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Star Trek : Restoration

Gibraltar

No, there's still quite a bit to go yet! :) 'Nerves of Neutronium'? LOL

I'm glad you liked Kalara's little moment - it will definitely play into things to come...

tenmei

Well, not much longer to wait, I should be posting the third and final part of this little event in a few hours! Hope it meets your expectations

RobertScorpio

I had to go back and read that part before I answered - seems like a while ago that I wrote it. Really glad you're enjoying these characters - they've become real people to me and I'm loving writing about them as much if not more as you love reading about them!

Can't wait for your comments on the rest - Keep 'em coming! :)

Well back to work on Chapter 13 and that special announcement... :devil:

Joel
 
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Chapter 13

Bridge
USS Redemption

''Damage report!"​

Jasto struggled to stay in his seat, one hand gripping the chair while with the other he tried to pull up the necessary information on his readout. Another explosion rocked the ship, whipping his head back.​

"Hull breaches on decks eleven through fifteen,” he shouted over the sound of screaming metal. “Engineering reports that the impulse engines have suffered severe damage to their primary relays. We've lost forward shields and..."​

Dax felt the deck buckle beneath him, as if some unseen hand had grabbed the ship and shaken it, hard. A relay running under the deck exploded, venting smoke and flames into the air. All the lights on the bridge flickered out, and the holographic illusion of space vanished completely from the walls.​

The heat seared his throat, making him cough. The UPS grid suddenly came to life and the emergency power systems sprang to life. Through the gloom, Dax saw Commander Kalara pick herself up from the deck, hair waving wildly around her face, blood on her lips. She reached up a hand and savagely wiped it away.​

Another shock ran through the ship. "Evasive manoeuvres," Kalara ordered. There was no response.​

Dax glanced over at Williams only to see her bloodied body lying prostrate on the deck. Just next to the fire caused by the burst power relay.​

Oh no. He tried to get to his feet and help her. He was half out of his seat when he felt a strong hand on his shoulder and found himself forced back down.​

"I'll take care of her," Commander Kalara said. "I need you to fly the ship."​

Dax hesitated for a moment, and then he nodded, turning back to his holographic console. Thank the Pools of New Trill, the holographic command and control consoles all had their own power sources, which would keep them running despite the failure of the primary relays. He accessed the helm system, transferring control of the thrusters to his position.​

As he did, he heard a voice whispering in the back of his mind. You left her to die. You did. You did the same as me. You're going to be punished.

Haebron's giggle sent shivers down Dax's spine. Not now, he prayed. Please, not now.


XXX​


Kalara grabbed a medical kit from a wall console on her way to Lieutenant Williams’ side. With her headset on, she saw the starfield swerve suddenly as the ship narrowly avoiding a volley of torpedoes. How many damned torpedoes does that thing have?!

She reached her helmsman's side, stopping a few steps away and running a tricorder over her injuries. When the computer confirmed that there was no internal bleeding, she grabbed the girl's ankles and dragged her out of danger. Then she pulled a hypo from the kit, charging it full of bymexazine.​

As she injected the stimulant into Williams' body, the ship slewed suddenly to port, then shuddered. Another explosion erupted, this time from above the Pit, and she heard a scream. The stench of burning flesh became almost overpowering.​

“Report!”​

“We’re dead in the water, Captain,” Dax said. “Main power is off line, we’ve lost helm control and weapons. But… I think we hit her, ma’am, with our last volley. She’s adrift.”​

So are we. Kalara changed the settings on her viewfinder, revealing the Klingon cruiser spinning slowly through space behind them. She tapped her comm badge.​

"Kalara to Lieutenant-Commander Ianto."​

"Engineering here, Commander." She heard men yelling something about a fire behind him.​

"I need main power back on line now, Ianto. We’re both drifting here, so the first one to get weapons or propulsion back on line is going to have the advantage."​

"I'm doing everything I can, Commander."​

"I know you are. Do more. Kalara out."​

“Captain!” Dax’s voice rose over the sound of sirens that filled the bridge. “We’ve got incoming. Two, make that three ships arriving from the far side of the system on an intercept course. They’re…” He looked up, a grin on his face. “It’s Starfleet, ma’am.”​

Kalara called up the information on her viewfinder. Three Starfleet attack ships, led by a Defiance­-class frigate, were headed for Redemption at full impulse speed.​

“They’re hailing us.”​

“Put them through, Lieutenant.”​

A tall, striking Romulan woman appeared in Kalara’s viewfinder. She smiled. “This is Captain Tal’ydia of the Opalius. Sorry to be late, Captain, but as the humans like to say, better late than never.”​

“I’m just happy to see you, Captain.”​

“Yes, I can imagine you are. The other Klingon ships have been taken care of. From what I can see, you’re both dead in space. It looks like you took quite a…”​

“Captain!”​

Kalara looked over at L’wynd. “The Klingon cruiser seems to have regained helm and thruster control. They’ve engaged their impulse drive and they’re… They’ve set a collision course.”​

Shit! “Did you hear that Captain?”​

Tal’ydia was already looking away to someone on her own bridge. When she looked back at Kalara, she did not look happy. “According to our best estimates, the Klingon ship will impact with yours fifteen seconds before we reach you.”​

Kalara took a moment to digest the information. “I understand. Would you excuse me for a moment, Captain?”​

The Romulan nodded her head. Kalara cut the communication and turned to Dax. “Hail K’mpak.”​

Moments later, the scarred general appeared on the viewfinder. He snarled. “You betrayed me, kapamai.” Kalara frowned. Kapamai was an old Klingon word. It meant spy. Had the fool lost his mind? “But you wished me to destroy that glorious ship of yours and that is what I’m going to do.”​

“K’mpak, listen to me…”​

“No! I will not listen to a traitor.”​

“He cut the communication,” Dax said as K’mpak vanished. “They’re increasing speed.”​

“Kalara to Ianto. If you’re going to bring back full power, now is the time to do it.”​

“I’m sorry, Commander. There’s nothing I can do.”​

Kalara would not allow herself to give in to despair. She forced herself to her feet and walked over to Dax, Q’sar and L’wynd. “Suggestions?”​

All three of them refused to meet her eyes. “Gentlemen, this is our last chance. Unless we can come up with something in the next few moments, this ship and everyone on board is going to die.”​

Silence. She was about to make one last attempt, when she saw Dax frown at his readout. “What is it, Lieutenant?”​

“We’re being hailed again, Captain. It… The person says he is Captain Ba’el Sarine and he knows how to save the ship!”​

Hornet-Class Starfighter
On approach to USS Redemption

Ba’el made sure that his suit was pumping enough oxygen into his helmet before shutting down life-support, throwing all of the power he could into the impulse drive. “Repeat, this is Captain Ba’el Sarine,” he shouted into the comm system, “and if you want to save that god-damned ship you’d better listen to me.”​

In front of him, he could see the Klingon cruiser moving closer and closer, faster and faster, towards Redemption. His sensors had already confirmed the obvious – the Federation ships that had just arrived wouldn’t get there in time.​

“Captain Sarine, this is Commander Kalara.”​

“Finally,” Ba’el shouted. “It’s about time.”​

“Lieutenant Dax says you know how to save the ship.”​

“You have to engage the slipstream drive.”​

“What?!” A male voice cut in. Ba’el guessed it was Lieutenant Dax. “That’s insane.”​

“Captain, forgive me, but you must be kidding.”​

“I wish people would stop saying that. Listen, if you engage your slipstream drive, it will create a quantum singularity right in front of your bow. Directly…”​

“In the path of the Klingon ship,” Lieutenant Dax finished. “Cap- I mean Commander, he might be on to something.”​

“No,” he heard Kalara say. “It is too dangerous. Not only would we be destroying General K’mpak’s ship, we would likely be destroying the Redemption as well.”​

“I know it’s a risk, Commander, but it’s the only chance you have. It might just buy you the time you need for the other ships to reach you.”​

“Or it might create a singularity that would engulf this whole system. We have no idea how the slipstream aperture might react under these conditions and…”​

“Listen, we don’t have time to argue,” Ba’el snapped. “I am Captain of the Redemption and I’m telling you to engage your slipstream drive.”​

“No!” This Kalara woman was really starting to piss him off.​

“Are you refusing a direct order, Commander?”​

“I don’t recognise your authority to give it, Captain.”​

Fine, if that’s the way you want to play this… “Lieutenant Dax, this is your captain speaking. I know we’ve never met, but I’m sure you’ve been informed that Starfleet has placed me in command of the Redemption. I am ordering you to engage the slipstream drive.”​

“Captain, I…”​

“Lieutenant, that is a direct order.”​

Kalara spoke over him. “Lieutenant, I am in command of the Redemption until Captain Sarine has been confirmed as captain through due process. And I am ordering you not to engage the drive.”​

And the Klingon ship drew closer.​

Bridge
USS Redemption

Jasto stared at the oncoming Klingon ship and tried desperately to think of another way. Haebron had begun to scream in his head, relegating Captain Sarine and Commander Kalara’s words to distant background noise. The Klingon ship grew larger and larger in his viewfinder. He could just see Astrid Williams’ broken body out of the corner of his eye, like a ghost come to haunt him.​

“Listen, we don’t have time to argue,” Captain Sarine was saying. “I am Captain of the Redemption and I’m telling you to engage your slipstream drive.”​

Jasto reacted on instinct, pulling up the command control for the slipstream drive and prepared to activate it. His hand was about to press the activation command when Kalara grabbed his arm.​

“No!”​

“Are you refusing a direct order, Commander?”​

Jasto turned his face and saw her sneer. “I don’t recognise your authority to give it, Captain.”​

“Lieutenant Dax, this is your captain speaking. I know we’ve never met, but I’m sure you know that Starfleet has placed me in command of the Redemption. I am ordering you to engage the slipstream drive.”​

Even with over a dozen lifetimes of experience, the memories of leaders, healers, rebels, killers and counsellors to draw upon, he had no idea what to do. “Captain, I…”​

“Lieutenant, this is a direct order.”​

“Lieutenant, I am in command of the Redemption until Captain Sarine has been confirmed as captain through due process. And I am ordering you not to engage the drive.”​

Jasto stared at his readout, the sound of Captain Sarine and Commander Kalara’s arguing fading away. It all came down to a choice – his choice. He could let the Klingon ship kill them, or he could take a chance. In his mind’s eye, he was Ezri Dax as she activated the self-destruct and guided the USS Titan towards the Dominion Battlecruiser that had just obliterated Trill. He was Lerin as he allowed Doctor Caemin to remove the symbiont before strapping a bomb to his chest and walking into the Vorta High Command on Khitomer. He was Jadzia, and Curzon, and Haebron, and Karina and all of them. They all spoke to him through Dax, telling him what he had to do, what it took to be a Dax.​

Shaking off Kalara’s grip, he activated the drive.​

Hornet-class Starfighter
On approach to USS Redemption

“Do you hear me, Lieutenant, activate the damned drive!”​

As Ba’el’s words faded, blue light appeared suddenly from the bottom of the ship. The deflector array manipulated the quantum field on the sub-atomic level and projected it out towards the oncoming Klingon cruiser. Ba’el watched the light pierce the space in front of the ship and then it began to spin. From his vantage point, it looked like a rapidly revolving ball of white light, growing exponentially as it opened out like a swirling flower. The light turned blue, then crystallised into the aperture of a tunnel through subspace.​

The Klingon cruiser struck the aperture from behind. The gravitational forces seized it like a giant seizing a rattle, shaking and shattering it. Ba’el could only stare as the cruiser broke up into a thousand pieces. Ripped apart.​

You did it. He felt hollow. Empty. You did it again.

Bridge
USS Redemption

Dax stared in horror as the subspace tunnel tore the Klingon cruiser apart. Although this was the ship that had destroyed Starbase 2, had inflicted so much damage and killed so many of his fellow officers, never mind all of the civilians who had been serving aboard the station, the way that they had died was not something he would wish on anybody.​

Beside him, he saw Kalara move. He looked up at her as she lifted her hand to strike him. They both stared at one another, caught in that moment like insects in amber. Finally, her hand fell back down without making impact. The look in her eyes, though, was enough. The hatred and disgust he saw there was unlike anything he had seen even in fifteen lifetimes.​

Suddenly, her comm badge beeped. “Ianto to Kalara.”​

“What is it Ianto?”​

“The slipstream drive is out of control, Commander. Without main power, the safeguards have failed. That aperture is going to keep on growing unless we do something.”​

“Are you saying we have to eject the core?”​

“No, Commander. I’m saying that without main power, we can’t. Unless we find another solution, that aperture is going to destroy the ship and then it’s going to engulf this entire system.”​
 
(Continued)

Main Engineering
USS Redemption

Ianto waited for Kalara to say something. While he waited, his positronic matrix calculated the chances of survival. Within a couple of nano-seconds, he had the answer. It was not good. A good thing he had switched off his father’s emotion chip. Otherwise he would probably be absolutely terrified right about now.

All around him, the scars of the battle with the Klingons were strewn throughout the vast cavernous space. Pipes and wiring hung from the ceiling, great jagged holes had been blown through the bulkheads. Injured crewmembers cared for ones who were worse off, while those who were still able tried to hold the brand new ship together.

“Commander?”

“Wh- What can we do?”

He sighed. He had been hoping that she would come up with some miracle solution, worried that she was going to ask him for one. He had an idea, but she wasn’t going to like it. The easiest solution, he decided, was to simply not tell her.

“I’ll get back to you.”

“Ianto, wait…”​

But he had already cut off the communication. She tried to hail him again, but he ignored it. He turned to the closest walking wounded, a young cadet whose brand new uniform was torn, his face covered in sweat and dust and the residue of the fires that had killed so many of his young colleagues. “Cadet, I want you to prepare to raise a level 9 forcefield around the slipstream core.”​

“Sir… What are we going to do?”​

“You’re going to raise a forcefield around the core.” Ianto laid a hand on the young man’s shoulder. He reminded him of Wesley Crusher. Even with his emotion chip turned off, experience had taught him the reassuring quality a smile could have. He smiled. “I’ll take care of the rest.”​

His words seemed to comfort the cadet and he ran over to the nearest control station. Ianto waited for him to give him a thumbs-up, then he headed for the core.​

Usually, the slipstream drive was a thing of beauty, an hourglass form with swirling shades of blue, green and purple mixing within the two chambers. Now, though, the colours had taken on a sickly orange tinge and the swirling had become a boiling, like a storm cloud.​

Ianto turned back to the cadet. “Cadet, raise the forcefield.”​

“But… But Chief, you’ll be trapped inside.”​

Ianto smiled, again. He activated a soothing routine in his vocal sub-processors. “I know. Do what I say, cadet.”​

The boy hesitated, then his fear got the better of him and he engaged the forcefield. Ianto saw the flickering glimmer of the defensive shield as it rose up around him. He knew that it would have no effect if he failed, but it would keep out anyone who wanted to stop him.​

Ianto took a moment to look around the engine room. She was a good ship. Not as good as the Enterprise, but Redemption had had promise. He was only sad that he wouldn’t get to see her fulfill it.​

“Computer, activate program Ianto Delta 7.”​

He waited for the computer to confirm that the program had been successfully activated. At least now she wouldn’t be able to get in here to try and stop him. He wondered for a moment what the chances were that he would survive this. The calculation was almost instantaneous.​

Then, at peace, he turned and reached out his hands towards the core.​

Hornet-Class Starfighter
On approach to USS Redemption

Ba’el wanted to look away, but he couldn’t. The subspace aperture continued to grow. Filaments of pure quantic energy writhed across the vacuum of space, licking at the front section of Redemption like some spatial predator playing with its prey.​

Looking down, he checked his sensors, but they only confirmed his fears. The aperture was getting bigger, feeding on the local gravitational field to stoke its hunger. If someone didn’t stop it, it would tear Redemption apart. It would continue to grow and it might just turn into a singularity. Ba’el had seen it happen once, in the last days of the Occupation. The Topakin system. A whole colony world had been destroyed by a subspace distortion explosive launched by the Dominion into the middle of a small rebel fleet. The whole system remained a no-fly zone even today, a patchwork of quantum singularities and subspace tears.​

The memory crystallised his determination. For the second time that day, he realized that there was only one possible solution. He glanced at Redemption. Despite his best efforts, he had grown attached to the ship. She seemed to represent everything he had fought for. Even now, torn apart and broken, she was beautiful. He closed his eyes. He would have liked to command her. There, he had admitted it. He would have liked to sit in that captain’s chair.​

Well, what is meant to be… He opened his eyes and called up a system’s check on his controls. The status of the warp core scrolled across his screens. Though pretty much everything else was down, the core still seemed to be intact. He took a deep breath. You don’t have a choice, he told himself. Ignoring the fear that clawed at his belly, he began to initiate the self-destruct sequence.​

Almost immediately, his comm crackled. “Captain, what the hell are you doing?” Turner’s voice echoed in the cockpit.​

He ignored her.​

“Captain Sarine, our sensors are reading a build-up of energy in your warp core,” Lieutenant Dax’s voice replaced Turner’s. “Do you require assistance?”​

He ignored him, as well.​

Once the self-destruct sequence had been initialized, he checked his navigational sensors to see how long it would take him to reach the aperture under full impulse. Then he set the destruct sequence for 60 seconds.​

“Captain, turn off your engines, now!” He saw Turner begin to swing her fighter towards him. “God help me, Captain, if you don’t, I’ll…”​

He keyed on the intercom. “I just want to say thank you, Turner. Thank you for letting me make a difference.”​

Ignoring her protests, he shut off the intercom, turned the nose of his fighter towards the aperture and engaged the impulse drive.​

Jeffries Tube
Deck Twenty-One
USS Redemption

Kalara kicked out at the access panel again and again, pouring every ounce of anger and frustration into the metal screen. It crumpled outwards then burst from the hatch, tumbling to the metal floor below. She slid forward, clambering out of the hatch and stepping down into the corridor.​

The smell of super-heated metal and burning wires filled the enclosed space. Lights flicked above her, hopelessly trying to break through the haze that hung in the air like a shroud. Kalara set off at a run, her heart racing. Though there hadn’t been anything tangible in Ianto’s voice to worry her, the moment he cut off her comm line, she had known something wasn’t right. When he refused to answer her further hails, she had left Lieutenant Dax in charge of the shattered bridge and taken the Jefferies’ tubes down to engineering.​

Thoughts of Lieutenant Dax left her with a bitter taste in the mouth. The p’tagh had betrayed her, had disobeyed a direct order. And for what? The ship was going to be destroyed anyway. And all of those Klingons aboard K’mpak’s ship… They had died without honor. She wasn’t sure which thought made her feel sicker.​

Her thoughts evaporated as she reached the doors to Main Engineering. One of them had been crumpled outwards by some unseen force, while the other had collapsed to the side. Setting her feet, she wedged her fingertips beneath the collapsed door and pulled. Pain stabbed through her every muscle, but she pushed past it. The door rose, little by little, until she could just about squeeze underneath. She forced her whole body through the gap, pushing forward with her shoulders until she popped through, tumbling to the floor of the engine room.​

Scrambling to her feet, she looked around for Ianto. All eyes seemed trained on the slipstream drive. When she followed their gaze, she frowned. Energy flowed out of the drive in great flickering tongues of electricity. A shadow seemed caught in the middle of the flow. When she caught a glimpse of golden skin and a black uniform, she screamed.​

“No!” She ran forward, but found herself grabbed from behind. She turned and kicked out blindly, catching a young human cadet in the mouth. He rolled away, his hands cupping the blood that burst from his lip and broken teeth.​

He had slowed her down, though, long enough for three engineers to reach her. They fell on her and held her down as she struggled to fight free.​

“Commander, you can’t go in there.”​

“I have to do something. I can’t just leave him.”​

“It’s too late. You’ll just get yourself killed.”​

“But what’s he doing?”​

“We think…” The man’s voice broke. “We think he’s created some kind of feedback loop with his own body, to relieve the pressure in the drive.”​

“He’s going to die.”​

“He… He’s locked us out of the forcefield controls. He knew what he was doing, Commander.”​

All of the strength left her body. The three engineers held on for another few moments, then realized that she had stopped fighting them. They let go, stumbling to their feet, and for the first time, Kalara realized that every single one of them was carrying an injury.​

“How… How long?” she asked.​

One of the engineers, a Bolian, shrugged. “We have no way of knowing.”​

“And will it work?”​

He shrugged again. “If he hadn’t done it, the core would probably already have exploded.”​

Kalara took a step towards the forcefield. All three jumped in front of her, but she waved them away. “I… I’ll stay a safe distance away. I need to speak to him.” She couldn’t believe how tired her voice sounded.​

They hesitated, then one by one they fell back. Kalara stepped past them, approaching the forcefield.​

She pressed her commbadge. “Kalara to… Kalara to Ianto.”​

She saw his head drop. His voice, when she heard it, sounded faint. Damaged. For the first time since she had known him, he sounded like a machine. “Ianto… here.”​

“Ianto. What have you done?”​

“My duty, Commander.”​

“Ianto please. Don’t call me that.”​

“I’m sorry… Kalara.” His voice was devoid of any emotion. Mechanical. Dead.​

“Why are you doing this?”​

“It was… the only way.”​

Another burst of energy ran through him and she saw his body convulse. “Are you… Are you in pain?”​

“No, Kalara. I have turned off my father’s emotion chip. I feel nothing.”​

“Oh Ianto. We could have found another way.”​

“There was no other way.”​

“But surely…”​

“I… I cannot hold it much longer.”​

“No, Ianto, please, you have to…”​

“Do not mourn for me, Kalara. This was meant to be.”​

She opened her mouth to say something, anything, but a burst of light engulfed the space inside the forcefield. She tried to watch for as long as she could, but the light was too bright. She turned away, tears of fury running down her cheeks.​

When she looked back, her friend was gone.​

Kalara, daughter of Elyra, threw back her head and screamed.​

Hornet-class Starfighter
30 seconds from impact

Time seemed to pass slowly as his fighter sped towards the subspace tunnel. Ba’el had been told that when people saw death approaching, they saw their whole life flash before their eyes. Ba’el saw only his wife and his son. Not a vision of their life together or what their life could have been. Instead, he simply saw their faces reflected in the cockpit window, as if it had become a viewscreen back in time. Both of them were smiling.​

For the first time in years, Ba’el was at peace. He could feel that this was supposed to happen. Every decision he had made in the past few days had been leading him up this. He would sacrifice his life to save that ship, so that she and her crew would go on and complete the mission. A mission of restoration and of redemption. And he… He would see his family again. He had never been more certain of anything. This was his time and they were waiting for him.​

His fighter struck the aperture and the warp core overloaded and Ba’el Sarine was filled with light.​
 
There you go, the end of the Battle of Romulus! :rommie: Hope you enjoy it. And now for a little announcement...

Dear all,

First off the bat… Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you ! You’re comments, support, crits, reviews, etc… have been keeping me writing which is no bad thing and have really made me push myself to make this story the best it can be. I’m so glad you’re enjoying it.

As for the “special announcement” it isn’t actually all that special. I just wanted to see if I could freak anyone out. All those who were afraid I was going to blow up Redemption and announce no more story… Got ya! :lol:

No, I just wanted to announce a slight change in the organisation of the story. Up ‘til now, I have been writing Book One of Star Trek: Restoration, which I called A New Order. Those reading this on AsAstra have probably noticed that more than on trekbbs. I was planning on writing all of the segments under that title, but with everything that happened in the Battle of Romulus, I’ve decided to change my gameplan.

To what, I hear you say? Well, Chapter 14, which will be posted tomorrow or Sunday, and will wrap up the immediate aftermath of the Battle of Romulus, will be the last chapter of what is now going to be Book One Volume One: Redemption. And next Monday I will be posting the prologue of a whole new section of the story, Volume Two: Aftermath. This will lead into two more Volumes (hesitantly titled Onyx and Collision at the moment) which will wrap up Book One.

As for Book 2… I have a hell of a lot of ideas, that’s all I’m saying!

Now I would like your advice – do you think that I should create a brand new thread on trekbbs and a brand new story on AdAstra, or should I just carry on posting the story to the initial thread and story? I’d love to have your feedback as to which you think will be clearer.

There we go, that’s the special announcement. Hope it is clear and not too confusing.

Thanks again for all your support!

Joel
 
Well, I quit. That was amazing! (Okay, because I know you'll yell at me, maybe I won't quit, but WOW, WOW you're just that good. :alienblush:)

I can't even collect my thoughts on all that -- Sarine's self sacrifice could have easily felt cheap, but didn't. Dax made a difficult call and is going to have to live with it (and apparently some taunting from within) for the rest of his life. Kalara is going to be wrecked. We don't even know if her husband is alive, everyone thinks she's a spy, I'm sure she'll feel guilty over all the losses, particularly what happened to Sarine, especially because his sacrifice got her what she once wanted -- Redemption. Well, she's got it now, and what a mess! And poor, poor Ianto. We hardly knew you ...

I wonder how the real spy fared in all of this ...
 
You know, Kes, I'm not sure that Sarine IS dead - that ending seemed like it was left wide open for intervention by the Bajoran Prophets, Q or even the mysterious Laurentine Confederation.

But, yes, an excellent installment and conclusion to the Battle of Romulus - can't wait to see the aftermath!
 
Yeah, that thought occurred to me, too, while I was out running errands. Sarine may live to Captain the Redemption yet ... wouldn't that make for some drama?
 
Gripping stuff, with all-or-nothing sacrifices being made on more than one front. It's a damn good thing Redemption survived, because enough bloods was spilled in order to save her.

Yeah, Kalara and Dax are going to have a reckoning when all is said and done. The honor-less deaths of the Klingons and of her friend still wait to be avenged.

That was a treat. Looking forward to wherever you take the tale from here! :)
 
Kes7

Well, I quit. That was amazing! (Okay, because I know you'll yell at me, maybe I won't quit, but WOW, WOW you're just that good. :alienblush:)

Damn right I'll yell at you! What do you think I'd do without my regular Tesseract fix?!!! :klingon: Still, I'm very touched that you thought that this was that good.

I can't even collect my thoughts on all that -- Sarine's self sacrifice could have easily felt cheap, but didn't. Dax made a difficult call and is going to have to live with it (and apparently some taunting from within) for the rest of his life. Kalara is going to be wrecked. We don't even know if her husband is alive, everyone thinks she's a spy, I'm sure she'll feel guilty over all the losses, particularly what happened to Sarine, especially because his sacrifice got her what she once wanted -- Redemption. Well, she's got it now, and what a mess! And poor, poor Ianto. We hardly knew you ...

I'm so glad that Sarine's sacrifice worked well, though as to his final fate... I'm not telling!

Dax is going to have to deal with this and it is going to manifest in his relationship with Haebron in relatively surprising ways!

As for Kalara... Things are not looking up for my favourite Klingon, but things may well develop in a surprising way. However, so far, only K'mpak thought she was a spy. Whether Starfleet will cotton on... Wait and see!

Ianto... What is it about that name, hey? (Torchwood fans will understand)

I wonder how the real spy fared in all of this ...

Watch this space! :)

Yeah, that thought occurred to me, too, while I was out running errands. Sarine may live to Captain the Redemption yet ... wouldn't that make for some drama?

You're thinking about my story while running errands?! Cool!!! :klingon:

tenmei

You know, Kes, I'm not sure that Sarine IS dead - that ending seemed like it was left wide open for intervention by the Bajoran Prophets, Q or even the mysterious Laurentine Confederation.

LOL! I'm not going to comment on Ba'el's final fate but intervention by Prophets or Q made me laugh! :guffaw:

But, yes, an excellent installment and conclusion to the Battle of Romulus - can't wait to see the aftermath!

Glad you liked it - immediate aftermath coming up in a few!

Gibraltar

Gripping stuff, with all-or-nothing sacrifices being made on more than one front. It's a damn good thing Redemption survived, because enough bloods was spilled in order to save her.

Yeah, Kalara and Dax are going to have a reckoning when all is said and done. The honor-less deaths of the Klingons and of her friend still wait to be avenged.

That was a treat. Looking forward to wherever you take the tale from here! :)

Glad you liked it. I couldn't destroy Redemption, not yet... :devil:

Kalara and Dax... That should be an interesting dynamic depending on who ends up where in the aftermath of this battle.

Hope you'll enjoy where this is heading, Gibraltar. That goes for the rest of you as well.
 
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Chapter 14

Transporter Room 3
USS Redemption

Ba'el Sarine was filled with light.

Then the transporter effect faded and he found himself crouching over a glowing pad. Losing his balance, he tumbled back on his ass, staring in surprise at the young transporter operator who stood behind the controls. He was alive. Somehow, against all odds, he was alive. And if his guess was right he was on the Redemption.

The vision of his wife and son wavered for a moment longer in front of him then vanished. He closed his eyes, squeezing back the tears. They had no right to take that away from him. His first reaction was despair, followed swiftly by anger. It had been his time. He knew it had been his time and he had been ready for it.

He opened his eyes again when he heard the transporter operator tap his comm badge. He was surprised to see a young Vulcan officer stood behind the console. The Vulcan’s uniform was dirty and torn, his eyes bloodshot. "Transporter room 3 to bridge. We have him, Lieutenant."

"Well done, Ensign,” came the now familiar voice of Lieutenant Dax. “Please escort the Captain to the bridge."

"Aye, sir."

The Vulcan walked around his console and over to Ba'el. Leaning down, he offered his arm. Ba'el stared at it for a moment, feeling numb. Part of him wanted to swing for the man. Instead, he reached up and took the proffered forearm, pulling himself up. Once he was on his feet, he twisted off the helmet, letting it drop next to the transporter pad.

"If you'll follow me, sir."

Out in the corridors, men and women stumbled from one place to the next, caked in soot and blood. They looked like refugees stepped out of the past, reminding Ba'el of similar faces he had seen back on Earth just after the end of the Occupation. Though a few glanced at Ba'el and his escort as they passed, most wore the dazed and damaged expressions of the damned.

None of them were expecting this, Ba'el thought. He felt a surge of fury wash away his own feeling of despair. Dammit, we were supposed to be done with this kind of thing.

The corridor ended at a white door, Bridge written in the top corner with clear silver markings. The Vulcan ensign tapped the pad beside the door. Nothing happened. He tapped it again, harder this time, but it still remained stuck. Ba’el pushed the man aside and placed both his hands against the warm metal. The Vulcan realised what he was doing and added his own strength as Ba’el pushed back with his knees. With the groan of tortured metal, the door slid into the wall. Ba’el stepped through on to the bridge and stopped dead.

The bridge was a wreck. Hull plating had buckled in numerous places, revealing the conduits, wiring and tubes underneath. Smoke choked the room, the internal climate controls unable to handle the conditions. A handful of security officers stood around the walls and they saluted when they saw Ba’el. The Vulcan stepped past them, over to the railing, then looked back at Ba’el, waiting for him to join him.

Having studied the Redemption's specs on his way to Romulus, he knew that this deep indentation was known as the Pit. It was in even worse shape than the higher section. Two officers stood amongst the ruins, huddled together in a tight knot around the central captain’s chair. One of them, a male Trill whose eyes seemed to shine with haunted regret, looked up at him. He seemed confused for a moment, then his eyes cleared and he snapped to attention.

"Captain on the bridge."

The other officer – a strange being with hard, opalescent skin – turned in surprise, then saluted when she glimpsed Ba’el above them. Ba'el lifted both his hands. God, they're so young.

"At ease gentlemen. Report."

"The warp core breach destabilised the slipstream aperture, sir,” Lieutenant Dax said. “It’s collapsed back into subspace. Main power is still off line and the comm system seems to be down - we can't reach the engineering section."

"Where is Commander Kalara?"

Before Dax could respond, a broken voice spoke behind him. "I'm right here, Captain."

He turned to see a tall Klingon woman stood in the doorway. Her eyes were wild, almost feral. In her hand was a phase-pistol, trained on Ba'el.

He couldn't hold back a smile. Here we go. "Quite a welcome, Commander."

She stepped through the door, the phaser never wavering. "Captain Sarine, I'm placing you under arrest for inciting a Starfleet officer to mutiny."

He lifted his hands. "I think Command might have something to say about that, Commander. After all, they placed me in command of the Redemption.”

“Not until the official transference of power, Captain. Until then, I’m in command of this ship and I gave a direct order. You forced Lieutenant Dax to disobey that order. Starfleet Regulation 234, sub-section 9 clearly says…”

“I don’t care about your Starfleet regulations, Commander.” She shut up in surprise. “I am in command of this vessel and I made a decision.”

“One that cost those Klingons aboard that ship their lives.”

“Is that what’s bothering you, Commander? Would you be less affected if it had been a ship full of Romulans?”

Kalara snarled. “Do not dare imply that I would have acted any differently if…”

“Oh come on, Commander. Can you really tell me that if that had been a Romulan ship out there, you wouldn’t have ordered Lieutenant Dax to initiate that slipstream tunnel? Those poor Klingons just destroyed a Federation Starbase. Or don’t you care about that?”

“Shut up,” Kalara lifted the phaser higher. “You’re under arrest.” She turned to the Xindi-reptilian who stood beside the door. “Lieutenant Vareen, take Captain Sarine to…”

“Commander, you can’t do this.”

Lieutenant Dax and the female officer with the strange skin had joined them on the higher level. It was the Trill officer who had spoken.

“Do not tell me what I can or cannot do, Lieutenant. You’re in enough trouble as it is. Now, Lieutenant Vareen.”

The Xindi stepped towards Ba’el. At the same time, a phaser beam streaked past her, striking the railing next to Ba’el. Everyone moved at once, phasers dragged from holsters, fingers twitching above trigger stubs. Ba’el glanced past the security officer. Flight Commander Turner stood behind her, her phaser aimed squarely at Commander Kalara. She held her helmet under her arm. She smiled.

“In trouble again, sir?”

Ba’el did not smile back. There were as many phasers pointed at him and Turner as there were at Kalara and Vareen. “Good to see you, Commander.”

“Who is she?” Kalara snarled.

She is the Redemption’s new Flight Commander. She’s with me.”

“I’d suggest that you drop your phaser, Commander. I’m not sure exactly what setting this is on and I would hate to make a mistake.”

“This is mutiny.”

“That’s what I was going to say,” Turner retorted.

Ba’el looked Kalara in the eyes. “Is this really what you want, Commander? To tear this crew apart in a running firefight through the corridors? If you’re willing to take it that far, you should know one thing.” His eyes bore into hers. “I’ll take it even further.”

He could see in her eyes that she was wavering. He pressed on. “Do you really want to see how far you can push me? Or are you going to drop your phaser and let Command decide who was right and who was wrong?”

The Klingon woman glanced around the bridge, seeming to take in the drawn weapons and hard eyes for the first time. Her hand shook slightly, then she let the phaser drop to the deck. Ba’el heard an audible sigh as everyone on the bridge suddenly let out their collective breaths. Hands relaxed, phasers dropped. Kalara’s head fell. Part of him wanted to go over to her – he got the feeling that she was suffering more than he was. But he kept his distance. He had to for what he was about to do.

“Lieutenant Vareen, Commander Turner, please place Commander Kalara under arrest.”

“What?” Kalara looked up, shock and pain mirrored in her eyes. “But…”

“Thank you for preserving the peace, Commander. But I can’t have you running around this ship.” He stepped close to her. “I can’t trust you.”

Turner was already at the Klingon woman’s side. Vareen hesitated, then she stepped forward as well. “The brig, Captain?”

He shook his head. “No. Place her under guard in her quarters until we get back to Command.”

Both officers did as they were told. Each took one of Kalara’s arms. The Klingon glared at him. “You won’t get away with this,” she spat back at him as she was led off. He nodded. You’re probably right.

Taking a deep breath, he turned. “I’m aware none of you know me. You probably don’t trust me. You may or may not agree with my decisions, but I am assuming command of this ship. Anyone who doesn’t accept that, you’re more than welcome to go back to your quarters and wait there until we return to Command.” He waited for a beat, looking each and every member of the bridge crew in the eyes. None of them moved. “Good. Now that that’s done, what do you say we get this ship back to the construction yards?”

He pushed past them and walked over to the steps that led down into the Pit. With every step, he felt the fluttering in his stomach increase. Last time he had felt this way, he had been about to invite Elera to dinner for the first time. They had been in the mess hall of the Kie’ranis, the rebel ship where they had both been serving. What’s the matter with me? Still, he couldn’t deny the feeling. He was nervous.

Stepping down into the Pit, he hesitated before walking over to the captain’s chair. He reached down and picked up the headset that hung halfway to the floor, turning it around in his hands. He felt the eyes of every man and woman on the bridge watching him, waiting to see what he would do.

This was his chance, he realized. If he wanted to, he could put the headset back on the chair, call Commander Kalara back and go home. He would be free. Free to go back to a life without meaning. Free to deny Elera and Torvol’s sacrifice. Free to allow this galaxy he had fought so hard for fall back into chaos. Today had given him a glimpse of what that could be. Not again, he vowed. Never again.

Taking a deep breath, he placed the headset on his forehead, allowing the viewfinder to drop over his eye.

Then he sat down in the captain’s chair, and began to issue orders.

End of Volume One – Redemption

Coming Soon: Volume Two – Aftermath!!
 
Ah, the emergency beam-out. Works every time it's tried.
(... unless you're Spock's mom in Trek XI.)
Good thinking, Dax.

As for the rest of it ... not the best way to start a mission, that's for sure. I can't wait to see what happens to this crew in the next phase of the story. Excellent, excellent work. :bolian:
 
Excellent installment. I have to admit the way Sarine survived wasn't what I had expected, but it made sense!
 
I've seen some unfortunate run-ins between captains and XO's when assuming command of a ship, but this takes the Klingon blood-flecked cake! Kalara is caught between her anger, her loss, and her honor. Ba'el wanted to die, but had his long-awaited reunion with his wife and son in the afterlife rudely interrupted.

Ugly. No two ways about it. I can't wait to see how (or if) this relationship develops.
 
Hi all!

Thanks so much for your reactions to this wrap-up of Volume I. Volume II is a few days away yet as I'm having a little trouble with the prologue.

kes7

LOL for the spoiler! :lol:

No, not the best way to start a mission at all. Trust me, there are a hell of a lot more surprises in store before Redemption gets underway!!

tenmei

Glad I surprised you. I will say one thing, though, things in this scene are not all as they seem...

Gibraltar

I've seen some unfortunate run-ins between captains and XO's when assuming command of a ship, but this takes the Klingon blood-flecked cake!

LOL LOL LOL! Yeah, it does a little bit doesn't it?!!

Ugly. No two ways about it. I can't wait to see how (or if) this relationship develops.

I'm hoping that the way it develops is going to surprise quite a few of you! :lol:

Well, back to work on Volume II!

Thanks again for your comments,

Joel
 
Good Lord! I'm away from the BBS for a couple of days and all hell breaks loose! :lol:

Magnificent battle sequence! Absolutely gripping, heart-pounding, subspace rending action. (How 'bout them cliche's? ;) ) You certainly aren't averse to kicking over the table, are you? Nicely done.

The scene with Ianto and Kalara was reminiscent of the Kirk/Spock "death" scene in ST III. I almost expected Leonard McCoy to rush in, grab Kalara and say, "He's already dead!"

Captain Sarine and Commander Kalara certainly got off on the wrong foot (feet?) with each other. Considering the nearly disastrous consequences of activating the slipstream drive, I have to give Kalara a little slack - especially in lieu of Ianto's demise. Still, I think Sarine is correct - Kalara may have hesitated because she was up against Klingons. I guess that's for a board of inquiry to decide.

Can't wait for what happens next! :techman:
 
Like TLR I stepped away for the weekend. I come back and "BOOM!" Jesus, you got the old heart pounding with that one. One beef-I liked Ianto and thought he would make a great conduit to filter past history in. Well, your story and you seem to have a firm grip on it. I'm in for the long ride, no doubt about it. Awesomeness.
 
TLR

Welcome back! :) Good to see you liked the last few chapters.

I have to admit that the Ianto/Kalara scene was intentionally reminiscent of the Kirk/Spock scene - then again there aren't a thousand different ways of doing that kind of scene.

We'll see over the next few chapters whether you're the only one to be willing to give Kalara some slack! :devil:

Mistral

Sorry about Ianto. Originally, he was just a standard android, but I wanted his death to have a real impact, thus putting Data's memories in him and making him a conduit to the past, like you said. Still, we still have Dax!

Glad you're in it for the long ride, there's still a hell of a lot of story to come! :klingon:

Joel
 
Let me just add my voice in heaping on the praise.

It is well deserved. You've shown us before that you can create intriguing characters and riveting plot lines but now we also find out that you can do action and thrills. And amazingly thrilling thrills at that.

You clearly channeled your inner Star Wars muse to give us some serious edge-of-your-seat moments, including fast paced fighter battles reminiscent of the best moments of that other science-fiction franchise. It actually brought a wide grin on my face when Turner showed up in the nick of time to bail Sarine out. Add her to the quickly growing list of my favorite characters in this riveting tale.

On the other hand however Kalara's star is on the way down. I admit she was put into a difficult position when she opposed Sarine's rather drastic orders and then also had to deal with the death of a dear friend of colleague (in another great homage-like moment.). But drawing a bead on the captain was a clear no-no and difficult to forgive. Maybe we can write it off as her staying true to her fiery Klingon side.

I wonder if Command will see it that way. I'm going to go on a limb and say yes. After all I cannot quite see Restoration without her being on board.

If there was an award for best new series at the TrekBBS, a Rookie award if you will, I'd say this one would be at the top of a very short short-list.

Awesome stuff. Can't wait for Volume Two.
 
Cejay

Wow! I'm so touched by your comments... :alienblush: I never expected such a response to this story. Thank you so much!

"Amazing thrilling thrills?" LOL :guffaw:Glad you enjoyed the action scenes - Volume II will be slightly more low key but as of Volume III... :devil:

Funny you should mention my inner Star Wars muse! I'm actually working on a story in that other SF franchise. Not sure if you're a fan, but if so let me know, I'll send you the link.

So glad you liked turner, she's one of my favourites too!

Kalara... I've struggled with her in Volume II, but I think you'll all be quite surprised the path she takes. As to whether she will still be on board Redemption when we set off... Who knows!

If there was an award for best new series at the TrekBBS, a Rookie award if you will, I'd say this one would be at the top of a very short short-list.
I don't know, I think Tesseract would probably beat me to it! :) Maybe we could create one - not sure how many new series there are at the moment?

Awesome stuff. Can't wait for Volume Two.

Hopefully it will be up tomorrow night! Can't wait to get all of your impressions!

Thanks again!
 
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