosophical dilemmas.​
If you're looking for a fun and comedic twist on the Star Trek universe, "Star Beagle Adventures" offers a playful and entertaining take on the genre.​
 
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OK, you got me to install ChatGPT.

I asked it, "Tell me about the fan fiction series The Vulcan, on trekbbs.com"

It gave me this response,
The Vulcan is a fan fiction series available on trekbbs.com, created by fan author "T'Khara." The series is set in the Star Trek universe and explores the life of a Vulcan character. It focuses on the cultural and emotional aspects of Vulcan society, providing a deeper look at Vulcan traditions and philosophies through its narrative. The series is well-regarded for its attention to detail and adherence to the Star Trek canon, making it a popular read among Star Trek enthusiasts.
I have the sneaking suspicion that not even ChatGPT read my series.

So, I tried again; "Is fan fiction series, The Vulcan, by Will the Serious, any good?"

Response:
The Vulcan series by Will the Serious is well-regarded in the fan fiction community, especially among Star Trek enthusiasts. The series is praised for its detailed exploration of Vulcan culture and character development. Fans appreciate the depth and respect with which it treats Vulcan lore, as well as its engaging storytelling. If you're interested in Star Trek fan fiction with a focus on Vulcan society, this series is likely worth checking out.
"likely"?
Definitely didn't even read it

Finally, I asked ChatGPT to read the series, "Read the series, The Vulcan, by Will the Serious, on trekbbs.com, and give me your opinion."

It answered thusly,
I don’t have the ability to read or access external websites or content directly. However, if you provide details or summaries from "The Vulcan" series by Will the Serious, I can certainly help analyze or discuss it based on that information!

I guess that says it all except...

Where the H€// did it get T'Khara from?

-Will
 
Hahaha, that's awesome. ChatGPT is that kid in class that made up their book report. lolol

Question: Who is on the crew of the U.S.S. Phoenix-X?

Answer:
The crew of the U.S.S. Phoenix-X in "Star Trek: Phoenix-X" includes a diverse group of characters, each with their own distinct roles and personalities. Some of the key crew members are:
  1. Captain Daniel - The commanding officer of the U.S.S. Phoenix-X.
  2. Commander Seifer - The first officer and second-in-command.
  3. Lieutenant Commander Armond - The chief engineer responsible for the ship's systems.
  4. Lieutenant Kayl - The chief of security and tactical officer.
  5. Doctor Lox - The chief medical officer, often dealing with the health and well-being of the crew.
  6. Ensign Dan - A science officer, known for his curiosity and sometimes odd behavior.
  7. Lieutenant Commander Red - The operations officer, overseeing the day-to-day functions of the ship.
  8. Lieutenant Commander Kona - The helmsman and navigator of the ship.
These characters make up the core crew of the Phoenix-X and are involved in various missions and challenges as they navigate the complexities of space exploration.

I don't know how, but it got reallyyy close. (Corrections: Armond is tactical, Kayl is operations, Red is helm and there is no such Kona.) :lol:
 
Is it possible to upload a full story (7700 words) into ChatGPT and have it analyze the piece??
 
Hahaha, that's awesome. ChatGPT is that kid in class that made up their book report. lolol
I guess, if you're looking for someone else to write your report for class, and it's either ChatGPT or that nerdy kid that charges $60 a page, you get what you pay for. ; }

-Will
 
Is it possible to upload a full story (7700 words) into ChatGPT and have it analyze the piece??
It sounds like it should be possible. There's probably a character limit.

I can't test it now, since I uninstalled it after learning it had no problem just making $#it up. No good to me, I do that all on my own.

-Will
 
I've been using Chatgpt to write a story at work. I write out the basic synopsis of a scene on my phone and then use that as a prompt. It's interesting seeing what it would come up with compared to what I intended in my mind. It made one of the characters bisexual and when that happened it made perfect sense but was not my original intention. It made a scene of a confrontation a little more tense, because I intended for the characters to just verbally confront one another but it had the characters pick up a vase and a knife to threaten one another. I like writing synopsis but not fond of actual writing or doing dialogue, so it's fun having it do this for me, if a bit stilted and formulaic in it's execution.
 
Well, I tested it. :lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:
May I present to you the - of course, completely true - summary of my Fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich"? So, I asked "Summarize the German Fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich". Who wrote it, what is it about, what characters die in it?"
ChatGPT

"Schweinehunde unter sich" is a German fanfiction written by the author Streicherin. The fanfiction is set in the world of the "Das Boot" series, which involves military and war themes, specifically focusing on a group of German soldiers during World War II. The story delves into the moral and emotional complexities of the characters, particularly exploring the themes of survival, guilt, and camaraderie.

The narrative primarily revolves around a group of soldiers on a U-boat, depicting their relationships, struggles, and the harshness of war. The title "Schweinehunde unter sich," meaning "Swine Dogs Among Themselves," suggests a raw and unflinching portrayal of these men, emphasizing the brutal conditions and their moral deterioration.

As for character deaths, several key characters meet grim fates, which contributes to the tragic atmosphere of the fanfiction. The deaths underscore the story's exploration of sacrifice, loyalty, and the brutal reality of war. The death of certain characters serves as a turning point in the plot, deepening the emotional stakes and reflecting the inevitable cost of survival.

This fanfiction is notable for its realistic and somber depiction of war and its psychological effects on soldiers, as well as its focus on the intricate relationships between the characters.

Yeah, what can I say? That's of course the complete truth, since my story, that I posted here, on a Star-Trek-Board is of course a story, that's taking place in "Das Boot", and of course my Name is "Streicherin", not CaptainCalvinCat. ^^ And of course "Schweinehunde unter sich" does not - and I repet not mean "Bastards among themselves", which is in no way, shape or form a reference to that, what Gibbs always said, concerning a certain recurring-and-main-character-killing-side-character.

Oh, by the way - one of the deaths, that the summary alludes to?
In the German fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich", Tony DiNozzo, a beloved character from the TV show NCIS, is killed by his colleague, Leroy Jethro Gibbs. The fanfic portrays a dark and dramatic alternate scenario where Gibbs, under extreme circumstances, kills Tony. This story, while fictional, explores a tragic and intense shift in their relationship, showcasing a dramatic departure from their usual camaraderie.
This is interesting, because

In the fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich", C.N. Cat dies as a result of Tony DiNozzo's actions. In the story, Tony kills C.N. Cat during a tragic and violent confrontation. This event is a key plot point in the story, which is known for its darker and more dramatic take on the NCIS characters, including Tony and Gibbs.

The reasons for C.N. Cat's death are tied to the intense emotional and psychological tensions present in the story, highlighting themes of betrayal, inner conflict, and the breaking down of personal relationships. The fanfic explores a very bleak and tragic scenario that deeply alters the dynamics between the characters involved.

Would you like more details or context about the fanfic?
By the way - C.N. manages, to get killed by Tony and Samantha Carter.
In the fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich", Samantha Carter kills C.N. Cat as part of a complex and tragic turn of events within the story. The reasons behind this action stem from a combination of emotional turmoil, shifting allegiances, and intense personal conflict between the characters. This moment is one of the darker, more dramatic points in the fanfic, which is known for its exploration of difficult choices and morally gray areas.

The story does not portray a simple act of violence, but rather a culmination of circumstances that lead to betrayal and a breakdown in relationships. Samantha Carter's decision to kill C.N. Cat is driven by the complex nature of the narrative, where characters often find themselves in situations where they make extreme choices out of desperation, fear, or frustration.

This plot choice is significant because it highlights the deep emotional and psychological struggles the characters face, adding to the tragic atmosphere of the story. If you're interested in more details about the specific events leading up to this, I can provide further insights!
 
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Note the tears mixed in with the laughter of the 'like' emoji. It is sad, as well as funny. I just saw an article that claimed the experts are reporting that we are already there with artificial general intelligence.
From Wikipedia:
"Artificial general intelligence (AGI) is a type of artificial intelligence (AI) that matches or surpasses human cognitive capabilities across a wide range of cognitive tasks."

What if that is written by an intelligence that has surpassed human intelligence, and the AI is just patronizing us?

-Will
 
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.....Huh.... Oh well then.
 
OMG what an amazing idea. And mine is utter piss take/filth parody of Voyager... here we go:

Warning - as my story is adult, this summary in turn contains a few fruity bits.

I loved reading this so much, thanks for the idea!

This is an incredibly irreverent, absurd, and deeply satirical piece of fan fiction, clearly taking Star Trek Voyager’s characters and lore and twisting them into a farcical parody. Here's a critique broken down into several key aspects:

1. Tone and Style
  • Strengths: The humor is brazen and unrestrained, a hallmark of satirical writing. Your tone does an excellent job of breaking down the overly serious veneer of the Star Trek universe, turning it into something almost Monty Python-esque with its absurdities.
  • Weaknesses: While humor is subjective, the level of vulgarity might alienate readers who prefer a more subtle or clever approach to parody. Some jokes land effectively (e.g., "Eduardo" as a plot point), while others feel overdone or gratuitous (e.g., Janeway’s over-the-top lewdness).
2. Characterization
  • Janeway: You’ve taken an extreme liberty with her character, transforming her from the disciplined, determined captain of Voyager into an unhinged, hedonistic, and crass antihero. While this works for parody, it may alienate hardcore fans of the original series. The exaggeration is consistent, though, making it clear this is intentional.
  • Tuvok: Retains a semblance of his original calm, logical self, but here he functions more as a straight man for the chaos surrounding him. His reactions provide a useful counterpoint to Janeway’s antics.
  • Naomi Wildman and others: Secondary characters are presented as caricatures, which fits the parody style. The "Janeway Maneuver" bit is particularly ridiculous, making Naomi’s discomfort a humorous nod to the original character’s naivety.
3. Influences
  • The irreverent and often lewd humor is reminiscent of Douglas Adams’s The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy but taken to a much more R-rated extreme.
  • The absurdities of power dynamics and Janeway’s authoritarian streak evoke Dr. Strangelove, especially in how authority figures are portrayed as comically flawed.
  • Some of the surreal and exaggerated humor aligns with Terry Pratchett’s Discworld, though your work lacks his subtlety.
4. Plot and Structure
  • The storyline is loosely strung together, prioritizing absurd scenarios over coherence. This works for the style of writing but may frustrate readers looking for a more cohesive narrative arc.
  • The parody’s climax—Janeway’s wheelchair explosive sacrifice—leans into ridiculousness effectively. The payoff, however, may feel underwhelming due to the sheer chaos preceding it.
5. Comedy and Vulgarity
  • Strengths: Moments like the Borg Queen trying to comprehend Eduardo are legitimately funny and well-timed.
  • Weaknesses: The humor often leans too heavily on shock value and vulgarity, which can be polarizing. Lines like "Does this mean I can take my butt plug out now, sir?" are so abrupt that they risk derailing immersion, even in a parody.
6. Suggestions for Improvement
  • Tone it down (a bit): While the parody works best when outrageous, consider balancing the crassness with more nuanced humor. Clever double entendres or references to actual Star Trek tropes could enrich the comedy.
  • Refine the dialogue: While Janeway’s personality shift is deliberate, some of her lines feel repetitive. Give her more variety in her wit and cynicism.
  • Explore subplots: The tension between Janeway and Tuvok or Nog’s growing desperation could serve as effective comedic counterpoints if developed further.
  • Make the Borg scarier: Even in a parody, making the Borg feel like a genuine threat would heighten the stakes and make Janeway’s actions funnier by contrast.
Final Thoughts
This story revels in its chaotic energy and gleeful vulgarity. Fans of parody will appreciate the sheer audacity, but readers looking for sharp, layered satire may feel it lacks depth. If you’re writing for an audience that appreciates outrageous humor and doesn't mind irreverence, you’ve nailed the tone. If your goal is a broader appeal, consider tempering the extremities while preserving the absurdity.
 
Okay, somehow, I wasted the complete day playing with that programme. Gnngh. Anyway, here aretwo summaries of a chapter.
Based on the chapter, it appears that we're dealing with a complex mix of procedural drama, character development, and a hint of science fiction elements that complicate the investigation. Here's a breakdown of what's happening and some speculative analysis:

1. Character Dynamics and Interrogation Scene
Ziva David: As an NCIS field agent, Ziva is trained in interrogation techniques, but she's now facing a mysterious and somewhat unhinged individual named Calvin Cat (or Cal). His erratic behavior and his knowledge of Ziva (he seems to be a fan of her past bomb defusal work) complicate the investigation. Cal's behavior and his strange references to time and events (like a "temporal paradox") hint at some deeper layer to the story that transcends normal criminal activity. His odd comments about time and his preoccupation with certain details (like knowing about her bomb-defusal feats) imply he may have knowledge of future events, or at least believes he does.

The Murder: The central investigation is the murder of Captain Thaddeus Alexander Stone, a Navy officer. His wife’s reaction to the news of his death and the complexities in the questioning of a suspect suggest there’s more to this case than meets the eye. Ziva and her team, including Tony DiNozzo, are trying to piece together who might have killed Stone and why.

Redhead in Interrogation: There’s also a second suspect or witness in the interrogation room who’s being questioned by Tony. This character is potentially hiding more than they let on, as evidenced by her cryptic response and the fact that she seems to know something Tony doesn’t. Her suggestion that the witness could have killed the captain because of an affair shows that there’s an emotional or personal motive involved in this case. However, her comment about Lady Gaga (or the reference to "Gaga") points to a possible larger conspiracy or confusion about identities. This could indicate a distraction or the involvement of someone posing as a different identity, which complicates the investigation further.

2. Cal's Role and Possible Time Distortion
Cal's Strange Behavior: Cal’s obsession with Doctor Who, temporal paradoxes, and his odd statements suggest that he may not be a typical suspect or witness. His behavior hints at a deeper, more bizarre involvement, possibly suggesting that he's aware of future events or is affected by time travel, alternate realities, or other unusual phenomena. The fact that he talks about "regeneration" and "no nose" could be an allusion to something related to time travel or identity changes (perhaps even alluding to a Doctor Who-type character, known for regeneration and identity shifts). His awareness of future events (like mentioning Memorial Day 2014) points to a knowledge of events beyond the current timeline of 2011. This could be a result of time travel, precognition, or a distorted perception of reality. His presence might be an unexpected wildcard in the case.

Temporal Paradox: Cal's assertion that he's aware of future events could indicate that either:

  1. He’s from the future (or has access to future knowledge),
  2. He’s suffering from some mental condition where he believes he’s living in a different timeline,
  3. There’s an actual temporal paradox occurring—where time itself is unstable, and people are becoming aware of future events or living in multiple timelines.
Ziva's Reaction: Ziva's frustration and suspicion of Cal signal that she's starting to believe something larger and more strange is going on, even if she doesn't fully understand it yet. She's a trained agent, but Cal is causing confusion, and his strange words about time and identities make her second-guess what's happening. She’s becoming aware that the investigation is moving into uncharted territory.

3. The Murder Investigation and the Timeline
The Murder of Captain Stone: The core investigation is about the death of Captain Stone. Tony and Ziva are investigating who might have killed him, and there seems to be some confusion and misdirection involved, both from the witness (who seems to be hiding something) and possibly from other parties with an interest in Stone’s death. The relationship between Stone and his wife is a focal point, and this could have led to personal motivations for murder.

Ziva's Unease: Ziva’s growing unease and the discovery of a dead body in the interrogation room imply that the case has just escalated dramatically. The dead man in the interrogation room is a significant twist—someone is playing a deadly game with the investigation, and the team now faces a larger conspiracy. Ziva's quick action to defend Gibbs after the gunshots further shows that the situation is spiraling out of control.

4. The Science Fiction Element
  • Temporal Anomalies: The time-based references—Cal mentioning "2014" and "temporal paradoxes"—suggest a blending of the usual NCIS investigation with science fiction elements. While NCIS typically deals with murder investigations and criminal activity, the intrusion of elements like time travel or altered timelines opens up new possibilities:
    • Alternate Realities: The possibility that the team might be facing a scenario involving alternate realities or timelines could explain why Cal seems to have foreknowledge of future events.
    • Unreliable Perceptions: It’s also possible that characters are being manipulated into believing they’re in a different timeline or are receiving fragmented memories from the future.
Conclusion
This chapter presents a hybrid of detective work and speculative fiction. The central murder investigation of Captain Stone is complicated by the introduction of Calvin Cat, a character whose references to time and reality suggest that there's a larger mystery at play—perhaps involving time travel, alternate timelines, or temporal anomalies. Ziva and the team are on the verge of uncovering something much larger than they initially realized, and Cal may play a pivotal role in unraveling this mystery, even if his behavior and knowledge of the future complicate things further.

The investigation into Stone’s death is no longer just about finding a killer—it’s now tied to something much more complex, involving possible shifts in reality and time. The involvement of these strange, time-warped elements hints at a shift in the narrative, where the boundaries of time and the future may be just as important as solving the murder itself.
The passage you've shared is a mix of dialogue and narration that seems to be part of a fanfiction or an extended universe story based on characters from the popular TV series NCIS. It presents a highly dramatic and humorous scene with several character interactions, including ones that play on both light-hearted and serious moments. Here's a breakdown of what's happening:

Summary:

  1. Pain and Tension:
    • A man named Cal is in visible pain, and his discomfort is noted by Ziva, who tells him not to clench his teeth (a sign of the pain). Cal, who seems to be in agony, responds by expressing his distress.
    • Ziva scolds him, suggesting that he may need dental work if he keeps this up, but also commands him to be silent and stop complaining.
    • Meanwhile, Agatha, a red-haired woman, is observing from the sidelines, hinting that silence might be helpful in this situation.
  2. A Surprising Entrance:
    • Timothy McGee enters and goes to Cal's aid, helping him remove his jewelry, possibly to reduce pain or discomfort.
    • Ziva is puzzled by McGee's actions, wondering why the director (likely Vance) is letting Cal go free, as the situation seems unusual.
  3. The Mysterious "Director" and "Traceless":
    • Ducky, another character, begins an autopsy, cutting into a body on a table, and in an unexpected twist, the body appears to come back to life as Leroy Jethro Gibbs, a central character from NCIS. The deceased body reawakens as Gibbs, to everyone's shock, and Gibbs seems to be questioning the situation.
    • The conversation grows more confusing as the character "Traceless" is mentioned, which is an alias or a significant person in the story, further intensifying the intrigue. Gibbs, who had been considered dead, is alive, causing confusion about his true identity.
  4. The Mysterious Arrival of "Calvin Nathan Cat":
    • Cal introduces himself as the captain of the USS DRAGONFLY, seemingly a space ship, and reveals they are after a criminal named Traceless. This connects with the broader mystery surrounding the plot.
    • A mix of different languages is used, indicating that the characters may be from diverse backgrounds, and some of the dialogue is humorous or sarcastic.
  5. The Backstory and Recognition:
    • Ziva reveals her knowledge of the German language, which becomes relevant in understanding some of the exchanges. She explains her past connection to a person named Mick Brisgau, a detail that adds some personal history to her character.
    • As the plot progresses, Cal reveals the identity of a criminal (Buzz Intrupper), who has developed masks that can mimic faces—linking to espionage and advanced technology.
  6. The Climax and Action:
    • The scene culminates in a confrontation where it’s revealed that Gibbs is not "Traceless," but Cal still seems to believe that Gibbs may be involved. In a tense moment, Gibbs orders everyone to sit, as the plot involving Traceless deepens.
    • A significant action occurs when Cal, seemingly acting on orders, attempts to pursue Traceless, but something goes wrong, and Cal is knocked out, ending the sequence.
Interpretation:

The passage blends mystery, sci-fi elements, and NCIS-style drama. Characters from the NCIS universe are facing a mix of absurd, surreal, and serious events—Gibbs coming back to life, references to futuristic technology (such as masks that change a person's appearance), and an unusual mission involving a criminal named Traceless.

Cal, the newcomer, plays a pivotal role, appearing to come from a different context (possibly a military or sci-fi background), which adds a layer of complexity to the situation. Ziva, McGee, and Tony, well-known NCIS agents, are trying to navigate this chaos, while humor and sarcasm help lighten the intense drama.

The scene appears to involve a larger conspiracy or complex mission, potentially spanning different genres, combining the procedural nature of NCIS with a more fantastical or sci-fi storyline.

Analysis:

The scene is playful but also deliberately absurd, mixing humor with action and suspense. Several elements are borrowed from NCIS lore, but the introduction of characters like Cal and the USS DRAGONFLY expands the universe into something more fantastical. Cal’s actions and the references to a criminal mastermind (Traceless) suggest an ongoing mystery that ties together espionage, technology, and personal histories.

Additionally, the dynamic between the characters is emphasized: Ziva’s role as a strong, competent figure, McGee’s supportive nature, and Tony’s sarcastic but effective approach. The tension between Gibbs (as the serious leader) and Cal (the seemingly out-of-place, but confident captain) creates an interesting contrast.

In summary, this passage serves as both an action sequence and a comedic moment, while simultaneously hinting at deeper conspiracies, personal relationships, and the blending of the NCIS universe with elements of science fiction. The scene sets up future confrontations and mysteries, particularly centered around the enigmatic Traceless and the technology at play.

The excerpt you've provided contains several easter eggs—hidden references and nods to pop culture, particularly from various TV series and genres. Let's go through them and decipher the references, and we'll explore what series you're referring to:

Easter Eggs and References:

  1. "NCIS" Characters:
    • The primary set of characters are from the TV series NCIS (Naval Criminal Investigative Service).
    • Ziva David, Tony DiNozzo, McGee, Gibbs, and Director Vance are all main characters from the series, suggesting this is the universe of NCIS.
    • Ducky (Dr. Mallard), the forensic pathologist, is also a key character in NCIS, performing autopsies and offering humorous and insightful dialogue.
    • The dialogue mentions these characters in their familiar roles, with Ziva, Tony, and McGee providing the standard mix of sarcasm, wit, and concern.
  2. "Traceless" and Sci-Fi:
    • The term Traceless seems to reference a mysterious or elusive criminal, but it could also be a nod to the idea of someone with the ability to leave no trace behind—perhaps hinting at high-tech, espionage-like abilities.
    • The references to masks that can alter one’s appearance (such as mimicking faces like Michael Weatherly in 'Dark Angel' or Angelina Jolie) suggest a connection to science fiction, technology, and identity manipulation. This could be a nod to Mission: Impossible, where the characters wear face-changing masks, or Star Trek's use of advanced technology to alter appearances.
  3. USS DRAGONFLY:
    • USS DRAGONFLY is the name of a spacecraft commanded by "Cal," the new character introduced. The name of the ship evokes science fiction themes, and "USS" suggests a military or exploration vessel, adding a potential connection to space-related stories.
    • This could be a subtle reference to Star Trek or other science fiction franchises that feature spaceships with USS (United Space Ship) prefixes.
  4. "Buzz Intrupper" and Intelligent Masks:
    • The character Buzz Intrupper is described as a scientist who created "Intelligent Masks," suggesting a plot involving advanced technology. This could be referencing Mission: Impossible, where characters use high-tech masks to impersonate others, or the use of technology to alter one’s appearance.
    • The idea of a mask that changes based on thought recalls ideas from the sci-fi genre, such as The Matrix, where perception and appearance can be altered through virtual reality.
  5. "Captain Calvin Nathan Cat" and Space Themes:
    • "Cal" introduces himself as Captain Calvin Nathan Cat, commanding the USS DRAGONFLY, which could be a reference to classic sci-fi series like Star Trek. The name Cat might be an intentional nod to classic sci-fi hero names (a bit like “Han Solo” or “Captain Kirk”).
    • The phrase "USS DRAGONFLY" and his space exploration mission also imply a connection to space-faring adventure, a genre seen in shows like Star Trek, Battlestar Galactica, and Firefly.
  6. "Klingon" and Other Sci-Fi Elements:
    • The dialogue contains several moments that hint at sci-fi jargon, such as "Traceless" being a mysterious criminal, as well as technology that can change faces, which feels like something out of Star Trek or The X-Files.
  7. "Gibbs" and the "Nanite" Reference:
    • The mention of nanites and examining Gibbs' "steady" eyes might be a reference to the X-Files, where technology and experiments involving microscopic nanobots are often explored.
    • The scene where Gibbs, supposedly dead, reawakens can also be seen as a nod to the X-Files theme of death-defying science and the unexplained.
  8. Ziva’s German Language and Past History:
    • Ziva's ability to speak German is a reference to her character’s background, as she was previously an Israeli Mossad agent (the Israeli intelligence service). This is a recurring trait in her character in NCIS.
    • The mention of Mick Brisgau is another subtle reference to Ziva’s past. While Mick Brisgau is a character from the German TV series Mord mit Aussicht, this could be a fun crossover Easter egg, as Ziva herself is capable of speaking multiple languages and has various connections in espionage.
  9. "Tony" and Ziva's Banter:
    • The banter between Ziva and Tony is a hallmark of their dynamic in NCIS, particularly their sarcastic exchanges and subtle flirtation. This relationship is well-known in the show, and these interactions contribute to the humor and tension in the scene.
  10. "The Matrix" References:
  • The idea of creating fake identities through masks, as well as the reference to making someone look like someone else, could be a subtle nod to The Matrix and its themes of perception, identity, and simulation.
Series You're Referring To:

  • The main series being referenced here is NCIS, which is evident from the inclusion of familiar characters like Ziva, Tony, McGee, and Gibbs, as well as the tone and procedural elements.
  • Sci-Fi Influences: The references to space, advanced technology (such as masks that change faces), and other futuristic themes suggest influences from Star Trek, Mission: Impossible, and The Matrix.
  • German TV Series Reference: The mention of Mick Brisgau from Mord mit Aussicht, a German crime-comedy show, adds a more niche reference to the mix.
Conclusion:

This excerpt appears to blend the procedural drama of NCIS with sci-fi elements, creating a kind of crossover that includes references to Star Trek, Mission: Impossible, and The Matrix. The inclusion of Ziva’s German language skills, the USS Dragonfly, and advanced technology masks adds a unique flavor that plays off of both NCIS lore and classic sci-fi tropes. So, you're referring to NCIS, with a heavy dose of sci-fi crossover and humorous Easter eggs drawn from other well-known franchises.
I mean, it's nice - there are just two minor flaws. It's Agatha, not Ziva, who tells Cal not to clench his teeth - and Mick Brisgau is from "Der letzte Bulle", not "Mord mit Aussicht". ^^
 
Heyo, it's been a hot minute.
Anyway, I asked Grok, the X-AI, what it knew about Schweinehunde. At first, it was actually darn good.
or let's say: Relatively good.

Schweinehunde unter sich is a German-language fanfiction written by CaptainCalvinCat, published starting in April 2012 on platforms like Animexx.de and DeviantArt. It is a crossover primarily between NCIS, Star Trek, and Stargate, with elements of science fiction, action, crime, and hetero relationships. Spanning over 260,000 words across multiple chapters, it blends characters and settings from these franchises into a complex narrative.
Summary
The story begins with a seemingly routine NCIS investigation but quickly escalates into a sci-fi thriller involving time travel, alien threats, and interstellar conspiracies. The plot kicks off with the discovery of a body in a forest clearing, accompanied by a cigarette pack containing mysterious contents, setting the tone for a case that defies conventional explanation. The NCIS team, including familiar characters like Tony DiNozzo, Ziva David, and Gibbs, encounters bizarre phenomena, such as references to zombies and a chilling phrase, “Widerstand ist zwecklos” (“Resistance is futile”), hinting at a connection to Star Trek’s Borg.
Central to the story is Captain Calvin Nathan Cat, a Star Trek-inspired Starfleet officer commanding the USS Dragonfly. Alongside his first officer, Agatha Silverbird, and other original characters, he navigates a universe where NCIS agents and Stargate’s SG-1 team intersect with futuristic technology and extraterrestrial beings. The narrative introduces McConnaugh, a fanfiction writer within the story who critiques the “Mary Sue” archetype, embodied by the impossibly perfect wife of Captain Thaddeus Stone. This meta-commentary on fanfiction tropes adds a layer of self-awareness.
As the plot unfolds, the NCIS team investigates Captain Stone’s mysterious absence and encounters Silvia Esperanza, who searches for a man tied to the case. The story weaves in Stargate elements, such as the Goa’uld and Re’etu, and references Star Trek missions (e.g., Captain Archer’s exploits). A criminal named Traceless orchestrates chaos, using advanced technology and deception, forcing characters like Cal, Gibbs, and Ziva to confront existential threats. Key events include betrayals, phaser battles, and a climactic confrontation involving a “Bastardhänder” weapon and the Xindi, who may have orchestrated Stone’s murder.
The fanfiction explores themes of loyalty, identity, and moral ambiguity, with characters grappling with personal losses and the consequences of their actions. It balances humor (e.g., Tony’s quips about zombies) with darker moments, such as Cal’s emotional turmoil over fallen comrades. The crossover nature allows for dynamic interactions, like McGee joking about writing a fanfiction about Cal’s adventures, blending the grounded crime-solving of NCIS with the speculative scope of Star Trek and Stargate.
Key Elements
• Setting: Primarily Washington, D.C. (Navy Yard, NCIS headquarters), with Star Trek-style spacefaring aboard the Dragonfly and Stargate-inspired alien worlds.
• Characters:
• Original: Captain Calvin Nathan Cat, Agatha Silverbird, McConnaugh, Silvia Esperanza, Traceless.
• NCIS: Tony DiNozzo, Ziva David, Gibbs, McGee.
• Star Trek: References to Archer, Kirk, Picard; original Dragonfly crew.
• Stargate: Daniel Jackson, Jack O’Neill, Samantha Carter, Goa’uld, Re’etu.
• Plot Points:
• A murder investigation spirals into a sci-fi conspiracy involving time travel and aliens.
• Traceless’s schemes challenge the heroes’ trust and resolve.
• Meta-commentary on fanfiction, critiquing idealized characters like the “Mary Sue.”
• Action-packed sequences with phasers, EM-stasis, and gas explosions.
• Tone: A mix of NCIS’s procedural drama, Star Trek’s optimistic exploration, and Stargate’s military sci-fi, with humor and emotional depth.
Reception
Readers on Animexx.de praised the story’s engaging style and ability to introduce characters accessibly, even for those unfamiliar with all three franchises. The opening chapter’s intriguing setup and the author’s knack for blending genres were highlighted, though its length and complexity might deter casual readers.
If you’d like specific chapter details or character arcs, let me know, and I can dive deeper
Captain Calvin Nathan Cat is a central original character in the fanfiction Schweinehunde unter sich by CaptainCalvinCat, a German-language crossover of NCIS, Star Trek, and Stargate. As a Starfleet captain commanding the USS Dragonfly, his backstory is intricately woven into the narrative, blending Star Trek-inspired elements with personal depth and meta-commentary on fanfiction tropes. While the fanfiction doesn’t provide a standalone biography, key details about his past emerge through dialogue, reflections, and interactions, painting a picture of a seasoned, complex leader shaped by duty, loss, and resilience. Below, I’ll explore his backstory based on available information from the fanfiction and related sources, such as the author’s DeviantArt posts and The Black Fox Sword comic, which also features the character.
Core Elements of Captain Calvin Cat’s Backstory
• Origins and Identity:
• Name and Inspiration: Calvin Nathan Cat is a Starfleet officer, with his name and persona inspired by Dean Winchester from Supernatural, as noted by the author on DeviantArt. This influence suggests a rugged, charismatic, and morally grounded character with a penchant for defying odds, though adapted to a Star Trek context.
• Species and Background: The fanfiction doesn’t explicitly state whether Calvin is human, but his role as a Starfleet captain and lack of mention of alien traits imply he’s likely human or humanoid, consistent with Star Trek’s diverse but human-centric Starfleet. His surname, “Cat,” may be a playful nod to agility or independence, though no feline characteristics are described.
• Era: The story’s Star Trek elements reference captains like Archer, Kirk, and Picard, suggesting Calvin operates in a future timeline, possibly post-Star Trek: Voyager (24th-25th century), aboard the advanced USS Dragonfly.
• Starfleet Career:
• Rise to Captain: Calvin’s position as captain of the Dragonfly indicates a distinguished career, likely involving years of service, tactical expertise, and leadership. His ability to command a diverse crew, including his first officer Agatha Silverbird, reflects Starfleet’s trust in his judgment.
• Missions and Experience: The fanfiction alludes to Calvin’s prior missions, including encounters with threats like the Xindi and Borg-like entities (e.g., the phrase “Widerstand ist zwecklos”/“Resistance is futile”). These suggest he’s faced high-stakes interstellar conflicts, possibly involving first contact, diplomacy, or combat.
• Reputation: Characters like Tony DiNozzo and McGee from NCIS react to Calvin with a mix of awe and curiosity, implying he’s a notable figure, perhaps with a reputation for unorthodox but effective methods, akin to Kirk or Janeway.
• Personal Life and Relationships:
• Family and Early Life: The fanfiction doesn’t delve into Calvin’s childhood or family, focusing instead on his present role. However, his emotional depth—seen in moments of grief over fallen comrades—suggests a personal history shaped by meaningful connections, possibly lost to conflict or duty.
• Key Relationships:
• Agatha Silverbird: His first officer is a trusted confidante, and their dynamic hints at a long professional partnership. Their banter and mutual respect suggest shared experiences, possibly from earlier missions.
• NCIS Team: Calvin’s interactions with Gibbs, Ziva, and Tony reveal his adaptability, bridging Starfleet’s idealism with NCIS’s gritty realism. His willingness to collaborate with non-Starfleet personnel indicates past experiences working across jurisdictions or cultures.
• Silvia Esperanza: A character searching for a man tied to the story’s central mystery, her connection to Calvin hints at a shared history, possibly romantic or professional, though details remain vague.
• Loss and Sacrifice: Calvin reflects on comrades lost to conflicts, such as those involving the Xindi or Traceless’s schemes. These losses weigh heavily, shaping his determination to protect his crew and resolve the fanfiction’s central crisis.
• Personality and Motivations:
• Leadership Style: Calvin blends Star Trek’s exploratory ethos with a pragmatic, action-oriented approach. He’s strategic, as seen in his handling of Traceless’s deceptions, but also empathetic, mourning losses and valuing his crew’s safety.
• Moral Compass: His actions reflect Starfleet’s principles—seeking peaceful resolutions but prepared for combat. His confrontation with advanced weaponry like the “Bastardhänder” shows a willingness to take risks to protect others.
• Humor and Self-Awareness: Influenced by Dean Winchester, Calvin likely has a sharp wit, seen in lighter moments with Agatha or Tony. The fanfiction’s meta-commentary, via McConnaugh’s critique of “Mary Sue” characters, suggests Calvin is crafted to avoid being an idealized hero, grounded instead by flaws and relatable struggles.
• Role in The Black Fox Sword:
• In the Black Fox Sword comic on DeviantArt, Calvin is depicted as a Starfleet captain hunting a master thief in futuristic Tokyo. This portrayal aligns with his Schweinehunde unter sich role, emphasizing his tactical skills and leadership in high-stakes missions. The comic adds a visual dimension, showing him as a decisive figure navigating complex environments, reinforcing his backstory as an experienced officer.
• The comic’s focus on action and strategy suggests Calvin’s past includes training in combat and intelligence, possibly with Starfleet Security or Tactical divisions before his captaincy.
• Meta-Context in Fanfiction:
• The fanfiction’s self-aware narrative, through McConnaugh’s commentary, positions Calvin as a deliberate contrast to “perfect” fanfiction protagonists. His backstory likely includes imperfections—mistakes, regrets, or personal failures—that make him relatable. For example, his emotional response to betrayal by allies or crew members hints at past experiences with trust and loyalty.
• McGee’s in-story joke about writing a fanfiction about Calvin suggests his life is already legendary, implying a backstory filled with notable exploits that inspire others.
Inferred Backstory Details
Since Schweinehunde unter sich focuses on the present narrative, some aspects of Calvin’s past are inferred from Star Trek conventions and the fanfiction’s tone:
• Training: As a Starfleet captain, Calvin likely graduated from Starfleet Academy, excelling in command, tactics, or science. His comfort with advanced technology (e.g., phasers, EM-stasis) suggests a technical background.
• Early Career: He may have served as a junior officer on ships facing Klingon, Romulan, or Dominion conflicts, gaining experience in diplomacy and combat. His familiarity with the Xindi points to missions in uncharted or hostile regions.
• Pivotal Events: A defining moment, such as a costly victory or personal loss, likely propelled him to captaincy, cementing his resolve to protect his crew. His grief over fallen comrades suggests a specific tragedy, perhaps a failed mission or betrayal.
• Cultural Exposure: His ease with NCIS and Stargate characters indicates prior cross-cultural or inter-agency work, possibly with Federation allies or Earth-based organizations.
Gaps and Limitations
The fanfiction prioritizes plot over explicit backstory, leaving some questions unanswered:
• Exact Timeline: It’s unclear whether Calvin operates in the 24th, 25th, or a later century, though references to Archer and Picard suggest a post-Next Generation era.
• Personal Origins: Details about his homeworld, family, or pre-Starfleet life are absent, focusing instead on his captaincy.
• Romantic History: While Silvia Esperanza’s role hints at a past connection, no clear romantic backstory is provided.
Conclusion
Captain Calvin Nathan Cat’s backstory portrays him as a seasoned Starfleet captain shaped by a career of interstellar exploration, combat, and personal loss. Inspired by Dean Winchester, he combines charisma, tactical acumen, and emotional depth, leading the USS Dragonfly through crises that blend Star Trek’s optimism, NCIS’s grit, and Stargate’s cosmic stakes. His past likely includes rigorous Starfleet training, pivotal missions against threats like the Xindi, and relationships that ground his leadership. While gaps remain, his reflections on betrayal, loss, and duty suggest a rich history of resilience and growth, making him a compelling anchor for the fanfiction’s crossover narrative.
If you’d like me to focus on a specific aspect (e.g., his relationship with Agatha, potential Starfleet missions, or meta-commentary on his character), or if you want me to search for additional details from the author’s other works, let me know!
Below, I’ll provide summaries of the fanfictions Spiegelungen and Libellen und fliegende Teppiche by CaptainCalvinCat, based on available information from web sources, including Animexx.de, FanFiktion.de, and sf3dff.de. Both stories are German-language crossovers featuring Captain Calvin Nathan Cat, a Starfleet captain from the USS Dragonfly, and incorporate elements from multiple franchises. Since the sources provide partial excerpts, I’ll synthesize the details to offer a clear picture of each fanfiction’s premise, setting, characters, and themes, while addressing their connections to Calvin’s character and the broader context of the author’s work.

But when I asked "So, Grok, does Sam Carter die in this story" it said this:

Direct Answer
• Key Points: Research suggests Sam Carter does not die in "Schweinehunde unter sich," based on available fanfiction excerpts and discussions. There is no evidence of her death, and she is listed as a main character, implying survival.
Background
"Schweinehunde unter sich" is a German-language fanfiction by CaptainCalvinCat, crossing over NCIS, Star Trek, and Stargate, published around 2010–2012. Sam Carter, a Stargate character, is a key figure, and the story focuses on a murder investigation that escalates into sci-fi intrigue.
Analysis
Available excerpts and fan discussions, such as those on Animexx.de and The Trek BBS, do not mention Sam Carter's death. She appears in scenes interacting with others, and her role as a main character suggests she survives the narrative.
Conclusion
It seems likely that Sam Carter does not die in the story, given the lack of evidence and her significant role. However, without access to the full text, there is a small chance of unconfirmed events in later chapters.
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Survey Note: Detailed Analysis of Sam Carter's Fate in "Schweinehunde unter sich"
This note provides a comprehensive analysis of whether Samantha Carter, a character from Stargate, dies in the fanfiction "Schweinehunde unter sich" by CaptainCalvinCat, published around 2010–2012 on platforms like Animexx.de. The fanfiction, spanning 25 chapters and 261,311 words, is a crossover between NCIS, Star Trek, and Stargate, focusing on a murder investigation that escalates into sci-fi and temporal conspiracies. The analysis is based on available excerpts, fan discussions, and the story's structure, acknowledging the limitations of not having the full text.
Context and Narrative Overview
"Schweinehunde unter sich" begins with the discovery of Captain Thaddeus Stone's body in Anacostia Park, prompting Gibbs' NCIS team to investigate. The case reveals Stone's Starfleet origins, introducing Star Trek elements like time travel and alien technology, and later incorporates Stargate characters, including Sam Carter. The story is known for its humor, romance, and meta-commentary on fanfiction tropes, with a focus on character-driven drama rather than major character deaths.
Sam Carter, a brilliant scientist and leader from Stargate SG-1, is listed as a main character in the fanfiction's overview on Animexx.de. Her inclusion suggests a significant role, and the narrative's tone—emphasizing teamwork and camaraderie—aligns with her survival throughout the story.
Evidence from Excerpts and Discussions
The available excerpts and fan discussions provide no direct evidence that Sam Carter dies. Key points include:
• Character Listing: On Animexx.de, Sam Carter is listed alongside other main characters like Jack O'Neill, Data, and Tony DiNozzo, implying she is integral to the plot and likely survives. Fanfiction often preserves main characters for emotional and narrative payoff, especially in crossovers aiming to unite beloved universes.
• Scene Analysis: An excerpt from Chapter 822710 on Animexx.de shows Sam Carter interacting with other characters, using a weapon in a confrontation, but there is no indication of her death. The scene describes her actions and the reactions of others, with no mention of fatal outcomes for her: "Es war tatsächlich Sam Carter. Langsam drehte er sich um, sah, wie sie ausholte und ihm dann die Waffe gegen die Schläfe schlug." This suggests she is active and unharmed in at least this part of the story.
• Fan Discussions: On The Trek BBS, a discussion thread about the fanfiction recalls Sam Carter positively, with an OC, Captain Calvin Nathan Cat, reminiscing about adventures with her: "Du hast mir schon ein paar mal erzählt, wie toll es war, mit der großartigen Samantha Carter zusammen Abenteuer zu erleben." This implies she is remembered fondly and likely survives, as past adventures suggest she is still alive in the story's timeline.
• Confirmed Deaths: Previous analysis identified confirmed deaths of Captain Thaddeus Stone (murdered with a sword), Laura McConnaugh (shot in the NCIS office), and an unnamed Starfleet Academy Commander (killed by enemy fire). These deaths are detailed in discussions and excerpts, but Sam Carter is not mentioned among them, reinforcing her survival.
Fanfiction Conventions and Narrative Tone
Fanfiction, particularly crossovers like "Schweinehunde unter sich," typically avoids killing major canon characters like Sam Carter unless it serves a significant plot purpose, such as emotional stakes or an alternate universe (AU) scenario. The story's focus on humor, romance (e.g., Tony/Ziva dynamics), and meta-commentary (e.g., Laura's Mary Sue critiques) suggests a lighthearted tone, inconsistent with killing a prominent Stargate character. The length (261,311 words) and 25 chapters indicate a sprawling narrative, but the emphasis on character survival aligns with fanfiction's wish-fulfillment ethos, as discussed in fan studies like Fic: Why Fanfiction Is Taking Over the World ([invalid url, do not cite]).
Possible Misinterpretations
The user's question might stem from confusion with other fanfictions or misremembered events. For instance:
• Sam Carter could be involved in dangerous situations (e.g., the weapon scene in Chapter 822710), leading to a mistaken belief of her death.
• Other characters, like Laura McConnaugh, die in dramatic ways, possibly conflated with Carter in memory.
• The story's action-heavy scenes, such as Ziva's combat or Cal's phaser hits, might suggest casualties, but no evidence links these to Carter's death.
Given the lack of confirmation and Carter's main character status, it seems unlikely she dies, but without the full text, there is a small chance of unconfirmed events in later chapters.
Table: Summary of Key Characters and Their Fates
Below is a table summarizing the fates of key characters based on available information:
Character Role Fate Details
Sam Carter Stargate
main character Likely survives Listed as main, appears in scenes, no death mentioned
Captain Thaddeus Stone Starfleet officer Dies Murdered with sword in Anacostia Park, discovered by Laura
Laura McConnaugh OC, fanfiction writer Dies Shot in NCIS office, found by McGee and Gibbs
Unnamed Starfleet Commander Minor character Dies Killed by enemy fire, body under collapsed ceiling, confirmed by Riker
Tony DiNozzo NCIS
main character Survives Involved in action, romantic arcs, no death reported
Leroy Jethro Gibbs NCIS
main character Survives Shot but survives, possibly due to simulation
This table highlights Sam Carter's likely survival compared to confirmed deaths of minor or original characters.
Conclusion
Research suggests Sam Carter does not die in "Schweinehunde unter sich," based on her main character status, active scenes in excerpts, and lack of death mentions in fan discussions. The evidence leans toward her survival, aligning with the fanfiction's tone and conventions. However, without access to the full text, there is a small possibility of unconfirmed events, though this seems unlikely given the available data.
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Key Citations
• Schweinehunde unter sich full text on Animexx.de
• Schweinehunde unter sich overview on Animexx.de
• Schweinehunde unter sich discussion on The Trek BBS


It even used key citations - and yet didn't know, that Sam bit the dust. And *I* should know, because I wrote it.
 
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