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The Different Versions of the Enterprise

As the saying goes, "no text can withstand a hostile reading."

It's impossible to propose a redesign that the people who are convinced that there's "nothing outdated" or "archaic" about the original design will accept as an improvement. Since such things are entirely matters of individual taste and judgment there's no leverage that can be successfully applied against a determined predisposition.

Why bother? The new ship - and it will be a new ship - has already been designed. It's what it is. Shortly we will all have the opportunity to like or dislike it directly.
 
It's impossible to propose a redesign that the people who are convinced that there's "nothing outdated" or "archaic" about the original design will accept as an improvement.

Since I've endeavored on multiple occasions to create a pre-TOS version of the 1701 that fits with the original, shows fidelity to the design ideas it exhibits, and yet looks believably "regressed," I'm not at all averse to showing an earlier version of the ship. Just as the TMP sequel demanded a rebuilt ship, a prequel demands a ship that looks like what we saw in TOS was rebuilt from it.

I think what is being argued here is not so much whether it should be done, but how it should be done.
 
aridas sofia said:
It's impossible to propose a redesign that the people who are convinced that there's "nothing outdated" or "archaic" about the original design will accept as an improvement.

Since I've endeavored on multiple occasions to create a pre-TOS version of the 1701 that fits with the original, shows fidelity to the design ideas it exhibits, and yet looks believably "regressed," I'm not at all averse to showing an earlier version of the ship. Just as the TMP sequel demanded a rebuilt ship, a prequel demands a ship that looks like what we saw in TOS was rebuilt from it.

You weren't one of the people I had in mind as being a "hostile reader."
 
Arlo said:
Ezri said:
First off, look how flat looking the Enterprise looks. There is very little depth with that ship.

:wtf:

Trust me Captain, it looks flat looking. It looks like someone that went to a toy store and purchased a model. With some glue and some grey paint and the decals you got TOS Enterprise. If a 12 year old boy can make a copy of the Enterprise over a summer weekend and pass it off as a copy of the one used during the 1960s it is time for a face lift.
 
Ezri said:
Arlo said:
Ezri said:
First off, look how flat looking the Enterprise looks. There is very little depth with that ship.

:wtf:

Trust me Captain, it looks flat looking. It looks like someone that went to a toy store and purchased a model. With some glue and some grey paint and the decals you got TOS Enterprise. If a 12 year old boy can make a copy of the Enterprise over a summer weekend and pass it off as a copy of the one used during the 1960s it is time for a face lift.

If you mean "flat" as in featureless, yes, I agree. In the mists of my mind, I remember reading similar concerns about the "smoothness" issue back when TMP was being produced and the news of a new look for the Enterprise first came out. Some feared the ship might end up looking like something from "Star Wars".
Back then, the main reason given then for remaking the Enterprise was the need to add more visual interest to it. More texture. Details that would have been lost on 1960s rabbit-ear TV screens would be necessary to make the ship look convincing on a big movie screen. (Also, it gave them a chance to add external features that would've been logical for a ship that size to have -- shuttle docks, for example.)

I'd commend them back then for actually exercising great restraint in adding too much detail to the Enterprise. My fingers are crossed that Abrams's crew exercised similar restraint.
 
Ezri said:
Trust me Captain, it looks flat looking. It looks like someone that went to a toy store and purchased a model. With some glue and some grey paint and the decals you got TOS Enterprise. If a 12 year old boy can make a copy of the Enterprise over a summer weekend and pass it off as a copy of the one used during the 1960s it is time for a face lift.
So your argument against the TOS Enterprise is that there are existing model kits for it?

By that logic, all effects space craft are out of date the moment that a kit of them is available to 12 year olds (who are good at building models). Other than the Polaris Lights kit, no previous kit of the Enterprise built out of the box with the included decals would have passed as the actual 1960s Enterprise. And that kit was only able to match it because of a ton of research and care on the part of the person who designed the kit.


Just out of curiosity, have you ever seen anyone attempt to scratch-build a model of the Enterprise? I've seen some skilled modelers completely miss the mark attempting to build the Enterprise from scratch. It isn't easy, nor is the TOS Enterprise lacking in detail... just meaningless clutter.
 
Shaw said:
Ezri said:
Trust me Captain, it looks flat looking. It looks like someone that went to a toy store and purchased a model. With some glue and some grey paint and the decals you got TOS Enterprise. If a 12 year old boy can make a copy of the Enterprise over a summer weekend and pass it off as a copy of the one used during the 1960s it is time for a face lift.
So your argument against the TOS Enterprise is that there are existing model kits for it?

By that logic, all effects space craft are out of date the moment that a kit of them is available to 12 year olds (who are good at building models). Other than the Polaris Lights kit, no previous kit of the Enterprise built out of the box with the included decals would have passed as the actual 1960s Enterprise. And that kit was only able to match it because of a ton of research and care on the part of the person who designed the kit.


Just out of curiosity, have you ever seen anyone attempt to scratch-build a model of the Enterprise? I've seen some skilled modelers completely miss the mark attempting to build the Enterprise from scratch. It isn't easy, nor is the TOS Enterprise lacking in detail... just meaningless clutter.

Yes and no with the model kits you can get from a toy store. It is just that the model from TOS looks like a model kit from a toy store in the first place. When I see the opening credits of TOS with the Enterprise zipping towards me and zipping away from me it looks cheesy. It looks like the model is on a pole being pulled by a train set with a black screen with limited amount of stars and being speeded up to make it look like it is going fast.


Are you sure you want the opening of Star Trek XI to look like this:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Em_sxKHQekk

If you notice the ship cannot even go in a straight line.
 
Look folks, to make a long story short: 'Original design' IS NOT THE SAME as 'Original Model'. It is perfectly possible for them to use the original design and make it look 1000% better than it EVER looked on the show. It's not the design that is lacking, only the presentation. On a movie screen the old design will look much better than it ever did on a TV screen. The picture will be larger, so we'll be able to see more detail. They aren't going to dust off the relatively crude/featureless 1960's model.

So if they choose to use the original, with it's logical sensor dish, rather than using blue neon lights (gag), I'll be fine with it.
 
I think that the new Enterprise will have to (sadly) appeal to the audience of today. Remember: the audience of the 1960's were far more into 'out there' science fiction. Today's audience is more about 'down here' sci-fi. Characters take the lead over concepts. Action over intellect. Militarism over exploration. The new Enterprise is, if they want to impress the target audience, going to have to look like it is a logical extension of today's technology. Unfortunately (for people like me), that means loosing that interesting, smooth, pulp look, and going for something that would make 'Battlestar Galactica' proud.

I'm expecting the rough lines of the ship to be the same (saucer, neck, secondary hull, two nacelles), but I seriously think that the comparisons will end there. I don't believe that there will be wings and all that rubbish, but the details will be way different (and I'm also going by Ryan Church's previous work on the 'Star Wars' franchise - I think he is the man in charge of the Enterprise re-design?).
 
mada101 said:I'm also going by Ryan Church's previous work on the 'Star Wars' franchise - I think he is the man in charge of the Enterprise re-design?

I don't know that he is, though he's one of the artists working on the movie. If I knew that Church was responsible for the new version of the ship I'd feel pretty good about it, based on what I've seen of his previous work.
 
Starship Polaris said:
mada101 said:I'm also going by Ryan Church's previous work on the 'Star Wars' franchise - I think he is the man in charge of the Enterprise re-design?

I don't know that he is, though he's one of the artists working on the movie. If I knew that Church was responsible for the new version of the ship I'd feel pretty good about it, based on what I've seen of his previous work.

What sort of things did he work on? Any links to similar space ship-like designs?
 
ancient said:
Starship Polaris said:
mada101 said:I'm also going by Ryan Church's previous work on the 'Star Wars' franchise - I think he is the man in charge of the Enterprise re-design?

I don't know that he is, though he's one of the artists working on the movie. If I knew that Church was responsible for the new version of the ship I'd feel pretty good about it, based on what I've seen of his previous work.

What sort of things did he work on? Any links to similar space ship-like designs?

Here's a link to a page of his concept work for one of the SW prequels - nose around the whole site, and you'll get a feel for the stuff:

http://www.ryanchurch.com/04PRO.htm
 
Thanks Dennis.

EDIT: He really looks to be a quality designer. Pretty sweet. But...he doesn't put nearly enough blue neon on his designs! :p
 
Ezri said:
Arlo said:
Ezri said:First off, look how flat looking the Enterprise looks. There is very little depth with that ship.
:wtf:
Trust me Captain, it looks flat looking. It looks like someone that went to a toy store and purchased a model. With some glue and some grey paint and the decals you got TOS Enterprise. If a 12 year old boy can make a copy of the Enterprise over a summer weekend and pass it off as a copy of the one used during the 1960s it is time for a face lift.
Okay, then... first off, that's a totally fallacious comment. A 12-year-old boy can't make a copy of the Enterprise that looks as good as the filmmaking one, or the new CGI one, any more than he can make one that looks as good as the 1701-D did on-screen, or the 1701E for that matter.

I keep reposting this (a size-reduced version of a high-res image of Daren Docherman's remodeled 1701). TELL ME that you think a 12-year-old kid could make something look like this over a weekend.
drdnewent1cn9.jpg


Oh, and by the way... here's a new US Warship currently being created. Funny... pretty "flat looking." The USS Zumwaldt.
usszumwaltddg1000nc8.jpg

EDITED TO REDUCE IMAGE SIZE
 
Cary L. Brown said:
I'll never wrap my head around why some people keep saying this (about the Enterprise "not looking good on screen"). I'm sorry, it's just utter NONSENSE.

My old issues of "Starlog" are boxed away somewhere in my mom's house 1000 miles away, but I distinctly remember Mike Minor saying (paraphrasing from distant memory) that some added detail was necessary for the big screen. He didn't want to make it a "Star Wars" ship, but it needed more visual interest.

Nobody who's doing a WWII movie ... at least nobody COMPETENT... thinks "Well, that WWII-era aircraft carrier doesn't look good... I'd better put some flourescent panels on it in bright primary colors... otherwise it'll look bad on-screen." DO THEY?

Well, we know what a WWII era aircraft carrier should look like, though.

The folks doing this movie MIGHT decide to take liberties with the 1701's design. I doubt it, but they might. But even if they do, that couldn't be attributed to "the design not being good." It might be attributable to all variety of other legal, moral, or business reasons... (ie, the "artists" wanting to have their own take on it?). But I can think of NO technical rationale for why the ship design "must" be altered in order for it to "look good."

It's not about the design "not being good," or anything like that. The basic look is beautiful. But, it's about taking something that was designed to be seen on 25-inch TV screens and giving it the necessary details to make it look "real" when it's 25-feet tall. That's the whole point, really. The design is great, whether it's TMP NCC-1701 or TOS NCC-1701. It's about VISUAL INTEREST up close. Seams, variances in paint, little details like sensors, tubes, weapons bays, shuttle docks, elevators and such.

Can ANYONE give a true, rational argument for why they think this is the case? Other than these (which are NOT rational or logical):

I gotta get in the car and drive 1000 miles to find my summer and fall 1979 issues of "Starlog". Mike Minor had an answer.
Roddenberry required the new look to be rationalized as a refit Enterprise. But there's no way that ship could be the TOS ship merely refit. The saucer is bigger and has different curves. The lower hull is a completely different shape. The neck is very different. These are NOT just modifications or such. The proportions are too different.
In reality, this is a BRAND NEW design based on the basic shape of the older design. Calling TMP Enterprise merely a refit version of TOS Enterprise is like saying a Nextel Cup car is merely a refit street car.
Of course, Roddenberry required the change in look to have an on screen explanation, so there you go. It's a refit.

1) "Dude, it has a satellite dish on it."

This sort of argument is typically made by kiddies who have no actual scientific/technical knowledge whatsoever, but who grew up in the TNG "brightly illuminated primary color panels equals kewl technology"

I won't bore the rest of you with another diatribe on why parabolic reflectors are made in parabolic form, with a receptor or emitter at the focii of the dish... but suffice it to say it's REAL SCIENTIFIC PRINCIPLES AT WORK.

Everyone knows why the dish is shaped like it is. Except today, almost everyone has a dish. I don't have a big issue with the dish on the front of TOS Enterprise, but to some, as it looks, all it may be missing is the DirecTV or Dish logo. Frankly, I'm in the camp that believes how the dish was designed for TMP Enterprise was better.

2) "The ship needs more details... it's too plain, and that's boring."

This is caused by kids who grew up on Star Wars and assume "guts on the outside" means realistic.

This was a stylistic choice made by Lucas's folks on the first movie (based in part upon choices made by Trumbull's stuff in 2001).

The Star Trek philosophy, created by Matt Jeffries and consistent with REAL LIFE design principles... is that if you have a choice of having a piece of hardware inside of the ship... in a "shirt sleeves" environment... or outside the ship (where you need a space suit just to perform routine maintenance)... the obvious choice is to put it on the inside. It's just common sense, really...

It's a question of economics, really. If it would be cheaper to design a ship that required an occasional spacewalk (a very routine event) in order to do maintenance, so be it. A smooth skin is totally unnecessary in space.
Roddenberry wanted the Enteprise to look powerful and look like a starship, not something meant for atmospheric flight. But the for most the greater aesthetic appeal is for "smooth" over "rough," so the Enterprise is smooth even if it's not aerodynamic.
But in reality, even if hardware is placed inside the ship, that doesn't mean it has to have graceful curves and a smooth-and-tight-as-a-baby's-bottom skin.

3) "The ship design is too fragile."

Well, by that argument EVERY ship we've seen in Trek, and the majority we've seen in any other show, are all "too fragile." Without knowing the exact strength of the components, and the exact maximum loads they were designed to bear, it's impossible to say that anything is "too weak."

Never heard that one before. Anyone who knows that it's a space ship wouldn't really think that, either. I've always thought the ship showed both grace and strength.
 
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