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ST: Independence - "Cui Bono"

Wow, Aurelia is not coming out of this looking good, is she? She has grown over the years but boy does she still have ways to go to make a good captain. She needs to reign in those blinding emotions which are still driving her half the time.

I'm gonna say Nadal ain't dead yet but his chances don't look good at all. Going up against the best of the best of S31? Without backup? Good luck.

Good stuff.
 
Thank you everyone for sticking with this. This story is coming to an end. All that's left is the epilogue. The next story should be coming shortly. It will be called "Nadir."

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CHAPTER 22

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

The last two hours were the longest in Sintina’s life. Most everyone, expect Faltyne and Kimula, were in cold weather gear. It was well below freezing throughout the ship. Illumination was still restricted to palm beacons. Windslow had managed to get the two remaining thrusters to go a bit faster, but that wouldn’t make much difference. They had a final count of the casualties: 34 dead, 58 severely injured. Forty percent of the crew were incapacitated.

Aurelia watched her breath and waited for the inevitable. The final logs were made. There was nothing left to do, but wait for the Vuke to attack.

She had faced death before. There were many times she thought she might die. This time was different, however. During the war, death came quickly – if you were lucky. Usually, you didn’t have to just sit and wait for it. She found she didn’t like the time. It was invariably used to rehash past mistakes. The more she thought, the more regretful she became. There were so many regrets. She had never let anyone too close - so many lost opportunities.

The captain tapped her compin, “Aurelia to Windslow, any luck on long range communications?”

“I’m afraid not, ma’am. The entire array has been destroyed.”

“Understood. Aurelia out.”

Faltyne softly reported, “Ma’am, that disabled fighter from the Philly…it just exploded. I think the pilot initiated a self-destruct.”

She nodded, “One less 31 agent in the galaxy.” Sintina asked, almost casually, “Is the Vuke fleet moving, yet?”

“It just started to, ma’am.”

“ETA?”

The Andorian checked his panel, “They’ll be in weapons’ range in just under five minutes.”

The Latina stood, “Aurelia to crew, prepare to repel boarders. Use whatever tactics you feel are necessary. Aurelia out.”

Supplemental
H’Kan II (The Vuke Homeworld), Divine Palace
H’Kan System

The queen’s white crown of feathers bobbed gently as she came to hear the report from her military advisor.

The advisor said, “We have begun the charge. The Federation’s ship appears to be crippled. We are reading much lower power output than before.”

“Good,” she commented, “We will take the technology from their ship and develop our own cure for this plague. Fire when ready, Alpha.”

She curtsied, “As you command, Prima Alpha.”

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

“Dorian,” said Sintina, “is the screen working?”

He manipulated his controls, “I think I can get it up. Standby.”

“Aft view. I want to see them coming.”

“Aye.”

A second later, the main viewer crackled to life. The screen was filled with dull grey craft of various sizes and shapes. There was a flash of light from one of them. Aurelia soon realized it was a missile launch.

It was confirmed by Faltyne, “Incoming, brace for impact.”

The ship shifted. She could feel the hull had been breached once again. “Damage?”

Dorian fielded it, “Direct hit, main shuttle bay. No reports of injury.”

Next, at least a dozen flashes emerged from the ships. There was nothing anyone could do but watch them get larger and larger on the main viewer.

Captain Aurelia forced herself to stand a bit taller and braced herself for death.

The main viewer lit up with bright red orbs. They were totally different than the missiles. She realized they were photons torpedoes. They detonated all the incoming missiles. Aurelia looked back at Faltyne for an explanation.

“It wasn’t me.”

The captain’s combadge chirped, “Captain Akinola to Captain Aurelia, would you like a ride?”

She disbelieving responded, “Who is this?”

“I’m captain of the USS Bluefin, a border cutter. Captain Picard thought you might need a hand. Prepare your ship for towing.”

A single tear escaped Aurelia’s right eye, “God, thank you, Bluefin.”

There was a slight pause. The voice on the other end was now solemn, “It’s what we do, Captain. Akinola out.”

Stardate: 54625.1 (17 Aug 2377, 05:00)
USS Bluefin, Bridge
H’Kan System

Immediately after closing the channel with his counterpart, the veteran captain began directing his crew. “Mr. Sarnek, move us 200 meters off their bow, towing posture.” He moved to his new tactical officer, Lieutenant Shelton, “As soon as we’re in position, extend our shields around the Independence.”

The Caucasian man acknowledged, but added, “Sir, our shields won’t be able to take much being extended that far.”

The captain commented, “They don’t have to last long, just enough to get out of here.”

The Vulcan helm officer reported, “We are in position.”

Without missing a beat, Shelton added, “Shields in place.”

Nigel Bane offered from ops, “Incoming hail from the Independence, audio only.”

Akinola made a gesture with his hand, “Put her up.”

Bluefin, our inertial dampeners are not fully functional. My engineer is working on it, but we can’t handle warp speeds, yet.”

“Will our friends be able to keep up at full impulse?” asked the cutter captain.

“No.”

“Understood, Bluefin out.” He continued his fine-tuned orchestra. Operations like this were exactly what the crew trained for. “Full power to SIF. Engage aft tractors.”

Bane confirmed, “Tractors engaged and holding.”

The skipper sat down, “Mr. Sarnek, set course 87 mark 43, full impulse. Watch your acceleration. Engage.”
 
Wow. In the midst of all the action, I had somehow managed to forget Akinola was on the way. What a moving moment--and how wonderful to see it given to another captain besides Picard.

As for Nadal...I fear either he's out there and going to be tortured, or he's dead. Neither way is good. And Aurelia is potentially in a lot of trouble, too. :(
 
CHAPTER 19

Wow :scream: :eek: :scream: :eek: :wtf:

Not very erudite but it gets across the point about how gripping the chapter was. To agree with the following comment:
Very well done and gripping battle sequence--this reads really like the first shots in a Federation Civil War!
The sense of danger is palpable as they board the ship[in style] and run about its empty corridors. That is very frightening for some reason. And then Lore's action of blasting through the floor is just so obvious but damn if I ever thought about it before. Excellent. Throw in the lengths to which the enemy will go to in order to get away and survive and the fact that Nadal is up to his neck in the dogfight. This may not go well. In fact, it is likely to go positively badly. Worse still, I think Aurellia is going to be so driven, focused and gung-ho about getting payback that she may find herself compromised and in a bad situation.

Yipes.
 
CHAPTER 20
Well living up to expectations Sintina is going after her prey no matter the cost. This is getting decidedly dangerous and foolish or reckless of her. Though after everything, one can understand just why she is so determined. She is even willing to have herself blasted in the void of space to get what she wanted. I thought she was going to fire at the hatch! She surely would have but my goodness she was gunned down for her own sake.

And Bin Nadel!! Wow. Talk about taking deadly decisions. He is as driven as the captain. Again when he lists the reasons why it is not hard to see why. But man alive!

I'm not thinking he is dead. But he could be worse off - on that yacht with Collins and Lore! Impressive drama and action.
 
CHAPTER 21

Wow, Aurelia is not coming out of this looking good, is she? She has grown over the years but boy does she still have ways to go to make a good captain. She needs to reign in those blinding emotions which are still driving her half the time.
Good stuff.
No this doesn't look good for her record at all. Worse still the shape of things for her ship and crew with the Vuke massing. This is bound to go down as a major diplomatic incident and Aurelia's name is going to be at the centre of the storm unless they can somehow vindicate themselves.

But the fight now comes down to a fight with the Vuke after taking on the might of S31. Not good. Not good at all. The story though - brilliant!
 
Whoo hoo. Love how the Bluefin came to the rescue in the fashion of the cavalry! Yay. But man the Indy crew are in a bad shape. The fallout from this is going to be bad for Aurelia. Worse still for Nadel me thinks.
 
Rescue finally arrives in the form of a Border Service cutter, but there's no sense of exuberant celebration here - too many lives lost, others missing, the mission a disaster and Captain Aurelia has much to answer for.

You did a great job of portraying the sense of resignation and inevitability that emanated from Sintina just before she was contacted by Akinola. That single tear conveyed her relief in understated but brilliant fashion.

But her ship is a wreck and the post-mortem of this incident will have all sorts of accusatory fingers pointing at Captain Aurelia. Tough times are only just beginning for the captain and crew of the Independence.
 
One last time, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Especially considering the 6 month gap.

I'd like to thank The Lone Redshirt for the use of the
Bluefin and its crew.

The next story "Nadir" will pick up right where this one leaves off. The crew will be separated. It should allow for some interesting character work. Sintina especially, will finally start being at bit more tempered. It's getting redundant writing for her. It's time for her to grow up.

I don't foresee making you guys wait long for the next story.

Thanks again!

*****

EPILOUGE

Stardate: 54628.3 (18 Aug 2377)
USS Independence under Tow, Captain’s Ready Room
En Route to Starbase 17

“Captain’s Log: Stardate, 54628.3. We are now moving at warp six, thanks to the Bluefin. We’ll arrive at the starbase tomorrow…”

Captain Aurelia sat at her desk. The display showed the personnel KIA. She continued her log, “I’m not looking forward to writing thirty-four ‘sorry for you loss’ letters.” She glanced down and huffed softly, “As I’m sure family members aren’t looking forward to reading them.” She leaned back, “When we arrive at starbase, there will surely be a hearing about what happened. I don’t know what Starfleet will do to me.” The Latina sighed deeply, “I did what I thought was right at the time…small comfort.”

The door enunciator chimed.

“Computer, end log.” She faced the door, “Come in.”

The boarder cutter skipper walked in the now fully illuminated office. He started, “I’m sorry, Captain. I had Commander Strauss review our sensor logs, but she couldn’t find any hard evidence of that stealth ship you talked about. If we could go back maybe…” He let the sentence slide. There was no going back to the H’Kan system.

Sintina looked dejected. She stood and leaned against the window frame. She stared out absently.

“For what it’s worth,” Akinola said, “I believe you.”

She faced him, “Thank you, I…I think I needed to hear that.”

The elder captain gave a grandfatherly smile. It went away as he added, “I’ve had a run in or two with this ‘Section 31’ – the supposed guardians of the Federation. They’re very dangerous people.” He stepped closer and gazed out the same window Aurelia had looked out before, “They had my CMO, Calvin Baxter, killed. He was a dear friend.”

Both captains respected each other’s moment of silence.

Akinola spoke up, “You’re not involved with the counter movement, are you?”

“I…we were unintentionally sucked into it.”

He smirked, “Well, I can sympathize with that. A word of advice,” he offered, “don’t trust them, either.”

She nodded silently.

The skipper returned the gesture and moved to the exit. He stopped short and ended with, “If you ever need anything, call. Us pawns have to stick together.”

Sintina just barely managed a grin.

Akinola bowed slightly and left.

The captain returned to her chair. The face on the screen was that of bin Nadal’s. He was the one who got her involved in the counter 31 group in the first place. Had it not been for him, she might have a pretty respectable career.

In hindsight, he did do one thing for her: he opened her eyes. She didn’t care about politics or covert operations before. If Karim hadn’t taught her otherwise, she probably wouldn’t care about Section 31 and their tactics, even if she knew about them. Over the years, he had become her conscience. He had pulled her from the brink more than once. He had helped her to grow beyond just being a compliant soldier. Thanks to him, she was just now starting to truly understand being an obedient trooper and being a Starfleet officer were two entirely different things. From now on, she would have to do better, have to be better – for Karim and for herself. She would have to face those dark places inside her that she had ignored and buried for so many years. The thought chilled her to the bone, but she could do it. She would do it, to honor her friend. Karim wanted nothing else for her but to grow as a person.

She felt so ashamed of herself.

Kimula’s voice came over the speaker, “Captain, you have an incoming transmission from Captain Picard.”

She recovered from her brooding slightly, “Put him through.”

The balding man appeared on her screen, “Captain, I’ve heard what happened. My sympathies to your ship and crew.”

“Thank you, Captain.”

He went on, “We believe the Data imposter was another android made by Dr. Soong, named Lore. It is extremely distressing to know he has been reactivated and working with this shadowy group, no less. I promise you, Captain, I will do everything in my power to expose these people.”

She nodded absently, obviously not holding out much hope for his efforts.

Picard took a long breath and continued, “I was also informed of your…drastic attempts to confront the captain of that stealth ship.”

Aurelia wondered who on her crew had contacted him. She bet Windslow told LaForge and LaForge told Picard. She’d have to have a word with her chief engineer. At the moment, however, she felt a lecture coming on, “Captain, with all due…”

He benevolently put up a hand, “I succumbed to revenge myself once. It very nearly cost me my ship, my crew, and the whole future of humanity.”

This admission was not what Sintina was expecting.

“It took a very brave woman to call me out on it.” He grinned, “She reminds me a little of you, in fact.” He leaned back, “It took me a very long time to let go of that anger and hate. I’m still letting go.” The captain was lost in his own thoughts for a moment, “I called you to let you know, I understand how you must feel.” He leaned in, “And to ask you to not give in to vengeance. Nothing good will come of it, I promise you that.”

Surprisingly, Aurelia wasn’t offended by his words. Normally, she would have viewed it as an attack on her, but not today. She could only think to say, “I’ll do what I can.”

The conversation seemed to have stalled.

Picard curtsied and said, “Godspeed, Captain Aurelia.”

He went to end the transmission, when Sintina piped up, “Thank you, sir.”

He smiled slightly and the screen reverted to the Starfleet insignia.

THE END
 
That is one thing, I think, that might help exonerate Aurelia: footage of the Data impostor. That would be proof right there that SOMEONE acted against them, coupled with proof that the real Data was on the Enterprise. That is the one weak link in what Section 31 did, and I hope it will be enough to protect Aurelia and help her get bin Nadal back.

I would love to see what comes of this. Either she has to grow, or break.
 
Well that was quite the roller coster ride, wasn't it. We all knew this was going to be another S31 tale but who could have guessed that it would all end up this explosive. And then of course there is the emotional on those who have survived and the cost of those who gave their lives.

Nobody is going to sleep well for quite some time after this. Especially not Aurelia.

Great story, Dnoth with some serious ramifications for everybody. Well done.
 
I do so hope that Karim manages to escape the clutches of Section 31. I, for one, do not believe we have seen the last of him.
 
It seems Sintina is already beginning to face the future a little more tempered judging by her reaction to Picard. I imagine that at any other time she would have taken his words and tossed them back in his face.

But it clear that she and the Indy crew have suffered greatly with their latest encounter with S31. What remains to be seen is what this will all mean for the Indy crew and Sintina in particular. Whilst there isn't damning evidence against S31, there should be enough to make Admiralty worry about charging Sintina and/or drumming her out of the service. HOWEVER, with the diplomatic mess with what happened this can't be swept under the carpet either. We shall wait and see.
 
Kudos on a very intense story, well-told. You brought it to an exciting but somber conclusion with many unknowns ahead for Captain Aurelia and her crew. Thanks for including Captain Akinola and the Bluefin in the closing act! Looking forward to how you deal with the aftermath in the next story. :bolian:
 
Thanks everybody.

I don't think this will lead to the downfall of Section 31, at least not directly. It's hard to come up for a way to really be rid of them. Besides, I'm not going to do something that radical without first consulting my fellow UT authors.

I can say this is the end of Aurelia's...well, stupidness. It's going to hit her hard. She will, finally, come into her own.

On the fate of Karim, no comment. :whistle:

I know, I keep on saying I'm going to get away from Section 31, but the stories just keep on coming back to them. :rolleyes:

Nerys Ghemor, Now, why'd you have to say that. I didn't think of that. Now I'm going to have to address it somehow. :)

Thanks again! It's been fun to write. I hope it's been fun to read.

On to the next...
 
Don't worry, it's not a bad thing or a criticism--it's an good opportunity. :) Now get consulting! ;)

(Just messing with you! At the very least, I think you have an opportunity to explain why Aurelia will not be discharged from Starfleet. It will be clear someone acted against her.)
 
I don't think this will lead to the downfall of Section 31, at least not directly. It's hard to come up for a way to really be rid of them. Besides, I'm not going to do something that radical without first consulting my fellow UT authors.
Dnoth, remember the crossover event we were all discussing? To everybody else reading the UT stories, there is a crossover event which my next UT story preludes in a way which will lead to the eventual downfall of Section 31, and parts of the UT universe will get very much smaller if everything works right.
 
I remember, that's going to be quite a project. I'm all for it, but it'll take a lot of planning.
 
Just caught up. You packed one hell of a punch as you wrapped up this story. Nadal dead? Just can't believe it. Didn't think you would go there. I got the feeling that Bin Nadal hasn't used all his nine lives just yet. And Collins is still around, of which I'm glad because it just sets up another battle with Aurelia sometimes down the road.

Also liked the Picard-Aurelia scene at the end. It was touching and a nice evolution of their relationship.
 
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