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ST: Independence 10 - "Machines of War"

Karim showed a lot in this segment - guts, wisdom, compassion - good command traits, all. I predict he will go far (provided he lives through this!)

And give Captain Aurelia credit - she (finally) listened to her first officer, swallowed her pride, and made a smart decision. Just when I was wondering how she would explain herself to a board of inquiry! :lol:

Really good writing here - I'm enjoying this very much! :techman:
 
CHAPTER 16

Stardate: 54035.8 (14 January 2377)
USS Independence, Armory
In Orbit of Cybertron

Most people had lost track of time. The entire ship was dark and cold. Ensign Lemipil guessed the temperature was about seven degrees. While it was bearable to some, she broke out her field jacket. Petty Officer Runningfox and she were performing above operator maintenance checks on their inventory of Type-3B phasers before they issued them to the assault teams.

The young Pueblo berated himself as he examined a power cell, “I should’ve told her to shut her damn mouth and step aside while I search her shuttle.”

The Zakdorn ensign shrugged. She wasn’t used to consoling people. She felt way over her head since she heard of Virak’s death. Over the last few hours, events had slowed down slightly. It gave everyone time to breathe…and morn. She absently and unconvincingly responded, “Don’t blame yourself.”

Cheveyo Runningfox changed the subject to something he knew would incite a response from his superior. “So you’re going to be on the Vector Sigma team with Windslow, huh?”

“Pssh, yeah,” she huffed. She put a rifle back into the rack and grabbed another. She referred to the chief engineer by a derogatory nickname that was floating around the ship, “Commander Runsfast better watch his back, because I’m not.”

“Oh come on, sir,” began the enlisted security specialist, “even if you don’t like him…”

“Like or dislike isn’t the issue,” she interrupted. “He abandoned two dozen of his own crew to get slaughtered by the spoonheads. He’s a coward. I don’t care if he gets shot, because I know he doesn’t care if I get shot. Why should I protect someone like that?” She started to strip the phaser.

Runningfox wasn’t too surprised by Lemipil’s diatribe. He had heard it before…and not just from her.

She concluded with, “I know for a fact, if something should happen to Windslow down there, there will be several veiled celebrations.”

A placating, “yeah,” was Cheveyo’s reply.

*****

A male yeoman with a wrist-mounted beacon found Commander bin Nadal in the captain’s chair. “Ensign Lemipil confirmed there are six Mark 22 torpedoes left. That includes two recovered from the Frazi.”

“Thank you,” came from the Persian XO. “Now would you check on Wheeljack’s progress with Chief Hatora.”

“Aye,” he said and returned to the Jefferies tube.

PO Dorian was nearly asleep at the ops station. It was probably about zero-two hundred. He, like many others, couldn’t sleep well; so several people simply continued to man their posts. His smooth…and totally black…console suddenly came to life with lights and indicators. He sat up, “Commander, I’ve got internal and external sensors, environmental control, and maneuvering thrusters!”

Karim clasped his hands together. “Great, turn up the heat.”

The Afro-European grinned, “Aye sir!”

*****

Sintina stared into her reflection on her computer monitor. She wasn’t sure how much time had passed. She knew now was the time to be proactive and holding her division heads’ feet to the fire. But she was in no mood to deal with people…including herself.

Her mind wandered to her father. He had always pressed her to be the best…the best at everything. Whenever she showed even a slight interest in any sport or hobby, he was over her shoulder urging her to do better. In hindsight, she knew it was his way to encourage her, but his forcefulness only served to suck the enjoyment out of the activity. And when she finally gave up…if only to end the nagging…there was the disappointment in his eyes.

One day, despite her own feelings, she decided not to disappoint him again.

The door enunciator sounded. It took her off guard, since for the last several hours, everyone had to knock. She composed herself a bit before stating, “Come in.”

Karim hesitantly entered. He figured enough time had passed for him to speak with her directly. It didn’t hurt that he was the bearer of good news. “Ma’am, Wheeljack said he’s begun to isolate the virus. Systems are coming online, slowly but surely.”

Aurelia, still in the TEVA armor, sat back. “Good.”

The executive officer was rather amazed at how…subdued…Sintina was. She didn’t appear mad.

“It’s a…been a while since someone cut me to the core like that, Karim,” she began.

“Captain, I’m…” said the first officer, but she cut him off.

In almost a playful tone she snapped, “Let me finish, damnit. …If there is one thing I hate, it is to be wrong and to be humbled.” She leaned forward, “But it keeps on happening to me.”

Karim couldn’t resist, “Maybe the universe is trying to tell you something.”

She looked up at him in semi-mock annoyance, “Maybe.” She nervously rotated in her chair. “So I’ve been thinking. …We need a way to get back the core with a minimum of casualties. I don’t think my plan is the…safest. Any suggestions?”

A deep feeling of pride swelled up in Karim. This was a huge step for Sintina. He said, “This isn’t your burden alone, Sintina. You have a smart crew and powerful allies willing to help. Let’s re-evaluate where we stand.”

She nodded slightly, “It’s a plan.”

END OF CHAPTER 16
 
Excellent, excellent! I loved the glimpse you gave us inside the heads of the crew - Ensign Lemipil's harsh contempt for Widslow and Captain Aurelia's father issues. You've added tremendous depth to the characters and story in this segment!

Good to see Aurelia beginning to understand herself and face those inner demons. I think she's going to be okay now. And I continue to be impressed with bin Nadal. He's definitely got command potential!

With the systems coming on-line, morale should improve too. Now they can put together a workable plan with the help of the Autobots and get their core back!
 
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Wow. For such a small segment it sure made me want to cheer. Finally, Sintina is showing the "why" of how she was chosen as captain. Great job! Oh, and what TLR said goes for me too.
 
Great segment and a timely turnaround for Aurelia. I knew she would see reason sooner or later. Now that everyone is on the right page, stuff can get done!

Looking forward to more.
 
I was initially worried about a crossover story with the Transformers, but I gotta admit this story works better with autobots and decepticons than some generic "alien of the week".
 
Thank you one and all for reading and commenting!

In this next chapter, I've added a little something for the TF fans. :D
 
CHAPTER 17

Stardate: 54039.3 (15 January 2377)
USS Independence, MainBridge
In Orbit of Cybertron

The crew had managed to get a warm night’s rest. The time allowed Autobot reinforcements to arrive. Luckily, they were amenable to a change of plans. They did, however, hold Captain Aurelia to her word about Kolkular.

The bridge glowed with a red, flashing light. All the consoles were operational…and it was a comfortable 23 degrees.

Commander bin Nadal stood vigil in the center of the bridge. It was decided, against his objections, that he would remain in charge of the ship during the raid. “Independence to assault teams: report status.”

Chief Hatora’s voice came first. “Shuttle team is in position. Ready to begin our attack run.”

“Ground team in position,” said Aurelia.

He turned to Dorian, “How do we look?”

The dark-skinned human made one-eye contact, “As bad as we were, sir.”

“Excellent,” Karim continued, “It looks like we’re good to go, Captain.”

“Proceed,” was the simple, yet powerful reply.

*****

A few hours ago, Captain Aurelia, Commander Windslow, Ensign Lemipil, and three other security officers, met up with Kup and the others.

Along with Sideswipe and Wheeljack, three new mechanisms joined their ranks. Sintina didn’t bother with too many pleasantries. She knew what might come and didn’t want to see these…creatures as anything more than a means to an end. Huffer was just over two meters and, by far, the smallest. He...it was mostly orange and was obviously the cynic of the group. The blue and white robot, Mirage, was able to utilize a type of cloak technology…which he was all too willing to show off. The newcomers were rounded out by the only Autobot Sintina had seen that came close to the stature of Shockwave. Its alternate form was a vehicle transport. He was called Ultra Magnus.

Despite offers to…ride in the Autobots…Aurelia insisted their Starfleet issue, All-Terrain Vehicles be brought down via shuttle tractor beam. She and Windslow sat in the front of one of them. Lemipil adjusted the buggy’s phase cannon to be forward-mounted and manned it behind them. The buggy’s had open cabins, so all the away team members were outfitted with TEVA’s.

They concealed themselves in a dark tunnel. All of their Autobot allies were in their vehicle forms. The six Cybertronians and two Starfleet jeeps were just out of range of the incoming attack.

Speaking over a secure channel, Windslow continued, “I just don’t feel right about it, that’s all.”

“It was Karim’s…Commander bin Nadal’s idea,” she retorted, “and I agree with him. It’s a legitimate precaution. Besides, how do you know they’re not going to backstab us?”

<Explain to me again, why are we taking the lead on this from aliens?> communicated Huffer. He was a small towing vehicle.

The large transport responded, <It’s their technology. They’re risking just as much as we are.>

<Hell,> pointed out Sideswipe, <They’ve already slagged nine ‘cons without our help.>

<Yeah, and they could slag us just as easy!> Huffer transmitted.

The old warrior, Kup weighed in, <They won’t do that. That Aurelia person came through with the power generators, didn’t she?>

<I still think Wheeljack should’ve planted a virus of his own, just in case.> said the smaller machine.

<Huffer, don’t you see?> offered Ultra Magnus, <This could be our opportunity to end the war. These creatures have powerful weapons. As long as we abide by our agreement, we’ll be rid of Shockwave and all the rest forever!>

<I’m afraid the debate will have to wait,> said Mirage. <I’ve got a visual on their shuttles. They’re coming in fast.>

*****

Chief Hatora, the senior non-com on the Indy, could see the target area. He could see six, ten meter tall automatons guarding the tunnel that lead to the super computer. There were sure to be more underground. The seven remaining shuttles were in a delta formation and diving. “Cullen to shuttle fleet: pick a target.” He added under his breath, “Let’s rattle the razorfly’s nest.”

He tapped the tactical control, “Firing ‘rat trap.’”

*****

Ramjet’s red optical sensor looked skyward. He zoomed in one the apparent shooting star. <Federation shuttles, incoming,> he broadcast.

Shockwave ordered from the depths, <I should have had you finish the job before. Seekers, transform and attack.>

Ramjet, Skywarp, and Jetstorm made running leaps. In a maelstrom of moving metal, they became fighter craft. With a burst from their afterburners, they shot up.

Dirge and two others paused just slightly, but it was enough to seal their fate. As the tardy Seekers left the chrome surface, an explosion reverberated through the thin atmosphere. The Mark 22 created a barely visible shockwave of electromagnetic energy.

The first three fighters managed to outrun the sphere; the last three did not. Their electrical systems failed; forcing them into status lock. They fell ungracefully to the metallic ruins below.

*****

The senior chief grimaced. With a hint of dismay, he called, “Cullen to Indy: the 22 was only 50 percent effective.”

If to emphasize the failure, nearly a dozen Decepticons swarmed out of the tunnel. He grimly continued, “…and it didn’t have an effect underground.”

“Understood. Do your best, Chief.”

A second ‘rat trap’ was already away. This one brought down an additional two jets. A flurry of pulse blasts shimmied the shuttle.

Cullen to Sharlin,” he said, “Hold off using your 22’s. They’re too scattered and too close to us, now.”

“Aye.”

*****

“I’d defiantly say they’re distracted,” said Windslow as he vocalized the obvious.

The order from Ultra Magnus came verbally over the intercom. “Autobots, roll out!”

With an orchestra of engines, the group accelerated quickly toward the passage that led to Vector Sigma. Sintina gunned the Starfleet jeep. They barreled over the occasional piece of debris. They were abreast of the apparent leader of the group of Autobots left on Cybertron. The chief engineer nervously looked over. He obviously hoped Aurelia wouldn’t get too wrapped up in the moment and take point away from Ultra Magnus.

The group was in sight of the entrance. With a sudden violence, a purple jet flew out of the dark tunnel, pulled up, and transformed in mid-air. It returned to the ground as a humanoid with a heavy thud. It was Cyclonus. The Autobots screeched to a halt. To her credit, so did Sintina.

An armored, blue, wheeled vehicle exited the darkness as well. It seemed to be a mobile communications platform. Slowly and methodically, it changed form as well. Until, it ultimately revealed another Decepticon. He sported a mean looking shoulder cannon. Its face had a visor over its eyes and mouth seemed to be covered by armor. It spoke in Federation standard. It wanted the fleshlings to hear him. He had a deeply computerized, uncharismatic, yet chilling voice, “Ravage, Laserbeak, Rumble prepare for battle. Operation: warfare. Eject.”

END OF CHAPTER 17
 
The most awesome image of Soundwave I could find:


Soundwave_Wallpaper_by_timshinn73.jpg


...and for your nostalgic pleasure:

http://www.drgw.net/~nnthayer/battle.mp3

;)
 
Looks like there's gonna be a fight! Nice set-up for the battle scene. I'm enjoying the story, though I'm still unfamiliar with the Transformers characters. I credit your excellent plot and character interaction!

I'm looking forward to the next segment! :techman:
 
The battlelines have been drawn and the curtain raised--it's showtime! Echoing RedShirt, your characterization and plot are such that someone like myself who really isn't a Transformers fan can get into the story without having to know anything about that universe--very nicely done!
 
The battlelines have been drawn and the curtain raised--it's showtime! Echoing RedShirt, your characterization and plot are such that someone like myself who really isn't a Transformers fan can get into the story without having to know anything about that universe--very nicely done!

My thinking exactly! Um, no offense, but your punctuation sorta went to hell on that segment. You might want to re-edit a bit before the whole shebang goes over to UT. Still and all, a nasty little fight in the making-I'm looking forward to the next bit.:)
 
Looks like we've got ourselves a neat little (or not so little) standoff. My questions is, what exactly can this Soundwave do and what exactly does he mean by "eject"?

All to be answered shortly I'm sure but I'm just very very excited to find out!!
 
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