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TMP is the best film. It is not 'tedious' at all

As someone who has gotten rejection letters from Analog for not having enough dialogue, I am going to say no. :)

I'm going to hedge that statement saying it will appeal to a few. But those are the kinds of people who are fascinated in the serial numbers on grain cars when they see a news story about desperate migrants riding on the tops of trains. We're dealing with as subset and I am not condemning them but honestly they have their own criteria and I don't relate to them or vice versa.

For everyone else, stories have to be relatable. There may be the odd outlier, but for the most part the story has to be about some aspect of the human experience. It doesn't have to be some "hero's journey" retelling. It doesn't even have to be particularly compelling. People tune in weekly to stuff like Kardashians that has no bearing on any aspect of their own life but IS about a life. Any of the youtube vloggers that make a living from what they are doing, apart from the ones who fill up pools with jello or get past the sensors cleaning house in lingerie, are still injecting some kind of human experience narrative into what they are doing, or it just doesn't resonate.

We're a hive species to some degree and we depend on that interaction.
I admit, I love the crisp professionalism of TMP. I'm happy for the warmth to be in asides and off duty moments but we do then need to have some of those scenes included. Snogging, drooling, and arguing while on duty really takes away some of the realism for me. ST Discovery's gurning while in a crisis really gets on my nerves.

The final part of my fan edit will be to try and add some extra dialogue. I gave Rand two extra lines during McCoy's entrance. One of them cribbed from World Enough and Time has a little fanfare that I can't edit out so it really draws unwarranted attention to her (since she was introduced in a previous scene) but it also gives a little tingle because Kirk and Rand share a moment about McCoy. What it makes me realise is that Spock gets a fanfare but McCoy doesn't so then I started wondering if music could add a bit more warmth and humour in the right places.

TOS music over the Sulu / Ilia scene would sound too hammy for the TMP vibe I think. If anyone has any suggestions I'd appreciate the input.

In an interview, Nimoy said that he tried to ad lib a line, "If Dr McCoy is to remain on board, my presence will be essential." I managed to lift the line from the interview, slow it down to make it more Spock, and string it together with some TOS/STV dialogue to put at the very end as the ship flies off. It's fun but I'm unconvinced that it fits. It's very TOS, very a hundred people just died but Spock has funny ears kind of thing.
 
Nice detail. I really appreciate the write up and its a good reminder that TMP really does stand apart in the Star Trek ethos, so much so that efforts to replicate its grandeur are not undertaken, unlike TWOK.

Thank you. TMP remains its own animal, yes. It's almost like the "string theory" installment of the ST film franchise. After that bizarre heavenly augury, where is there to go but down? Although I still think we should push up, up, up (or "in, in, in")...

And, yes, I think Abrams' Trek is more than the surface level read would give it, just like TMP is more than the difficult film I consider it to be. Your post is proof positive of that.

Once again, my thanks. I'm actually not a fan of "JJ Trek" (look at my post history and read what I was saying about it in 2009, and again, briefly, in 2013 when "Into Darkness" came out -- those are still my thoughts today), but I'm not above drawing inferences or taking a slightly more generous view of things when it suits. If you derived something positive, I've done something right. :)

TMP was a "The Changeling" on quaaludes with a healthy dose of ILM and a beautiful sound track. It's as trek as anything else with the word Star Trek in the opening credits. It's also probably in terms of the effect it had on the franchise one of the most important, for all the wrong reasons.

LOL. I love that description. There's a somnambulant quality to TMP, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I live most of my life caught somewhere between waking and dreaming. I wish there were a few more alpha-wave movies out there for people of my type to glom onto.

After TMP, the big money was gone. No one believed that Star Trek could compete with Star Wars. It was a lower tier franchise. Good for lower budgets sci fi flicks every couple of years with a tried and true (and economical) cast. Essentially they would be appendages to TOS and later TNG for decades until Abrams tried to break the mold and make another attempt at Star Trek being a major franchise.

True. The latter films are basically an adjunct to the first two (now three with "Discovery") TV series, and something of an odd pastiche accordingly: part B-movie action-adventure, part extended television episode, where a viewer gets to hang around with old friends. They are mainly about making money and trying out one or two ideas in the pursuit of semi-intelligent entertainment. They are also an apology (of sorts) for there not being more of a television series, or a better way to handle the characters and the ST format -- although this apology is hardly delicate. Mostly, one could call them Treksploitation.

This touches on something I've said here many times. Too often (maybe? Maybe it's just human nature) we talk about liking or disliking something without defining the conditions or definitions of what we like and why.

Ah, yes. Providing detail and context, without just defining one thing against another -- sometimes, it's harder than we think!

SPOCK: And who is the creator?
ILIA (probe): The creator is that which created V'Ger.
KIRK: Who is V'Ger?
ILIA (probe): V'Ger is that which seeks the creator.

I'm purely paraphrasing here; I didn't take notes or anything like that. The gist of his presentation was that writers have been told, for many years, that a story has to be about characters in conflict. He argued that there was no reason for this to be true, and that a satisfying story could be told without characters at all, let alone conflict, or motivated action/reaction. I'm vague on this part, but he had an example, and I want to say it asomething like "An asteroid is kicked out of its orbit, spends millennia in a highly elliptical orbit, and then falls into the gravity well of a planet, where it impacts the surface, causing a great explosion."

Stories don't have to have obvious conflict -- a lot of it can be subtle and under the surface. I think that's the difference here. Characters don't have to be at loggerheads or pursuing a well-defined goal for some kind of performance piece or dramatised happening to draw you in. Outside of TMP, one of my favourite movies is "Lost In Translation" (I also love Sofia Coppola's unofficial follow-up "Somewhere"), and these are films that have a more silky and ephemeral feel. They have a plot structure, but that structure is much less "in your face" than normal, allowing both films to unfold at their own pace, under their own terms. Situations and experiences take precedence over "events".

41 years later and we're STILL discussing this film in such detail- that says it all for TMP, doesn't it?

Yup! I had an idea to gather up or go through all the threads in the entire "Star Trek Movies I-X" forum, and see how many of them are about TMP. I wouldn't read them all, but just go by their title or their opening post. I think it would be a fun (if long and draining) exercise. By counting up all the threads and all the posts combined, I could then determine the total percentage of forum content devoted to TMP versus "the rest" (since global totals for thread and post counts are already provided on the main page for each forum) -- I bet you it's a significant chunk!

I admit, I love the crisp professionalism of TMP. I'm happy for the warmth to be in asides and off duty moments but we do then need to have some of those scenes included. Snogging, drooling, and arguing while on duty really takes away some of the realism for me. ST Discovery's gurning while in a crisis really gets on my nerves.

I love that "crisp professionalism", too. It's one of the film's primary delights and something Robert Wise excels at. Without him at the helm, it could have gone pear-shaped. I hear you on the "warmth" factor, but TMP at least has a viewpoint on human activity thanks to Wise's exceptional direction and eye for diligence and professional restraint.

In an interview, Nimoy said that he tried to ad lib a line, "If Dr McCoy is to remain on board, my presence will be essential." I managed to lift the line from the interview, slow it down to make it more Spock, and string it together with some TOS/STV dialogue to put at the very end as the ship flies off. It's fun but I'm unconvinced that it fits. It's very TOS, very a hundred people just died but Spock has funny ears kind of thing.

Now, THAT's sneaky! Using Leonard Nimoy complaining about the absence of his "gift" to the filmmakers, to actually give him his wish! Excellent. It'll be interesting to view your cut when it's complete -- or rather: when it finally "escapes"!
 
Stories don't have to have obvious conflict -- a lot of it can be subtle and under the surface.

Not sure if you missed it, but he was saying the not only conflict but also characters were unnecessary. Think of "Lost in Translation" as nothing but a two hour shot of the hotel room. According to this guy, the rising or setting sun through a window would be sufficient to consider it a good story.
 
Not sure if you missed it, but he was saying the not only conflict but also characters were unnecessary. Think of "Lost in Translation" as nothing but a two hour shot of the hotel room. According to this guy, the rising or setting sun through a window would be sufficient to consider it a good story.

Well, some people can project human interest onto abstract things. I think we can all do this a bit. Cinema, in fact, relies on this being the case. Even when you're reading a book, it's just a bunch of squiggles going through the optic nerve and lighting up parts of your brain. It sounds like the professor you spoke of was arguing for a more sensuous conception of the world. Many short films are constructed on that basis -- even when they involve people. For instance, the work of Arthur Lipsett:

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My edit started as a desire to merge the DE and SLV, but then morphed a bit. I was going to Deepfake a cameo for Rand in the second half of the movie, which turned into an attempt at an extended scene. Then I thought, in for a penny and decided to re-imagine the Memory Wall. It wasn't my intention to go so nuts, or to big up Rand quite so much, but once I had Deepfaked her files, it seemed like a ball ache to re-run the process for another character.

So far, in addition to the SLV dialogue I have added:

McCoy's entrance:
Rand "Don't look so worried." (World Enough and Time) before, "It does have a familiar ring to it," and
"Just like old times." (placeholder pending voice imitation) just after "Permission granted."

Kirk/McCoy watching Ilia:
Rand "Can I get you something from the galley, Sir." (Balance of Terror)
"Do you suppose she knows?" (Miri)
McCoy "She might not know or even remember." (Spock's Brain)
Kirk "But does she want to." (Is there Truth in No Beauty)

Kirk spacewalk
Kirk "Where's Spock?" (STV)
Rand "He's not out here, he's in there." (placeholder)
"I thought there was something twitchy about him." (Man Trap)
Kirk " Scotty, please tell me the transporter is working " (STV)
Scott "It's blocking our transporter signal" (Doomsday Machine)
Rand "I think we'd better sit this one out" (placeholder)
Kirk "I have to know what's happening in there."
Scotty "Don't do it Captain." (Doomsday Machine)
Kirk "We're going in." (Immunity Syndrome)
Kirk "Just like old times." (placeholder)
Rand "That's what I'm afraid of." (placeholder)

Memory Wall
Rand " I can't see a God damn thing " (placeholder)
"Well where is everybody?" (Miri)
Kirk "You've got a tricorder, use it if you're able to." (Who Mourns for Adonais)
Rand "Scanning sector one. An unidentified life form reading." (placeholder STIII)
Kirk "Could that someone be Mr Spock?" (Spock's Brain)
Then I need to edit Kirk's spacesuit and Spock's return to be inside V'Ger.

Closing scene :
Spock "If Dr McCoy is to remain on board, my presence will be essential." (Nimoy interview)
McCoy "Spock, you never cease to amaze me."
Spock "Nor I myself Doctor" (STV)
Uhura "I'm not surprised Mr Spock" (Man Trap)
Kirk "Well this certainly feels familiar." (video game)
Ship flies off to new adventures...

This is very much a WIP as I have no editing experience and I'm using the software for the first time! Eek. It is hard to inject humour without trashing the vibe. Another reason I picked Rand was her TOS sass and that she is a blank canvas in TMP. She can be McCoy's comedy back up in her own right. It's tricky with so little dialogue to work with. Not much call for a space waitress.
 
For instance, the work of Arthur Lipsett:
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To begin with, I think you're stretching to try to justify that prof's presentation. If you want to argue that he was exaggerating to make his point...maybe he was. But if sounds as if you're trying to justify him rather than analyze his argument.

That said, your example film was filled with characters and dialog, and according to the prof, these are not necessary to tell a good story.

A better example would come from my long-ago friend Randy. During his first filmmaking class, he set up a camera and filmed a stoplight changing, filling the frame, for 20 minutes (the length of a standard film magazine). When I asked him why he said "Nobody's ever done it before." According to the words of the prof in my example, this is a perfectly adequate, perhaps even brilliant movie. I don't think that outside of the walls of the academe it will get much positive notice, however. (Randy's example did have the advantage of making screenwriting incredibly simple, however.)
 
I think your Spock dialog doesn't match the new/Kohlinar Spock. His being cold and then not-so, is one of the biggies of the whole flick, right?

Very possible I'm missing something.
 
I think your Spock dialog doesn't match the new/Kohlinar Spock. His being cold and then not-so, is one of the biggies of the whole flick, right?

Very possible I'm missing something.

The way I've always interpreted the film in my head canon: Spock was trying to purge emotion, which would include purging all positive thoughts about his friendships. He has difficulty with it, because subconsciously it's not what he really wants. He hears V'Ger calling out to him, thinks that's the solution, and races off to meet up with the Enterprise on its intercept course. He still thinks he wants to purge emotion, so he's cold to everyone on the ship; don't want to reopen those relationships. When he mindmelds with V'Ger, he realizes the futility of the Kohlinar pursuit, resulting in his quasi-warm moment with Kirk in sick bay. Spock continues with his exploration of the value of his emotions and his human half, resulting in his behavior in TWOK ("I have been, and ever shall be, your friend.")

The fan edit scene described would give him a moment of warmth in an otherwise largely sterile film, but it is to be sure tonally out of place with the rest of the movie. It reads like a (for me) laudable attempt to bring TMP into line with TOS, but it will stand out. IT does, however, come well after the shock of the C'Ger mindmeld, which does result in some degree of behavioral change in Spock.
 
The way I've always interpreted the film in my head canon: Spock was trying to purge emotion, which would include purging all positive thoughts about his friendships. He has difficulty with it, because subconsciously it's not what he really wants. He hears V'Ger calling out to him, thinks that's the solution, and races off to meet up with the Enterprise on its intercept course. He still thinks he wants to purge emotion, so he's cold to everyone on the ship; don't want to reopen those relationships. When he mindmelds with V'Ger, he realizes the futility of the Kohlinar pursuit, resulting in his quasi-warm moment with Kirk in sick bay. Spock continues with his exploration of the value of his emotions and his human half, resulting in his behavior in TWOK ("I have been, and ever shall be, your friend.")

The fan edit scene described would give him a moment of warmth in an otherwise largely sterile film, but it is to be sure tonally out of place with the rest of the movie. It reads like a (for me) laudable attempt to bring TMP into line with TOS, but it will stand out. IT does, however, come well after the shock of the C'Ger mindmeld, which does result in some degree of behavioral change in Spock.
To be sure, Wise thought Nimoy's line was out of place. It was a conscious attempt by Nimoy himself to add back some TOS humour. Nimoy's delivery in the interview is only nominally Spock as well but the theme tunes playing at this point as well as the ship gears up for warp so think I can get away with it.

I have more of a dilemma about which McCoy rant to put in. I'm sure there is line somewhere about McCoy saying he liked him better before but not sure where it is (most likely IV or V) but if I want to use Uhura's line, I need an appropriate Spock retort as well.

For my money, smiling, crying Spock, who injects a bit of sarcasm in the final third can crack a joke at the end. Pretty much all the humour in the epilogues of TOS was entirely inappropriate to the carnage that came before. It's tradition.
 
To begin with, I think you're stretching to try to justify that prof's presentation. If you want to argue that he was exaggerating to make his point...maybe he was. But if sounds as if you're trying to justify him rather than analyze his argument.

That said, your example film was filled with characters and dialog, and according to the prof, these are not necessary to tell a good story.

Well, you're stretching the terms "characters" and "dialog[ue]", because the example I gave has neither of those things, as they are commonly understood. The people in it are an amalgamation from other sources, including the bits of talking:

21-87 is entirely composed of found footage and cuts of film that were discarded in the editing process. Lipsett then interwove and juxtaposed these fragments of film with an original patchwork soundtrack. The structure of the films is integral in communicating the potent connections between the images and ideas. Within the convention of 60s avant-garde collage films, his work reacted against the dominant ideologies of the time.

https://www.cs.mcgill.ca/~kaleigh/film/film_essay_lipsett.html

Yes, there are things out there that are "more" avant-garde than "21-87", if that's your bag -- but I thought I'd provide an example that serves as a reasonable starting point for further exploration.

A better example would come from my long-ago friend Randy. During his first filmmaking class, he set up a camera and filmed a stoplight changing, filling the frame, for 20 minutes (the length of a standard film magazine). When I asked him why he said "Nobody's ever done it before." According to the words of the prof in my example, this is a perfectly adequate, perhaps even brilliant movie. I don't think that outside of the walls of the academe it will get much positive notice, however. (Randy's example did have the advantage of making screenwriting incredibly simple, however.)

Sure. That's a valid example of a modern art approach. However, I think you're setting up a false dichotomy by implying these sorts of things would be out-of-place in the mainstream world. Any work of cinema from the 20th Century would have seemed pretty bizarre to someone living in the 19th Century.

TMP begins with a blank screen that is held a while, and following some brief white-on-black credits, starts on a strange swirl of hues suspending against a dark background. Cut the music and it's pretty odd.

Or look at the way Star Wars starts with a text roll-up -- an idea partly inspired by the opening of Cecil B. DeMille's "Union Pacific". Filmmakers are always in search of good ideas, especially those working in the Science-Fiction and Fantasy field.

Another example from the era of Late 70s blockbuster "event" movies, to which TMP belongs, would be the opening sequence to "Superman" -- floating titles over a series of strange undulating and swirling objects. These objects are actually micro-photography of bio-luminescent sea life in Bermuda, obtained by Oxford Scientific Films.

In order for filmmakers to bring spectacular, mind-expanding visions to the screen (especially in the pre-digital age), they have to get a bit "out there" in some of their thinking. In other words, even big-budget films intended for a large audience can have avant-garde elements within them. All blockbuster films (all films) have a certain prismatic quality -- the degree to which such films are infused with avant-garde elements, and the degree to which these elements strike one as avant-garde in the first place, are dependent upon the circumstances under which the film was made, including the aesthetic priorities of the filmmakers (i.e., their sensibilities and intent), and the temporal, emotional, and intellectual circumstances under which their work is viewed.

Thus, attempts to malign TMP, whether overtly or implicitly, on the basis that it strayed too far from "good storytelling" (or some other basic rubric), are sort of missing the point of cinema and the potential of the medium. They may also be failing to grasp the significance of historical factors given the time of TMP's release. Filmmakers were actually pushing the envelope back then. Trust was actually placed in the audience to "get" what was going on, even with a slightly strange and drawn-out presentation. A film back then could have many layers and many lyrical passages without it automatically being dubbed awkward, ridiculous, or worthless. Granted, a lot of people seemed to have an issue with TMP even at the time, but that fear of an audience instantly recoiling at what they were seeing doesn't seem to have existed. In short, it was a different age with a different outlook.
 
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I'm not sure TMP was originally intended to start against a blank screen (IIRC the DE adds a starfield), but even if it was, at the risk of stating the obvious, at the time (or at least before it) films often had a full overture before the film really began, so that's not really unusual, much less unprecedented. Moreso to a contemporary audience of course.
 
I'm not sure TMP was originally intended to start against a blank screen (IIRC the DE adds a starfield), but even if it was, at the risk of stating the obvious, at the time (or at least before it) films often had a full overture before the film really began, so that's not really unusual, much less unprecedented. Moreso to a contemporary audience of course.

You're right to make that circumstance explicit, but that was exactly the point I was making: films are a confluence of factors, and so is the apprehension thereof. Some aspects may be radical at the time of their making, while others may seem bizarre or unusual years later, when the viewing context changes.

Yes, an epic film having an overture was nothing too out-of-the-ordinary at the time, but it was dying out when TMP came out (Star Wars, in part, may have hastened its demise: by "speeding up" audience insertion into the narrative and displacing production credits to the end). Tastes and trends were changing.

Perhaps someone more informed can chime in, but I think the starfield was only added to the DE because a film starting with an overture set to a blank screen was seen as dated -- like the viewer now needed to be kept engaged and reassured that this wasn't actually a fault with their DVD or playback system.
 
I agree that overtures were falling a bit by the wayside when TMP came out, though I'm pretty sure it was a conscious effort on the part of TPTB to increase the sense of grandeur surrounding the film (that may even be explicit on a commentary track?). It certainly stands out as unusual in this day and age, especially if you don't have the starfield in the back.

I wonder whether Memory Alpha has anyone on this...
 
I agree that overtures were falling a bit by the wayside when TMP came out, though I'm pretty sure it was a conscious effort on the part of TPTB to increase the sense of grandeur surrounding the film (that may even be explicit on a commentary track?). It certainly stands out as unusual in this day and age, especially if you don't have the starfield in the back.

Yep. Probably. They wanted a 2001-like feel, and they were already signalling their intent and orienting themselves by dubbing the film "The Motion Picture". This feature was intended to feel weighty and important.

The overture also has a basic narrative/thematic purpose in establishing the motif of desire and lulling the audience into a state of anticipation and longing. The fact that Robert Wise was so "old school" -- in addition to his and Gene Roddenberry's joint admiration for Jerry Goldsmith -- also likely played a role in the film starting out with a lush overture.

That said, it may not have been part of the game plan until it was decided that Decker should fuse with V'Ger/Ilia, in November 1978 -- at least, not in that precise musical form. I say that because the overture is really Ilia's Theme, which also doubles as the film's love theme. But until it was decided that Decker should fully give of himself to merge with V'Ger, I can't see how an overture (in that form) would really fit.

With the fusion between Decker and Ilia laying way ahead at the film's climax, an overture may have suggested itself as a way to button the film up and stress its lyrical structure. Love comes in at a tangent and saves the day. Like when McCoy asks, "What more is there than the universe, Spock?" The answer, in a way, is love. And the overture performs that role: just "outside" of the narrative, or the "logical" conception of the world the characters are constrained in thinking of, is the remedy: the extra variable that transforms everything.
 
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I think the grandeur and general old Hollywood spectacle of TMP one of those things that never quite pulls me in emotionally. Call it being born a few years after its release or that when I got into Trek its status as a film series was essentially a given by then, but the visual and epic celebration of Trek that movie often is just lacks the same impact for me.

In an intellectual sense i can completely understand why so much of the visual direction and music choices were done and that just the flyby of the Enterprise alone had the sort of resonance with fans that I can't even imagine. Star Trek actually being in film and especially with the kind of scope it was getting was the stuff dreams were made of; paired with a tone that treated it with the kind of solemn respect so many Trekkers had for the show prior.

Now obviously those elements aren't the only reasons it endures to a lot people today, but it is something that makes it distinct to so many of those that love it while often feeling a bit too much to someone like myself. Its a bit like how as a DCAU fan I can certainly appreciate 78 Superman for what it did without being all that into its choices in presentation.
 
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Kirk/McCoy watching Ilia:
Rand "Can I get you something from the galley, Sir." (Balance of Terror)
"Do you suppose she knows?" (Miri)
McCoy "She might not know or even remember." (Spock's Brain)
Kirk "But does she want to." (Is there Truth in No Beauty)

This bit doesn't make sense to me. She's onboard the Enterprise as a transporter chief, and was originally supposed to replace Ilia as navigator before 500 pages of rewrites to the shooting script, so why would she randomly be in Kirk's quarters, demoted to nothing but a yeoman/"space waitress?"
 
Not at the conscious level. But these are all things we know deep down, even when we are not knowing we are knowing them. They will bubble up and out of an author/artist through imagery and archetypes.

- your fellow English (and psych) major

I saw TMP when I was 10, so I never made the associations. Sometimes a warp nacelle is just a warp nacelle :)

TMP was certainly the biggest Trek film to many. I wonder if it could have worked as a miniseries...
 
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This bit doesn't make sense to me. She's onboard the Enterprise as a transporter chief, and was originally supposed to replace Ilia as navigator before 500 pages of rewrites to the shooting script, so why would she randomly be in Kirk's quarters, demoted to nothing but a yeoman/"space waitress?"
Well, unofficially, this was the only scene where there was a gap in dialogue and a background I could add her into easily.

Canonically:

1. She worked closely with Kirk and knows he forgets to eat in a crisis (Corbomite Manoeuvre)
2. His current yeoman would have been Decker's and would not have any insight into his foibles.
3. She sometimes delivers food to her friends when off duty (Man Trap)
4. She sometimes manufactures flimsy excuses to hang out with decision makers when she could easily have taken instructions over the intercom (Corbomite Manoeuvre, Balance of Terror etc).

I guess what I am saying is that I think it makes sense if you view her as a character with her own motivation rather than a cipher.

As an aside, in terms of her actual job, I thought in the spacewalk I could crib Simon Pegg's line about using pulse generators as signal boosters but only on the other side of the aperture but I will have to generate that dialogue so it will depend how it sounds.
 
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I saw TMP when I was 10, so I never made the associations. Sometimes a warp nacelle is just a warp nacelle :)

TMP was certainly the biggest Trek film to many. I wonder if it could have worked as a miniseries...
BSG did it the other way around and turned its 3 parts opener into quite a popular movie. TMP would have been a totally different animal as a mini series with diminished production values and a bit more action/character development in each episode. Could certainly have fleshed out Ilia more.
 
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