The only thing that kept me going was how much I like Anson Mount's Pike.
But some of the story ideas I could see being quite interesting. But they desperately need an editor, in my opinion. Scenes that are there to add some extra depth are fine, but I tend to feel they drag on too long in SNW. Get going to the plot quicker.
The 21st century era slang always takes me right out of the worldbuilding. For me, that's just like one of those things where you need to think in terms of balance. You can't use all new terms, but you should stick to ones that have been around for centuries.
The writing of the Vulcan characters was pretty poor (in my opinion). They didn't seem 'alien'. Their attitudes/personalities were all too human.
I couldn't stand the new take on Uhura. Waaaaaaaaaaay too 'green' to be believable. She should still be at the Academy learning, not in deep space.
Obviously, these feelings are meant to be my own. I would not suggest, nor do I demand, that others feel the same.
But some of the story ideas I could see being quite interesting. But they desperately need an editor, in my opinion. Scenes that are there to add some extra depth are fine, but I tend to feel they drag on too long in SNW. Get going to the plot quicker.
The 21st century era slang always takes me right out of the worldbuilding. For me, that's just like one of those things where you need to think in terms of balance. You can't use all new terms, but you should stick to ones that have been around for centuries.
The writing of the Vulcan characters was pretty poor (in my opinion). They didn't seem 'alien'. Their attitudes/personalities were all too human.
I couldn't stand the new take on Uhura. Waaaaaaaaaaay too 'green' to be believable. She should still be at the Academy learning, not in deep space.
Obviously, these feelings are meant to be my own. I would not suggest, nor do I demand, that others feel the same.