It definitely is one of my favorites and highlights the adventures part of the series.
The Devil in the Dark by Gene L. Coon
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Everyone has their first "the monster isn't one" story, and I think this was mine.
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Errand of Mercy by Gene L. Coon
Well! This is the first appearance of the Klingons. And they're about to go to war!
The premise is laid out right in the beginning by Kirk: "Negotiations with the Klingon Empire are on the verge of breaking down. Starfleet Command anticipates a surprise attack. We are to proceed to Organia and take whatever steps are necessary to prevent the Klingons from using it as a base." Then the Enterprise is attacked and destroys it's attacker. It sets up the tension right away.
Kirk and Spock beam down to the planet and no one seems to notice or care that strangers just appeared. They are greeted by Ayelborne, the chairman of the Council of Elders. He takes them to the Council, who hear Kirk out but...
"We are in no danger. We thank you for your kind offer of assistance, although we must decline it, and we strongly recommend that you leave Organia before you yourselves are endangered."
Knowing the ending going in, I found that everything the Organians do or say makes perfect sense from their point of view. But from Kirk's and Kor's points of view, they make no sense, and I found myself really loving how Kirk and Spock (and Kor) misinterpret everything about Organia from the get-go and end up despising the people from a place of complete ignorance.
Kor... oh, John Colicos, how beautifully you play the villain! Even though these Klingons are very different from later depictions, I can see the very tiniest inkling of the honorable warrior in Kor. He's very calm and civilized, even when giving tyrannical orders. He's just doing what "must be done." When he learns he's facing Kirk, he shows quite a bit of respect. He sees a "Worthy Foe" more than a hated enemy. The scene between them in Kor's office is a highlight, with both Shatner and Colicos playing well off each other.
Big shoutout too to John Abbott, who plays Ayelborne beautifully throughout. His concern that Kirk and Spock might get hurt is well presented, making sense when he hides them, then when he turns them in, and then when he breaks them out.
FYI, there IS a clue right from the beginning - all the doors seems to open and close by themselves.
Kirk and Spock have some nice banter as they work their way to Kor's office after being freed by Ayelborne.
The Klingons = Communist analogy is quite direct BTW. "KOR: Do you know why we are so strong? Because we are a unit. Each of us is part of the greater whole, always under surveillance. Even a commander like myself, always under surveillance, Captain. If you will note."
As the fleets prepare to meet in space, Kirk and Spock make it to Kor's office and then more Klingons come and it's about to be a fight... and then everyone drops their weapons in pain. They can't even touch each other. On the ship, the crew jump out of their seats, away from their consoles.
"All instruments of violence on this planet now radiate a temperature of three hundred and fifty degrees. They are inoperative."
The war is over.
Ayelborne explains that, "Unless both sides agree to an immediate cessation of hostilities, all your armed forces, wherever they may be, will be immediately immobilised."
Kirk and Kor both start arguing for their grievances against each other and why they have the right to a war.
KIRK: Even if you have some power that we don't understand, you have no right to dictate to our Federation...
KOR: Or our Empire!
KIRK: How to handle their interstellar relations! We have the right...
AYELBORNE: To wage war, Captain? To kill millions of innocent people? To destroy life on a planetary scale? Is that what you're defending?
KIRK: Well, no one wants war. But there are proper channels. People have a right to handle their own affairs. Eventually, we will have...
AYELBORNE: Oh, eventually you will have peace, but only after millions of people have died. It is true that in the future, you and the Klingons will become fast friends. You will work together.
KOR: Never!
And so the Organians reveal themselves. They are not simple peasants in a stagnant civilization, but beings of pure energy ("bomp-bomp-bom-bom-BADA") with incalculable power.
This IS Foundational Star Trek. The Klingons as similar-but-different, the Organian Peace Treaty, the set up here for a Cold War, the prediction of future collaboration... so much of the groundwork for what Star Trek becomes over time is laid here.
A thoroughly enjoyable episode. I almost wish I could go back and watch it without knowing the end again.
Well said!Kor isn't defeated - his reason for being there is removed.
It would have been interesting to have John Colicos as Kor in ST6:TUC instead of Chang.Take away the Shakespeare quotes and the Klingons in TUC are very much like these OG Klingons.
That would have been amazing. I mean, you get rid of Christopher Plummer at your peril, but this would have been worth it. Just think we could have killed Kor AND seen Saavik as a traitor all in one movie. AND said goodbye to the TOS cast. I don't think I'd have stopped crying yet.It would have been interesting to have John Colicos as Kor in ST6:TUC instead of Chang.![]()
Reasons. I think part of the difficulty in writing noncoporeal life is that their reasons are not going to be like Kirk's. Sharing their nature might go against what they view as needed because respecting the boundary should have been enough.They can't take that small action f
I admit this ocurred to me. Several times! The only way I can headcanon it is that they haven't had less advanced species around for a helluva long time and forgot how we are.If the Organians are so hell bent on Kirk's welfare (and presumably the Klingons' as well) why don't the Light Bulbs tell Kirk "Hey, dude. We're fine. Don't get yourself killed. We're immortal." They can't take that small action for... Reasons?
The only thing I have to add is how good Nimoy is. He's in the worst possible place. He's not only stuck on Earth but he's stuck on 1930's Earth. His only way home is to make sure his best friend and CO's love dies. It all just SUCKS. And Nimoy shows it.
Another reason why Harlan's original ending would not have worked as well. It would have been one selfish act (Kirk) being stopped by another selfish act (Spock). As it is it's Kirk working almost totally against his own self interest (and Edith's of course) for the greatest good.
I don't mean selfish in terms of "Spock is a selfish so and so for wanting to restore the timeline and go home." But while Kirk and Spock both act (of course) for the greater good Spock would also be acting in his own best interests. Kirk is not necessarily acting in his. Kirk is sacrificing his own happiness and his relationship with Edith. Spock is not.If memory serves, Spock stops Beckwith from saving Edith, while Kirk makes an emotional decision NOT to stop Beckwith.
But I don't see Spock's motives as selfish in Ellison's version either. It's for the greater good in the end. In terms of his own fate, he has an outwardly ''que sera sera'' outlook.
That's another way to look at it. But, a lot of times we take for granted our own points of view, and the Organians can see in to the future that Klingons and humans would become "friends." So, the resistance to that path might have been a bit surprising in that moment.I admit this ocurred to me. Several times! The only way I can headcanon it is that they haven't had less advanced species around for a helluva long time and forgot how we are.
Aurelan wakes briefly and struggles to give Kirk some answers. She then dies.
Kirk is a Starfleet Captain trained and experienced in dealing with crises of all kinds, including emotional distress he has to compartmentalize to focus on the situation at hand. A lot of people writing and creating TOS had actually military experience from WW2 and Korea that would serve to direct how Kirk’s character would deal with such a situation. This also reflected a general mindset predating today’s where people didn’t walk around with their emotions on their sleeve or exposed bare for everyone to see.
My father was of that generation. I knew my father loved us and cared for is even if he wasn’t always giving us hugs and saying how much he loved us. We knew through his actions. He had his foibles, but he was a damn good example of what a man was supposed to be and how he dealt with things. And we also knew he felt pain, disappointment and loss even if he didn’t parade it.
This is the most horrifying death in the series. She literally dies screaming in pain. It's really unsettling and I'm surprised the network let it go.
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