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UT: TFV - Operation Vanguard

Oh boys. Things have just gotten even more interesting - as if it were possible - and the mission hasn't even begun. I knew Pava had to be in the mix somewhere but to see that he is going to Vanguard strategic operations officer does seem a good fit. But with his appearance we are reminded of the chillier darker bloodier directions this story could yet take - the secret operative being another. We've lots of balls in play as we kick off promising that there is going to be lots of story to be told.
It's a party, and all the Federation's been invited... at least the important and nefarious folk! :rommie: Seriously, though, Starfleet's throwing everything they can into this mission, hoping against hope that they'll somehow find a way to stem the tide of aliens flooding into the Alpha Quadrant.

Or, to quote Kor, "Of course you should come. The splendor of fighting and killing, a blood bath in the course of vengeance, who wouldn't want to come?"

So um...watcha gonna call the series now that there ain't no more Gibraltar in it? :shifty:
Gonna keep the title unchanged. Different ship, better lumbar-support in the chairs, but same ol' attitude. :rofl:

Vice. Admiral. Jellico.
Church! CanIgetanAmen?!?

We are much pleased that you have chosen to include THE MAN in a position of real authority.

Glad to see Pava back too...and a teensy bit upset for totally selfish reasons. (Y'see, I was thinking of borrowing him for one of my stories, since I figured he had nothing better to do in this story. Then you up and made him the task force J-3. Dang it.)
Sorry, with an assignment this important, they had to place Pava in stasis in a glass case that reads, 'Break In Case of Emergency'
 
TFV - Operation Vanguard (Chapter 3 continued)

As biased as she was towards Gibraltar’s excellent medical facilities, even Taiee had to admit that Europa’s sickbay was a thing of beauty.

Europa’s medical wards had been expanded and upgraded even further after the ship’s assignment to Task Force Vanguard. Seeing that the Starfleet craft might have to serve as triage centers for uncounted alien species, many of them had undergone similar refits.

The vessel now boasted forty-four biobeds, three surgical suites, two articulated ‘clam-shell’ full-spectrum exam beds, three medical laboratories, and a morgue. The entire ship was equipped with holo-emitters, enabling their three fully independent Mark-II Long-Term Medical Holograms to operate nearly anywhere aboard.

Lieutenant Taiee was situating the last of the department’s supplies when an unexpected anti-grav pallet hummed through the doors into sickbay, followed closely by the shuffling grey-hued Doctor Ralst Multorlo. Multorlo stepped to the side as four more pallets stacked high with cargo crates were directed into the compartment by enlisted personnel.

The Zakdorn physician gave the impressive medical bay a brief visual inspection before directing the logistics techs towards one of the as-yet unassigned laboratory compartments adjoining the medical complex.

Taiee stepped forward, extending a hand to the distracted looking man. “Doctor Multorlo, welcome aboard. I’m Issara Taiee.”

“Ah, Lieutenant, a pleasure…” Multorlo shook her hand with a decidedly clammy grasp. “My lab is back this way, correct?”

“Yes, Doctor,” Taiee replied, resisting the urge to wipe her hand on her uniform trousers.

Multorlo watched the enlisted ratings moving his equipment into what would be his exo-virology laboratory, then turned his waxen face back towards Taiee. “Please let me know whatever you need from me, Lieutenant. I’m glad to assist however I can.”

Taiee laughed uneasily, clearly confused. “Respectfully, Doctor, isn’t that supposed to be my line?” She held up an oversized medical padd. “When you have time, I’d like to take you through our shift schedule rotations and equipment inventory, sir.”

Multorlo looked at Taiee for a moment before he fully processed her misunderstanding. “Forgive me, Lieutenant, I see you missed the memo. I’m the CMO in name only. You will continue to run your department as you see fit. Bring me whatever forms need my ‘official’ seal of approval, and I’ll affix my signature. Otherwise, I’ll attend to my research and keep out of your way.”

Taiee was flabbergasted. “But… but you’re a physician and you outrank me.”

“Yes,” Multorlo agreed, “I am and I do. What of it?”

“So, why would you take orders from a nurse?”

Multorlo hurm’ed and cooed in that irritating way that Zakdorn were so proficient at. In their culture it was a polite utterance meant to convey the transmission of an unpleasant truth, but to most other humanoid species it came across as churlish.

“Because, Lieutenant, you are more qualified than I am by far to lead the medical department onboard this ship.”

Taiee had no response for that. Multorlo waved diffidently in parting and moved off to set up his lab.

*****

In response to Sandhurst’s invitation to enter, Pell Ojana strode into the captain’s new ready room with a full head of steam. She plopped down into one of the chairs opposite his desk unbidden. “Terrence won’t see me!”

Sandhurst glanced over at her, breaking his weary gaze away from the matter/anti-matter reactor schematics he’d been studying for the past three hours. “Have a seat,” Sandhurst offered dryly.

If Pell caught the sarcasm, she didn’t let on. “Did you say something to him?”

Sandhust took the opportunity to close his fatigued eyes as he leaned back in his chair. “I’ve only spoken to him once since we arrived here, and that conversation lasted a grand total of thirty seconds. You were not a topic we visited during that brief exchange.”

“Then what the hell is going on?” she grumbled exasperatedly. “He’s my oldest and closest friend! Hell, we’ve been each other’s confidants for years. Now, suddenly, on the cusp of my leaving for the better part of five years, he won’t spare even a few minutes to talk to me?”

Sandhurst stifled a yawn and stretched, then performed a few head rolls to work out the kink in his neck. “Maybe he’s angry with you.”

“For what?” she squawked.

He looked at her pointedly. “For the exact same reasons I’m angry with you, Commander.”

Pell’s demeanor downshifted abruptly at that remark. She exhaled slowly, as if purging her body of noxious spirits. “Okay. I’m sure I deserved that. I’ve been pretty awful, haven’t I?”

“You’ve behaved like a brat, Ojana, and in doing so you’ve hurt every one of us who’s ever supported you. Monica, Terrence, myself… all the people who’ve gone to bat for you in the past.” Sandhurst leaned forward, placing his forearms atop the desk as his gaze bore into her. “I know you’re hurting. I know Velkohn haunts you, and the fact that you’ve been exiled from Bajor eats at you every moment of every day.”

She nodded, her head downcast, suddenly unwilling to meet his eyes.

“We all have our crosses to bear, our own unresolved issues. Glover’s marriage fell apart, his father’s been killed, and he’s lost two ships under his command since the war ended. Now he’s helping to oversee one of the most important missions of the past century with precious little prep time and inadequate resources.” Sandhurst brought his head down toward the table, craning his neck until Pell finally had to look up at him. “The man has a full plate at the moment.”

“Alright,” she conceded. “He’s just never shut me out like this before, and to be honest, I could really use a friend right now.”

“And I’m what?” Sandhurst offered, “deuterium backwash?”

Pell actually cracked a grin at that. “You’re the captain who sent me to my room.”

“You were being an assaultive brat,” Sandhurst reminded her, humor creeping into his tone. “Have you read over the Nyberrite comms intercepts Intel sent over?”

“I have,” she confirmed. “Chilling stuff, especially the Kothlis’Ka seed ships. We should count ourselves lucky our intercept group won’t be making first contact with them.”

“I wouldn’t be so quick to breath a sigh of relief yet, Ojana. IG-3 is the primary backup for IG-4, should they fail to divert or stop the Kothlis’Ka.”

Pell’s expression soured. “That’s not the most welcome news I’ve had today. Still, IG-4 is practically groaning under the weight of all that experimental ordinance. Something they’re carrying should be enough to stop them, right?”

Sandhurst cocked his head as if considering the idea. “One would hope.”

“Besides, if all else fails, they’ve got the ‘Big Gun’ idea to fall back on.” Pell snickered. “What kind of sick, fevered mind comes up with something like that anyway?”

“First, that weapons-system is supposed to be classified,” Sandhurst poked an accusatory finger toward her. “Second, it was wartime and S.C.E. was soliciting the boldest, most outrageous ideas possible... and I was dared to submit it.”

“Oh Prophets!” she exclaimed. “You came up with the Big Gun concept?”

He waved the conversation away, feigning irritation. “I’ve said too much already.” Sandhurst pointed towards the door. “You were officially off-duty ten minutes ago, Commander Pell. See yourself to quarters.”

Still laughing, Pell stood and walked towards the exit. “That’s priceless! What do eighty warp nacelles, seventy torpedo tubes, the largest phaser emitter ever constructed, and the neutronium shell of Commodore Decker's doomsday machine all have in common? Donald Sandhurst, that’s what!”

*****
 
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Olivia Juneau stood at attention in front of T’Ser’s desk in the Executive Officer’s personal office on Deck 2. T’Ser was still reveling in the size of the compartment, easily four times the volume of the refurbished closet she’d rated aboard Gibraltar.

“Mister Juneau, I’m not sure if you’ve realized it, but the past two weeks has been especially stressful for more than the obvious reasons.”

Curious though she may have been, Juneau stood silently and awaited the XO’s elaboration.

“I have been putting you through your paces, making sure you were qualified to hold the Chief Ops post on such a long, dangerous and taxing assignment.”

“Yes, sir,” Juneau replied crisply.

“You have been inundated with logistics problems, personnel issues, dataflow bottlenecks, seemingly limitless requisition requests, resource allocation pissing matches between departments, and last but not least you’ve soothed the ruffled feathers of surly, overstressed supply officers, which are the most twitchy, dangerous things this side of an undercaffinated Klingon.” T’Ser stood from behind her desk. “You’ve handled all of that on precious little sleep, and you’ve coped admirably, Lieutenant.”

“Thank you, sir.”

T’Ser offered Juneau the first smile the lieutenant had seen from the XO in well over a week. “In a little over twenty-four hours, you’re going to get a nice, relaxing six-month nap. Until then, return to your duties, Mister Juneau.”

“Aye, sir,” Juneau replied before turning around and walking out of the office with her head held high.

The XO smiled faintly and shook her head as she activated a padd. “Nicely done, kid.”

*****

Second Lieutenant David Tiedermeyer was doing a poor job of masking his boredom and irritation. His platoon of thirty Starfleet Marines had been assigned to Europa for the duration of Task Force Vanguard in order to supplement the explorer’s security detachment. The Marines had just secured their personal kit in their communal berths on Deck 5, and were now undergoing yet another mission briefing by what was, in the lieutenant’s humble opinion, a stuffed-shirt command officer who’d doubtless never faced the business end of an enemy disruptor.

Tiedermeyer, on the other hand, despite his junior-officer status, had graduated near the top of his class at the academy. Though he’d missed the Dominion War by a year, Tiedermeyer had seen combat during the Talarian Incursion, where he’d led his platoon against the warlike Talarians in a brutal campaign to dislodge their troops from the Federation colonies they’d overrun only days before.

Now he was forced to listen to this yawning bore reiterate the contents of his platoon’s last three classified briefings. Tiedermeyer was already less than enthusiastic about the mission, which would draw him away from the tinderbox that was the Alpha Quadrant in favor of an endless mission to the far reaches whose fate would be decided by ship-to-ship combat.

He was a Marine, and standing outside the bridge or the engine room at battle-stations while the Fleeters saw all the combat and took all the glory was a bitter pill. Better he had stayed home in Federation space, where there were plentiful opportunities for combat against a host of adversaries. In the Starfleet Marines, front-line combat experience was necessary for career advancement, and Tiedermeyer would be competing in the promotional process against other junior officers who’d seen more than their fair share of fighting during the Dominion War.

“Do I have your attention, Lieutenant?” the officer asked frostily, drawing Tiedermeyer back from his woolgathering.

“Of course, sir,” the platoon leader answered.

The commander smiled patiently. “If I’m boring you with the nuts and bolts of this operation, Lieutenant, I’m relatively certain we can find you something more productive to do with your time.”

There was a smattering of subdued laughter from the rest of the platoon at their leader’s expense, until Gunnery Sergeant Luscor, a towering, chiseled Capellan warrior hushed the group by clearing his throat loudly.

“No, sir, that won’t be necessary,” Tiedermeyer allowed through gritted teeth. “You have my full attention, sir.”

The remainder of the briefing continued without incident, and following the dismissal of the platoon, Tiedermeyer remained behind pretending to look at the various unit pennants, flags and patches that had been hung on the walls of the hastily refit cargo hold that now served as the Marine squad-bay.

Tiedermeyer nodded deferentially to the Starfleet officer as the man finished reading whatever was displayed on his padd and stepped down from the podium at the front of the compartment. “Commander, could I have a word?”

“Of course, Lieutenant.” The man looked up at the considerably taller Marine.

“Permission to speak freely, sir?” It may have been a request, but coming from Tiedermeyer as he loomed over the smaller man, it sounded more like a statement of intent.

“Granted,” the Fleeter answered.

“With all due respect, sir, that was the fourth briefing covering the same material we’ve been subjected to in the past week and a half.”

“No,” the commander replied, “not entirely. Today’s briefing included revisions on tertiary comms frequencies, scrambler settings, and adjustments to the insertion protocol for ship-boarding operations versus planetary assaults.” He smiled wanly. “You’d have realized that if you hadn’t been daydreaming.”

“I realize that in your soft chair in your shielded operations center those details may seem especially important, but down there in the dirt and the blood we Marines survive on our wits and our tenacity.” Tiedermeyer’s respectful façade fell away completely, unburdened by the absence of his platoon.

“I see,” the commander said, bobbing his head as he took the Marine lieutenant’s words into consideration. “So, can you explain to me how your wits will be of any help if you don’t know the safe transporter frequencies and attempt an emergency exfiltration from enemy contact only to have your whole platoon terminally dispersed because you’ve tripped an alien scrambler?”

Tiedermeyer wasn’t having it, though, and rather than answer the pointed question, like any good Marine he went on the attack. “You might outrank me, sir, but you don’t get to call me out in front of my platoon.”

“Really? You were practically falling asleep in front of your platoon, Lieutenant. What kind of message does that send?”

Tiedermeyer glowered. “I am a Marine combat officer. I don’t need lessons in leadership from a glorified logistics specialist, sir.”

The commander looked up and away, as if giving the lieutenant’s statement serious deliberation. Setting his eyes back on the Marine he said, “You’re going to be serving under a captain that came up through the ranks in engineering. Are you going to refuse to take his orders or fail to consider any lessons he might find it necessary to teach? He's no soldier, after all.”

“I’ve read Captain Sandhurst’s record, and he’s seen his share of action. I don’t foresee any problems in that regard,” Tiedermeyer allowed.

“Hubris can be a deadly deficit in a combat leader, Lieutenant,” the commander offered. “Yes you graduated near the top of your academy class, and yes you performed admirably against the Talarians, but if you allow your ego to grow so large as to blind you to your own weaknesses, many good men and women under your command will die as a result.”

Tiedermeyer’s face grew hot and flushed, and without another word he about-faced and marched out of the squad-bay.

“He’s just headstrong, sir,” Gunnery Sergeant Luscor spoke up from where he’d watched the exchange from the hatch leading to the Marines’ armory. “He’s smart, and he’s young, and just stubborn enough to think he has to prove it all of the time.”

The commander smiled wistfully. “Weren’t we all, Gunny?”

“Yes, sir. Once upon a time.”

*****

Ten minutes later, having regained control of his temper, 2nd Lieutenant Tiedermeyer entered the armory to find Gunnery Sergeant Luscor field stripping, cleaning and reassembling the platoon’s pulse-phaser rifles one at a time.

“What’s the good word, Gunny?” Tiedermeyer asked casually as he moved to inspect the armory’s equipment log displayed on a monitor set into one bulkhead.

“I'm just reflecting on the fact that our lieutenant doesn’t seem to know how to pick his enemies, sir,” Luscor said bemusedly.

That brought Tiedermeyer up short. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

“The commander, sir. He was awfully patient with you back there, which is something you might want to consider.”

“You think I was out of line, Gunny?” Tiedermeyer asked, a sudden edge to his voice.

Luscor looked up at his commanding officer, his hands still moving of their own accord as they snapped rifle components back in place by touch. “Well, seeing as you were popping off to the Angel of Death, I’ll give you points for raw courage if nothing else.”

“The Angel of what?” Tiedermeyer said with a confused frown. “The only death that stylus pushing data-jockey could cause would be from sheer, stupefying boredom.”

“Your ‘soft’ Operations specialist, sir. He’s really not so soft. That was Pava Lar’ragos.”

The confused look remained. “Who?” Tiedermeyer asked innocently.

*****
 
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TFV - Operation Vanguard (Chapter 3 continued)

The enormous transparent aluminum windows of the Deck 7 forward compartment offered an unparalleled view of the stars, making the locale an obvious choice to house the ship’s crew lounge. Named ‘The Monaco’ by a vote of the crew, the establishment had been adorned in an eclectic mix of Mediterranean and North African décor, all fluted balustrades, columns, and horseshoe arches. The compartment’s holo-emitters added to the illusion by populating the area with a variety of flitting songbirds, bubbling fountains, and a diversity of exotic plants and creeping vines.

Europa’s newly appointed ship’s counselor had arrived barely thirty minutes earlier, and this gathering was his first introduction to the senior staff.

Lieutenant Dao Liu stood silently, holding a flute of champagne as he observed the emotional tenor of his new crewmates. He had been assigned to this mission only three weeks earlier, then hustled aboard a high-warp courier ship and raced across nearly three score light years to this hastily assembled fleet yard.

Of Chinese ancestry, Liu was of average height and kept himself physically fit so as to better cope with the emotional stresses of wrestling with other people’s demons. He was handsome in an unconventional sense, with seemingly contradictory features such as soft eyes coupled with a hard-set jaw and high cheek bones.

Liu had been raised on Alpha Centauri, the son of a privileged family which had helped settle that colony in the late 21st century aboard the first colonization warp-ship Earth had dispatched to the stars. He had an unremarkable upbringing on a peaceful Federation planet, and had taken his civilian psychology degree with him into a career with Starfleet Medical.

En route to Starbase Bastion, Liu had studied the service records and psyche profiles of many of the crew, but had concentrated primarily on the senior officers. Having served in the Dominion War aboard a front-line hospital ship, Liu was no stranger to the horrors and traumatic repercussions of war. Nevertheless, he was surprised by the extent of post-traumatic stress evidenced by some of the command officers, most notably Captain Sandhurst, Commander T’Ser, and Lt. Commander Pell.

Among the three officers, they’d cumulatively suffered the deaths of spouses, fiancés, cherished comrades, and people under their command. Sandhurst and T’Ser had both been abducted and tortured in separate incidents over the years, and Pell Ojana had survived a childhood in a Bajoran internment camp under the boot-heel of the Cardassian Union.

Now these people were faced with a mission whose importance was so great that the consequences of failure defied imagination. How they would cope with such pressure, individually and as a group, weighed heavily on Liu’s mind. Part of him recognized the patently unfair nature of these new relationships. He had not even been introduced to them, and they likely knew very little about him, while Liu had already memorized their service records, personality profiles, psyche evaluations, duty fitness reports and treatment histories.

“Counselor Liu,” Sandhurst called out, navigating through the crowded room with a champagne glass of his own in hand. Liu bowed formally and then shook Sandhurst ’s extended hand. “Or do you prefer to be addressed by rank?” Sandhurst asked.

“Whichever you’re more comfortable with, Captain,” Liu said with an easy smile. “Nice pre-launch party,” he observed.

“Everyone’s had their noses to the grindstone for the past three weeks making ready,” Sandhurst replied. “I thought an opportunity to blow off some steam before we get underway was in order.”

“I absolutely agree,” Liu said as he gestured to a knot of officers making introductions to one another. “Such moments are important to memorialize, and besides, it gives all the new crew a chance to socialize with those that came over from Gibraltar.”

Sandhurst nodded and took a sip of his champagne. “I’m guessing that you’ve reviewed all our pertinent records en route?”

“I have,” Liu affirmed.

“Any impressions so far?”

Liu considered his response as he tipped his champagne flute back and drained its contents. “You mean aside from the fact that crews like yours are the whole reason Starfleet started assigning counselors in the first place?”

Sandhurst choked mid-sip and coughed into his fist, his eyes watering. “Really? That good, eh?” he croaked.

“Oh, yes!” Liu enthused. “Each of you is worth at least one in-depth study in any number of peer-reviewed psychological journals. I’ll be the toast of the mental-health community when we get back. I’ve even thought of a title for my memoirs, ‘Deep In the Black with the Deep Blues.’”

Sandhurst wiped his eyes, chuckling. “I do believe Starfleet Medical might just have sent us the right person, Counselor.”

Liu beamed eagerly. “I’m pleased you think so, Captain.”

There was a chiming sound that brought the room to order. Sandhurst inclined his head towards Liu. “Pardon me, that’s my cue.” He traded his empty glass for a full one and tugged self-consciously at his uniform as he moved to the front of the compartment. Sandhurst faced the crowd with his back to the viewports as he began to speak.

“We’re about to head father out into the galaxy than practically anyone before us in Starfleet history. The scope of our mission, and its importance, are both unprecedented. Only two ships that we know of have ever ventured farther afield than we expect to go, Captain Janeway’s Voyager deep in the Delta Quadrant and Captain Yeager’s Endurance somewhere in the Andromeda galaxy.

"I know that it’s been a long, hard slog during and after the war, and many of our comrades have given their lives in defense of the Federation in that time. Now we’re being called upon to step up once again and face the unknown, though this time we’ve been afforded the advantage of going out to meet it head-on.

“The upshot of this mission is that we’ll get to be explorers, scientists and diplomats again. All the while, however, we will remember that if necessary, we can fall back onto our soldier’s training and instincts to defend ourselves and our homes.”

Sandhurst raised his glass. “Please join me in a toast to the success of Operation Vanguard. May we find the peace and cooperation we seek, and forge new friendships with those whose long journeys bring them to our doorstep. And for those among them who might seek to harm us, may we demonstrate strength and resolve tempered with mercy. Salud!”

They drank and ate. They laughed. They shared stories of adventures and camaraderie late into the night, for the next day most of them would begin a slumber that would last for six months.

*****
 
I don't know what to say; "brilliant" is the only word that comes to mind. You are so skillful at writing dialogue and personal interactions. You convey so much information about the characters who populate your world and the situations they're dealing with so subtly yet thoroughly in your narrative. I am just in awe.

Of course, I liked the entire Marine segment - anything involving Lar'ragos is a treat - as well as the scenes with Taiee, Juneau and Pell. But, I have to say that I was especially impressed with how quickly and thoroughly you made us completely familiar with the newest member of the cast, Counselor Liu. In such a short section, you gave us his full history and a wonderful feeling for his personality and wit, all without it coming across as a mere recitation of facts. Bravo.

I cannot tell you how excited I am about this story and how much I look forward to every installment.

Okay, gushing over. Carry on. :p
 
I wholeheartedly agree with TrekkieMonster - you have a gift of conveying a great deal about a character in a relatively brief space. Really awesome stuff here as the old Gibraltar crew and the new arrivals on Europa begin to gel.

I had to smile over the eager young Marine lieutenant's first impression of Pava Lar'ragos. (Yes, I figured it out before the reveal.) If he only knew. I would suggest the young man show a bit more respect to Commander Lar'ragos in the future, however. :evil: Perhaps the Gunny will see to the young man's continuing education in that regard.

Oh, and thanks for the shout-out to Captain Yeager and the Endurance. Yeah, they, um, they're having a wonderful time in the Andromeda galaxy. I'll have him drop a postcard or something. Soonish. Maybe. :alienblush:
 
So yeah, I was a bit worried there that Multorlo would make things difficult for Taiee but now I'm happy to see that Donald chose well. I like that he's happy to leave the actual responsibility of running the show with Taiee, she deserves it.

And after this segment I am more sympathetic and understanding of Pell's earlier behavior. She has gone through a lot and now she has to deal with her oldest friend not even making time for her. It's a tough galaxy.

The Tiedermeyer segment was really fascinating. I kept thinking that this commander sounded really familiar and then it finally clicked. The Marine means well but yeah, you can't argue with Pava's experience. The man badly needs to take some notes or he won't last long on this ship.

Also enjoyed the addition of the new counselor and, my god, is that man going to be busy on Europa or what? I hadn't realized this before but the truth is, there really isn't anyone on that ship who doesn't need regular therapy sessions. Liu may be the only crew member more likely to waste away due to depression than any other kind of injury or ailment.

All fun stuff. Looking forward to more.
 
I don't know what to say; "brilliant" is the only word that comes to mind. You are so skillful at writing dialogue and personal interactions. You convey so much information about the characters who populate your world and the situations they're dealing with so subtly yet thoroughly in your narrative. I am just in awe.

Of course, I liked the entire Marine segment - anything involving Lar'ragos is a treat - as well as the scenes with Taiee, Juneau and Pell. But, I have to say that I was especially impressed with how quickly and thoroughly you made us completely familiar with the newest member of the cast, Counselor Liu. In such a short section, you gave us his full history and a wonderful feeling for his personality and wit, all without it coming across as a mere recitation of facts. Bravo.

I cannot tell you how excited I am about this story and how much I look forward to every installment.

Okay, gushing over. Carry on. :p
:alienblush: Much obliged for the kind words, TrekkieMonster! I'm pleased you found Counselor Liu's introduction compelling and entertaining.

I wholeheartedly agree with TrekkieMonster - you have a gift of conveying a great deal about a character in a relatively brief space. Really awesome stuff here as the old Gibraltar crew and the new arrivals on Europa begin to gel.

I had to smile over the eager young Marine lieutenant's first impression of Pava Lar'ragos. (Yes, I figured it out before the reveal.) If he only knew. I would suggest the young man show a bit more respect to Commander Lar'ragos in the future, however. :evil: Perhaps the Gunny will see to the young man's continuing education in that regard.
Unfortunately, Pava hasn't the time or the inclination to sort this young gentleman out. That'll have to be done by the fractionally more cruel hand of fate as the mission progresses.

Oh, and thanks for the shout-out to Captain Yeager and the Endurance. Yeah, they, um, they're having a wonderful time in the Andromeda galaxy. I'll have him drop a postcard or something. Soonish. Maybe. :alienblush:
With is far out as they've gone, I rather figured it'd be a long while until we heard from them. :lol:

So yeah, I was a bit worried there that Multorlo would make things difficult for Taiee but now I'm happy to see that Donald chose well. I like that he's happy to leave the actual responsibility of running the show with Taiee, she deserves it.

And after this segment I am more sympathetic and understanding of Pell's earlier behavior. She has gone through a lot and now she has to deal with her oldest friend not even making time for her. It's a tough galaxy.
Brother, that there's gospel truth!

The Tiedermeyer segment was really fascinating. I kept thinking that this commander sounded really familiar and then it finally clicked. The Marine means well but yeah, you can't argue with Pava's experience. The man badly needs to take some notes or he won't last long on this ship.

Also enjoyed the addition of the new counselor and, my god, is that man going to be busy on Europa or what? I hadn't realized this before but the truth is, there really isn't anyone on that ship who doesn't need regular therapy sessions. Liu may be the only crew member more likely to waste away due to depression than any other kind of injury or ailment.

All fun stuff. Looking forward to more.
Thank you, sir. And yes, I expect Liu will have more than enough material for his post-mission journal essays. ;)
 
One nitpick:

Gibraltar said:
“We’re about to head father out into the galaxy ...

Will Mother be joining him or will she be hitching a ride with us?

Other than that, "Dittos" to most of what everybody else said. I actually prefer the interaction between Taiee and the doctor to the interaction between the 2nd looie and La'aragos. Senior-Junior officer conflict has been a cliche in Trek since DS9 (Spock vs. McCoy didn't count as such) but in this case Multorlo obviously did get the memo on who's really running Sick Bay and obviously doesn't care. That's refreshing.
 
One nitpick:

Gibraltar said:
“We’re about to head father out into the galaxy ...

Will Mother be joining him or will she be hitching a ride with us?
Whoops! Thanks for the catch... I've corrected the Ad Astra version.

Other than that, "Dittos" to most of what everybody else said. I actually prefer the interaction between Taiee and the doctor to the interaction between the 2nd looie and La'aragos. Senior-Junior officer conflict has been a cliche in Trek since DS9 (Spock vs. McCoy didn't count as such) but in this case Multorlo obviously did get the memo on who's really running Sick Bay and obviously doesn't care. That's refreshing.
The difference being Multorlo's ego's not at issue here... and he genuinely feels that Taiee's doing him the favor by allowing him to head up the department in a purely fictitous capacity.

Tiedermeyer, on the other hand, is swimming in testosterone and his ego has it's own registry number. :cool:
 
I whole-heartedly second what everyone has said. Your personal interactions are wonderful. In less than a page and I already like the new counselor. I only wish I could have seen the LT's face...I know what it looked like in my head. :lol:
 
I whole-heartedly second what everyone has said. Your personal interactions are wonderful. In less than a page and I already like the new counselor. I only wish I could have seen the LT's face...I know what it looked like in my head. :lol:
Thanks, Dnoth! Poor kid hadn't a clue, and let's hope his education comes from the Gunny or the captain, rather than Pava himself. The man's patience runs only so deep, after all. :evil:
 
Indeed to all of the above. Some people need to learn to check on the personal histories of other people before spouting bravado and getting egg on their face. And like Admiral2 I really liked the scene in the medical bay. It was refreshing to see that some things do go to plan and that personalities don't need to clash. Maybe this really is a new start for all concerned? ... Yeah right!
 
Well, this has been said already - beautifully written all around. We got a good feel of the new ship and some of the new crew members. I wonder what Mortultu's (I probably misspelled that) motivation is. And I sincerely hope his focus on academia doesn't come back to bite the crew in the ass at one point. I liked the new counselor. Looking forward to the next installment.
 
Indeed to all of the above. Some people need to learn to check on the personal histories of other people before spouting bravado and getting egg on their face. And like Admiral2 I really liked the scene in the medical bay. It was refreshing to see that some things do go to plan and that personalities don't need to clash. Maybe this really is a new start for all concerned? ... Yeah right!
Hey, you can always hope for the best, right? :lol: Thanks for the review!

Well, this has been said already - beautifully written all around. We got a good feel of the new ship and some of the new crew members. I wonder what Mortultu's (I probably misspelled that) motivation is. And I sincerely hope his focus on academia doesn't come back to bite the crew in the ass at one point. I liked the new counselor. Looking forward to the next installment.
Much obliged for the kind words, CZ.
 
TFV - Operation Vanguard (Chapter 4)

Captain’s Personal Log, Stardate 54905.1 (November 27, 2377)

“The majority of Europa’s crew has been in stasis for a little over four weeks, with a few notable exceptions.

Lieutenant Taiee is awake and spending 12-hour days in the holodeck, taking a new accelerated trauma-medicine course designed for surgeons by Starfleet Medical. Once completed, the six-month course will give her the equivalent of a year’s worth of advanced medical school training. I already trust ‘Doc’ with my life, but anything that can sharpen her already formidable skills is certainly welcome.

Lt. Commander Pell is busy setting up our new Taskforce Operations Center or TOC on Deck 4. This command center will act as a central nexus for all incoming intelligence regarding the approaching alien fleets. Our TOC will coordinate with the Stragetic Operations Center aboard
Galaxy, the lead ship in our intercept group.

I and my engineering team are hard at work assembling
Europa’s custom reactor core, a design we came up with using the Defiant-class warp-core as a template. This larger, uprated version should hopefully provide us with more power under greater control than Ra-Havereii’s problematic warp-core design.

Ashok has proven enthusiastic and uncharacteristically innovative during this process. Gone are the fragile ego and embittered sense of inferiority, replaced instead by technical introspection and a keen attention to detail I never realized the man possessed. It’s as if Ashok has somehow tapped into his father’s genius, or perhaps it was always there all along, buried beneath decades of emotional pain and repression. Whatever the reason, I find myself hopeful that I will be able to hand over the reigns of this engineering project to him once we’ve reached our destination and concentrate solely on the duties of a captain.

I’ve taken the opportunity to ‘thaw out’ Counselor Liu on two occasions so far, in order to talk over my anxieties regarding this mission, my troubled history with Ojana, and the various demons I’ve accrued since the end of the war. I’ve also confided in him about these recurring nightmares I’m still having. I’d forgotten how good it feels just to unburden myself of such things, especially now that I don’t have Ojana or Pava to talk with any longer.

Duty calls, and the dilithium compositor isn’t going to align itself. Back to the salt mines.

End log entry.”


*****

Work continued uninterrupted during the journey as the engineering team plotted, designed, fabricated and finally assembled the pieces of their new warp propulsion system.

Regardless of its source, Ashok’s personal Renaissance in conjunction with Sandhurst’s decades of experience had fueled their efforts towards completing the warp drive. The matter/anti-matter reactor core was complete, and work had begun on the reaction injection column. The now close-knit engineering team ate and recreated together, engaging in regular brain-storming sessions as they debated various design avenues and potential upgrades.

For Sandhurst, it was like a vacation, unburdening him from the rigors of starship command and immersing him in an applied engineering problem that unleashed his creative energies.

Thus, over the five months, three weeks, and three days of their outbound journey, the engineering team successfully completed a drive system that incorporated nearly a dozen new design innovations, some conceived by the team themselves, others proposed in S.C.E. papers intended to influence the next generation of starships.

Though the engine worked flawlessly in simulations, the real test would come after the warp-sled powered down and deposited Europa in the hinterlands of the Delta Quadrant. There the crew would have the additional challenge of conducting speed trials while simultaneously trying to scout the vicinity for alien fleet activity.

For just that reason Europa’s mission profile had been adjusted just days prior to launch, having the ship and the other four vessels of their intercept group deployed farther out than originally planned. Their arrival point would place them between the first and second waves of nomadic fleets. This would give the crew time to work out any problems with their warp drive prior to going fully operational, while the other ships of Intercept Group 3 made preparations to reconnoiter the next wave of approaching aliens.

*****

Stardate 55239.6 (March 29, 2378)

It had been seventy-two hours since the majority of Europa’s crew had come out of cryo-sleep, and the explorer’s systems had come fully online as the warp-sled, its coils now failing, prepared to drop to impulse speeds.

Sandhurst took a moment to look around his new bridge at his senior staff, all attentively manning their posts, save for Ashok who was mothering the delicate new drive from main engineering. He experienced a warm glow of pride in how the newly combined crew had gelled under adverse circumstances and an accelerated schedule to transfer ships and prepare Europa for this historic voyage.

“Sled deceleration in five, four, three, two… and slowing to sublight,” Lightner announced as the ship’s propulsive sheath re-entered normal space. After a journey of nearly six months, the vessel and crew had reached their pre-set destination coordinates. Lightner glanced back from his console. “We’re secured from warp speed, Captain.”

“Acknowledged, Lieutenant,” Sandhurst replied. “Ops and Sciences, begin passive sensor readings of the surrounding area. Let’s take a look around while trying not to attract any undue attention.”

At Ops, Juneau leaned over towards Lightner to whisper, “Yeah, because nobody saw us screaming into the sector at Warp 9.995.”

“Although this bridge is definitely larger than Gibraltar’s,” remarked T’Ser dryly from her seat to the captain’s right, “I still have Vulcan ears, Mister Juneau. Mind your station, and your tongue, if you please.”

There was a round of muted laughter at Juneau ’s expense, prompting the lieutenant’s head to drop comically. “Yes, sir,” she sighed with mock petulance.

“Sensor returns coming in now,” Shanthi offered, his eyes riveted to his displays as the explorer’s hyper-sensitive scanners drew in the energy signatures in their vicinity. “Low-frequency subspace activity, probably the background noise from a local FTL comms network, but no significant sentient communications activity within three light-years detected, sir.”

“Okay,” Sandhurst assessed. “Let’s go to active scanning.”

“Active scanning, aye,” echoed Shanthi as he powered up the starship’s potent sensor array.

“Any vessels or outposts?”

“I’m detecting sixteen transient objects moving at warp within a ten light-year radius. All of them are on independent trajectories and are moving at varying speeds.”

“Not in formation, then?” Sandhurst clarified.

“Affirmative, Captain, no sign of any cohesive groupings of craft in motion.” Shanthi’s hands swept across his console with practiced ease as he narrowed the scanning parameters and zeroed in on a nearby star system. “However, I'm detecting a sizeable contact six-point-two light-years distant at bearing one-zero-five, mark seventeen. Reads as an artificial satellite orbiting a Class-M planet.”

“A space station?” T’Ser inquired.

Shanthi affirmed, “Yes, sir. A big one.” He transferred the enhanced computer-generated image to the main viewer. A massive space station appeared, a delicate-looking assemblage of interlocking ellipses with an oval-shaped structure at its center. What appeared to be spindly cross members connecting the radiating hoops to the inner core were in actuality each over two-hundred meters in diameter. The overall appearance was of a skeletal ovoid surrounding a similarly shaped central hub.

The ellipses themselves were each hundreds of meters thick, meaning that the cumulative internal volume of the station far exceeded that of any Federation facility ever constructed. The structure’s mass was easily five times that of a Spacedock-type starbase, and as the sensor returns continued to add layers of detail to the image, a sizeable cloud of metallic debris could be seen surrounding the outpost.

Dozens of smaller vessels, previously undetectable amid the floating refuse, appeared to be slowly navigating this waste field.

Sandhurst cast a questioning glance towards T’Ser before addressing Shanthi. “How recently was that flotsam zone created, Lieutenant?”

“Judging by the gravitational pull of the nearby planet and factoring in the normal orbital decay rates for that sized body… I’d say between five and eight months, sir.”

“Right about the time that the first wave of ships would have passed through this area,” observed Pell from the seat to the captain’s left.

“It would appear that the station fought a successful campaign to defend itself against the invaders.” Verrik offered from behind the sweeping tactical horseshoe immediately aft of the trio of command chairs.

“Unless it was overrun,” added Lightner.

“This speculation is interesting, but ultimately pointless,” T’Ser countered.

“Agreed,” Sandhurst said, ending the conjecture. He stood from his chair and moved forward to stand between the Ops and Helm stations. “Mister Shanthi, what kind of ships are those inside the debris field?”

A moment later, following some more in-depth scans, Shanthi replied, “They read as scavenger craft, Captain. They’re carrying assorted scrap metals and components salvaged from whatever vessels were destroyed here.”

Sandhurst looked down at Juneau ’s station. “Lieutenant, are we detecting any comms traffic in the vicinity of that station?”

Juneau ’s hands moved across her board deftly. “Yes, sir. Some of it appears encrypted, but the majority of the subspace traffic in this area is being broadcast in the clear.”

Sandhurst instructed, “Tie in the universal translator updates from our advance reconnaissance probes. Has a baseline been established yet for whatever languages they’re using?”

It took her less than ten seconds to find an answer. “Affirmative, Captain. Probe TFV-19 encountered transmissions on this frequency four months ago and has been processing linga-code algorithms of the various language intercepts since then. The translation matrix shows ninety-eight point nine percent efficacy.”

Sandhurst nodded approvingly. The long-range high-warp recon probes sent ahead of Task Force Vanguard bore little resemblance to the host of more specialized shorter-range probes commonly found in Starfleet’s inventory. These cybernetic wonders were each approximately the size of a runabout, and were equipped with the most advanced scanning and communications equipment Federation science could offer. Added to that, each of them were only a few percentage points shy of sentience on the Soong AI Scale, enabling the devices to select their own courses of action in the absence of time-delayed instructions from Starbase Bastion. If necessary, the probes could decide whether to investigate, reconnoiter, hide, defend themselves or actively flee from any spacecraft in their vicinity.

“Okay, then.” Sandhurst cleared his throat and took a moment to prepare himself for his first official First Contact. “Open a channel to the station, Ops.”

“Aye. Channel open, sir.”

“This is Captain Donald Sandhurst of the starship Gibra— shit.” He stopped mid-sentence and tried to ignore the guffaws of laughter emanating from multiple bridge stations as Juneau muted the audio feed.

She looked over her shoulder at Sandhurst, biting her lower lip to maintain her composure. “Shall we try that again, sir?”

“Yes,” he sighed, “please.”

“And… channel open.”

“This is Captain Sandhurst of the Federation starship Europa. We are on a peaceful mission of exploration and are requesting permission to approach your station...”

*****
 
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And so it begins...

I like the time jump, and I know it will take him a while to get used to saying Europa.

I need to get my own story moving forward.
 
I agree with Benny: I really like how you moved things along so thoroughly yet succinctly. Love to hear how Ashok seems to be coming into his own, and think it was brilliant to include the bit about Taiee's advanced training. Also like your little bit about the AI probes. It's nice to have a logical explanation how the Universal Translator might be able to function in this situation (also can't help but wonder whether we'll see something more "substantive" with these near-sentients.) You just seem to think of the most logical - yet often utterly overlooked - details, but you don't belabor them. I like it. Likewise, the systematic scanning of the area once they came out of warp. Nice.

My favorite, though, is how the crew is interacting already. So much is conveyed by their dialogue and interrelations. Loved Sandhurst's little gaff. I was actually wondering if he would do that while I was reading along early in this section. Again, it just humanizes him, makes him "real" to the reader, in such simple and realistic manner.

Can't wait to see what comes next! :bolian:
 
I think TrekkieMonster puts it really well when he says that part of your skill is the way you include fascinating background details like the AI probes with such ease and flow to the story, making it the richer and better for these details but without bogging down the story in any way at all. In fact, it usually has the effect of intriguing us all and wanting more on the bits you mention.

I love also the various expressions you use such as 'thaw out' the counsellor, hee, hee. And of course, Sandhurst's little mix up on the communication front - priceless. Lots of other neat little moments of character action on the bridge too.

Sandhurst arriving in system, the scans, the AI universal translator matrix update, details aside, we also get a lot of compelling titbits and questions about the massive station, the variety of incoming aliens on various trajectories, and on and on. This is going to be quite a mammoth task for the Europa crew and all involved to sort, meet and manage any first contacts. And so much can go wrong.

The time jump was unexpected, I actually expected some more contemplative time in transit and for problems (or sabotage - hey it's you writing - I always expect the worse case scenario ;) ) to crop up with a small skeleton crew to deal with the crisis. However, jumping straight into the story guts makes sense as I'm sure there is lots to be told now they have arrived. But it was great to read about how so many like Sandhurst and Ashok are all shining through in the time it took to arrive. Many corners have been turned. Of course, this is you - so I'm expecting future corners, twists and turns. :) Great job Europ - shit, I mean Gibraltar.
 
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