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ST: Independence - "Cui Bono"

A lot of answers are in this next segment. Though, you may not like them. :shrug:

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CHAPTER 14

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

Bin Nadal steadied himself on the free-standing tactical station as another missile impacted the shields. The console proved otherwise useless to him, despite his continuing efforts override the attack program. The Independence’s tactical systems targeted various Vuke vessels. He found it interesting, however, that no more photons had been launched and the phasers were operating at 25% power. Whoever, designed this program wanted the Indy to lose this battle.

Captain Aurelia felt equally useless. “How much longer can our shields take this?”

Luckily, Karim’s display still worked. “Shields are at 88%. I’d guess we have just over a minute before they fail.”

Ensign Weston volunteered from the helm, “Should I set a course, Captain?”

She considered a moment. Her mission was all but a failure at this point. Her priorities now were to prevent Section 31 from getting Easton. She didn’t have to stay here to do that. The bridge rattled again. “Yes, get us out of the system.”

“Standby, ma’am.” He reported, “There are a lot of moving ships out there. It will take a moment to plot an escape vector.”

Supplemental
USS Independence, Deck Seven
H’Kan System

The android turned into the final corridor to the brig. As he rounded the corner he saw seven security personnel right next to the reinforced brig hatch. All of them already had their phasers trained on him. To make matters worse the group was several meters away. There was no way he could rush them. He did the calculations. There was only a 5.7% chance he could successfully subdue all seven of the guards, even though he was now armed, without being disabled by phaser blast himself.

Phaser bolts and beams began to fly. The Soong-type android immediately retreated back into the adjoining corridor. The fire narrowly missed him and left scorch marks on the bulkhead. He tapped his compin, “Lore to Philadelphia.”

“Damn it Lore, radio silence!” was the response from a male voice.

“Like it matters now,” came from the android. “I can’t get to Easton. I’m pinned down. I need a beam out.”

“Their shields are still up and they’ve somehow managed to eliminate the directorate’s embedded override.”

More phaser shots rang out. The security force was advancing on his position. “I’ve taken care of that. Computer, initiate programs ‘Escape Gamma’ and ‘Escape Delta.’”

“Standby, we’ll have to phase back to normal space for transport.”

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

The shield impacts were so constant now, that there was a low, continuous tremor on the deck. The main viewer showed a graphic display of the Steamrunner-class ship with several smaller ships circling it like flies.

“Another Vuke ship has been destroyed,” Karim called out from tactical. “Shields at 48%.”

“Weston,” prompted Aurelia.

Each time the helm officer saw an opening through the Vuke vessels, it was closed up again by strafing fighters. “I can’t guarantee we’ll avoid a collision, Captain.”

A sound came from Sintina. It could have been a chuckle. “Then, ahead one-quarter impulse; they’ll move.”

A slightly disapproving, “Aye,” came from the helm.

“Captain!” said Lieutenant Tang Zian from the science station, “There was a slight…something.”

“What?”

He elaborated, “To find the stealth ship, I set the computer to run a constant visual scan of the surrounding space and to report any anomalous light.”

Aurelia clutched her armrests as the ship shook, “Get to the point.”

“Sunlight is reflecting off an unknown surface,” he finally reported, “The object is off the ventral side.”

“On screen.” A second later, it became very clear what the object was. Though, it was jet black, there was no mistaking the silhouette of a Sovereign-class starship.

Karim read her mind, “Could that be the Philadelphia?”

Weston commented, “I thought she was destroyed.”

“We don’t have time to explain it,” harped the captain. “Target…” ‘Damn!,’ she remembered, ‘We see it, but we can’t fire at the damn thing!’ She whispered to herself, “Easton.” She said louder, “Faltyne, report.”

“We have the intruder pinned down. I’ll transport a stun grenade to his location in a second.”

“Good. Aurelia out.”

An alarm sounded behind the captain. Bin Nadal franticly said, “Captain, our shields are down.”

The next tremor wasn’t a tremor at all, but a massive jolt.

He updated her, “Hull damage, deck six, dorsal side. No breach.”

“I thought we had more time!” barked the captain.

“We did!” retorted Karim. “The shields were turned off.”

She cursed in frustration, “God damn it!” ‘They are getting away with it again!’ She fumed, ‘No, I won’t let them.’

“Captain,” began Weston as he tapped at his console in confusion, “The engines…they just stopped.”

Another intense quake rushed over them. The hull and been breached. The seasoned officers knew exactly what that felt like.

Karim said something about force fields in place somewhere. Sintina pressed the ensign, “What do you mean, just stopped?”

“Warp and impulse engines aren’t responding.”

The captain went to the helm and tapped the controls herself. It was an act of desperation. Surely, this wasn’t happening. It was some sort of illusion. She didn’t mind dying in battle, but not like this – not helpless. It wasn’t fair. An unyielding voice inside her bellowed, ‘It’s happening again. They’re going to destroy my ship again!’

“Faltyne to Bridge.”

“Go,” said Sintina under clinched teeth.

“The intruder and Mr. Easton were beamed off the ship.”

The captain had to adjust her footing in response to another hull breach. For a moment, she considered sitting down in her command chair and just…waiting. There seemed little else to do. In fact, she did sit down again. She said quite calmly, “Is the self-destruct still online?”

The solemn response from Karim was, “Yes.”

‘At least Section 31 will still let me kill myself,’ she grimly thought.

“We’re being hailed,” started bin Nadal, “it’s unclear where it’s coming from or the sender.”

‘What’s to lose?’ “On screen,” she said. A light-skinned, human male filled the monitor. ‘That face. That face! Collins!’ Without thinking, she blasted, “I’m going to kill you!”

Captain…well, former Starfleet Captain Zackary Collins seemed amused. “Nice to see you too, Captain.” He added sardonically, “You seem to be in quite a predicament.”

“Fuck you.”

The man seemed to be even more pleased to see he had gotten under her skin. “Well, since that wasn't an SOS, I have other places to go. Good luck with the Vuke, Captain.” He added as a deliberate afterthought, “Oh, if I were you, I wouldn’t be caught alive. I’ve heard the Vuke don’t bother killing their victims before they start eating them. Philadelphia out.”
 
Oooooooh, I hope Aurelia can find a way to override Lore's viruses and blow that ship out of the sky!

One other comment, though this may sound weird.

One thing I think is very important in a story is not to overuse profanity. Because you have NOT been filling your stories with cursing, Aurelia's "Fuck you" packs a SERIOUS punch.
 
Oh this is bad. Really bad. Can't imagine a worse fate for captain to lose her ship in such a manner, entirely helpless to do a single thing about it. I this the second straight Independence Aurelia will get shot out from underneath her?

As to the profanity, I don't usually agree with this kind of language in a Trek story because I always feel that it is out of place. This time however the frustration was so palpable I can understand where it comes from.
 
What a cliffhanger! That whole sequence was slam bang. The language doesn't bother me at all. It was appropriate and felt like something an embattled Aurelia would say.

I'm glad its Lore. The Next Generation didn't know what to do with him after Descent, so its good to see him getting usage here. And working with/for Section 31 makes sense for him.
 
Glad I'm caught up (and thanks for the summary - that was a great help!). Talk about being caught with your knickers down! Poor Aurelia seems to be in an untenable situation - she's lost Easton, Don't-call-me-Data, several crewpersons and total control of her ship. Oh, and then there's a shooting war with the Vuke and the image of Collins thumbing his nose as S-31 slinks off with their catch.

Just a typical day at the office for the Independence crew. :lol:

Now, I like cliff-hangers as much as anyone else, but . . . back to work, mister! :evil:
 
Thank you everyone for reading and commenting!

I agree that the profanity is out of place in
Star Trek, for the most part. I don't like using it very often, either. I couldn't find the words to give her at that point. Having admitted that, she totally would've said that. ;)

*****

CHAPTER 15

Supplemental
USS Bluefin, Captain’s Ready Room
Porrima Sector

The distinct, deep voice of Captain Joseph Akinola began, “Captain’s Log: Stardate: 54624.0. We’ve finished dropping off some marajii crystal smugglers at Starbase 17. It was a rather large shipment. It will take months for the pushers to recover.” The dark-skinned human took a sip of coffee, “We’re now on our way to Star Station Echo to receive new orders. Admiral Bateson hinted…”

The com activated. It was Igna Stauss, his first officer, “Skipper, you have an incoming message. It’s from the Enterprise.”

He set his cup down. “The Enterprise,” he repeated, “Why would the flagship be calling us?”

“You’ve got me.”

“Well,” said Akinola, “Let’s not keep Captain Picard waiting. Patch him through.” The Big-E’s captain appeared in his desk monitor. “Captain Picard, how can I help you?”

Picard had over a decade on the Bluefin’s CO, though you couldn’t tell it to look at him. He didn’t waste any time, in fact, his speech was slightly rushed, “Captain Akinola, I have circumstantial evidence that the USS Independence may be in trouble. We believe they may have a very dangerous infiltrator onboard. You’re the nearest ship. I was hoping you could go to the H’kan system and investigate.”

Akinola didn’t immediately respond as he absorbed the information.

The Frenchman continued, “Now I concede, I have no authorization to order you off mission, but Captain…”

A younger, less seasoned captain may have needed to hear more, but not Joseph. He spoke up, “Captain, if you feel the Independence may be in danger, that’s enough for me.”

Picard grinned and nodded slightly. “Thank you, sir.”

There was an unspoken acknowledgement between them. They were both old enough to understand the bond between Starfleet captains. Ship captains were willing to go out on a limb for each other, even with minimal information. It was a trait that seemed to have lessened in the newer generation of command officers.

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

Captain Aurelia’s knuckles were white as she attempted to crush the front of her armrests. The bridge was slowly falling apart around her. Like most of the crew, she was now breathing smoke and other toxins. Her rage subdued just enough for her to start running scenarios in her mind. ‘We could manually launch some torpedoes. No, not enough time to manually target them. We could reset the main computer. No, we’d be destroyed by then.’

Karim reported, “Another hull breach. Deck four, forward section, science lab six has been decompressed.”

“Casualties?” she asked.

The ship shook again, “Crewman Escher was blow out into space, but he was transported to sickbay. He’s being treated. That makes five confirmed fatalities, 26 severely wounded.”

‘The transporter,’ she thought, ‘We could attach an explosive to an anti-matter pod and transport it to the Philadelphia. No, that’d take too long also.’ The ship had maybe five minutes until it was reduced to a hulk. The Philadelphia would phase out of normal space well before that. She had seconds, not minutes. She called out over the escaping gases and klaxons, “Do we have RCS thrusters?”

Weston shouted back, “Aye.”

“No need to sabotage them,” commented Karim, “we can’t outrun the Vuke on thrusters.”

A glimmer of spitefulness entered Sintina’s eyes, “Who said anything about running?”

Supplemental
USS Bluefin, Bridge
En Route to the H’Kan System

“How far away is the H’Kan system, Ensign?” queried the captain.

A young, Andorian female, Ensign Drii An'Shiil, reported from the helm, “One point seven light-years.”

Akinola began to pace the relatively small bridge, “What’s our ETA at warp eight?”

“Fourteen and one-half hours, sir.”

The skipper turned to his operations officer, Lieutenant Nigel Bane. “Any luck on hailing the ship?”

“Nope,” said the Australian, “The data stream acts as if the Independence’s transceiver has been deactivated.”

Inga stepped closer to Akinola, “Seems Picard was on to something.”

“Seems that way,” he grimly confirmed. “An'Shiil, increase to maximum warp.”

“Aye, accelerating to warp 9.2.”

“New ETA?” asked Strauss.

The ensign did some calculating, “Just over nine hours.”

The first officer rejoined her aside conversation with the captain, “Whatever’s happening could be done and over with in nine hours.”

Akinola agreed with a solemn nod.

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

Aurelia’s despair seemed like a lifetime ago. There was now only one overriding thought on her mind: Get Collins. She turned to Tang, “Do you still detect the Philadelphia?”

Smoke filled the upper third of the deck. He rejoined, “Yes. They haven’t recloaked, yet.”

“Weston,” she ordered, “Adjust the ship so the warp core ejection hatch is in line with the coordinates of the stealth ship.”

He looked back with some confusion, “Ma’am?”

“Now!”

The ensign snapped back to his station, “Aye.”

She heard bin Nadal’s unbelieving voice, “You’re going to use the warp core as a projectile?”

“It’s the only weapon we have control over,” she stated coldly.

“But,” he pressed, “Without shields, we’ll be damaged at this range too. Not to mention the Vuke ships.”

She stood, and blasted, “We have no choice!”

Kairm became silent.

Sintina tapped her compin, “Sintina to Windslow.”

There was no response, but another minor hull breach.

Kimula volunteered, “We’ve lost internal coms.”

The captain didn’t hesitate. She moved to the engineering station on the bridge. She asked Weston, “Are we in position?”

“Yes, ma’am.”

“Captain,” began the Andorian counselor, “You can’t eject the core without warning the people in engineering!”

“There’s no time!” she shouted.

“But Sintina…”

It was too late. She was already entering her command code. Captain Aurelia pressed the eject initiator.
 
WHOA! What a bold move!!! She might not like to hear this (not sure how she feels about his species), but I know a young Cardassian gul of mine who would be proud of her original thinking and bold move! No doubt it's going to come at a serious cost. But boy, oh boy does the Philadelphia have it coming...

And I have to admit, I liked seeing the Enterprise not be the closest ship for once, and have to ask someone else to help.

BTW--I really didn't want to sound as though I were criticizing you for Sintina's F-bomb. I was merely pointing out that because you use such things so judiciously, it had a real impact when it DID come out.
 
Captain Aurelia has her back against the wall. She's making a desperate move, but has she fully considered the consequences of her actions? I guess outside of self-destruction or surrender (and be served as lunch) this is her only alternative.

I just hope that Independence is still in one piece when Bluefin arrives on the scene. :eek:
 
Unless there is a miracle in the offing, I think the Indy is going to be adrift and the crew suffocating by the time that the Bluefin gets there.

That said, the Philadelphia might not actually exist. Shame the Philly has her shields up. Might be nice for Aurelia to capture.
 
Good ol' Akinola and crew must be getting tired of getting all those careless regular fleeters out of trouble. Of course this time all the signs seem to point towards Bluefin not making it in time.

I'm not going to write Indy off just yet. Not with Aurelia making yet another gutsy call. At this point of course, she hasn't got a lot of options left.

I'm looking forward for things to go seriously BOOM here very soon.
 
Great, fast moving story with Indy in over their heads. Love the tactic of using the warp core as a missile! We've got Lore and the mysterious Philadelphia in the mix and a cameo by Picard.

What's not to love, here? Can't wait to see the answers to these various plot enigmas!
 
Thank you everyone for the comments. Now on to the BOOM...;)

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CHAPTER 16

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Engineering
H’Kan System

Engineering was in chaos. Everyone rushed around from station to access panel desperately attempting to prevent the ship from falling apart around them.

Windslow was quietly proud of his team. Though not all of them personally cared for him, all performed their duty professionally in the face of dire circumstances. At the moment however, he didn’t have time to praise them. He manipulated the controls directly adjacent to the warp core. “Did that do it?” he called out.

A crewman responded from across the chamber, “Yes Commander, the coolant interlock is back up.”

The chief engineer briskly returned to main console on the opposite side of a transparent bulkhead. He continued to look over lines of computer code. He was imputing an algorithm to detect any anomalous commands. It was an effort to try to rid the ship’s computer of is sabotage.

Another panel several meters away exploded. The ensign near it was blasted to the deck with several burns to his face and hands. He shrieked in agony.

Ensign Jani Birhanu rushed to aid him. The African woman tapped her compin, “Transporter room four, send Crewman Bell to sickbay.” A moment later he dematerialized and Birhanu assessed the damage. She turned to Windslow, “The gyromagnetic stabilizers are offline, sir.”

The former captain rejoined without looking up, “Focus on replacing the magnetic spindle bearing. If the intermix chamber gets any hotter, we’ll blow ourselves up.”

“Aye,” she began toward the vertically aligned warp core.

Suddenly, a massive rush of air blew Windslow toward the warp core. It was so intense his face was plastered against the transparent partition. He was able to see Birhanu wasn’t so lucky. She was flying uncontrollable toward the vacuum.

As abruptly as it started, the hurricane stopped. Birhanu slammed into forcefield that now surrounded the void where the warp core once was.

Supplemental
Former USS Philadelphia, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

Lore pushed the terrified Clayton Easton out of the aft turbolift. The Sovereign bridge was highly altered from its Starfleet standard. There were many more displays. Not only was it a ship command center, but a covert listening post for the entire sector. Lore still had on the gold Starfleet uniform. Everyone else was adorned in black tunics. No one bore ranks or division indicators.

One man stuck out, however, not due to his clothing, but his demeanor. A light-skinned human male approached Easton. He had black hair, a scarred face, and seemingly black eyes. A twisted pleasure emanated from him. “Clayton Easton,” the man began, “I’ve been so looking forward to seeing you.”

Clayton nearly lost control of his bowels. The Section 31 agent might have well said, ‘I’ve been so looking forward to torturing you.’

The ‘captain’ continued, “I’m Zackary Collins. You can call me Zack.”

Lore cut in, “The mission is over. Keep your end of it.”

“Quite true,” Collins said. He adjusted a control device strapped to his wrist and pressed a button.

Immediately, Lore was weak-kneed. His body language displayed immense pleasure.

Collins looked on with amusement. It was ironic, for a long time Section 31 was at a loss as to how to ensure Lore’s loyalty after they ‘procured’ him from Commander Maddox. They considered reprogramming him, but many admired the Soong-type android just the way he was. It was his idiosyncrasies that made him invaluable to the directorate; besides that, no one knew how to properly reprogram him. It was Lore himself that provided the answer. He was able to manipulate his ‘brother’ by remotely controlling his emotions. The directorate decided to use the very same technique on Lore. Now, the only way for Lore to experience intense emotions is by the good graces of his handler. Luckily for 31, he was an addict.

Safeguards were put in place of course. The control device on Collins’ wrist monitored the wearer’s bio-signs. It only worked when in direct contact with the assigned wearer and that person had to be in a ‘normal’ state of awareness.

“Collins,” reported the agent manning the operations station, “The Independence – it’s launched its warp core right at us.”

The crew wasn’t used to seeing their director caught off guard, “What?” He didn’t wait for any elaboration, “Raise shields. Phase…”

A massive jolt rocked the ship. The room went dark. Everyone on the bridge, even Lore, was knocked off their feet. Collins slammed hard on to the deck.

Lore recovered first, “Report.”

No one answered right away. He moved to the operations console. The operative manning it was alive, but his back and been broken. Lore unsympathicly pushed him aside. He noticed others were now moving. He reported, “The shields were up at the time of impact. It’s the only reason we’re still alive.”

“How bad is it?” asked Collins as he favored his left side.

“Shields are inoperative. Main power is offline. Emergency back-ups are on. The Engineering section is…”

“Is what?”

Lore looked back, “Most of it’s gone. The aft quarter of the ship has been destroyed.” A warning klaxon brought Lore’s attention back to the display. “We’re losing containment of our warp core.”

“Eject it!”

Lore was already doing it. A few seconds later another blastwave hit the ship. They were forced forward, though they were more prepared for it this time.

“Additional damage,” came from Collins once they steadied out.

“Decks 22 through 24 have been obliterated. Forcefields aren’t working, but emergency bulkheads are in place. Everything is either destroyed or offline. Life support is operating at emergency levels.” He looked back with his golden eyes, “We’re adrift.”

Collins had underestimated Aurelia. His jovial attitude was gone. Enough games, it was time to play for keeps. “Find pilots for the remaining fighters in the main shuttle bay. Scramble whatever we have left. Tell them to finish off the Indy quick. Then, we’ll evacuate the Philly and vaporize what’s left of her.”

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Bridge
H’Kan System

“Report!” ordered Aurelia over the sound of fires and sparks.

“Multiple hull breaches all along our ventral side,” began her first officer. “Main deflector destroyed. Massive damage to the port nacelle. Transporters offline. Main Power offline. Emergency bulkheads can’t contain all the breaches. I’m ordering an evacuation of decks 8 through 10 and 6. Twelve dead; 36 wounded.”

She brushed aside the grim report. She couldn’t grieve at the moment. Her job wasn’t done, yet. “What’s the condition of the hostile?”

“Fourteen Vuke fighters have been destroyed and one of their frigates. It looks like the rest of their fleet is falling back.”

Impatiently, she prompted, “I meant the Philadelphia.”

Karim puffed slightly. “It wasn’t a direct hit. Massive damage to their aft section. They seem to be totally disabled.” He added, “Since the Vuke left phaser range, we’re no longer firing.”

“Can we get weapons back?”

The Persian attempted to do so, “No. I’m still locked out.”

“Damn,” commented the captain.

“I do have some good news,” said the Andorian counselor, “We have inter-ship communications back. Whatever was blocking it is gone.”

“There’s something,” Karim remarked.

Kimula suggested, “We still have thrusters. We should try to get some distance between us and the other ships.”

Sintina’s jet black ponytail swung around as she faced the Andorian female, “We’re not done here. I’m not going to let Collins get away again!”

The vengeance in her voice hushed the bridge.

A moment later, bin Nadal reported, “Captain, the Philly’s launched four Javelin class fighters. They’re heading this way.”

“Well, scramble our shuttles. If he wants a dogfight, we’ll give him one.” She looked over to ops, “Dorian, make it happen.”

“Yes ma’am. I’ll alert pilots.”

“With respect,” started Karim, “Type 8’s and Type 10’s are no match for those fighters.”

She shot him daggers, “If you have nothing positive to say…”

Dorian informed her, “Two Type-10’s and Three Type 8’s are all that’s operational. The others are damaged.”

The Latina knew Karim was right. At best the shuttles would distract the fighters for a time. After that, they’d make short work of the crippled Independence.

The Euro-African told Sintina from operations, “Ma’am, I’m coming up short on pilots.”

Bin Nadal didn’t wait for the command, “I’m on it.” He moved to the turbolift. The doors opened. Then, something happened he didn’t expect. Sintina’s eyes caught him.

Aurelia watched as Karim paused for a second at the threshold. Was she going to lose another friend today, she asked herself. A wave of regret suddenly washed over her. She was almost ready to apologize to him. He nodded. It was as if he knew exactly what she was thinking. She returned the gesture. Then, he left.
 
Very interesting, about the control method used on Lore! That does fit him...he definitely strikes me as having an addictive personality.

In some ways, the extreme measures both of these ships are taking reminds me of Nemesis. Now we have two ships mortally wounded--and it remains to be seen who will take the most extreme measures of all.
 
I guessed right on Lore. I just didn't see B-4 in such a murderous role (without major reprogramming). Nice bit about the "addiction" to keep him in line.

Sintina's gambit seemed to buy the Indy some time, but the ship is a mess and lacks any real defenses against those fighters. I hope this isn't the last we see of Bin Nadal, but it looks like those shuttles are on a one-way trip.

Unless Captain Aurelia has something else up her sleeve, my guess is that Bluefin will arrive just in time to pick up a few life-pods and not much more. Hopefully, the Vuke keep their distance long enough for them to pick up survivors.

Really good stuff! More, please!
 
CHAPTER 12
Late getting back to the party. A great return to the story. So the Data is as suspected a fake. But what exactly lies behind it all. And in addition to that, everything with the negotiations is as like to go to hell now with one wrong move.

Intrigue and a finely balanced situation. The Indy always seems to get it so handy - NOT!
 
CHAPTER 13
Flipping hell. 'Data' abilities are going to be hard to match considering the computer access he has had. But Data is showing how he has the Indy at its mercy and the crew are increasingly helpless as a fraught situation becomes a sh*tstorm. This cannot end good. Boys oh boys. A great thrilling tale as usual but the going to hell aspect of it all is just well done here.
 
CHAPTER 14
Oh my G! Another Indy up the swanny?! No way. That cannot look good on any captain's record. For Sinata to lose another ship is just bad. But the way this is happening so fast and so swiftly is just all the more gut punching. It makes sense that Lore was somehow retrieved by S31 from the Ent-D crash and indeed might even willingly work for them - although maybe reprogrammed - but what a deadly foe. Throw in stealth Sovereigns and they are increasingly a foe to be very, very worried about.

Damn. This has gone completely to hell. Very fast paced and very alarming developments. Excellent.
 
CHAPTER 15
A younger, less seasoned captain may have needed to hear more, but not Joseph. He spoke up, “Captain, if you feel the Independence may be in danger, that’s enough for me.”
FLIP! Man oh man! What a chapter. I loved the opening with Akinola of the Bluefin. A Border Dog and a captain of his standing needs no other information than to know someone may be in danger. It is what he does. Great swell of pride reading that part.

Then the audacious move by Sintina. I swore she was going to try and ram the ship. If she had tried it would surely have been shot out of the sky. Instead, she pulls a heck of a trick out of her hat. Wow. Love it. Absolutely love it. Bold move. Gutsy move. Cold move as she has no doubt killed or injured lives in engineering. But a move she was going to make. Wow. Just again, wow.
 
WOW!

Great stuff. This is keeping us on tender-hooks. Both ships are fighting it tooth and nail. None want to give up just yet. Revenge is a dish best served in the cold of space. Damn. Awesome scene here. The Lore stuff is brilliant. I figured his personal gripe with Data might have been a tempting factor for working with S31 but couldn't figure why he would curtail himself within a branch of Starfleet, no matter how uncurtailed it might be itself. That is a clever move. Just like all of this has been. Well done.

Phew.

Now I can impatiently await the rest with everyone else.
 
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