Wingsley said:
The one fatal flaw in starship designs like Drake and the Federation-class "dreadnoughts": where the secondary hull has a forward-facing hangar bay topside is that there's very little room, if any, for a turbolift tube to pass from the saucer section into the bowels of the secondary hull without passing through or directly alongside the forward hangar bay. Maybe the forward dish and hangar should be switched.
Unfortunately, with it being someone else's ship, that's a pretty substantial change in the design. Though, if you look, there's just enough room for the turbo lift to hit the operations center for the hangar bay without going into the bay itself. It's a tight fit, but it works.