^ That is a fitting description of the build up.
Ooooh, sadly, I must say that was a VERY clever move by Boor.
I also liked this Gungan character--he really blew all of the stereotypes out of the water. You said he was raised on Coruscant...I take it that his normal accent would be a very refined, RP-type British accent?
Glad to see you working on this again, and I look forward to seeing more!![]()
Wow that was great. I agree with Nerys. I have said it before but I feel the need to say it again...your grasp of the universe and characters is exceptional. This doesn't read like a fan fic but a professional novel. I know it might seem like I'm blowing up smoke but anyone who knows me will attest to the fact that I can be highly critical, so far there isn't anything to be critical of in this. It's just a great, fun story. It's so damn dark though!!!
Also meant to add...this keeps getting more and more depressing. I'm waiting to see "The Glimmer of Hope" still lol.
Also meant to add...this keeps getting more and more depressing. I'm waiting to see "The Glimmer of Hope" still lol.
I'm sorry, but I cant resist putting in an overused cliché right here: The night is always darkest before dawn.
^ That is a fitting description of the build up.
Actually, the night is always darkest--in the middle of the night. Keep up the good work. If the dawn comes, even if this Empire isn't dramatically overconfident, it still lacks the 'one player chessboard' advantage Palps had in the prequels.
Hi guys!
Well, to give somewhat of an explanation to my absence... My wife was pregnant, so had to do a lot around the house. She has now given birth and my son (our first) was born last night!!!!![]()
Joel
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