The VulcanI am a first time poster.
I just had this itch to write something that took the reader outside the military structure of the Federation and followed a small group who interacted with the more ordinary aspects of civilian life under and outside of the Federation. I wanted to feature a philosophical view of the ethics and approach to life in the Universe and thought the Vulcan logic in contrast with more emotion driven personalities would make an interesting lens.
I have also had the idea that, among the A.I. systems that might become self-aware, a starship would be a most likely choice. Few computers are more powerful than those in a starship. The ship is therefore a character as well as a vehicle.
I have outlined a twenty episode series and am writing it in present tense, because I thought it might be easier to convert present tense action to a screenplay. I wanted to work out the story first as a piece of readable writing. Any help with accuracy, consistency and cannon would be greatly appreciated. I grew up in the sixties and seventies watching the original series, I have watched the older movies, and was captivated by both the characters of T'Pol and Janeway from their respective series, so my story focuses on a female Vulcan captain with a diverse crew of scientists and engineers.
The time-line is right around the last season of TOS. I don't have a full understanding of events that happened, but I understand that Ambassador Spock helped facilitate a reunification between the Romulans and the Vulcans shortly after the end of the series. Iam working under the belief that the first gestures towards such an idea predated his involvement. If this is not the case, I can easily change the relationships between the Vulcan officials and the Romulan admirals without adversity effecting the storyline. I have taken a few liberties with Vulcan society and hope they compliment and deepen the cannon of the Vulcan world, rather than conflict. Please feel free to criticize. I'm looking to improve, not feel good compliments, although that is okay too.
The series is a long twenty episode treasure hunt and will end with a trial on Vulcan and S'Talla's arrest for piracy. I don't know if the treasure is found before the end or if the hunt continues into season two. However, my thoughts are that S'Talla and her crew will be fugitives after season one.
Enjoy. Will the Serious
Table of Content:
Ep. 1: The Needs of the Many
Ep. 2: The Needs of the Few
Ep. 3: 'T' Minus Negative
Ep. 4: A Pon Too Farr
Ep. 5: Seeing is Believing, Part 1
Ep. 6: Seeing is Believing, Part 2
Ep. 7: Mind in a Vat
Ep. 8: The Job
The Vulcan Character Highlights
This is VNM-One for the Vulcan News Media ‐〔Writing Challenge entry and preview of a later episode〕
Episode 1 - The Needs of the Many
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Stardate 3-3727.1
SERIES PROLOGUE:
We see across vast expanses to impossibly distant worlds. We look out into Space and witness the beginning of the Universe, the birth of planets, and the death of stars. Civilization turns to Space for knowledge, adventure, and hope. Space is also deadly, a wall to growth and progress. It is our past and our future. This is where Vulcan and her crew live, work and explore. Join the lives of these twenty beings from different and distant worlds, who have been brought together to find refuge, wonder, and friendship in the greatest frontier.
A SURPRISE ATTACK
The sound of an explosion thunders through the reception hall standing Sam's short red hair up on the back of her neck. She crouches behind a serving counter. Her sense of fear is heightened by the thought that they are trapped in a glorified box 560 kilometers above the planet's surface.
"The construction bays. With me!", shouts her Vulcan childhood friend S'Talla, as she rises from cover and moves quickly, but calmly to the doors leading to the working areas of the Astroways Space Construction Station.
The room is bathed in an alien green light with flashing yellow strobes over the doorways. An alarm throbs, along with an electronic voice announcing, "The station is under external threat. Report to your assigned defensive stations. If you have not been assigned defensive stations, seek shelter or assignment from the nearest officer. The station is under external threat. Report to your assigned defensive stations. If you have not been assigned…"
Sam, despite her fear, couldn't help but feel the excitement from the attack. "Romulans." , she whispers speculatively to herself as she moves to follow S'Talla. "Where are you going S'Talla? The reception hall is a designated disaster shelter. We should stay here." she calls to her Vulcan friend.
"Ms. Kelly is correct." Adds Lieutenant Stolk, their Vulcan guide who is crouched behind a nearby column. He makes no other effort to intervene.
S'Talla steps through the door into the yellow lighted corridor. Her touring companions, Skyvik and the Bynar couple join her. The group look completely anachronistic, in the modern setting, dressed in their traditional temple robes. Even the Bynars wear Vulcan temple travel habits, denoting their membership in the Order of Reason and Logic.
S'Talla looks back to her friend, as Sam steps with her through the double doors. "You should stay here, Sam. I have something to do. It will be ok, but there is no time anymore to explain. This attack is…, sooner than expected." The tall, unusually blue skinned Vulcan woman turns and walks briskly, but with considerable poise, hands pressed together before her in a position similar to hands loosely held together in prayer, down the hallway towards the construction bays.
Sam rolls her eyes at the absurdity of Vulcan propriety and follows the small group. "You're just visitors, here as a diplomatic reception. We should all wait in the lounge until they tell us it's safe."
A number of Vulcan soldiers run by with weapons. Sam can't remember the last time she saw a Vulcan adult run except during the rare sports competitions. She recalls briefly, early play with S'Talla, when they were children together.
Childhood Friends
Sam and S'Talla, both 10 years old, were playing in the temple garden where S'Talla lived while attending school and training in the Vulcan monastic order. In contrast to Sam's long red hair, young S'Talla's head was shaved smooth, denoting her junior membership into the Order. Tullic and Crillam, two male Vulcan children of the same age, wore their black hair cut in a simple bowl cut as was the typical style. Tullic and Crillam, like Sam, were young school children studying at the monastery school, but were not initiates into the priesthood.
"Race you to that tree, Crillam, Tullic, S'Talla!" shouted young Sam and took off as fast as she could run to the tree across the lawn to tag it.
Her three companions, taken by surprise, watched her run towards the tree.
"Why did you do that?" S'Talla called.
"It's fun. I like to run. I'm very fast." Sam stopped to holler back. "Don't you ever like to run? I don't think I've ever seen a Vulcan run. CAN Vulcans EVEN run?" she teased the three other children playfully.
"Of course we can run. It is just not logical to run when you do not need to." replied the Vulcan girl while she and Crillam and Tullic walked towards Sam and the tree. Sam was walking back to meet her friends.
As S'Talla met Sam halfway, S'Talla burst into a sprint, taking Sam and her two male friends by surprise. Sam caught on faster than Tullic or Crillam, and took an early lead.
Tullic shouted excitedly, "Catch her, Sam."
Crillam called plaintively, "Hey! Not fair."
S'Talla beat her three friends back to the tree.
Just as she got to the tree, S'Talla called back to Sam, who was right behind her, "Can you do this?" and she leapt into the air and spun around to execute a flying spinning back kick to the trunk.
She landed on her feet, crossed her arms, and raised one questioning eyebrow at Sam and the two other ten-year-olds racing to tag the tree.
"I don't think so." was Sam's reply, arriving breathlessly, followed by Tullic, then Crillam. All three laughed as they ran.
In a matter of fact voice, but with a smile on her young Vulcan face, S'Talla said, "It appears, then I have beaten you, Samantha."
Master Sparoe, a somber Vulcan monk, walked by, fingers laced in front of him, thumbs resting together pad-to-pad in a posture of calm control. He frowned sternly at young S'Talla's impropriety and shook his head at her. "Logic dictates that knowing ourselves, we have no need to impress others. Therefore, boasting to others is the mark of an unsure mind." he quipped.
Activists Encounter Romulans
The five arrive at a set of security doors with two armed guards taking a defensive position ready to repel attack. A small group of Vulcans, in space combat flight suits, file through at a run.
S'Talla leads her group up to the two security guards and says, "We are the Vulcan Coalition For Peace Reform, and we are here for the Yon-Ha'gel project, the V5-Beta. If interstellar peace means anything to you, let us pass."
Sam can hardly believe what she just heard. "How do you know the project code name?
"Reform of what?"
The guards look at each other to see if the other knows what S'Talla is talking about. "We can not let you pass. This area is restricted and we are under attack."
The guards turn to Sam, "Are they with you, Ms. Kelly?"
A very large explosion from inside the construction bay throws everyone to the floor. S'Talla is somehow able to keep her feet.
"We go!" she commands simply.
Skyvik stands and moves through the door. Sam helps the Bynars to their feet while the soldiers pick themselves up.
"Yes… yes, they're with me," Sam answers the soldiers question with an apologetic smile and runs to catch up with the fast moving group.
The guards protest, "You can not go in there!"
S'Talla calls over her shoulder without looking back. "If Vulcan continues to disregard its treaties, this will be only the beginning. We are here to stop a war."
A small Romulan landing party just disembarking from a raptor landing shuttle is there to greet them. The shuttle is settled right next to the boarding tunnel to the V5-Beta. The bay doors are blasted in and the group of four pilots, who passed moments earlier, are strewn, dead, across the deck. The dark grey hull of the V5-Beta can be seen through the hole behind the boarding shuttle.
While Sam stops, appalled, S'Talla and Skyvik don't even slow. The two Bynars appear more nervous, but follow S'Talla's lead, regardless. Sam rolls her eyes again and follows, as well. She recalls the tour she had just accompanied S'Talla and her companions on, through the space station.
Looking Back to S'Talla's Arrival
Sam waited, along with the station commander, to greet the arriving dignitaries from Vulcan's surface. They waited in the transporter reception lobby, a young Vulcan technician at the transporter console behind them, an executive officer stood on the Commander's opposite side.
"Thank you commander, for allowing me to join you. When I learned who was in the envoy to meet with the Romulans for this first reunification talk, I got very excited."
The commander raised one eyebrow, "Indeed."
Sam, wearing civilian clothes while off-duty, went on to explain in a faint Irish brogue, "I have known S'Talla since we were children running through the temple gardens where she grew up. We were very close. So, thank you for accommodating me."
Commander Spaech asked, "You have been on Vulcan since you were a child?"
Sam nodded, "except for a few holiday visits to our family home in Ireland, back on Earth, and my bachelor's program in Dublin. My master's and my doctorate were both completed here on Vulcan.
"My parents were assigned here when I was 9 years old. I met S'Talla while we were touring the Temple of Pure Reason. I attended Primary at the Temple, but S'Talla grew up there." Sam shrugged, "And now she is at the Temple of Perfect Logic."
the Commander explained, "They are all part of the Sacred Order of Logic and Reason.
"I am certain your friend will appreciate seeing you again," Commander Spaech replied just as six people, arranged three and three, beamed onto the transporter platform.
The party consisted of a robust older Vulcan male, greenish/brown skin, short grey hair with square bangs, holding himself with a regal bearing, wearing a military tunic. He was standing to the right of a very slim young green-skinned male with a closely shaved bowl-cut hairstyle. To his right stood a tall statuesque female Vulcan with unusual light bluish hues to her skin, piercing blue eyes and blue/black hair bound up in a tight braided bun on the back of her head. Behind was an unusually tall, powerfully built, older male Vulcan, with sun darkened green skin and short military-cut silver hair. Two smaller humanoids with large bald heads and a purplish skin tone, marking them as Bynars filled out the back row.
"Greetings, Admiral Syjak." Commander Spaech raised his hand in the Vulcan greeting.
"Commander Spaech?" Syjak, raised his hand in the same 'V' at the commander's affirming nod, "Live long and prosper.
"This is my assistant, Commander Skaul," he indicated, with a nod to his left, the young Vulcan male in a plain dark grey tunic. Syjak turned to the largest member of the group and continued, "Commander Skyvik of the Vulcan Defense Ministry," the Admiral turned to his right, "and these are representatives from the 'Temple of Perfect Logic', Sister S'Talla, and Ya and Ne, of the Counsel's Cultural Augmentation Program. They too are members of the Temple, but are here to act as third party arbitrators."
"May you live long and prosper, sisters and brothers of Logic." Commander Spaech gave a shallow formal bow.
"The Romulan representatives have not yet arrived. I have arranged a station tour for you, until then.
"Please, follow me, if you will."
Admiral Syjak told S'Talla, "Go along S'Talla, your group and Commander Skyvik should take the tour; Skaul and I have a few details to take care of. We will go straight to the conference suites. We will see you there soon." Syjak did not wait for a response, but bid Commander Spaech to lead the way.
Commander Spaech nodded to the young officer standing nearby. He then stood by the exit, with the Admiral waiting for Skaul to collect a travel bag and join them.
The young Vulcan spoke up, "I am Lieutenant Stolk, I am honored to be your guide. Please follow me." said the Vulcan, Commander Spaech nodded to.
Sam stepped over to S'Talla and grabbed her in a hug. The departing Admiral and the other Vulcans in the room, turned to stare at the emotional display.
"It is so great to see you again, S'Talla. I can't believe how much you've changed. I was so excited when I heard you were a member of the Negotiation Team."
S'Talla disengaged from the hug, adjusted her meditation roll hanging from a diagonal shoulder strap by her belt, and gave Sam a rare smile. "It is good to see you again, Sam. I did not realize you were aboard the station. Are you planning to join us on our tour."
"I wouldn't miss the chance to catch up for anything.
"I am so sorry to hear about Tullic and Crillam. They were good friends. I hope you are okay."
S'Talla replied with no emotion, her hand resting protectively on the roll at her waist like it was a talisman, "It was a senseless loss. An unfortunate circumstance of the Vulcan condition. There are still remnants of the irrational past, even in our modern age." She paused for a second to consider Sam's human perspective. "I am fine, thank you for asking."
The lieutenant led them down a corridor, avoiding an autonomous delivery vehicle, and walked them to a large view screen that overlooked the construction bay where the V5-Beta was docked. Her sleek lines, accentuated by the forward extending set of sensor arms and the fully encircling warp girdle aft, gave the impression of power and speed. The raised command dome, positioned forward between the forward arms, reminded Sam of a child pretending they could fly like an old Earth comic book superhero.
Lieutenant Stolk told them about the ship, "This is our station's latest project. The V5 is an experimental joint scientific and strategic defense project designed for deep space exploration and data collection. The ship has a calculated warp speed of 9.8351; the fastest warp achieved by a ship this small. As you might be able to see, it is a modified and retro-fitted generation-five Vahklas class star cruiser. The hull has been extended to a length over all of 192 meters, and is designed to be staffed with a crew of only sixteen. The V5 has a carrying capacity of up to 120 passengers and 60 kilo-tons of cargo.
"It is reinforced with both light-mass physical armor plating and the latest, low energy consumption shielding, to deflect high velocity space debris. Combine that with newly developed inertial dampening technology and the V5 has a virtual inertial mass presence of a ship six times its size."
"What does that mean?" asked Sam.
Skyvik, the large older Vulcan answered, "It means hitting it is like hitting something that has six times more mass."
"Precisely." agreed Lieutenant Stolk. He continued his lecture.
"The V5's sensor array is fully integrated into its hull form and operates, much like our nerve matrix under our skin. To do this, it utilizes a new technology called bio-metalized-ceramics with a fibrous sponge-like bio-core between double-walled sandwich construction. The V5 cycles a mixture of liquefied biological metalized ceramics that act as insulation from radiation, filtration of grey water, transport of oxygen and other essential gasses.
"The V5 has natural autonomic breach repair. If cut, it bleeds, in a sense, a golden brown blood until the breach is self-healed. This ship represents the height of Vulcan technology
Lieutenant Stolk stood a little taller as he spoke, "The V5-Beta's intended missions will take it deep into uncharted space, with a minimal crew of twenty-six scientists and defense bureau diplomats. The ship will be in search of undiscovered, advanced intelligence and technology to, what is hoped, create new and prosperous alliances for the advancement of the Vulcan people."
S'Talla's emotionless face showed no recognition nor much in the way of real interest in what the guide was saying.
"That's where I'm working, S'Talla. I'm designing her A.I. system's learning algorithms based on a unique IDAC. Sorry, that stands for, Integrated Distributed Analog Circuitry. She's the smartest ship in the quadrant." Sam told her friend, with pride.
"I see." responded the stoic Vulcan monk. "Quite interesting."
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