Star Trek TMP Memory Wall edit
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Tweaked version of the SLV airlock scene using scenes from Slaymage's cleaned up preservation. Somebody asked why Rand would be out there after Spock. She was obviously under orders to stall Spock but it was tough to find any dialogue, so I tried to add an establishing shot and conversation.
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Got the new boxed set - sadly my player seems not to like the 4k SLV so I will have to make other arrangements to watch the SLV. Watched the Bluray bonus disc. Some nice stuff on there. I love the deleted scenes.
We are missing some of the key dialogue so I can see why they could not include the scenes in any official cut but the engineering scene is so cool. It might just about be possible to crib enough dialogue. All it needs is 'Kirk to Engineering' and the rest makes sense.
The snag with the deceased security guard isn't that he doesn't fire his phaser, which doesn't look odd at all, it's that the there is no dialogue for his obituary.
I might have been able to vocode it - I was happy with my vocoded line for Kirk in the airlock scene - but sadly one of my laptop updates screwed with my system and I'm fairly sure my vocoder has stopped working.
Edit: Ok so a quick look and I can kill security officer Dickerson from Savage Curtain or try to marry up that dialogue with Astrobiologist Phillips from Ultimate Computer. That might look or sound unnatural but worth a try.
We are missing some of the key dialogue so I can see why they could not include the scenes in any official cut but the engineering scene is so cool. It might just about be possible to crib enough dialogue. All it needs is 'Kirk to Engineering' and the rest makes sense.
The snag with the deceased security guard isn't that he doesn't fire his phaser, which doesn't look odd at all, it's that the there is no dialogue for his obituary.
I might have been able to vocode it - I was happy with my vocoded line for Kirk in the airlock scene - but sadly one of my laptop updates screwed with my system and I'm fairly sure my vocoder has stopped working.
Edit: Ok so a quick look and I can kill security officer Dickerson from Savage Curtain or try to marry up that dialogue with Astrobiologist Phillips from Ultimate Computer. That might look or sound unnatural but worth a try.
Incorporating the alarm and slight trims from the DE, and then bleeding Uhura's dialogue into the following scene to try and improve the pacing. My latest version has sneaked in some background dialogue from Janice Rand taken from the Voyager episode Flashback.
It's still a work in progress but you can see from the scaled up SD scenes why I'm really keen to take a look at the 4k version.
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It's still a work in progress but you can see from the scaled up SD scenes why I'm really keen to take a look at the 4k version.
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You really pepped that up.
Thanks! I think the only thing I can do with it now is layer on the upgraded footage from the new 4k version.
I have done some housekeeping and cleared out the old versions. Here is the final(?) draft of Part 1.
I have a slight dilemma in that I don't mind the original lounge scene and never really got why they decided to change it, so do I stick to the version from the TC or go with my tweaked rotoscoped hybrid?
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Do you mean Rand's dialogue? It was vocoded but I could not get the damn thing to train on Grace's actual voice files. I'm just not code literate enough to work out why the vocoder could not see the necessary files. In the end I had to train it using voice clips and pre-trained files. It worked well for Shatner and Barrett but Grace's accent sounds wrong to my ear.
Or do you mean the transporter assistant? He does get a credit in the cast list.
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