I thought I would have a little fun with the Su'Kal Prophecy.
...35 years after Su'Kal was rescued
The Voice of Su' Kal
Torches in their stands, stands that are seven feet tall and shaped like a tear, seven per side of the Great Path to Su'Kal, each depict their own life event of Su'Kal. A gentle breeze, much like a calming Spring affair, tussles and crackles each torch flame creating long shadows that dance off of the cave walls. Two watchful Flame Bearers per torch keep vigil eye over each torch, so as to never let the Light of Su'Kal go out.
The Great Path of Su'Kal, leading to the over hanging thrust carved out of the cliff , is seven slabs long. Each slab, measuring twenty feet wide and one hundred feet long, is perfect and without any flaws of time carving it's own mark through them. Walls and a path that were hammered and chiseled out by the followers of Su'Kal, out of their love for Su'Kal.
Seated around the thrust are the People of Su'Kal, adorned in light and dark brown clothing. Each one wearing a colored Shayla scarf that matches the region chosen for them by the Teacher. A thousand Kelpien, men, women, children, young and the old alike, bow their heads as the Teacher walks past them and towards the crème colored lectern of stone in the middle of the thrust. In front of the lectern is a large bowel shaped votive on a pedestal filled with liquid, the Star of Su'Kal. In front of the Star of Su'Kal is a raised stone pillar. On top of the pillar, nearly the size of a full grown adult Kelpien, is an oblong shape covered with a black cloth. On the cloth is the brightest star in the Kelpien night sky.
The Teacher, a tall Kelpien, 7 plus feet in height. steps up to the lectern and looks out across the Gathered. A calm, as quiet as a night of watching the stars, falls across the cavern, leaving only the sound of the wind in two darkened caves far below, to be heard.
"WE ARE THE PEOPLE OF SU'KAL!" bellows the voice of the Teacher through the cave and minds of the Gathered.
"Su'kal." the followers reply in a low tone.
"SU'KAL!" the Teacher says with raised arms.
"We are the People of Su'Kal"
Two of the Gathered, wearing dark cloth , one on each side of the aisle, strike large bells. The low drone of the bell resonated through the cave washing away the fear of the Gathered.
"It was today that Su'Kal was released from his prison in the Verubin Nebula." the Teacher continued.
"Su'Kal." replied the Gathered in a single warming voice.
Picking a book up from the lectern, the Teacher opens it and holds it high for the Gathered to see.
"It was today that Su'Kal faced his greatest fear, loneliness and defeated that fear." the Teacher says looking up into the night sky through the large portal above the Gathered. In the portal, the brightest star seen from Kaminar is transiting.
The Gathered, following the Teachers eyes, look up and reply, "We are the People of Su' Kal."
"It was today that Su'Kal brought us his voice, a power by which WE will conquer our own fears!"
"Su'Kal." reply the Gathered.
Moving down the steps of the podium towards the Star of Su'Kal, a Flame Bearer, clothed in black, emerges from the shadows and hands the Teacher a torch before returning to the darkness. The Teacher, looking out across the Gathered waits. The mass nods in unison. The Teachers nods in return before lighting the liquid in the votive. Flames leap from the votive, racing skywards before calming.
Handing the torch to the first of the Gathered seated closest, the Teacher reverently gives the Voice of Su'Kal to the Gathered. Each Kelpien utters the Voice of Su'Kal into the flame before passing it onto the next. Precisely seventy minutes later, the torch reaches the last of the Kelpien who have gathered. There it is handed off to a Flame Bearer who carries it down carved steps, far below the thrust and into the darkness.
The Teacher walks to the oblong object on the pillar and places both hands on it. The Gathered bow their heads and begin to hum. The Teacher watches. Each of the torch flames, wild and uncaring, slowly begin to burn with the same flicker.
"The joining has been achieved." the Teacher says with a smile. "Look up and to each other, the Light of Su'Kal."
Looking up at the torches and then at each other, the whispers in the eyes of each Kelpien could shake the very mountain they are in. The bells are struck again bringing the attention of the Gathered back to the Teacher.
"No more will Kaminar fall back into caves against the night! No more will OUR peoples be slaves to any other!" and with that, the Teacher pulls the covering away from the crème colored Kelpien torpedo casing.
"WE WILL BE HEARD!" the Teacher yells out to Gathered.
The low hum turns from reverence to out right shouts and cries as chants of "Su'Kal" echo in the mountain chamber. A chamber far away from any cities, lost in the roots of the forest. A place where only a child truly knows it is safe to play in.
"SU'KAL!, SU'KAL!, SU'KAL!"
Lost in the excitement of the roar of the Gathered, the first of seven Kelpien warships, approx. the length of one of Discoveries warp nacelles and half as wide as the upper saucer section and nearly the same draft as the secondary hull, ascends from the darkness far below the Teacher. The first one stops and hovers for the Gathered to see before continuing through the portal and into orbit around Kaminar.
The Gathered stand in awe, watching as each warship ascend before them. Looking out over the Gathered with jet black eyes, the Teacher bellows the name of Su'Kal.
The torpedo is the Voice of Su'Kal. A torpedo designed based on how Su'Kal's voice caused dilithium to become unstable and caused many star ships to explode due to misalignments in the warp core. Each Voice of Su'Kal torpedo has a micro warp drive as its power source that is aligned using dilithium crystals. When the torpedo is less than a 1,000 meters from its target, a voice resonator emits the Voice of Su'Kal at the same frequency when Su'Kal caused the Burn, but only enough to cause the dilithium in the casing to fracture, causing the micro warp core to explode in a brilliant flash of white light. One torpedo is always fired one after the other to reproduce the intensity of the the brightest star seen from Kaminar. A Voice of Su'Kal torpedo has a yield of approx. five times the standard yield of a Mark XII photon torpedo against a shield. Not overly powerful, the real power of the torpedo is when the Voice penetrates the shields of an enemy vessel and strikes the hull. Along with the explosive yield, the torpedo now sends a wave of charged particles through the ship along three vectors, cutting those vectors of the ship apart like a Kelpien pie. The three sections of the ship then phase out of time and then back into time anywhere from two to five million kilometers away from the ships original location.
"Su'Kal."
What might a Kelpien Attack Cruiser look like?
Rough sketch of a Kelpien Attack Cruiser
The Shuttle Bay Hangar sits above the Main Bridge slightly and is of through-hangar design that allows shuttles to enter from the fore of hangar bay and exit aft.
The Cargo Bay extends to just under the Main Bridge on the lower side of the Primary Hull/Crew Quarters. The Cargo Bay has enough volume to hold 150 Kelpien Ground Forces (including 10 ground assault vehicles) or 450 Gathered Pilgrims or 1,000 emergency medical isolation units. When being used as a rescue ship, the primary weapons do not function due to the energy needs of the EMIU's. When used as a colonial construction vessel, the cargo bay can carry enough Kelpien workers and materials to construct a 500 occupant Thrust ( type of Kelpien village where the Kelpien's occupy gradually higher elevations while the Teachers reside in the center
on the lowest elevation.) A typical Kelpien Attack Cruiser can also transport supplies for five Thrusts at a time in her cargo bay. The Cargo Bay section is also where the seven retractable landing struts and pads, three along the port and starboard sides of the Cargo Bay and one at the fore section of the Cargo Bay, are stored prior to making landfall.
Shuttle Bay : The standard compliment of shuttles that are carried is comparable to two, Type -8, two Type - 7, two Type-6 and four Type -15 Federation shuttle crafts of Kelpien design. Armament of the shuttles is unknown.
During colonial Thrust construction missions all but the four Type -15 shuttle craft are removed and replaced with Kelpien Atmospheric Construction Vehicles that are similar to Federation Work Bees and Sphinx Workpods. A KAC can carry as many as 35 Atmospheric Construction Vehicles in both the shuttle bay and cargo bay.
Other than the fabled, single Voice of Su'Kal torpedo launcher positioned at the fore of the vessel that is capable of firing her full compliment of 45 Wave Resonator Torpedoes in under 15 minutes, each KAC mounts 8 disruptors. Four are forward of the torpedo launcher, upper and lower. Two are mounted on the dorsal side of the Boom directly behind the aft shuttle bay shroud and one is mounted in Cargo Bay hull. One facing forward and one aft. The drawback to the KAC disruptors is that each mount can fire a total of 35 shots before the disruptor capacitors discharge fully requiring at least five hours for the capacitor to fully recharge. The damage dealt by a single KAC disruptor mount, per shot, is equivalent to a single discharge of a standard Federation Type - XI phaser array for three seconds.
The Boom section, aft of the Shuttle Bay contains the Impulse Engines that face 90 degrees to port and starboard. Steerable vents allow the exhaust from the impulse engines to be directed in an 180 degree arc, allowing the ship to make very quick flight corrections while at full impulse power. When the ship is being used as an emergency rescue vessel, power from the disruptors and impulse engines are diverted to the EMIU's that reduces the maneuverability of the ship by half while at full impulse power.
The Boom itself contains four cranes and crane track that run the entire length of the Boom to just under the shuttle bay hangar doors as well as numerous jibs and hoists along with ten steerable tractor beam emitters for use in the construction of Thrusts.
...35 years after Su'Kal was rescued
The Voice of Su' Kal
Torches in their stands, stands that are seven feet tall and shaped like a tear, seven per side of the Great Path to Su'Kal, each depict their own life event of Su'Kal. A gentle breeze, much like a calming Spring affair, tussles and crackles each torch flame creating long shadows that dance off of the cave walls. Two watchful Flame Bearers per torch keep vigil eye over each torch, so as to never let the Light of Su'Kal go out.
The Great Path of Su'Kal, leading to the over hanging thrust carved out of the cliff , is seven slabs long. Each slab, measuring twenty feet wide and one hundred feet long, is perfect and without any flaws of time carving it's own mark through them. Walls and a path that were hammered and chiseled out by the followers of Su'Kal, out of their love for Su'Kal.
Seated around the thrust are the People of Su'Kal, adorned in light and dark brown clothing. Each one wearing a colored Shayla scarf that matches the region chosen for them by the Teacher. A thousand Kelpien, men, women, children, young and the old alike, bow their heads as the Teacher walks past them and towards the crème colored lectern of stone in the middle of the thrust. In front of the lectern is a large bowel shaped votive on a pedestal filled with liquid, the Star of Su'Kal. In front of the Star of Su'Kal is a raised stone pillar. On top of the pillar, nearly the size of a full grown adult Kelpien, is an oblong shape covered with a black cloth. On the cloth is the brightest star in the Kelpien night sky.
The Teacher, a tall Kelpien, 7 plus feet in height. steps up to the lectern and looks out across the Gathered. A calm, as quiet as a night of watching the stars, falls across the cavern, leaving only the sound of the wind in two darkened caves far below, to be heard.
"WE ARE THE PEOPLE OF SU'KAL!" bellows the voice of the Teacher through the cave and minds of the Gathered.
"Su'kal." the followers reply in a low tone.
"SU'KAL!" the Teacher says with raised arms.
"We are the People of Su'Kal"
Two of the Gathered, wearing dark cloth , one on each side of the aisle, strike large bells. The low drone of the bell resonated through the cave washing away the fear of the Gathered.
"It was today that Su'Kal was released from his prison in the Verubin Nebula." the Teacher continued.
"Su'Kal." replied the Gathered in a single warming voice.
Picking a book up from the lectern, the Teacher opens it and holds it high for the Gathered to see.
"It was today that Su'Kal faced his greatest fear, loneliness and defeated that fear." the Teacher says looking up into the night sky through the large portal above the Gathered. In the portal, the brightest star seen from Kaminar is transiting.
The Gathered, following the Teachers eyes, look up and reply, "We are the People of Su' Kal."
"It was today that Su'Kal brought us his voice, a power by which WE will conquer our own fears!"
"Su'Kal." reply the Gathered.
Moving down the steps of the podium towards the Star of Su'Kal, a Flame Bearer, clothed in black, emerges from the shadows and hands the Teacher a torch before returning to the darkness. The Teacher, looking out across the Gathered waits. The mass nods in unison. The Teachers nods in return before lighting the liquid in the votive. Flames leap from the votive, racing skywards before calming.
Handing the torch to the first of the Gathered seated closest, the Teacher reverently gives the Voice of Su'Kal to the Gathered. Each Kelpien utters the Voice of Su'Kal into the flame before passing it onto the next. Precisely seventy minutes later, the torch reaches the last of the Kelpien who have gathered. There it is handed off to a Flame Bearer who carries it down carved steps, far below the thrust and into the darkness.
The Teacher walks to the oblong object on the pillar and places both hands on it. The Gathered bow their heads and begin to hum. The Teacher watches. Each of the torch flames, wild and uncaring, slowly begin to burn with the same flicker.
"The joining has been achieved." the Teacher says with a smile. "Look up and to each other, the Light of Su'Kal."
Looking up at the torches and then at each other, the whispers in the eyes of each Kelpien could shake the very mountain they are in. The bells are struck again bringing the attention of the Gathered back to the Teacher.
"No more will Kaminar fall back into caves against the night! No more will OUR peoples be slaves to any other!" and with that, the Teacher pulls the covering away from the crème colored Kelpien torpedo casing.
"WE WILL BE HEARD!" the Teacher yells out to Gathered.
The low hum turns from reverence to out right shouts and cries as chants of "Su'Kal" echo in the mountain chamber. A chamber far away from any cities, lost in the roots of the forest. A place where only a child truly knows it is safe to play in.
"SU'KAL!, SU'KAL!, SU'KAL!"
Lost in the excitement of the roar of the Gathered, the first of seven Kelpien warships, approx. the length of one of Discoveries warp nacelles and half as wide as the upper saucer section and nearly the same draft as the secondary hull, ascends from the darkness far below the Teacher. The first one stops and hovers for the Gathered to see before continuing through the portal and into orbit around Kaminar.
The Gathered stand in awe, watching as each warship ascend before them. Looking out over the Gathered with jet black eyes, the Teacher bellows the name of Su'Kal.
The torpedo is the Voice of Su'Kal. A torpedo designed based on how Su'Kal's voice caused dilithium to become unstable and caused many star ships to explode due to misalignments in the warp core. Each Voice of Su'Kal torpedo has a micro warp drive as its power source that is aligned using dilithium crystals. When the torpedo is less than a 1,000 meters from its target, a voice resonator emits the Voice of Su'Kal at the same frequency when Su'Kal caused the Burn, but only enough to cause the dilithium in the casing to fracture, causing the micro warp core to explode in a brilliant flash of white light. One torpedo is always fired one after the other to reproduce the intensity of the the brightest star seen from Kaminar. A Voice of Su'Kal torpedo has a yield of approx. five times the standard yield of a Mark XII photon torpedo against a shield. Not overly powerful, the real power of the torpedo is when the Voice penetrates the shields of an enemy vessel and strikes the hull. Along with the explosive yield, the torpedo now sends a wave of charged particles through the ship along three vectors, cutting those vectors of the ship apart like a Kelpien pie. The three sections of the ship then phase out of time and then back into time anywhere from two to five million kilometers away from the ships original location.
"Su'Kal."
What might a Kelpien Attack Cruiser look like?
Rough sketch of a Kelpien Attack Cruiser
The Shuttle Bay Hangar sits above the Main Bridge slightly and is of through-hangar design that allows shuttles to enter from the fore of hangar bay and exit aft.
The Cargo Bay extends to just under the Main Bridge on the lower side of the Primary Hull/Crew Quarters. The Cargo Bay has enough volume to hold 150 Kelpien Ground Forces (including 10 ground assault vehicles) or 450 Gathered Pilgrims or 1,000 emergency medical isolation units. When being used as a rescue ship, the primary weapons do not function due to the energy needs of the EMIU's. When used as a colonial construction vessel, the cargo bay can carry enough Kelpien workers and materials to construct a 500 occupant Thrust ( type of Kelpien village where the Kelpien's occupy gradually higher elevations while the Teachers reside in the center
on the lowest elevation.) A typical Kelpien Attack Cruiser can also transport supplies for five Thrusts at a time in her cargo bay. The Cargo Bay section is also where the seven retractable landing struts and pads, three along the port and starboard sides of the Cargo Bay and one at the fore section of the Cargo Bay, are stored prior to making landfall.
Shuttle Bay : The standard compliment of shuttles that are carried is comparable to two, Type -8, two Type - 7, two Type-6 and four Type -15 Federation shuttle crafts of Kelpien design. Armament of the shuttles is unknown.
During colonial Thrust construction missions all but the four Type -15 shuttle craft are removed and replaced with Kelpien Atmospheric Construction Vehicles that are similar to Federation Work Bees and Sphinx Workpods. A KAC can carry as many as 35 Atmospheric Construction Vehicles in both the shuttle bay and cargo bay.
Other than the fabled, single Voice of Su'Kal torpedo launcher positioned at the fore of the vessel that is capable of firing her full compliment of 45 Wave Resonator Torpedoes in under 15 minutes, each KAC mounts 8 disruptors. Four are forward of the torpedo launcher, upper and lower. Two are mounted on the dorsal side of the Boom directly behind the aft shuttle bay shroud and one is mounted in Cargo Bay hull. One facing forward and one aft. The drawback to the KAC disruptors is that each mount can fire a total of 35 shots before the disruptor capacitors discharge fully requiring at least five hours for the capacitor to fully recharge. The damage dealt by a single KAC disruptor mount, per shot, is equivalent to a single discharge of a standard Federation Type - XI phaser array for three seconds.
The Boom section, aft of the Shuttle Bay contains the Impulse Engines that face 90 degrees to port and starboard. Steerable vents allow the exhaust from the impulse engines to be directed in an 180 degree arc, allowing the ship to make very quick flight corrections while at full impulse power. When the ship is being used as an emergency rescue vessel, power from the disruptors and impulse engines are diverted to the EMIU's that reduces the maneuverability of the ship by half while at full impulse power.
The Boom itself contains four cranes and crane track that run the entire length of the Boom to just under the shuttle bay hangar doors as well as numerous jibs and hoists along with ten steerable tractor beam emitters for use in the construction of Thrusts.

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