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Star Trek : Restoration

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Wow, there's so much going on here I'm not sure where to start ... so I'll just say GREAT chapter! So now the Empire Klingons think Kalara is a spy, only Dr. Keene is really the spy. And fake Kalara just handed over the security codes that could leave an entire people unprotected ... I get the sense Kalara's life is about to get significantly more complicated that it already was. I wonder how her professor husband will handle all of this.
 
Talk about introducing a little challenge for the crew of this freshly minted ship.

This mission might be over before it has even started. Nah, I doubt it. I was really hoping that the not-so-toothless Klingon doctor would uncover the spy. But I guess that wouldn't be any fun now, would it?

The Klingon fleet will probably wreck some havoc, the question is, what will be the collateral damage here. I've got a bad feeling about this.

Great stuff!
 
The most clarion thought in my head after reading that last installment is: "I would NOT wish to be Keene when/if Kalara gets wind of his role in all this." She will snap his neck. And I will cheer!

Another great chapter, Cap'n.

Thanks!
 
The last scene between Malok and Keene confused me with all of the different titles being thrown about - we had Captain, Commander and Doctor being referred to in the same section.

Otherwise, an excellent chapter.
 
Nothing like a little Klingon intrigue to spice up a story - particularly when there are multiple Klingon factions at odds!

Redemption is still in spacedock, Sarine has yet to take command and already the ship and crew are in danger. Couldn't they at least have a shake-down lap around the system first? :lol:

A very engaging story - great stuff! :techman:
 
Hi guys!

Thanks again for all your thoughts/comments/reviews. Glad you liked the introduction of this new fly in the Redemption's ointment!

Gibraltar

I thought that would be an interesting way of taking the Klingon nation, but also of investigating the different notions of honor. As we go along, we'll come to realise that they all have very different notions of what honor is and how to get it.

And at the very least Keene will be a 'shadow warrior' to contend with throughout this novel.

kes7

Thanks for that! There was a lot happening there, and it's just going to get worse in the next few chapters... :devil:

I love the fact that you went straight to how Kalara's husband is handling all this - great minds think alike! :)

CeJay

Glad you enjoyed it. I thought of having Malok uncover Keene, but that wouldn't be much fun, would it?

Collateral damage? Well, we'll see won't we? :evil:

Diogenes

You're welcome, glad you liked it. And Kalara vs. Keene... would be a hell of a thing to see.

tenmei

Thanks for picking up on that. I've edited it to replace any 'Commander' with 'Captain' and removed a few of the titles. Sorry! :alienblush:

Otherwise, glad you liked the chapter.

TLR

Redemption is still in spacedock, Sarine has yet to take command and already the ship and crew are in danger. Couldn't they at least have a shake-down lap around the system first? :lol:

LOL! Yeah, I know. Trust me, though, Redemption is about to get one hell of a shake-down.

Well, that's it for now. But before I go, I just wanted to give you a little hint of what is to come - this week I will be posting a chapter a night, heading towards a special three-part mini-story over the nights of Wednesday, Thursday and Friday. What will be in that special section? Well, I don't want to give anything away... :klingon::klingon::klingon:

Joel
 
Chapter 9

Starfleet Command – Personnel Quarters
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

"I can't believe you're letting them get away with this."

Kalara savagely stuffed a pair of underpants and a bra into the side pocket of her carry-all, then reached for a spare set of boots. "And what exactly do you expect me to do?" She glanced at her husband, who lifted his hands in the air.

"I don't know. But you’ve worked so hard for this, honey. You deserve it. They can’t just… Surely there's something... Someone you can appeal to?"

"This is Starfleet, Damien, not some publishing house,” she snapped. “There are no appeals, no committee discussions. I follow orders or I leave the service."

"Then leave. Let's go back to Earth, we could find some way for..."

"Find what?" she snarled, throwing the socks she was trying to force into the bag down on the bed and turning on him. "Find something for me to do? Courier captain? Piloting a delivery runabout around Earth? Some job where I'll be back in time for dinner? Or why not just give up working altogether? You'd love that wouldn't you? Your little stay at home wife to take care of you!"

She could see that she'd hurt him with her accusations, but she didn't care. Her vision was coloured red and she needed to lash out at something. She wanted him to shout back, to yell at her, even to strike her. In short, she wanted him to act like a Klingon male. Instead, he just stared at her, his eyes burning.

"Wow," he said, finally. "That's so unbelievably unfair... Wow."

Before he or she could say anything else, her comm badge chirped. She tapped it, hard, half hoping she would break it. "Kalara here."

There was a pause. "Commander, this is Redemption. We're ready to beam you and your husband up when you are."

Dammit, the ship. She checked the chrono on the wall and realised she was supposed to have contacted them for beam-out fifteen minutes before. How had the time gone by so fast? It seemed like mere minutes ago she had come back to her quarters and told Damien what had happened with Qwert and Kovoth. They had started to fight almost immediately, Damien trying to make her feel better by trashing the service, while she lashed out at him for not understanding… She ran a hand through her hair. She was exhausted.

"Give me five minutes, Redemption."

"Standing by, Commander."

Kalara turned away from her husband, packing furiously. Half of her hoped he would try and smooth things over like he usually did, the other half hoped he wouldn't. Finally, she finished packing. Damien had been ready when she got back, his bags packed and his carry-on ready at his side. Without looking at him, she tapped her comm badge again.

"Commander Kalara to Redemption."

"Redemption here,” came the response.

Glancing at Damien, she saw him still staring at her, as if waiting for her to say something. She turned away, but moved closer to him to make the beaming process safer. This was going to have to wait and if he couldn’t understand that… Well, she would cross that bridge if she came to it.

"Two to beam up," she ordered.

As the transporter beam caught them both up towards the waiting ship, she wondered whether this - having her husband on board - had been such a good idea after all.

USS Redemption
Starfleet Construction Yard - Romulus

Jasto squirmed slightly in his dress uniform.

He glanced at Ianto. The android seemed to be totally at ease in his own dress uniform, the white and grey bringing out the golden tinge of his skin. The same couldn't be said for Lieutenant Vareen, the ship's security officer. A massive Xindi reptilian, she looked totally out of place in the white and grey dress uniform. He could see her clawed hands clenching and unclenching every few moments, while her eyes darted all around the room, never settling.

At least someone is more uncomfortable than I am.

Just as he thought that, the transporter buffer began to hum. He felt himself stiffen involuntarily and cursed. How many times have I done this and I still get nervous? Hell, Karina stood in a Dominion transporter room and welcomed the Borg Queen herself, and she didn’t even break a sweat. Of course, Karina had been… well Karina. He didn’t think even Curzon had as strange and exciting a life as she had. He smiled at the thought, then wiped it away as the transporter hum increased in volume.

Two shimmering columns of light appeared on the transporter pads. The hum increased as two figures coalesced within the opalescent brilliance, resolving finally into the forms of a Klingon woman wearing a dark Starfleet uniform, the shoulders, arms and collar edged out in command purple, and a human man, stocky with very short brown hair and an angry look on his face. One glance at the Commander - or should that be Captain? - showed her own tight jaw and red, angry eyes. Uh oh, Jasto thought, trouble in paradise.

As the sound of the transporter faded, a whistle blew from behind as one of the ship's stewards sounded the arrival of the XO. Ianto, as acting commander, stepped forward.

"Welcome aboard, Captain."

Jasto caught the merest hint of pain flash through Kalara's eyes, but it vanished as quickly as it had appeared. Her husband’s eye rolling, though, was more obvious. What's going on here?

"Thank you, Lieutenant Commander, but I'm still a Commander."

Ianto seemed taken aback by her cold manner. The part of Jasto that was still Ezri Dax recognised that Kalara was trying very hard not to break down by putting up a hard, professional front. All the signs of her pain were there to see, though. Maybe for a counselor.

"Of course," Ianto said with a smile, recovering quickly. "I didn't mean to put the unpowered seating unit before the quadrupedal equinian."

Kalara just stared at him, then carried on as if she hadn’t heard the joke. "Please call a meeting of the senior staff, Lieutenant-Commander, in m- in the captain's briefing room at 1700. I would also like to visit the bridge before that. If someone could show my husband to our quarters..."

Jasto wondered if anyone else had caught the Commander’s strange slip of the tongue. Why didn’t she want to say my briefing room?

Ianto seemed determined not to let Kalara's strange behaviour affect him. He nodded smartly. "Of course, sir." He turned to Jasto. "Lieutenant Dax? Perhaps you could show Mister Laurel to his quarters?"

"Of course, sir." Jasto fought back a sigh. Oh, this is going to be fun.

Kalara nodded to Jasto in thanks and, without a backward glance at her husband, she swept out of the room. Ianto glanced at Jasto for a moment, obviously confused, then hurried to catch up.

"Sorry about that," Damien Laurel said, stepping down from the transporter pad. "It's been a rough couple of days."

"Sir," Jasto responded, uncomfortable talking about his commanding officer that way.

"Sorry. Am I breaking some Starfleet regulation?"

A part of Jasto - the young cadet he had been before being joined – didn’t take too kindly to the derisive tone in Damien Laurel’s voice. The part of him that was Dax, though – and remembered what is was like to look at any military organisation from the outside, with all of the foibles and endless rules that went with it – could understand his frustration. He glanced at the door, as if expecting his commanding officer to come jumping out at him, then took a chance. It seemed like the man needed a friend.

"I'm sure she'll calm down once she gets settled in." He had to almost tear the words from his throat.

Damien Laurel looked taken aback, but he grinned. "You've obviously never been in a relationship with a Klingon," he said ruefully.

Oh hell. Jasto couldn't hold back a grin. "You'd be surprised."

Damien looked him up and down, as if trying to picture the slim Trill with a Klingon woman. "Now I'm intrigued. Come on. Where can two men go to have a drink and a manly conversation around here?"

Jasto frowned. "Actually, sir, I'm on duty."

"Fine. I'll drink, you talk."

Hefting his sack, he headed for the door. Jasto hesitated. Damien turned, framed by the open doorway, and sighed. "Listen, Starfleet, I believe you were ordered to accompany me to my quarters? Well, either you come with me and make a small detour to the nearest watering hole or I’ll just have to contact my wife and tell her that her subordinate abandoned me to wander the corridors.”

Jasto hesitated a moment longer, then shaking his head, he followed Damien into the corridor. This is such a bad idea...

Ready Room
USS Redemption

Three hours later, Kalara stepped into the briefing room.

She heaved a sigh of relief when she saw that no one else was there yet. She could use the time to relax and unwind slightly. She hadn’t had an opportunity since arriving and the fight with Damien had left her wound up and tense.

Walking around the large oval table, she stopped in front of the large ceiling-to-floor window that covered the far wall. Rubbing the back of her neck, she watched as a tug-shuttle dragged a repulsor trolley packed with a large engineering team in front of the huge limbs of the construction dock. She stared beyond the tug, past the dock, out to the stars.

She felt exhausted. She had kept a tight leash on her emotions throughout the tour with Ianto, which had mainly consisted of a rapid visit to Engineering and a walk around the bridge. Seeing the Captain’s chair had been harder than she had expected – she had stood there for a moment, just staring at it, picturing what might have been. For a moment, she had wondered if she was going to be able to go through with it. Then she had remembered what Kovoth had said and that had firmed her resolve.

It had been good to see Ianto again. They had served together for a year aboard the USS Jean-Luc Picard, and again back on Earth where both of them had been part of the Restoration-class design project. When she had received confirmation of her command, she had immediately commandeered him into becoming the ship’s chief engineer. In the last couple of weeks, all during her fruitless search for an XO, she had actually begun to consider making him her XO and appointing someone else – perhaps Lieutenant Dax – as the second officer.

The sound of the door hissing open behind her broke through her thought. She turned to see Ianto step inside, followed closely by Lieutenant Jasto Dax. The Trill seemed a bit nervous, glancing at her every few seconds and then looking away again almost as quickly. She supposed she couldn’t blame him after the way she had acted in the transporter room. Well, she would just have to make up for that now.

Crossing the room, she forced a smile on her face and held out her hand.

“Lieutenant. I don’t think we were probably introduced earlier on. I am Commander Kalara.”

He flinched slightly, but took her hand. “Uh… Yes Cap- Commander. Lieutenant Jasto Dax. Ops.”

She kept her grip on his hand for a moment longer, then turned to Ianto. “You called together the rest of the command crew?”

“Yes, Commander. They should be here any moment.”

As if on cue, the door opened again and the rest of the command crew walked in. Kalara immediately recognized Vareen, the Xindi reptilian from the transporter room, who would be serving as her security chief. Behind her was a very young blond human woman who Ianto had introduced her to on the bridge as the primary Helm officer.

She held her hand up in the traditional greeting as Ensign Q’Sar, the only Vulcan left in Starfleet, stepped into the room. The Helm officer seemed somewhat surprised at the courtesy, but he returned the gesture before blushing and scurrying to his seat.

Following the Vulcan into the ready room were her Tactical and Security officers, respectively Lieutenant L’Wynd, a Crystat with strangely opalescent skin, and Lieutenant-Commander Katal, a Cardassian male with a blinking metal graft where his left eye should have been. Both officers smiled warmly as she greeted them, Lieutenant L’Wynd’s hand hard and brittle in hers, then took their seats around the table.

The last two members of the crew were introduced to her by Lieutenant Commander Ianto. Lieutenant Hakim Benouakhir, a tall, dusky-skinned human, was the ship’s Starfleet Press Liaison officer – the Redemption was such an important mission for the Federation that a full staff of press officers from every major news network had been permitted to travel onboard. That was one problem Kalara was happy to leave to Captain Sarine. Still, Benouakhir seemed a pleasant, affable man, who Kalara imagined would be able to put anyone at ease.

Last into the briefing room was the ship’s Chief Medical Officer. Kalara had been looking forward to meeting Doctor Malok ever since she had learned he was available for the Redemption. Not only was he a member of the shuvoth'shu, whose beliefs about the path to honour had always intrigued her, but according to his file, he had borne witness to some of the key events of the final years of the War. Malok had served aboard a Resistance fighter before joining the pacifist sect and she had been impatient to hear his stories and discuss philosophy with him.

To her surprise, though, the Doctor would not even look at her as she greeted him. When she tried to engage him in conversation, she received a handful of one-word answers and then he requested leave to sit down. She shared a surprised look with Ianto, who seemed as confused as she was. The android shook his head, then went to take his seat.

Once everyone was seated, Kalara walked around the table to the front. She put her hands on the chair and took a deep breath. She had spent the past two hours running through what she could possibly say to this crew – her crew – to explain the change in situation. After changing the wording a dozen times, she had decided the simple, straightforward approach would probably be best.

“I will not be Captain of Redemption.”

A murmur ran round the table as nine pairs of eyes stared at her in surprise. She waited for the noise level to drop, then forced a smile.

“I will however be continuing on board as XO and…”

“Commander.” Jasto seemed as surprised as anybody to be the one to have interrupted. When she had been XO aboard Kovoth’s ship, she did not suffer anyone to interrupt her or the captain. In this situation, though, she decided to show some leniency.

“Go on Lieutenant.”

“But who is going to be Captain?”

“Captain Ba’el Sarine has been selected by Starfleet Command.”

Another murmur at the mention of Sarine’s name. Astrid and Q’sar glanced at one another, obviously not understanding what all the fuss was about, but Kalara was sure that the other officers would fill them in very quickly.

She held up her hand to forestall any other questions. “I expect that each and every one of you has questions, maybe even fears. I can tell you that I have received assurances from Command that your positions aboard this ship are as secure under Captain Sarine as they were when I was going to be taking command.” For some reason, Doctor Malok looked up at her with what could only be described as anger. What is wrong with him? “I wanted to be able to tell you personally before Captain Sarine arrived,” she went on, “and before the launch tomorrow.”

“When can we expect Captain Sarine?” Ianto asked. She smiled. Always efficient.

“In the morning. He is spending today meeting with the diplomatic delegation, as well as receiving final instructions from Command and selecting someone for the one position I had not decided on yet – that of Flight Commander.”

“Permission to speak freely, Commander?” Jasto asked.

She nodded.

“Why? What are Command thinking changing command the day before the launch?”

“That… is intrinsically linked to our mission. Unfortunately, I am not at liberty yet to reveal what that mission is, though I am sure Captain Sarine will do so as soon as possible.”

None of them looked happy. Kalara sighed. “I know you must all be shaken up by this, but I’m sure that as long as we…”

Whatever she had been about to say was cut off by the sudden sound of the red alert klaxon reverberating around the ready room. Kalara slapped her comm badge.

“Kalara to bridge. What’s going on?”

The voice of the duty officer who had been left on the bridge shook with fear. “Commander… I…”

“What is it?” she snapped.

“Klingons, sir. We’re under attack.”
 
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Kalara handled that well, all things considered. Unfortunately, the whole loss-of-command issue is taking its toll on her relationship with her husband.

No doubt it will be sheer agony for her to watch Ba'el command the crew she assembled, seated in what should have been her chair, but as she's already noted, she's a Starfleet officer and she must bear that burden if she wants to remain in uniform.

And it appears she'll get the chance to test Redemption's tactical systems prior to the captain's arrival. :evil:
 
Well, that's not a happy household at the moment. A friend of mine has a saying, "Happy wife, happy life." The opposite is also true ... and much more so when said wife is a Klingon!

I guess Jasto's and Damien's manly drinking and talking session will have to be put on hold ... red alert klaxons and attacking Klingons usually put an end to that kind of fun pretty fast. Jasto is probably relieved. :devil:

Luckily, the ship's XO is ready for command and primed for battle ... let's see how this goes.
 
Another enjoyable chapter, Sarine. I'm curious about some of the crewmembers we've been introduced to - as well as the mention that Q'Sar is the only Vulcan remaining in Starfleet. It will be interesting to see that dynamic explored.
 
Great chapter! Kalara seems to be handling a bad situation (both personal and professional) in an admirable manner. Still, there may be on-going issues with her husband.

An interesting (and understandable) encounter between Kalara and Dr. Malok. Perhaps she can straighten out the misunderstanding and discover the presence of the mole - assuming the attacking Klingons don't destroy the ship first. :eek:
 
Hey Cap. Just got in from a Jamaican dinner and Guiness with some great friends. Getting in to find a chapter of Restoration awaiting me was nifty icing on the cake of a good evening.

PLEASE!!!! dont make me wait too long for the next chapter. Klingons are attacking at the door, and Commander Kalara will be in the Center Seat! It. Is. On. Like. Donkey. Kong!

From Kang, Koloth and Kor, to Worf, Kurn, Martok, and Klag, and now to Commander Kalara--I LOVE a Klingon at the con.

Thanks for another great chapter, Sarine.

On the edge of my seat waitin' on the next one...
Diogenes
 
Hello everyone! Working hard on Chapter 10 ready for tonight, but thought I'd drop in and see what everyone thought...

Gibraltar

Yeah, I thought Kalara handled that pretty well too - she managed to keep a rein on her emotions, for the most part, and was very professional in presenting the bad news to the crew.

Oh, she's going to get to give Redemption a real shakedown cruise... :evil:

kes7

A friend of mine has a saying, "Happy wife, happy life." The opposite is also true ... and much more so when said wife is a Klingon!
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!

Actually, Jasto and Damien did have that conversation, thus Jasto's feeling uneasy around Kalara when he walked into the briefing room. That all happened while Kalara was visiting engineering and the bridge with Ianto.

tenmei

Glad I caught your attention with that Vulcan - watch out for another little off-hand comment about him in one of the upcoming chapters, which will give another little clue as to what has happened to the Vulcans in this timeline.

TLR

I'm glad you like how Kalara is handling herself - she is most definitely one of my favourite characters. Of course, they're all my favourites when I'm writing them so I'm biased! :)

Yeah, the Kalara/Malok dynamic is going to be veeeeeery interesting.

Do you really think I'd destroy Redemption?? Well... Actually... :devil:

Diogenes

Jamaican dinner and Guinness??? You've got to be from the UK!!! :) That sounds so goood!

Don't worry, you won't have too long to wait - next chapter will be up tonight.

Yeah, our wrinkly foreheaded friends do rock when they're in command. I think you're going to like what is coming...

:klingon::klingon::klingon:

Well back to work on Chapter 10, and 11, and 12, and 13... Can't wait to see how all of this goes down with you all!

Joel
 
The Klingons, homeworld-type, seem like Unreconstructed klingons of the 23rd century. That was a zinger of an entry in this saga. i'VE ALWAYS SHYED AWAY FROM "FUTURE fEDERATION" STORIES BECAUSE THEY OFTEN PLAY OUT AS LUDICROUS OR UNBELIEVABLE BUT YOUR STORY IS EXCELLENT. aND MY CAPS LOCK WAS ON, DAMN!
 
Diogenes

Jamaican dinner and Guinness??? You've got to be from the UK!!! :) That sounds so goood!

Don't worry, you won't have too long to wait - next chapter will be up tonight.

Yeah, our wrinkly foreheaded friends do rock when they're in command. I think you're going to like what is coming...

:klingon::klingon::klingon:

Well back to work on Chapter 10, and 11, and 12, and 13... Can't wait to see how all of this goes down with you all!

Joel[/QUOTE]

Hey Joel:
From Jamaica actually; now in Brooklyn, NY. But I've got UK affinities--from a former Brit colony an' all. I might pick up a six of Guiness at the corner store to read with Chapter 10.

You know, speaking of Guiness, I've mixed it with really strong coffee, and I love the effect. I like to think of it as my own version of Raktajino. Maybe that's what I'll have during Chapter 10! Raise a goblet!
 
Guinness and strong coffee sounds like an intriguing combination. That might actually taste good!
 
Chapter 10

Briefing Room Delta
Starfleet Command Complex
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

As soon as the briefing room door closed, Ba'el heaved a sigh of relief and collapsed back in his chair. Unfastening the top button of his new uniform, he rubbed at the back of his neck. He'd thought the Ferengi would never leave.

He checked the chrono on the wall. Three hours, the damned troll had kept him here, asking him questions about the Hegemony, quoting his Rules of Acquisition and making lewd suggestions about the cadet who had been charged with bringing them raktojino and SluggoCola. By the end of it, Ba’el had a headache. All he wanted to do was climb into a bunk somewhere and sleep for a couple of weeks.

He settled for standing up from his chair and stretching. A day with Admiral Qwert would be too much. The months or years that they might be assigned to Onyx Station... Ba'el wasn't convinced both of them would survive.

The intercom system buzzed. Ba'el rolled his eyes and reached out to press the button. What now?

"Yes Ensign?"

"Commander Turner is here to see you, sir. She's... She's been waiting for quite a while."

Dammit. He had completely forgotten his appointment with the flight commander. Reaching up, he refastened the collar of his jacket. "Send her in."

He began to move round the table as the fighter pilot walked through the door. A tall, shapely human, Commander Turner wore a modified Starfleet uniform - a form fitting pair of trousers, a sleeveless dark grey t-shirt, and a zip up jacket. Instead of the purple lining of command, the jacket was lined in silver, as was the pin on the breast of her jacket, a pin that seemed to represent an exploding star. The whole was complemented by a leather cap pulled low over her black hair.

She met Ba’el half way, stopping short and saluting.

"Commander Gemma Turner, Starburst Squadron, reporting for duty, sir!"

"Relax, Commander," Ba’el said with a smile. He held out his hand. "Nice to meet you."

Turner grinned and grabbed Ba'el's hand in hers. "Sorry, sir. Never know if one of you fleeters is gonna be the stiff upper lip type."

Her smile was charming, and so infectious that Ba'el found himself smiling back. "Well, if I can set your mind at ease, I haven't been a fleeter for more than a day myself, and my lip is as loose as they come."

Turner laughed merrily. "I think I'm gonna like working with you, sir."

"Well, that’s what we’re here to discuss, isn’t it Commander?"

His words seemed to bring her back to the reality of her situation. She straightened. "Aye, sir."

He indicated she should take a seat. "Why don’t you sit down and tell me why you volunteered for this assignment?"

The captain studied her as he returned back to his own seat and sat down. She sat with her back straight, but obviously comfortable, her hands clasped in front of her, body angled towards him, her smile engaging. She's confident, I'll give her that.

She waited until he had sat down before speaking. "To tell you the truth, sir, I volunteered for this mission because this is it. The first real mission of the Federation. And I want to be a part of it."

Though he thought he knew what she meant, he frowned. "The first real mission? Why do you say that?"

"My family have quite a long history in Starfleet, sir. I grew up hearing my dad telling stories of my ancestors, especially of my great-great-great-great, well I’ll save you all of the greats, but suffice to say my grandmother’s uncle, Admiral Picard."

"Quite an illustrious predecessor."

Smiling again, she said, "I grew up on stories of the glory days of the old Federation, sir, stories of Picard. And Kirk. Pike and Janeway. Sulu and Calhoun. Var'tol and Jrenim. Dax and..."

Ba'el held up his hands, laughing. "Alright Commander, I think I get it. And you hope that if you join Redemption, you’ll get a chance to join that hallowed list?"

To his surprise, she shook her head. "No, sir. I hope that you will."

When she saw the expression on his face, she laughed. "You're the captain, Captain. I'll just be along for the ride." Her face grew serious. "Sir, to be honest, ever since the war ended and the Federation Charter was signed, I've been waiting for this. Waited for Starfleet to launch a real exploratory vessel on a mission of peace, of discovery. Instead, there've been more military frigates and transport ships. Don't get me wrong, I know how important all of that is and my squadron and I have gone where we were ordered and we've done our duty."

"Very well, from what I see here," Ba'el cut in, looking down at the padd that held her Starfleet file.

"Thank you, sir. I've got a good squad of people, with good ships. We get the job done. But this mission... This is the reason I enlisted in Starfleet, sir. New worlds and new civilisations, and all that. I have to be a part of that."

She seemed so earnest that Ba'el wanted to welcome her onboard straight away and put her out of her misery. Instead, he forced himself to nod gravely. "You do realise that the main objective is not exploration, don't you Commander? The Hegemony would be a formidable ally and bringing them into an alliance with us is our primary goal. If that doesn't happen... Well, we may need you to fight more than explore."

"I know that sir. I understand that things could go wrong, and I also understand that my primary role aboard ship is as a fighter pilot." She placed the emphasis on the fight part of the word fighter. "But just to be part of such a mission... It will be a dream come true."

Ba'el finally allowed himself a smile. "Well, I suppose I only have one more question - how soon can you and your people be onboard?"

She let out a wild peal of laughter, which she quickly smothered. "Sorry, sir."

"That's alright, Commander, I think you've..."

Before he could finish his sentence, an alert siren began to wail through the Command centre. Ba’el froze for a moment, then he reached for the intercom, but it buzzed before he could press the button. He answered quickly.

"What's going on, Ensign?"

"It's… It’s Klingons, sir. They're attacking the construction yards."

Ba'el and Turner shared a shocked glance. Turner spoke first, giving voice to what they were both thinking.

"Redemption."

Bridge
USS Redemption

First out onto the bridge, Kalara accepted a headset from one of the ensign's stationed outside the briefing room, slipping it over head and settling the rectangular viewfinder over her right eye.

"Status," she barked as her vision expanded to a forward view from the Redemption's saucer section. She moved to the rear of the bridge, taking up station behind the railing so that she would better be able to see and be seen by her crew.

Lieutenant L'wynd had descended into the Pit, the sunken central section of the bridge delimitated by the railing that ran all the way round it. She relieved the on-shift officer at the Tactical station, settling her own headset over her skull as her fingers danced over the holographic readout that floated in the air in front of her.

"It looks like we have fifteen enemy ships, Commander. Ten Kor-class birds of prey, two D'thar class cruisers, two Martok-class cruisers and..." She paused, then turned to look up at her commanding officer. "Commander, they have a Dominion Battlecruiser with them."

Kalara gritted her teeth. "General K’mpak."

"Commander, we're being hailed by the cruiser," Dax said from Ops.

"Don't answer yet," Kalara snapped, thinking furiously. K’mpak was a loyalist, he wouldn’t have launched this attack without at least tacit approval from the Empress herself. How did they get this far without being detected, though? She shook her head. Later. "Lieutenant, what are the ships doing?"

The tactical officer’s eyes seemed to glaze over as she called up the information on her headset display. "They launched an initial attack on one of the planet's defence platforms, destroying it. Now they just seem to be holding station."

Kalara nodded. K’mpak wants up to know that he can get through our defences. "Very well, Lieutenant Dax, open a channel."

The view outside the Redemption was replaced almost immediately by the scarred face of General K’mpak. Behind him she could make out the dimly lit bridge of a D’thar cruiser. Of course, he would not stoop to commanding an alien’s vessel, even one that he captured himself. Kalara knew the general by reputation only - he had a singular hatred for any Klingon who 'abandoned' the Empire. He had claimed responsibility for any number of brutal attacks on planets, shipping routes and colony worlds. K’mpak's father was also the leader of the House of Martok, an influential member of the Council and one of the key proponents of the Empire's withdrawal from the Alliance after the end of the Occupation.

The general wore a self-satisfied smile on his face, but it vanished when he saw Kalara.

"You!"

Kalara frowned. "I don't believe we've met, General. However, maybe you'd like to tell me what the hell you are doing in Federation space?"

K’mpak glared at her and even across the coldness of space, she could feel his hatred. She would have expected it considering how he felt about her people, but this seemed somehow... personal.

Before she could push the general any further, K’mpak vanished with a snarled command.

"They've broken communications, sir," Dax said, at the same time as L'wynd warned, "They're moving into an attack formation, Commander. Powering weapons."

Ianto had remained on the bridge, and now he stepped over beside Kalara, his voice pitched low. "We're no match for that cruiser, Commander."

Kalara nodded. "Agreed. But if we stay in here we're targ meat."

The android looked at her for a moment, then nodded. "I'll be down in engineering."

As he moved off towards the turbolift, Kalara gripped the railing and looked down into the Pit.

"Lieutenant L'wynd."

The Crystat officer turned her beautiful carved face up to Kalara. "Commander."

Last chance, Kalara thought. You can still decide to turn tail and run. The very thought was laughable, though, and she knew it. Even if the ship were not in danger, there was no way she could abandon the construction yards, space station and planet to the mercy of these p’tagh.

Fighting back a sigh, she gave the order. "Bring weapons on line. Raise shields."

The lieutenant didn't even hesitate, pressing her palm to the holographic readouts and spinning them around to face her. "Aye, sir."

Kalara moved her eyes, instructing the headset to tap into Starbase 2's sensor grid. The images unfurled before her - she watched as the Klingon ships separated into multiple attack wings, going after their individual targets, phaser banks dealing death and destruction with every hateful volley. Kalara wondered coldly whether this was how war started - in fire and anger and fear.

"Defence systems on line," L'wynd reported, slicing through Kalara's thoughts.

The bridge seemed to freeze as every officer held their breath in anticipation of her next order. Kalara said a silent prayer to the gods. Then she smiled.

"Helm. Take us out."

Tunnels beneath Starfleet Command
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

Ba’el followed Turner through the underground tunnels towards the docking bay buried deep beneath Ki’Baratan. Her cap had fallen off in their flight from the briefing room and she clutched it in her hands, her dark hair bouncing as she ran. They had left almost the moment that the ensign had announced the Klingons’ arrival in orbit, just as the green death of Klingon phaser beams had begun to illuminate the planetary shield above them. Turner had led her new commanding officer to a high clearance turbolift that carried them down to these tunnels, explaining they were the quickest way to reach the docking bay where her fighters were waiting.

The ceiling above them shook, plaster crumbling and raining around them, as the sounds of multiple explosions echoed through the tight enclosed space. They both paused for a moment as the lights flickered off and on, Ba’el reaching out to place his palm against the reassuring stone of the tunnel walls.

“A lucky shot,” Turner said uneasily, as they set off again, turning left at an intersection.

“How are they getting through the planet’s defences so easily?” Ba’el wondered out loud.

Turner shrugged. “It doesn’t matter, the fact is they’re doing it.”

Ba’el nodded, but he knew that once this was all over, he was going to be asking the question again. If we get out of this, he told himself.

Minutes later, the two officers burst through a double door and into the docking bay. Chaos greeted them, a cacophony of shouted orders, throbbing machinery and yowling engines. Men and women in the black jumpsuits of Starfleet NCO’s, mechanics for the most part, ran every which way, carrying tools and spare parts, faces fearful but determined. The strong smell of repulsordrive fuel and burning ozone fired Ba’el’s memory, sending him back to countless other docking bays on more planets and starships than he could number. The memories were almost overwhelming.

He forced them away anyway, following Turner across the vast, cavernous space to a dozen or so pilots who stood patiently by a similar number of Hornet-class starfighters. The grey and white vessels resembled the old Starfleet Valkyrie fighters, right down to the bat-like wings that surmounted the cockpit. Each and every pilot was already decked out in their flight gear and they all stood to attention as Turner and Ba’el arrived.

“All pilots present and accounted for, sir,” a short Bolian barked.

Turner nodded to the man, obviously her XO, then turned to her pilots. “Mount up, Starburst Squadron.”

“Yes sir,” they all said in a chorus.

As they watched the pilots scramble for their fighters, Ba’el saw conflicting expressions of pride and concern warring on Turner’s face. I definitely made the right choice, he thought.

“Don’t worry, Commander,” he said gently, reminded of how he had felt every time he led his men out to risk their lives. “You said it yourself, they’re a good group of men and women.”

“I know sir.” She turned and looked at them. “I could say the same to you, sir. We’ll take care of your ship. You just sit tight.”

He shook his head. “You may not know this, Commander, but I spent the first eleven years in the Resistance piloting old J-class fighters against Dominion Battlecruisers. There is no way I’m staying planetside.”

“If I was a fleeter, I’d be telling you that you’re the Captain and you can’t be risked,” Turner reminded him.

“But you’re not a fleeter, are you?”

“No sir.” She grinned, then she craned her neck, whipping her head around looking for something. Finally she found what she had been searching for. Or rather who. “Cable. Get your butt over here.”

A short Ferengi in mechanic’s fatigues, face smeared with grease and oil, stopped his mad dash towards one of the Hornet’s and began to jog towards them instead. The NCO was a little overweight, and he was breathing heavily by the time he arrived.

“What can I do for you, Commander Turner, ma’am?”

“Get Garibaldi’s Hornet prepped for flight.” She pointed at Ba’el. “Captain Sarine is flying out with us.”

The Ferengi gave Ba’el the once over. He didn’t look impressed. “You sure he’s up to it?”

“You questioning me, mister?”

“No sir, ma’am. My moogie always told me, never question a lady in uniform,” Cable said with a grin. He turned to Ba’el. “Well, come on then.”

Ba’el saluted Turner, then jogged after Cable. The Ferengi darted in and out of the crazed service crew, leading him over to another of the starfighters that was sitting on its own in a corner of the bay. The moment they arrived, Ba’el began to peel off his Starfleet uniform, while Cable started to fuel up the fighter.

“So why’s this one on its own?” Ba’el asked, throwing his jacket on a nearby chair and beginning to unbutton his trousers.

“Refit. It got banged up pretty good when Lieutenant Garibaldi bit the bullet.”

“Bit the bullet?”

“Hey, you spent time around enough hu-mons, you start to pick up the lingo.”

“I guess so.”

While Cable finished prepping the Hornet, two or three other NCOs hurried over, carrying a flightsuit, headset and helmet. Ba’el threw his trousers on a nearby chair, then began to shimmy into the protective flightsuit. He accepted the comm device to stick in his ear and a headset with viewscreen which he snapped over his eye. It flashed to life immediately, providing him with a scrolling description of his fighter’s specifications. He blinked rapidly, turning the damn thing off. He’d only turn it on when he needed it.

He allowed the NCOs to fit the helmet over his head and seal it carefully. By the time they had finished, Cable had completed work on the Hornet. He saluted awkwardly. “She’s all yours, Cap’n.”

“Thank you, Cable.”

Climbing up the staircase, he settled into the cockpit, strapping himself in. Once he was in, a crackle came over the comm. line.

“You alright in there, Captain?”

He looked over to the other fighters and could just make out Turner in her own cockpit. “I tell you what Commander. How about for the duration of this mission, you call me Joker.”

“Joker?”

“My old Resistance call-sign.”

“You got it, Cap- I mean Joker. You can call me Scarlet.”

“Scarlet?”

“Yeah. That sound funny?” Her tone was playful.

“No, Commander Scarlet. Not at all.”

“Good.” Her voice grew serious. “You sure you know how to fly that thing?”

He glanced down at the controls. One thing he had learned in the Resistance, where he had been forced to grow familiar with human, Klingon, Romulan and even Dominion small-ranger fighters, was that the majority of them were remarkably similar when it came down to the basic controls. “I should be able to work it out.”

“Alright then.” Another crackle, then he heard Turner’s voice again. “You with me Starburst Squadron? Check in.”

“Starburst 2, checking in.”

“Starburst 3, present.”

He listened as all of the pilots confirmed their presence one after another, each one using a slightly different wording. When they had all finished, he spoke up. The feeling of nostalgia was almost a tangible presence beside him.

“Joker 1, loud and clear.”

“Okay Starburst Squadron. We’ve got Klingons bombarding us from orbit, so watch your six on your way up. Once we break orbit, you follow my lead and Captain Sarine’s, you got me? And watch for friendly fire, hopefully Starbase 2 will have scrambled her defences by now.”

Ba’el was amazed at the change in the flight commander. The friendly, engaging young woman was gone, replaced by a consummate professional. Ba’el had flown with men and women like that throughout his career. He just hoped he had been half as good a commander as Turner seemed to be. And that you’ll be half as good a starship captain.

“Alright then,” she said once everyone had confirmed her orders. “Fire ‘em up and let’s get up there.”

With a slight tremor in his hand, Ba’el flipped the switch, activating the repulsor drive. He felt the Hornet spring to life, filling his ears with a familiar dull, trembling, throb. Closing his eyes, he said a silent prayer to his ancestors to watch over him. You see, Father, you did teach me one thing. Then he opened his eyes, engaged the repulsors and followed the other starfighters out of the bay.
 
Now that was an exciting chapter! The Klingons attack, Commander Kalara takes the Redemption into the fray, and Captain Ba'el straps on a fighter and follows Turner into combat. I liked the sense of chaos and urgency that you wove throughout this segment. The tension you created was palpable - great job of writing. :techman:
 
I have to agree with what TLR said - an excellent action-filled sequence that I'm eager to see the outcome of. And, to think, our ship hasn't even left dock and our Captain isn't even onboard yet!
 
Zounds, Joel, that was bloody fantastic! I loved the whole things, as usual. Particularly, thanks for mentioning the awesome MacKenzie Calhoun.

My favorite lines of this chapter, and perhaps of Restoration so far are:
"What's going on, Ensign?"

"It's… It’s Klingons, sir. They're attacking the construction yards."

Ba'el and Turner shared a shocked glance. Turner spoke first, giving voice to what they were both thinking.

"Redemption."

I so appreciate when a character's one word answer has multi-layered: Yes, these Klingons are quite literally going after the USS Redemption; but in as real a sense to the Klingon mind, these very pissed-off children of Kahles are as much in (a misguided) search of another sort of "redemption"--not merely for themselves, but as they might see it, for the honor of their entire species.

On the flipside of that coin are Starfleet and the Federation (and perhaps even the mysterious Laurentine Hegemony), for whom redemption might or might not materialize from the actions of a damaged Ba'el Sarine the crew of the USS Redemption.

(Your title works similarly. The various sects of Klingons desire a restoration of their preferred iteration of their culture. And the Federation hopes for a restoration to the peace and prosperity of days long gone by.)

I realize I'm likely hardly saying anything novel here. Still, thanks again to you (and to Kes7!--if you two collaborate on a story, I'll be first in the queue to read it) for giving me entertainment smart enough to engage both my intellect and my viscera.

Cheers,
'Los
 
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