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I love the rich layer of history that is running thru your tale. You hint at so much that happened. New Trill, Khitomer Klingons, The Occupation, an Andorian Empire and a separate Vulcan. Why would the originators of IDIC not want to be part of the Federation?

I like your use of Dax, including the mad former host. It gives it a tie to "our" time, if you will. And, yeah, I got the android's name too. I want to learn more about what happened to cause the Occupation. I look forward to more.
 
As a writer you usually have two choices when it comes to your characters. They can be clear cut Starfleet officers who've never done a bad thing in their lives or they can come aboard with a whole load of emotional baggage.

Most of the time the second option is more fun. It definitely is here.

Dax doesn't just have a skeleton in her closet, she's got one in her head. And it won't stop screaming. Now that's what I call emotional baggage.

Great chapter.
 
Hi all.

Hard at work on the next installment, which will introduce a brand new character in an unlikely situation...

In the meantime:

Diogenes

You're welcome! I'm a huge Trill fan as well, though I have to admit I was unsure whether to use Dax or not... Still, I couldn't resist.
As for Data/Ianto... I think people are going to pretty surprise with the direction I'm going to be taking him! :devil:

Mistral

Thank you for your kind words. We'll be seeing more hints and glimpses of this history as we go along. With over 250 years of history from the time we know, there's a lot to cover! :p
Everyone seems to like Dax and Ianto, I'm so happy! :) We'll be seeing much more of them as we go on.

CeJay

Clear cut Starfleet officers with no baggage? :eek: NO thank you! :)
Thanks for your kind words. More soon, I promise.

Joel
 
Chapter 5

4th March 2631
Steer’s PleasurePalace
Laibok
Andoria

“Lay a finger on me, and I’ll make sure you never touch anything again. You got me?”

Her eyes fixed on the human who had just entered the whore house’s common room, Zoraya whispered softly to the Ferengi on his knees before her. His face pressed against her breasts, he could barely breath, let alone speak. Still, for extra emphasis, she twisted both of his lobes, her breath caressing his inner ear as she spoke again.

“Got it?”

She felt the Ferengi nod weakly, his sudden movement almost pulling both her breasts from the flimsy robe she wore. Letting go of his lobes, she stepped back into the shadow of the archway, checking the immediate area. Damn, why now? This was her fifth night in Steer’s, and the first that one of the marks finally decided he wanted a piece of her. Just as her target walked in the room. Still, as she looked around, no one seemed to have noticed.

Jaspa smoke filled the air, the gloom hiding what had just happened from anyone else. Only her genetically enhanced eye sight had allowed her to pierce the haze and see her target enter the room. Those whores not already engaged, and close enough to have seen anything, seemed too glazed from the jaspa anyway. I still have time, she told herself, moving forward.

Pushing through the jaspa haze as if through a curtain, she headed for her target, Casper O’Brien. While she had been busy with the Ferengi, the human had settled on one of the younger whores, an Andorian girl barely overage, with the ravaged body of a whore twice her age. Zoraya saw his left hand darting over her body while his other hand pressed against her neck. Three claws curled against her skin where his three middle fingers should have been, metallic nails glowering in the dim light. O’Brien’s little gift from the Syndicate.

“You know,” O’Brien was saying, “they say that pleasure and pain are two sides of the same coin.” He grinned, livid scar tissue pulled taut over his face. “What do you think?”

The girl – Zoraya couldn’t even remember her name – shook her head, pulling away from the crime boss. O’Brien wasn’t having any of it. He dragged her closer, pressing his claws harder against her neck and drawing a drop of indigo blood that hung, shiny and brilliant against her blue skin.

Zoraya tore her eyes away from O’Brien for a moment, catching the eye of another mark stood just behind her target. The little planetlight filtering through the boarded up windows sparked off of his green skin as he whispered sweet-nothings to a black-haired older whore whose breasts were almost tumbling out of her dress. His eyes met Zoraya’s and she nodded. He nodded back, once, then whispered something in the whore’s ear, sending her scurrying for the door. The Orion met de Vayre’s gaze again, then began to come at O’Brien from behind.

Her attention drawn back to O’Brien by a sudden intake of breath, Zoraya saw him draw a single line down the girl’s neck with his middle finger. Blue blood bubbled to the surface, the azure line criss-crossing with two others he had already had time to draw. Zoraya felt her gorge rise at the sight of his smile, her mind suddenly elsewhere, in another time and another place, watching another man smile… Her fists clenched.

“Why don’t you let her go, O’Brien?”

O’Brien looked up, as did the Andorian girl. To Zoraya’s surprise – and disgust – the whore glared at her.

“Why don’t you mind your own business, Bajoran?”

O’Brien, though, seemed intrigued. He stepped away from the whore, his clawed hand dropping slightly. The whore he had been torturing pouted, stepping closer and pressing her chest against him. O’Brien slapped her away absently, turning fully to face Zoraya. Perfect. Now if Gril can just…

“And who might you be?” O’Brien asked, interrupting her train of thought.

The whore reached out for him again, glaring at Zoraya. “She’s nobody. Some refugee from Bajor, arrived a couple of days ago.”

Zoraya ignored the Andorian girl, her eyes locked with Fett’s. If she could keep his attention for another few seconds, Gril would be in place. She could see him coming closer, sliding an electric rod out of the inner pocket of his jacket. A few more steps…

O’Brien looked her up and down, leering at her. He waved his disfigured hand in her direction.

“You want to take her place?”

Zoraya opened her mouth to spout some lust-filled nonsense, anything to keep him talking, when the whore screamed. She launched herself at Zoraya, fingers crooked like O’Brien’s claws. Her sudden attack knocked O’Brien off balance, just as Gril moved in to take him down. Zoraya just had time to see the rod glance off his shoulder, narrowly missing the back of his neck, and then the Andorian was on her, throwing her down to the floor. She felt pain as the back of her head struck the stone slabs beneath her, a surge of nausea rushing to her belly.

“I’ll kill you,” the Andorian screeched, her fingernails trying to gouge out Zoraya’s eyes.

Zoraya didn’t waste any time. She wrapped her legs around the Andorian’s back and flipped her over. Before the girl could get over her surprise, Zoraya cocked back her first and punched her, once, in the face. Bone snapped beneath her knuckles and blood spurted on the floor. The girl’s head snapped back, hitting the stone pavings, and her face and body went slack.

Shaking her fist in pain, Zoraya scrambled to her feet, the manteau tied around her neck ripping away, leaving her in nothing but the skimpy shift. Gril had not fared as well, she saw. He was down on the ground, green skin ripped and torn, bleeding from slashes to his forehead and cheek. O’Brien stood over him, his claw hand flexing.

Zoraya reached underneath her shift, pulling on a string and catching the tiny phaser she had tied to her thigh. The welcome weight settled into the palm of her hand. It only had enough battery for one, maybe two shots, but it should be more than enough.

She brought the weapon to bare, aiming at O’Brien’s back. As she pressed the firing stub, though, something collided with her arm. Her shot went wide, the phaser beam scoring the wall behind him. O’Brien looked up, saw the pistol and ran for it.

Turning wildly, Zoraya saw another whore, a Cardassian woman. She had thrown herself at Zoraya to save O’Brien. What is wrong with you all? She swung her arm, catching the woman across the face with her phaser, sending her crashing to the floor. Zoraya spared the time it took to spit.

“Whore.”

Gril was on his feet and he joined Zoraya as she ran for the door out into the corridor. She saw O’Brien at the door as they burst from the room, his hand pulling frantically at the handle. She was pleased to see that the Ferengi whoremistress who owned this hole had kept her side of the bargain and locked it. She lifted her phaser, but O’Brien didn’t waste any time, launching himself across the hall for the stairs.

Not this time, she thought. Though adrenaline was telling her to take her shot, she held off. Tracking O’Brien’s course, she steadied her arm and pressed the stub again.

The red laser beam caught O’Brien square in the chest. For a moment, he seemed to pause in mid-air, caught by the beam’s phased energy. Then he dropped, crashing down five or six stairs and sprawling at the bottom.

“Come on,” she snapped, throwing the useless phaser away. Gril followed her as she ran over to O’Brien’s unconscious form.

“Give me the locator.”

A bang and a rattle. She looked up to see the door shake as some of the men O’Brien had brought with him threw themselves against it.

“Come on, come on,” she hissed as Gril searched through his pockets. Finally, he fished out a small circular disk and handed it to her.

Not wasting any time, she slapped the disk on O’Brien’s chest. Then she grabbed the comm badge Gril held out to her, tapping it with the same motion.

“Zoraya to Babylon. Three to beam up.”

She felt the transporter beam surround her and pull her away just as the door caved in and O’Brien’s men burst into the whorehouse.


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Three hours later, Zoraya turned away from the runabout’s controls and breathed a sigh of relief.

It had been a stressful hour as she piloted the Babylonthrough the ion storms of Andor’s atmosphere, trying to stay hidden from the Imperial Navy’s sensor sweeps. Someone high up in the Empire wanted O’Brien back. Zoraya had never seen so many Andorian heavy cruisers dispatched to one place. Luckily, they didn’t seem to think anyone could actually survive in the gas giant’s violent atmospheric conditions, at least not for long. They had concentrated their search on the outer worlds of the Andorian system.

Still, they had had to sit tight for a while. She had only been able to leave the atmosphere fifteen minutes before and make a mad dash for warp, using the planet’s gravitational field to hide their escape. Now that they were finally on their way back to Federation space, with no pursuit in sensor range, Zoraya just hoped that the storms hadn’t damaged the engines.

“How’s our guest?” she asked as Gril joined her in the fore cabin. He held two cups of raktojino in his hands and he handed one to her as he sat down.

“Still unconscious. I pumped him full of drugs, he should stay out until we can hand him over to the interrogation team.”

“Good,” she said. “Speaking of which, I guess it’s about time we check in.”

Gril grunted as she keyed in the special comm frequency she had been given in her briefing. Moments later, the connection was established. A tall, white-haired Cardassian, wearing a well-tailored civilian suit, stared back at her.

“Ah, Agent Zoraya. How good to see you. Though I wasn’t expecting to see so much of you,” he leered, glancing at her skimpy shift.

“We have him, Commander,” Zoraya said without missing a beat. Lin Parmek had been her commanding officer in Starfleet Intelligence for almost five years now. He had never congratulated her on a mission well done, nor was he one to engage in pleasantries with his agents. She wasn’t going to justify not having changed out of her whore’s costume.

“Indeed. That is good news. He is… intact?”

“He’ll have a bit of a headache, but apart from that he’ll be fine.”

“Excellent. He may be the key to this whole mess.”

“This whole mess” was the reason Zoraya had been charged with capturing O’Brien. He was the only link between the Orion Syndicate and the Andorian Empire. The Syndicate had been selling the Empire top-secret information that they had been getting from someone within Starfleet, allowing the Andorians to seize three systems in the past four months. With the ‘cold war’ between the two powers rapidly escalating into a fully fledged conflict, Starfleet could ill afford a leak. Zoraya’s superiors obviously hoped O’Brien could lead them to the source.

“I hope so, sir. We should be arriving in Earth orbit in a few hours.”

“Actually, Agent Zoraya, I want you to head to Romulus instead.”

“Romulus?”

“Yes. I will have one of our stealthships waiting for you there. They’ll take Mister O’Brien off your hands and provide you with everything you need for your new identity.”

“My new identity?”

“Are you going to repeat everything I say, Agent Zoraya?” Parmek asked. “Yes, a new identity. I have a new mission for you.”

“Yes, sir?”

“What do you know about the Laurentine Hegemony?”

“Not much, sir. Rumours. All that is officially known is that they seem to be masters of genetic manipulation, their entire fleet is made up of living starships, and they originally come from somewhere beyond the galactic divide. Beyond that, nothing has ever been confirmed.”

“Well, the Hegemony has offered to allow a Federation starship to be permanently posted at their Onyx space station on the border. Kind of a roving diplomatic presence. Officially, Starfleet has promised the Hegemony that no intelligence operation will be carried out, however… We have decided that an undercover operative could be very useful in case of… complications.”

“You want me to infiltrate the mission to this Onyx Station?”

“I believe that is what I am saying, yes, Agent Zoraya. We have created a very elaborate new identity for you. You will be assigned to the starship Redemption, the vessel that has been chosen to represent the Federation at Onyx Station, as a junior science officer. I believe that you majored in xenobiology at the Academy?”

She nodded. “Yes sir.”

“Good. That should be perfect for your cover. I am transmitting all the information you may require to your runabout now. The commander of the stealthship Bashir will have a full briefing for you when you arrive.”

“Yes sir. Thank you sir.”

“Oh and Agent Zoraya?”

“Yes sir?”

“Keep an eye on the Redemption’s captain, alright? He… He may be a liability.”

“Understood, sir.”

“Parmek out.”

As soon as the screen went black, Zoraya turned to Gril. “What the hell is all that about?”

The Orion was grinning. “Sounds like someone up there likes you.”

“Yeah,” she said, shaking her head. She stood up and stretched. “Take the conn, will you, I’ve got to get out of these clothes.”

“That an invitation?”

She snorted. “You wish, Gril. Just get us to Romulus, ok?”

As she walked to the back of the runabout, she squirmed out of the loose fitting shift and thanked the Prophets for small mercies. At least I’ll be wearing a proper uniform on this mission.
 
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Ah, so even the newly reconstituted Starfleet Intelligence likes to throw the odd monkey-wrench into what should be an otherwise straightforward diplomatic and exploration mission. :lol:

Zoraya can obviously handle herself in a bad situation, that's a decided advantage. Now, whether or not she'll be ordered to forcibly vacate the occupant of Redemption's command chair... well... I guess we'll just have to see.

As always, a wonderful chapter and a well drawn introduction to a new character. :bolian:
 
What Gibraltar said, an interesting new character to join the interesting ensemble you're already putting together.
 
Lots of new posts-but I came here first. Um, you have O'Brien holding out the communicator to her when they are escaping... a small point but....

Liked this bit-very exciting escapade. My next question is-what's up with Earth that Romulus is the new capital? Or did I get that wrong? I like your Secret Agent, btw, and I think her back story should prove interesting. You have a knack for adding those little bits that increase the depth of what you are writing-another man, another time, huh? Interesting. Um, IMO, story needs more Dax. :)
 
Gibraltar

Funny how those intelligence types never change, isn't it? :) SI is still around, but I think you'll find they're much more cloak and dagger than they used to be. Think Section 31 on a much grander scale.

As always, a wonderful chapter and a well drawn introduction to a new character.

Wow! Thanks so much, especially for the "as always". Hope I'll keep on meeting those expectations.

tenmei

Glad you liked Zoraya, she has quite an interesting time in front of her.

Mistral

Thanks so much for picking up on that, I've edited it out now. (blush)

To answer your question and clear this up - Earth is still the capital of the Federation, seat of the Council and home to the President. However, it was decided after the Occupation that having everything in one place was pretty stupid, so they moved Starfleet Command to Romulus. We'll see that some other things have been moved around a bit as well.

I'm glad you picked up on that "another man, another time" line, yes, Zoraya has a pretty interesting back story.

More Dax? I can't promise Jasto will be coming back in the next couple of chapters, but after that...

Thanks all for your kind comments, I really wanted to say how encouraging and motivating it is to read each new post and know people are appreciating what I'm writing. Makes me wish I could write fast enough to post something every day! :lol:
 
Yeah, makes me wish you could, too. I think you should consider posting at Ad Astra as well-there are people there who don't go here and it allows on-running stories that can be stored by chapter. See my sig for a link.
 
I'm REALLY enjoying the story! Very fun. You did a great job with the action sequence and your characters are quite interesting and believable.

One question regarding O'Brien - is he a descendant of Miles?
 
Mistral

I'm aiming at a chapter every couple of days at the moment, hope that will keep you all happy! I'm also writing a Star Wars fanfic over on TheForce.net so have to keep a balance between the two.

I've just registered on AdAstra, I'll take your advice and hopefully start posting on there in the next couple of days. Thanks for the tip!

TheLoneRedShirt

I'm so glad your enjoying this! :) I'm glad you like the characters, I'm hoping they'll continue to delight and surprise you all. As for the action sequences, I don't feel it is necessarily my forte, so I'm glad you like them.

Is O'Brien a descendant of Miles? Uhmmm... I'll let you decide! :)
 
A very neat way to introduce one of your main characters. Or what I hope will be a main character. Introducing an undercover intelligence agent opens up a lot of great story telling opportunites. Will she undermine the captain and become a formidable foe or will she be swayed and become an ally?

I'm looking forward to find out how she'll play with this mix of fascinating characters you have created.

Top notch stuff.
 
CeJay

Thanks, glad you liked the way I introduced Zoraya. She's definitely one of the main characters, who we'll be seeing a lot more of once the Redemption is launched.

As to which way she'll go - is it bad for me to admit I don't really know yet myself?! :)

We'll be seeing Zoraya in a few chapters, though not necessarily interacting with the other main characters (ie. command crew) straight away...
 
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You write action very well. That whole scene with Zoraya was very cool. The Andorian prostitute was :wtf::cardie::eek:, though. What has to happen in someone's life to make them like that? I'd rather not think about it.

Very exciting, intriguing story you have going here. :bolian:

Oh, and the Stealthship Bashir? Love that. Makes me wonder how Bashir finished out his career as a budding spy in your universe.
 
You write action very well. That whole scene with Zoraya was very cool. The Andorian prostitute was :wtf::cardie::eek:, though. What has to happen in someone's life to make them like that? I'd rather not think about it.

Very exciting, intriguing story you have going here. :bolian:

Oh, and the Stealthship Bashir? Love that. Makes me wonder how Bashir finished out his career as a budding spy in your universe.

Hi kes7!

Thanks so much, like I said above, not sure of my action writing skills so that means a lot. As for the Andorian... Yeah, best not to think about it.

Cool! You picked up on the Bashir nod. I'm actually thinking of going back, after I've got a couple of Restoration stories under my belt, to write some stories set in the pre-Occupation / Occupation part of this timeline, see how some of our favourite characters turned out. Of course, we may get a few glimpses thanks to the Dax and Ianto characters as well.

More coming tonight!
 
Chapter 6

4th March 2631
Starfleet Command
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

Kalara stood at the window, her back to Admiral Qwert’s office, her arms crossed behind her back. She had been waiting for three hours, ever since arriving from her temporary quarters in the Command complex. Actually, no, she corrected herself. She had been waiting for a whole day. The Ulysses had arrived on schedule, the day before, but Admiral Qwert had sent her a message pushing back their meeting to this morning.

Damien had offered to beam over with her, but she had told him to make the most of the time to look around the city – he was hoping to start a new novel once aboard the Redemption, changing his focus from the Klingons to the Romulans. So she had come alone and been told to wait. And wait. And wait.

If she had been a human, she would have been biting her nails. As a Klingon, she wanted to be pacing the room, throwing things against the wall and roaring out her frustration. As a Starfleet officer, she stood ramrod straight and glared through the window at the city beyond.

At least she had a magnificent view. Ki’Baratan had been completely destroyed in the last year of the Occupation, a Dominion revenge attack that killed 15 million. When the new Federation decided to rebuild Starfleet Command on Romulus, though, a lot of the money set aside by the Reconstruction Bill had been allocated to the city. It had grown into an awe-inspiring vista of spires and domes, all in greens and blues, sparkling in the morning sun. The Command complex sat on one of the city’s nine slopes, providing an eye-watering view over the rest.

Despite the view, though, Kalara felt like she was going to go mad. Finally, she couldn't take anymore. Enough is enough. Determined, she spun round and stalked towards the Admiral's secretary, who looked up at her with wide, terrified eyes.

"Are you sure he knows I'm here?" she growled.

"I... Yes, sir. I... He told me... That is, my orders were to..."

"Yes?" She leaned down until her forehead almost touched his. "What exactly are your orders, ensign?"

"To keep you waiting until I arrived," a voice said behind her.

Kalara swung round, snapping to attention in the same, fluid motion. A tall, elder Klingon stood there in a Starfleet uniform, his white hair tied behind his back in a non-regulation ponytail. That wasn’t the only thing non-regulation about him – he wore a Klingon sache over his chest and a leather belt around his middle holding half a dozen sharp knives.

"Admiral. I was informed that you wouldn’t be present."

"Is that a problem, Commander?"

"No, sir. Of course not, sir."

"Good." He looked past her at the ensign. "Please inform Admiral Qwert that we are here."

"Yes sir!"

Moments later, Kalara followed Admiral Kovoth into Admiral Qwert’s office. The room was stifling hot and humid. All of the drapes had been pulled closed, leaving only the overhead strip lights to illuminate the meagre furniture and slime-covered plants. The Ferengi himself was waiting for them, his hands clasped in front of him on the desk.

"Well, its about time, Kovoth. I've been sat here counting my latinum for the part three hours, and I can tell you, with the Seas of Prosperity this choppy, it hasn't been a pleasant time."

Kovoth grimaced. "Let's just get this over with, shall we?"

Admiral Qwert scowled and turned to his screen. As he did, Kalara heard him mutter something that sounded awefully like ‘Klingons'. She bristled at his tone of voice, but Kovoth threw her a warning glance that shut her up.

"Well, Commander, we've called you here because we're in a bit of a situation. You see we've promised you the Redemption, and as the 297th Rule of Acquisition says : 'Never make a Klingon a promise you can't keep.' Unfortunately, we find ourselves in a tight bind. What do you know of the Laurentine?"

Kalara was taken aback by the sudden change in direction the conversation had just taken. She stared at the Admiral for a few moments, before answering.

"Nothing beyond what is written in the Starfleet database."

"Well one thing you won't find in the database is the fact that since the end of the Occupation, the Hegemony has turned down fifteen separate invitations or requests from the Federation to open some kind of dialogue. Fifteen. Most people would have given up the negotiations. I know most Ferengi would. But, the 343rd Rule will be proven once again : 'Persistence often pays off."

He chuckled softly until he realised that neither Klingon were smiling. He grunted. "Well, be that as it may, the Hegemony have finally accepted our offer and are willing to discuss a merger."

"What the Admiral," Kovoth said with an unmistakable sneer, "is trying to say, is that three days ago, the Laurentine Hegemony contacted President Hammond and invited the Federation to send a ship, along with a diplomatic party, to act as a permanent representative to the Hegemony. That ship is to be stationed at their Onyx space station, and will be allowed to explore Hegemony space, make trade agreements, conduct military training with Hegemony vessels and, eventually, open negotiations for a permanent treaty with the Laurentine."

Kalara tried to process this revelation. It was a huge opportunity. With the Hegemony as allies, the Federation might actually begin to resemble what it had once been. Still, she didn't understand what this had to do with her command of the Redemption and she said so.

"That is where the situation becomes... Complicated,” Admiral Qwert went on. “Obviously, we want to make the best possible impression. Sending the flag-ship of the fleet is our best option. You’ve seen the Redemption, you know the kind of message she sends out. However, the Hegemony requested that this mission be commanded by someone in particular. And that person, my lovely, is not you."

Kalara had had enough of the Ferengi’s tone and his never-ending words. She wished that the meeting had been held with Kovoth alone, it would have been over by now. She would just have to move things along.

"Permission to speak freely, sir."

"Granted,” Qwert said with a leer.

"This is a load of bull, to borrow an Earth-expression. I know the Redemption, I've picked out her crew, I've studied every inch of her decks, and I could repair her QSD drive with my eyes closed. Who the hell do you think can command this mission better than me?"

The Ferengi smirked. "Personally, I can't think of anyone better. Unfortunately, however lovely you may be, the prospect of a merger with the Hegemony has my lobes all atingle."

"With all due respect, sir, if you call me lovely one more time, I'll pin you to the walls with my dagger."

Beside her, Kovoth sprang to his feet. Kalara had been expecting it. Before her former commanding officer could even draw his dagger, she had her own knife in hand and pressed against his neck.

"If this was the Empire, I would kill you for such insubordination,” Kovoth growled.

“If this was the Empire, you’d be dead already.” She stepped back, putting the knife back in her sheath. She sat down and looked up at Kovoth, waiting. With a growl, he sat down as well, glowering at her.

The sound of applause drew her eyes back to the desk. The damned troll was actually clapping.

"Kovoth told me you had spirit. Good. That's exactly what we need for this mission."

"Sir?"

"The Hegemony may be forcing our hand with this appointment, but that doesn't mean we want to lose you. As you said, you know the Redemption, you hand picked its crew. We'll need that knowledge once we reach the Hegemony."

“We?”

"Admiral Qwert volunteered to lead the trade delegation,” Kovoth sneered.

"Someone has to do it."

"And you want me along as what?"

"My lovely, what I want and what you'll give me are two very different things."

Kalara rolled her eyes and looked at Kovoth, who went on, "We want you to stay on as first officer. That way we keep you onboard, along with all of your experience."

"No."

"This is not a negotiation, Commander," Admiral Qwert said, his voice suddenly commanding. "This is an order."

"I don't care. I've worked too damned hard to get this far, I'm not going to spend another tour as someone else's XO."

"Admiral, give us a moment," Kovoth ordered.

The Ferengi looked as though he were going to object, but when he saw the look on Kovoth's face, he obviously decided not to press the point. Grumbling about 'damned Klingons' throwing him out of his own office, he stood, using a gold pressed walking stick to waddle over to the door. Kalara just had time to hear him say something about 'lovely scars' when the door closed.

"For what you just did, I should gut you and hang you from the nearest window."

Kalara met his gaze, stare for stare. "You might even manage it. But not before I slit you from groin to throat."

Kovoth paused, then he laughed. "I’ve missed you, Kala! I miss that aboard the Yav'tar. My new first officer is a human. He has no stomach for our ways."

"I won't do it, Admiral. I won't."

He shook his head. "Yes, you will, Kala. You are an honorable woman, probably the most honorable warrior I know. You are a Klingon and you know what that means."

He sneered as he went on, "Our people have forgotten what honor means. Our warriors lost their way in the War and during the Occupation. Too many compromises were made. Now, in the Empire, a man's honor is as easily bought as a Ferengi's mother. Instead of burning in a last glorious blaze of battle, we capitulated while others whom we had looked down upon fought more bravely and with more honor. Even the Romulans."

"And now what are we? If Kahless were to return now, what would he find? His children sundered, his Empire become the pirates of the galaxy."

Kalara had allowed him to speak without interruption until now, but she felt compelled to speak up. "We still hold the faith."

"And that is why you will do this thing. Not because you want to, not for the Federation, or diplomacy, or even for the Klingon people. You will do it for your own starv'a'kai."

The word sent shivers down her spine. Starv'a'kai. The Way Back. The very foundation of the schism that had led to what the Federation called the Khitomer Klingons. It was at the centre of everything Kalara believed in, her soul's path through this life and into the next. At its core was the belief that every Klingon born since the Occupation was born without honor. What had once been the birthright of every Klingon was now something to be sought, to be fought for, to be gained, rather than to be kept, protected and demonstrated. As she sat there, she realised that Kovoth was right. Honor demanded that she stand by the crew she had chosen, the oath she had sworn. If she wanted to follow her Starv'a'kai, she had to accept.

Though all she wanted to do was look at the floor, she kept her head tall and proud. I am a Klingon warrior, I will act like one. "I will serve."

Kovoth gazed at her, his eyes alive with pride. "Magnificent," was all he said.

"You may call the Ferengi back in, Admiral. I will take his mission."

"Know this, Kalara, daughter of Elyra. I will not rest until you gain what you desire the most. I will see you captain of your own ship, on my father's blood."

"I will hold you to that, Kovoth, son of Kurn."

He turned to fetch Admiral Qwert back into the room. He was almost at the door, when Kalara realised there was one question she had not asked. "Who is replacing me as Captain?"

Kovoth's turned back to her, smile grim. "I think you’ll like him. His name is Ba'el Sarine. You may know him as the Butcher of Lutara."

He turned away, leaving Kalara wondering what by Stovokor she had just agreed to.
 
I've been looking forward to this conversation since we first met Kalara, and I wondered how Qwert would break the news and still remain breathing. It appears he had to have another Klingon in the room to do it. :lol:

The exchange was handled flawlessly, and I especially like the concept of Starv'a'kai, something of a new Bushido code for the Klingons trying to regain their birthright. It gives both Kalara and Kovoth a whole new layer of depth.

I've no doubt Kalara will prove as formidable an XO (if not more so) than she would have as Redemption's captain. You're setting the stage for quite the dynamic captain/XO relationship.

Again, well drawn characters against a very complex and utterly fascinating background. Kudos! :techman:
 
What an awesome fleshing out of Kalara's character. The interactions between her and her fellow Klingon were both entertaining and enlightening. Qwert (that's an easy one to type, isn't it? ;)) is as obnoxious as a Ferengi should be. All of these awkward alliances have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I remain totally awed that you like my story as much as you do, because so far, you appear to be a far better writer. Keep it up, this is great stuff!
 
Woooooooowwwwww!!!! This would make for the best rainy day Trek novel. I would OD on your fiction, Cap'n Sas.

That was just awesome. I love how fearless Ferengi can seem. I bet that Qwert had several contingencies planned should he be attacked by someone like Kalara. I dont imagine ones gets to be a Starfleet admiral in a time of unprecedented warfare on financial lobes and the Rules of Acquisition alone. Kovoth mentions that many of the races the Klingons had derided did battle with more verve and honor than the Klingons themselves --I wonder what exactly the Ferengi were up to during the Occupation.

Kalara is, to use Kovoth's locution, Magnificent.

And Kovoth's descent from the house of Kurn is a great nod to the glorious past of the Klingon Empire and the Honorable House of Mog.

Excellent. Thank you, Captain Sasrine!
 
What an awesome fleshing out of Kalara's character. The interactions between her and her fellow Klingon were both entertaining and enlightening. Qwert (that's an easy one to type, isn't it? ;)) is as obnoxious as a Ferengi should be. All of these awkward alliances have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I remain totally awed that you like my story as much as you do, because so far, you appear to be a far better writer. Keep it up, this is great stuff!

I agree with your assessment of Sasrine's writing, Kes7. But I wouldn't want to have to choose between the two of you. I have equal appreciation for the pacing of your respective work. The tone of your writing (from physical descriptions to characterization) matches the galactic political landscape in which it's set. Tesseract specs and mission reiterate and reinforce a Federation/Starfleet ethos that's on pretty sturdy ground. The relatively unhurried pace of the story reflects that. Restoration feels like it's thrumming with the barely contained tension that one would expect just post a quadrants-wide war and interstellar occupation, and a Federation held together with bailing wire, spit, Klingon ferocity, Ferengi quile and latinum, and human persistence.

You and Kes7s' fiction have become a recurrent pleasure for me--adn certainly not a guilty one. I urged my Trek buddies to read both your work.

Thanks again for all your hard work.
 
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