So I watched the commentary for Remembrance and there was zero conversation about an earlier version of a Romulan attack on Mars. Just a bunch of stuff about different camera lenses they used to facilitate different looks during the course of the interview and Picard’s descent into meltdown over the whole evacuation fiasco. Kind-of disappointing in that regard, but if that particular version of the story didn’t make sense in the grand scheme of the established plot, it would make sense not to draw too much attention to it. No deleted scenes or alternate versions either. So… 
