Here's a little preview. (Jasminder is a character I...uh...."borrowed"/imported from the TNG novelverse. The USS Reliant I used, because the writers of "Into Darkness" didn't use that part of Wrath of Khan, so I thought why not?)
FADE IN:
The screen is black. RED ALERT can be heard, along with a man’s steady breathing. Zoom out. First we see a pupil, then an eye. We are zooming out from KIRK’s face, we are hearing his breathing. His face is stressed but shows grim determination and defiance. He is in the Captain’s chair.
INT - ENTERPRISE BRIDGE
The bridge is at red alert. The bridge crew’s faces mirror Kirk’s. SULU, SPOCK, UHURA, and the rest of the bridge crew at their stations. We also see JASMINDER CHOUDHURY seated at the Navigator’s station.
Sparks fly as the Enterprise is rocked and critically damaged.
KIRK
Uhura! Can you send a distress signal?
UHURA
Too much interference from the nebula!
Kirk pauses. The taste of defeat is as bitter as ever. He makes the call he never wanted to make.
KIRK
Lieutenant. Signal our surrender.
There is an abject look of defeat across the bridge crew.
UHURA
Aye Captain. Transmitting. (beat) No response!
KIRK
Transmit on all frequencies!
UHURA
I am! And in all languages!
The enemy ship (USS RELIANT) has partially turned around, some distance from the Enterprise.
JASMINDER CHOUDHURY
He’s coming about. (beat) He’s targeting the bridge!
The enemy ship fires a non-cluster, high maneuverability torpedo from a forward tube. It curves round and maneuvers a bit but not much, since there is no phaser fire to evade.
JASMINDER CHOUDHURY
Torpedo fired! Impact in 20 seconds!
KIRK
Keep broadcasting our surrender!
The torpedo warning alarm starts beeping. Kirk tries to reassure the bridge crew.
KIRK
Don’t worry, we can take a hit, so long as…
The viewscreen polarization fizzles out. There is a mass look of horror on the bridge. Worse, the incoming torpedo beep speeds up as the torpedo gets closer to Enterprise!
KIRK
Get it back! Get it back!
JASMINDER CHOUDHURY
It won’t reinitialize! Shields and weapons still down! 15 seconds to impact!
During this time, Uhura’s station goes down.
UHURA
Comms offline!
She quickly flicks switches and opens a panel, but nothing. She then has a somewhat inexplicable urge to leave her seat and rush towards the centre of the bridge to tell the Captain again her Comms are down, behind and to the port side of the Captain’s chair.
UHURA
Captain! My Comms are d-!
She then sees the torpedo. Like a life flashing before her eyes moment, everything seems to be slowed down slightly (75%-95% normal speed). She switches between staring at the torpedo and looking at her crewmates as they try and fail to come up with something to save them. When we look at her we can hear her increasingly NERVOUS BREATHING.
KIRK
(slowed down)
Evasive Maneuvers?!
SULU
(slowed down)
Nothing! Even the saucer lift jets are out!
JASMINDER CHOUDHURY
(slowed down)
10 seconds!
The camera focuses on Uhura as she stands, partially transfixed by the incoming torpedo, her fear growing every second, at the torpedo heading straight for the bridge, for her. The camera switches between looking at her face and her P.O.V. of the torpedo. She then looks at Kirk.
KIRK
(slowed down)
Suggestions?! (beat) Spock?!
Uhura looks at Spock, who has turned to face Kirk.
SPOCK
(slowed down)
I’m sorry, Captain….
Spock turns back to his station. The camera again focuses back on Uhura, who is now completely transfixed by the torpedo. It’s a nightmare, it can’t be happening, it can’t end this way! The camera continues to switch between her face and her view of the torpedo.
JASMINDER CHOUDHURY
(slowed down)
5 seconds!
Kirk presses his chair comm button.
KIRK
(slowed down)
Battle bridge! Stand by!
He looks up.
KIRK
(slowed down)
All hands brace for impact!
The camera again focuses back on Uhura. Time seems to be moving even slower (50%-75% normal). The camera continues to switch between her horrified face and her view of the torpedo. We hear her FEARFUL BREATHING and the INCOMING TORPEDO BEEPING. 3 seconds before impact, she still can’t look away. 2 seconds before impact, she instinctively steps back with her left foot, turning her body left and throws her hands and arms in front of her face, one hand and arm above, and the other below her face (we can still see her face – this face and body position is important later in the story), in a futile attempt to protect herself. But she also turns her head right – she can’t take her wide-open eyes off the torpedo. One final view of the torpedo. 1 second before impact, camera refocuses on her, and she GASPS. And SCREAMS.
CUT TO BLACK.
UHURA (V.O.)
(normal speed)
NOOOOOOO!