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U.S.S. SELEYA-CORKSCREWED

Nice. In many ways, the situation with Joseph Sisko's/Nog's idea evoked the dilemma Churchill faced with Coventry--they're going to have to take horrendous casualties that could be avoided in order to prevent the loss of even more lives should the Empire stumble upon this alternate transiting route; just as Churchill had to permit the bombing of Coventry to prevent the Germans from discovering that their code had been broken. It was a painful decision, but one that had to be made.

A nice moral dilemma.
 
Excellent segment! By the way, I lived in New Orleans for three years and I knew a place in the Vieux Carre' that served excellent gree worm jambalaya. ;) Geez, what a thought! You've put me off Cajun cuisine for a month! :scream:

Like David said, you presented a tough dilemma here. What to do? - sacrifice more ships up front to safeguard your plan or jump behind the enemy, risking the device falling into the Empire's hands. It seems the admirals made the right call, but history will be the judge of that.

Hope Captain Scott is okay. I'd hate to be the writer who killed him off, ya know? :rolleyes::evil:
 
I think the problem may lay even deeper-logistics. Think about it. What a long way to travel.

re:Scotty. Have you noticed what's happening to Jerix?
 
A number of things happening. A huge dilemma for the top brass, Scotty knocking on heaven's door and Jerix about to get suspended from duty.

You're doing all this to let us wait even longer for the massive showdown with the Empire, aren't you? It some sort of clever torture your employing.
 
here's a little piece of Chapter 5 (found it under the couch next to the dust bunnies)

Lt. Commander Niccolo Venetti looked nervous as the transporter rematerialized him. Sanjay tried to give him a welcoming smile.

“Hello, Mr. Venetti. Welcome aboard Seleya.”

The S.C.E. engineer looked somewhat abashed as he stepped down from the transporter pad.

“Reporting for duty, sir.” Sanjay grinned as Venetti actually saluted.

“Relax, Commander, this may be a military mission but we are still StarFleet-this isn’t a military ship. Let’s leave that for the Border Dogs, ok?”

Venetti swallowed and said, “Sorry, sir, I know this is awkward. I wanted you to know that I took this posting seriously. I may be S.C.E. but for the duration of this mission I am your Chief Engineer.”

Sanjay looked at him coolly for a moment. “Venetti, Chief Jerix is my Chief Engineer until Command decides otherwise. That having been said-I appreciate your help in filling his shoes until he feels better.”

Venetti looked ashamed. “I didn’t mean…”

Sanjay grinned at him. “I know, Commander, so don’t get your panties in a bunch. I really do appreciate your help at such short notice.” Sanjay changed the course of the conversation. “How is Captain Scott doing?”

Venetti looked relieved at the respite. “They gave him a new heart and he’s responding well. The doctors won’t let him out of bed for at least two weeks while he recovers his strength.” Venetti grinned. “He says it’s a great chance to catch up on his technical manuals.”

“Well, that’s good to hear. I hope we can come back and tell him what an amazing time he missed.”

Venetti looked at Sanjay and said, “Sir, I have been…involved in certain preparations for the up-coming, ah, exercise. I hope we can come back too.”

Sanjay noted the lack of qualifiers in Venetti’s comment but refused to react to it. “Let me take you to your cabin, Commander, so you can drop your stuff. Ordinarily, I would give you some time to adjust to the transfer but I think you would better spend the time meeting the Engineering staff and checking yourself out on the little ‘gift’ that the Science Division has given us. It could be vital for the survival of Seleya.”

“Aye, sir,” Venetti responded. They exited the transporter room together.

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So . . . Captain Scott lives. That is good . . . for you! :evil:

“Relax, Commander, this may be a military mission but we are still StarFleet-this isn’t a military ship. Let’s leave that for the Border Dogs, ok?”
The first guy that salutes on a border cutter would find his bed short-sheeted and the power output on his sonic shower increased by 500%. :guffaw:
 
You're doing all this to let us wait even longer for the massive showdown with the Empire, aren't you? It some sort of clever torture your employing.

CeJay-you are partially right. I am filling in the little bits while I work up the courage to write the big THINGY-its in my head but I'm letting it ferment a bit more-the best whines(sorry, wines) are served after they've had time to age.(If you don't believe me ask my aged mother-oh, damn, we were talking about WINES not whines!)

That having been said(well, written-ok,leggo the arm,-typed) I have a horrendous logistical problem of my own. I have to portray a 4 sided fight:
The diversion attack and its response, and the main attack and ITS response. Cold sweat breaks out every time I sit in front of WORD. The only way the impact of the situation will work is if I write it all at once-and I'm under scrutiny at work so I can't just go off for 8 hours. It's coming-I'll probably just piece it together off-line as I can. Fingers crossed.(Which actually makes typing harder but-oh, nevermind.)
 
Dr. Solandran looked at the monitor on his desk. Dr. Phalan looked over his shoulder.

“How’s he doing, Verk?”

Solandran replied, “I don’t know what to do. I’ve dealt with family loss but this is a Denobulan family-I don’t know.” He shook his head. “He has lost so much, multiple wives and multiple children.” They stared at Jerix in his very safe hospital room. He’d stopped beating on the door hours earlier and now seemed to be pulling strands of hair out one at a time and chewing on them.

“Verk, what do you make of that?” Phalan peered at the monitor. Jerix was pushing his index finger into his mouth.

Solandran’s antennae twitched. “I don’t know. He’s on a suicide watch for a reason. Do you think he’s trying to choke himself to death?”

Phalan scratched at the hair on his snout. “It looks like he’s poking the inside of his cheek. Don’t Denobulans have a set of vestigial pouches in their mouths? I seem to remember reading something about that in med school.”

The Andorian psychologist looked at his Tellarite friend. “The only thing I remember about the chapter on Denobulans is that their hair is water-soluble. Um, when the hair is no longer on their head,” he amended. Phalan looked at him.

“Water-soluble?” He turned back towards the observation monitor. “He’s been stuffing his hair in that pouch-thingy, not eating it. But why in the name of the Horned God would he do that?”

Jerix answered all of their questions a moment later when he withdrew his finger from his mouth. A brown liquid dripped from it as he walked towards the nearest wall. He began to write upon the wall, dipping his finger into his cheek pouch as needed to refresh his home-made paint. Phalan and Solandran waited until he was done to react.

“We’d better call Admiral Janeway,” said Phalan. Solandran just gaped at the monitor and the message Jerix had painted on the wall. It said,

“The Seleya is doomed. I must be aboard her!!!”

Phalan tapped the com unit on his desk.

End Chapter 5

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Good segment, in spite of the "ew" factor. ;) Poor Jerix - looks like he's gone 'round the bend. As to his cryptic scrawl - is it the ravings of a lunatic, or is something really wrong with the Seleya?
 
OK, so we're doing mini-segments now, are we? Oh well, as long as the stuff is good I won't complain I guess.

This was ... kinda disgusting but I liked the cryptic nature of it. People writing stuff on walls with liquids produced from their own bodies always tends to be good. And freaky.
 
OK, so we're doing mini-segments now, are we? Oh well, as long as the stuff is good I won't complain I guess.

This was ... kinda disgusting but I liked the cryptic nature of it. People writing stuff on walls with liquids produced from their own bodies always tends to be good. And freaky.

It was all I had time for-work has changed and I can't just kick it and write-the boss now has EYES and they are pointed at me a bit too often.
 
CHAPTER SIX – VARIATIONS OF RESOLUTION


Sergeant Damian Mitchell walked into the Delta Lounge. Although packed with crew members, the tone was deeply subdued. Mitchell collected a Deschuttes porter and wandered over to the Seleya memorial display by the back wall. Commander Carol M’Benga was already there, staring down at the remnant of the original Seleya in a brooding fashion.

“Commander,” Mitchell said. She glanced up at him in surprise.

“Sergeant. I’m surprised you’re here. I never see you in the Lounge.”

Mitchell grinned at her. “I never like to be alone the night before battle. Oh, God, I sound like such a Klingon, don’t I?” Carol didn’t smile as she answered him.

“Yeah, I guess.” Mitchell looked at her long and hard. Carol noticed and asked,

“What?”

“Commander, it’s never good to dwell on the idea that tomorrow we may be dead. You need something to occupy your mind, something to keep you mentally busy.”

Carol smiled at him wanly. “Sure, yeah, whatever.” She turned her attention back to the fragment of the legendary Vulcan ship. Mitchell wasn’t letting her off that easy. He poked her in the shoulder with his index finger.

“Commander, I have access to every personnel file in the computer. I happen to know that you were a world-class athlete at the University of Nairobi. How would you like to see a game with me? It will keep your mind off of your worries for a while.”

Carol looked at him for a moment. He seemed earnest and she couldn’t help but smile.

“What kind of game?”

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They were seated in the stands at Madison Square Garden, third row, mid-court. The pre-game festivities were on. The crowd was pumped and going a little wild as the dancers and cheerleaders performed. Carol leaned towards Damian.

“I would have thought you were taking me to a football game!” she shouted over the crowd noise.

Mitchell grinned at her crookedly. “I always loved basketball. I just wasn’t tall enough and slick enough to play.”

Carol looked at him (looked UP at him) and replied, “You weren’t TALL enough?’ Her voice was incredulous.

Mitchell snickered. “Actually, I couldn’t hit a basket to save my life. That’s why I played football. It’s easy to hit another person.”

“So what are the teams?” Carol asked.

“Well,” said Mitchell, “It’s an NBA Championship game, but I picked the line-ups. I have them dressing out in Lakers versus Celtics but I chose players from over three hundred years of NBA history to make the teams. The computer is programmed to take into account everybody’s style and ability and their capability to adapt to other players’ styles. It should be fun.” He took a bite of his hotdog.

Carol chomped down a nacho and then said, “So, who you got playing?”

Mitchell swallowed and replied, “The East was easy. Michael Jordan and Ellis Cross are the starting guards. Larry Bird and Togue Banatay are on the bench to back them up. I took the older Bird because of his 3-point ability. Shaquille O’Neil is the center with George Mikan backing him up. Moses Malone and B’er Massat are in as forwards with Scotty Pippen and Kevin McHale on the bench.”

Carol gave him a piercing look. “Massat was the reason they put in racial parameter adjustments, wasn’t he?”

Mitchell looked slightly abashed. “Yeah, but I took him from the 2089 season, before they realized just how much better Vulcans and Rigellians were, athletically speaking, than humans.”

“So how did you pick the guys on the West to compensate?” Carol asked.

Mitchell was scarfing his hotdog and almost choked from laughing at her question. “I gave the West Kolbe and Nash.”

Carol looked at him like he’d grown a third eye. ”So the East doesn’t have a chance? In the last three hundred years no one has touched the numbers they put up in 09-12.” The crowd was cheering a set of girls dancing to ‘Sisters Are Doing It’.

“I wouldn’t write them off. I have Jerry West and Jeff Hornacek backing them up, Kareem Abdul Jabbar is at center with a young Dirk Nowitsky on the bench. The forwards are being played as Magic Johnson and Bill Walton at his prime. On the bench is Kaylee Smith and T’ch Haal. Again, I took the player from before the ’90 ruling. Oh, and I have Wilt and Elgin Baylor on the bench, too. And I gave the East Oscar Robertson and Bob Cousy. The computer will decide the substitutions and the game will be played by the rules in use in 2024. That’s before the ‘no bombing’ rule regarding threes. It should be a fun game.”

Carol looked down to the court as the starting line-ups were announced. “Damian, if I forget later-thank you for this.” Mitchell just grinned at her and then began clapping for Shaq.

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WHAT?!? No "Pistol" Pete Maravich? What kinda lame NBA championship reunion lalapalooza is this, anyway?! :scream:

Great segment! I like the idea of a fantasy NBA game - nice inclusion of some extra-terrestrials, too! It had a very plausible ring to it. Good character work with Mitchell and M'Benga! :techman:

I bet the Klingons would make awesome football players. :evil::klingon: 'Course, they might have a tendency to spike their opponents, rather than the ball, in the end zone.
 
Very nice and powerful short segments here. I liked the all time all star NBA lineup--even though I hate basketball. As for Jerix--intense--very intense.
 
I with David on this one ... the NFL is where it's at!

I don't quite hate it and I thought the idea of an All-Star game consisting out of current, classic and future NBA players was a pretty cool touch. I thought you laid it on a bit heavy with the name dropping but overall it was a very nice change of pace and somewhat reminiscent of Sisko's infatuation with Baseball.
 
Mitchell is a fan-the heavy name-dropping is on a par with that mindset(I know, cause I'm a fan and had a blast creating these dream teams). Maybe I could use a football game another time-I could have a Klingon d-back trying to take down Jim Brown!:)
 
went to Pismo Beach and tried to write but This is all I've got...really wanted to finish this end of it but it will have to be later...


“…thought you should know, Captain,” Janeway said. Sanjay stared into the comscreen at her thoughtfully for a moment.

“Thank you, Admiral. I’m not sure what it means, either, but I’ll do some digging and try to find out. Sanjay out.” He looked across his desk at his Chief Medical Officer. “Jesus, you were on this thing with Jerix at the very beginning. Do you have any ideas?”

Ramirez gathered his thoughts for a few seconds before answering. “The Chief is in a very dark place, Captain. He’s been on a suicide watch since I relieved him of duty.” Sanjay noted that the doctor had spoken from a viewpoint of full responsibility. “If he wrote that, he may have done something to relieve his own suffering. He is very conflicted, feeling both survivor’s guilt and an absolute hatred for the Empire that destroyed his family. I would take the statement very seriously. He may have found a way to settle both of his points of conflict at the same time. If he came up with a means of ending his own life and inflicting punishment on the Empire…” Ramirez paused for a moment. “Remember, he didn’t know I was going to relieve him of duty. He expected to be on Seleya when we attacked the Empire forces in that alternate universe.” Ramirez looked very worried.

Sanjay absently stroked his beard as he considered the implications. Then he reached out and hit the comm button on his desk. “Sanjay to Venetti.”

“Aye, sir, Venetti here.” The temporary Chief Engineer sounded mildly distracted.

“Commander, we are less than eighteen hours from the jump-off point of this mission and I have reason to believe Chief Jerix may have sabotaged the Seleya in some way before he was relieved of duty. Find it. All I can tell you is that whatever he may have done, he would have set it up so that it would have hurt our opponents tomorrow and killed him as well. I’d really rather not find out what it was the hard way. Use everyone you don’t need for the installation of Admiral Janeway’s little toy to search for traces of what he might have done. Remember, whatever he had in mind, it could be anywhere on the ship. If you need additional personnel just ask. Some of our command crew have engineering experience and I have no problem seconding them to you for this.”

There was a distinct pause before Venetti responded. “Um, aye, Captain. I let you know if we find anything.”

“Chief Jerix is a very clever individual. Let me know when you find something.” Sanjay’s tone brooked no disagreement.

“Aye, sir. Venetti out.” Sanjay looked over at Ramirez.

“Do you think that was enough?” he asked.

Ramirez grimaced. “Let’s hope so, Captain. As you said, the Chief is a very clever man.”

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A few moments later Sanjay stepped out of his Ready Room and onto the Bridge. “Lieutenant Nog, I need you to signal your relief and report to Commander Venetti in Engineering. Please place yourself at his disposal until further notice.”

Nog turned away from the helm and looked at his Captain. “Um, yes sir. Could I ask what this is about?”

“You worked with Chief O’Brien on DS9, didn’t you?” Sanjay inquired.

“Yes, sir, I did. For about nine months.”

“Good. Please go to Engineering. Commander Venetti will explain.” Nog left the Bridge without another word, although Sanjay could tell he was practically bursting with questions. As he entered the turbolift Sergeant Mitchell and Commander M’Benga stepped off of it.

“Did he really stick his tongue out like that when he was taking the game-winning shot?” M’Benga asked.

Mitchell was grinning. “Oh, yes, that was kind of like his trademark. There’s still surviving footage in the archives from a few of the Bulls winning seasons. Every one that he put the nail in the coffin on shows the tongue hanging out. I still don’t believe he got that over Shaq’s head, though. It looked like it was going to get slapped into the fiftieth row!” Sanjay stepped in front of them.

“We have a situation,” he said. He quickly filled them in. Mitchell swore softly to himself while M’Benga just looked at Sanjay, surprised.

“Do you really think it’s possible the Chief did something to harm the ship?” She asked.

“I’m afraid I do. Sergeant-“ Mitchell cut him off.

“I’ll get my team on it right away. If it’s a bomb or something like that we’ll find it.” Mitchell didn’t wait for Sanjay’s reply. He was already heading to his board to relay the news to the Security Department.

“Carol, I’d like you to have the Bonestell conduct a level one scan of the Seleya. They have the best sensor suite out of any of the ships in the task force. Tell them to look at everything they can and get back to us as soon as they find anything unusual.”
Carol nodded and went to her seat, already speaking with her counterpart on the Bonestell. Sanjay followed her, taking his seat as well. “Sanjay to Astrometrics.”

“Uh, yes, Captain, this is, uh, Ensign Perling.” As usual, the young man sounded like anything but the picture of self-confidence. That he was one of the premier scientific minds of his generation was a given but his social skills were sometimes…lacking. Sanjay sometimes thought that he had more confidence in him than Perling did in himself.

“Ensign, the ship may have been sabotaged. I want you to get with Commander Venetti and Lieutenant Nog down in Engineering-see if you can help them get to the bottom of this.”

“Uh, yes sir!” came Perling’s startled reply.

Sanjay settled back in his chair and began to stroke his beard. Commander M’Benga sat next to him, absentmindedly drumming her fingers on the arm of her seat. They both waited.

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Gav chek Gav was a Tellarite, one of the lowest of the low in the Terran Empire. Nevetheless, he considered himself quite lucky. Although a slave, he worked in the Imperial Palace on Earth and lived better than most of his people. He had comfortable quarters, was fed regularly and, because he performed his duties at night when few were about, was rarely singled out by members of the master races for punishment. He was scrubbing the door frame of the Main Dining Hall and hadn’t seen anyone since he’d come on shift so he was mildly surprised when a figured stepped out of the shadows in the hallway and addressed him. Once he realized who was speaking his surprise turned to sheer terror.

“You are very efficient in your duties, slave.” Emperor Spock spoke without warmth or anger, without any emotional inflection at all. Gav threw himself prostrate on the floor, trembling. He tried to respond but words failed him. Only a low moan escaped his lips. He remained in this position for several long moments without hearing anything else before daring to raise his head. He was just in time to see the Emperor rounding the corner at the end of the hall. Gav was so relieved he fouled himself, but he didn’t care. He was just grateful to be alive. As he went back to his quarters to change his pants he wondered why the Emperor had been roaming the Palace so very late at night. The thought stayed with him for a mere moment before he dismissed it from his mind.

Emperor Spock stared out of a window at the Palace gardens. In the moonlight he could make out the shapes of maintenance robots going about their tasks. Although his razor-sharp mind catalogued their movements, his thoughts were elsewhere. Picard’s fleet had hit the Federation in the universe designated as One some time before, yet no response had occurred. Spock had calculated a ninety-three percent chance that they would have worked up some kind of counter-attack at least four days previously. That none had materialized troubled him greatly. Spock, despite Picard’s boasts, did not believe that Federation One had been rendered impotent. A lack of a counter move suggested variables Spock was not factoring into his equations. He found the idea troubling enough to keep him from sleep. With no one present he permitted himself a rare sigh. The slave he had chanced upon earlier, he thought, probably slept the sleep of the innocent. Spock almost envied him. It had been a long time since Spock had experienced anything resembling innocence. He continued to stare out of the window, re-running his calculations in his head.

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T-2 HOURS

Commander Venetti, Lieutenant Nog and Ensign Perling were gathered around a substation in Engineering. Venetti was speaking.

“Captain, if the Chief did something to the ship we’ve been unable to find it. We’ve been all over the systems and Ensign Perling has analyzed the Bonestell’s sensor sweeps and we are still coming up empty–handed.”

“Alright, Commander, we’ll assume that it’s safe to proceed with the mission but I want you and your team to keep looking. In two hours we go through the Fracture to Federation-B space and rendezvous with their ships. After making whatever repairs are necessary we jump to Federation-C and start hitting the Empire where it hurts. I would rather not have any unnecessary surprises so stay on it. I’m going to want Lieutenant Nog on the Bridge when we jump but you can keep Ensign Perling for the time being. Sanjay out.”

The three officers looked at each other. “Nog, I hate to lose your expertise,” Venetti said. “Your time on DS9 gave you some interesting insights into booby-traps.” Nog grinned at him.

“It sure did. We were there for years, I mean, I grew up on the station, and Chief O’Brien and I were still finding garbage the Cardassians left behind in the systems. It was kind of like the landmines you Hu-mons used in your wars a couple of hundred years ago.”

Ensign Perling began nodding in agreement but Venetti looked puzzled. “Come again?”

“Hu-mons planted buried explosives all over the place to stop enemy troops and long after the wars were over people were still getting killed by them. Until sensor technology improved enough in the mid-2200s to detect the last of them and help to dig them up a few fatalities would be reported every year. At least, that’s what Chief O’Brien told me.”

Understanding washed over Venetti’s face. “Gotcha,” he said. “Well, let’s take another go at it, shall we?” They all turned back to the task at hand.

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T-1 HOUR

Twenty-eight ships left Federation-A space through the Fracture. The trip was savage and rough but the latest shield upgrades made the trip far easier than the original passage Seleya had experienced. On the other side, they were met by four Challenger-class ships of the Federation-Bs StarFleet. The lead ship was the Buran. Before messages could be exchanged Sergeant Mitchell spoke up from Tactical.

“Captain, I’m only reading twenty-seven ships, including ourselves, as having emerged from the Fracture.”


“Who’s missing?” Sanjay demanded. The answer came swiftly.

“It’s the Cam Rahn Bay, sir. She never made it out. Sensor logs are showing that she detonated in the Fracture.” Mitchell’s voice sounded heavy. “She must have taken a little too much damage on the way here.

Sanjay seethed. “Damn these self-destruct protocols! We haven’t even engaged the enemy and we’ve already lost a good ship and crew!” No one on the Bridge said anything in reply. Commander M’Benga finally spoke up.

“Sir, the Buran is hailing us.”

“Put it on screen,” Sanjay said. The Bridge of the Buran appeared on the viewscreen. “Hello, Frank,” Sanjay greeted the Buran’s captain.

“Hey, Nick,” Frank responded, his face grim. “I noticed you’re light one bird. They self-destructed, didn’t they?” The look on Sanjay’s face confirmed it without words. Frank shook his head. “Damned shame. I wonder how many more we will lose? Well, it can’t be helped. Nick, which of your ships needs help? I have Engineering teams standing by.”

As the two captains conferred about logistics bits of the Cam Rahn Bay drifted out of the Fracture and took up orbit around Jupiter.

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The captain of the Buran had beamed over to Seleya and was meeting with Sanjay in his Ready Room.

“The plan is pretty simple, Frank,” Sanjay said. “The Bonestell is going to act as our sensor platform to guide the rest of the ships to their targets. Since your ships aren’t as, ah, robust in battle as ours I’m assigning you to protect her. The rest of the task force will seek out and destroy any targets of opportunity.” Sanjay looked a little disgusted as he said this.


“Nick, I find this as distasteful as you do but it’s necessary for the overall plan. We have to draw off as many Empire assets as we can to give Picard’s fleet a chance to seal the Fracture. I know you’d rather be out exploring than fighting, the same as me. This is necessary. We do what we have to do and we get out. It’s as simple as that.” Frank held Sanjay’s eyes until he dropped them down to his coffee cup.

“Frank, I may not like our orders but I’ll obey them. A part of me recognizes the need to do this but a part of me hates the thought of StarFleet ships acting like a U-boat pack, you know what I mean?” He took a drink from his mug.

“Nick,” Frank replied, “There isn’t a one of us that likes this-it’s just something that needs doing. Look, I’d better get back to my ship. We’re just about ready to move out.” He stood and held his hand out across Sanjay’s desk. “Good luck, Nick, and stay safe. I lost you once-I don’t want to go through that again.”

Sanjay shook his hand. “You, too, Frank. When this is all over we’ll go drink a few beers and try to find our souls again, ok?”

Frank grinned. “You got it, buddy.”

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Well then, lookie here, more build-up. Not a bad thing though especially seeing that a crazy old Denobulan engineer left a nasty surprise on the Seleya nobody seems to be able to find. Now if the isn't revving up the tension ....

Good stuff, excited to read more.
 
The tension is building up and already one ship is lost. And did Jerix sabotage the Seleya? If so, they better find his Easter egg and fast!
 
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