Great stuff, here, RBC!
I think you've done a masterful job of depicting a Federation that's forming stress fractures. I mean, a Trill civil war? You know we're in trouble when they start coming apart. Speaking of which, fascinating insight into early Trill society. I'd always wondered how this peculiar symbiotic relationship got started. It makes sense that early symbionts had something in common with their B movie counterparts, in the early days.
Liking Jet, the teenage prophet / leader/ mistress who manages to kick her own symbiont's ass.
Dolphin really shined here as a masterful tactician. Although I'm sure this wasn't the first time. I'm just behind.
But quite a risk inserting himself into the Trill conflict, even it was for a noble cause. The cool thing is that you explore the legal ramifications of your heroes' actions, outside of the usual dressing down by a superior. Dolphin is like Perry Mason with a phaser.
As I've said before, you're tough to keep up with! How you produce work so fast is beyond me. Are you sure you're not an AI? And it isn't just speed. This isn't light reading. Lots of carefully laired complexity and subplots, working towards a larger tale.
Will get to the next one as soon as I can! keep it up!
I think you've done a masterful job of depicting a Federation that's forming stress fractures. I mean, a Trill civil war? You know we're in trouble when they start coming apart. Speaking of which, fascinating insight into early Trill society. I'd always wondered how this peculiar symbiotic relationship got started. It makes sense that early symbionts had something in common with their B movie counterparts, in the early days.
Liking Jet, the teenage prophet / leader/ mistress who manages to kick her own symbiont's ass.
Dolphin really shined here as a masterful tactician. Although I'm sure this wasn't the first time. I'm just behind.
But quite a risk inserting himself into the Trill conflict, even it was for a noble cause. The cool thing is that you explore the legal ramifications of your heroes' actions, outside of the usual dressing down by a superior. Dolphin is like Perry Mason with a phaser.
As I've said before, you're tough to keep up with! How you produce work so fast is beyond me. Are you sure you're not an AI? And it isn't just speed. This isn't light reading. Lots of carefully laired complexity and subplots, working towards a larger tale.
Will get to the next one as soon as I can! keep it up!
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